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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

I'm desparately waiting for it Akki😆😆😆

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Originally posted by: rasikap_99

ab to kushi ke maare main pagal hi ho jaongi

nahi nahi..aisa mat karna..😉
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Originally posted by: rasikap_99




tera jiju to already poora pagal hain...😉 mere liye bhi hehehehe

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians

Been a silent reader of the story for so long... love this story of rantara a lot.. in fact i love your each and every piece of art.. they are so beautiful and soul touching... and also love ur sigs so much... u have so much talents

The way rantara's journey of friendship, love, trust and commitment is being portrayed in this story.. in word word excellent..
Cont asap..

Aww.. thank u so much pal..
m so glad u liked my work and posted ur valuable comments..
means a lot to me..
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Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Very Beautiful Story And Update !!!

heyy.. thank u so much dear..
gud to see u here..
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here is next part.. happy reading

Part 26..RaNtara's First KW continued...

while reading this update.. please don't think about kids "akash and Nikita" just imagine them playing somewhere in house.. lol...
actually i was almost done with this update and then i remembered that i totally forgot about these kids..and din't write anything about them..

it was 12 pm.. rantara and all other couples got ready..
they had to go to market as all ladies planned for shopping..
but it seemed to be difficult to go there..
Anjali was not feeling well.. she decided to stay back at home and asked others to go...
rantara, shika, sid, sam n rashmi left but abhi stayed with her..
others also din't want to leave but she insisted not to ruin their plan for her..
it's been 1/2 hr they left...abhi and anjali were in room..
she felt like throwing up..Abhi helped her to walk into the washroom...
and waited for her outside.. but he rushed inside as he heard her calling his name...
she was fainted and was lying on the floor ...she was sweating and and had temperature..
Abhi got panicked.. he picked her in his arms and brought into the room..
he cleaned her face with his hanky..he tried to wake her up.. but when she din't..
he rushed outside and called his mom...
badi maaa...?
badi maaa??
what happened abhi?
maa.. don't know what happened to anjali.. she fainted in bathroom..
mr n mrs naik got panicked and rushed in abhi's room...
she checked her..and got worried as her body temperature was high..
mr naik asked abhi to get the car and to take her to the hospital...
after half an hour Sam called Abhi to know if Anjali was ok..
Abhi told him about her condition and that they are in hospital..
sam got worried and told sid and raghu about it..
they all canceled the program and rushed towards hospital..
they all reached there.. and saw abhi sitting beside anjali holding her hand...
anjali looked pale and mrs naik was giving feeing her soup..
all ladies rushed towards her and abhi felt relieved seeing all his big brothers there..
what happened abhi?? sam asked..
he came outside with all of them..
is she ok..? sid n raghu asked..
n why din't u call us..
she is fine bhaiyya.. she din't eat properly since yesterday..
n it happened bcz of suffocation.. she was fainted in bathroom.. she is fine now..
u should hv told us.. sid said..
yeah! m sorry.. but she is ok now..
doc said we can take her back home in an hour.. they need to some tests..
ok.. n did she tell prescribed some medicines?? sam asked..
yeah! bade papa went to chemist shop downstairs.. must be back soon..
ok.. i'll go n chk.. raghu said and left...
they came back in anjali's room ... she looked at them and smiled..
they all smiled back..
sam came forward and caressed her head softly..
how r feeling now..?
much better bhaiyya.. thank u..
u shouldn't skip ur meal anjali.. its not good for baby..
ji.. m sorry... n bcz of me.. ur plan was ruined..
its ok beta.. u're more important to us.. rashmi said and kissed on her forehead..
antara sat beside her and took the plate from mrs naik and fed anjali..
but her eyes were looking for raghu.. he came with them only..then where was he..??
n then he came inside with his father...she felt relieved..
after an hour anjali got discharged from the hospital and they all came back to home..
it was 4 pm by now.. mrs naik asked anjali to take rest.. abhi too stayed with her
everybody else came into the living room.. they were worried for anjali..
Shikha? beta it's time for anjali's medicines?
where is the packet?? mrs naik asked..
one min mom.. i hv that.. rahsmi said and gave the packet to her..
maa..may i.. i'll go n sit with her for some time..antara said...
suniye..?? she called raghu..
hmm?? raghu replied
everybody looked at them except mrs naik...
mrs naik smiled..
raghu looked at everyone..
yeah! she doesn't call me by my name.. now please just don't start laughing...
phew!! they all sighed.. .
shikha went to the kitchen to get some tea and snacks for them...
u must be tired by now.. u wanna change.. i'll get you track pants...
ohk.. yeah!! i'll go by myself.. thanks..
raghu too excused himself.. and came with antara..
she went to the anjali's room with a glass of water and packet of medicines..raghu too followed her..
door was open.. so they just entered..and couldn't stop admiring that lovely couple...
abhi was sitting beside anjali.. he caressed her belly and kissed on her forehead.. "baby i love you...u tk cr of urself"
bas bhai aaja.. she will tk cr of herself.. raghu said.. and antara giggled..
abhi looked at them with a jerk and anjali turned all red...
bhaiyya..??? bhabhi...??? u came to tk revenge on us..??? he got up from the bed.. and rantara giggled more...
i'll be bk.. abhi said to anjali and ran towards raghu to hit him.. raghu ran outside and antara came to anjali..
she sat beside her..gave her medicines and chatted with her...
after a few minutes abhi came in the room... "he locked the door of his room.. but i won't leave him.."
"sure.. no problem..".. antara replied...
abhi chuckled and joined them...they all three kept talking for an hour...
bhabhi...?? anjali called her..
hmm...
were u angry with us...
why..
i mean .. in morning.. we just came in ur room when u n bhaiyya were together..
oh! no no anjali..
we were sorry for that.. i think bhaiyya were quite upset..
no its nothing like that..don't be sorry.. antara cupped her face... and said..
bhabhi...u're really very nice..bt why don't u speak much..
who said that..?
no.. i just noticed..
its not like that.. i do talk a lot.. but it takes me some time to open up myself..
so that means u were nervous when u came here..
yep!! a bit...
ohk.. he chuckled...
anjali and i will stay here till the time of her delivery..
i know u guys will leave on next day of KW itself.. but we would luv if u'll stay here for some more time..
sure... i would luv to... i'll talk to him...
u know what.. we all were angry with raghu bhaiyya at the time of his marriage..
why??
because he planned everything so suddenly and we could not even attend it..
and after wedding he moved directly to Bangalore and din't stay here..not even for a day..
i am sorry Abhi.. actually in a week or so i had to join my college...
that time was not easy... he already took 15 days leave at that time..
hmm...yeah! u're right...anyways now we are good..
so its ok...
but u know what.. we couldn't believe that bade papa actually allowed u guys to get married...
i mean he doesn't like love marriages...
love marriage???
yeah! even anjali and i knew each other from the college but we din't tell bade papa that we were in love.. anjali's dad sent a proposal and we got married when bade papa agreed...
thank god you were lucky that he agreed in ur case..
you know what...? i think i should stay here for some more days.. and should spend my time with you two..
i will come to know lots of things about your bhaiyya...
you're always welcome for that bhabhi.. abhi said and anjali giggled...
but we don't know much about you...
so did you guys were together from the college itself or later...because bhaiyya never talked about you...
did he???
yeah! may be sam bhaiyya knew about this..
tell us how he proposed you for marriage... anjali asked..
antara re-lived all those moments in a second.. she remembered how he came to her college and took her to the restaurant...
he...he just asked... she said very softly... her heart skipped a beat.. when she felt his touch..when he held her hand in his...
was he on his knees??? anjali asked..
no.. antara replied but she was not here.. she was lost in that moment...
what did you say???
oye.. they are married.. 'course she would have said yes... abhi said to her..
i asked him why he wanted to marry me..
'course bcz he was in love with you... anjali said..
no.. he wa... she couldn't complete her sentence and was interrupted by raghu...
heyy... what are you doing..? he asked.. antara looked away and wiped the lone tear that rolled on her cheek..
nothing.. we were just asking bhabhi.. how you proposed her for marriage...
raghu looked at her and noticed she might be hurt... again...
ummm.. ok.. come with me.. we have a surprise for you...
anjali???
ji bhaiyya..
how r u feeling now...?
i am fine now...
will u able to come with us..
yeah!!...
ok great..
rashmi bhabhi n shikha will also come in a minute..
abhi will u help anjali to go there...??
yep!!...come .. he gave her his hand and walked with her.. antara followed them but raghu stopped her...
antu??
yeah??
u ok..?
i am fine.. don't worry...
she was about to leave but he held her hand..
u always get hurt because of me..he cupped her face and asked her..
no.. she said and smiled..
what did u tell them..? he looked in her eyes and asked her..
that it was raining heavily and u were on ur knees with a bunch of roses in ur hands in the middle of the road..and pleaded to me to marry you...
everybody was looking at you.. you were sneezing and...
what??? is that what u told them...??
yes..
u're lying..he smiled...
u can ask them to confirm...she smirked..
i know.. u're lying... he pointed finger towards her..
they were laughing so hard when they heard this..
u're a sly.. u know that..
yes.. i do...
why did you do that...
because today i came to know something about our marriage..
what???
that it was a love marriage...
raghu closed his eyes in disbelief.. abhi told u this.. din't he??..
yes.. n they din't understand how papa got agreed for this...
did u tell them all these stories..
no.. he just made that in his mind..
only mom n dad knew about us.. they knew about her.. u know..
i din't tell anyone else..
mom n dad accepted u because they wanted to see me happy...and...
its ok.. i got it...
so u're not upset..?
no..
we are good??..
yeah!
good..
shall we.??.
yeah! let's go..
still u should not have lied about that rain and proposal stuff..
i din't... i was just teasing u.. she chuckled..
i hate you..
like u said before.. mutual feelings sweetheart...
oh! so i'm ur sweetheart..
shut up!
they kept blabbering and walked towards living room..

next part: scroll down.. :)
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-Akki


Edited by DeadDevil - 10 years ago
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heyy guys.. hope u all r doing well..
here is next part.. happy reading

Part 27..RaNtara's First KW continued...
all family members gathered in living room... all ladies were super excited about the surprise..
because they knew they won't be able to go for shopping now as it was too late..
and anjali was feeling bad for that..
sam, sid, mr naik (shouldn't i just give him some name.. lol...) settled themselves on couch..
raghu sat on the edge of couch.. Antara sat with Anjali on small a bed..
Shikha and Rashmi joined mrs naik while Abhi was just looking at them...
Sam called him and god knows how they all got settled in couch..
ok so..Antara this surprise is for you... Sam said..
everybody looked at Antara and smiled..
she couldn't look anywhere but Raghu...
Rashmi.. beta gave that to me.. mrs naik asked for a box.. and Rashmi gave it to her..
Antara Beta..??
ji..
come here.. mrs naik called her..
this is for you..
me??
mrs naik nodded in yes.. Antara smiled..
"what is it..??" she asked softly...
u open it first..
she looked at Raghu and he nodded in approval..
she sat on the bed and opened the gift wrap with curiosity..
it was a golden waist chain with a work of pearl and stones..
(something like this...but chain is not that thin..😆)
woww... this is beautiful... but why for me..? i mean it should be Rashmi bhabhi because she is elder than me.. or Anjali.. bcz she is expecting...
or shi...before she could complete shikha cut her in between...
but we have this for you.. bcz its ur first KW.. mrs naik said..
plus, we already have one.. rashmi and anjali said..
oh.. ohk.. she smiled to them.. thank you so much...
u liked it...???
yes.. very much... it's very beautiful..
so why don't u try this..
now??
yes...
come... shikha said and dragged her to another room...
she made her wear the waist chain...
its looking beautiful.. she said...
yeah! thank u di...
no problem..
they both came in living room and all said that it looked nice..
she smiled and thanked all..
she looked at mrs naik.. and thanked her silently.. she nodded in yes and smiled...
she was feeling a bit shy wearing that waist chain.. and was about to remove it when anjali stopped her..
its ok bhabhi.. its looking good.. don't remove it..
but what if it would fall somewhere..
let me solve ur problem.. rahsmi came forward and locked it tightly...now its ok...
ok.. now.. antara u must wear this tomorrow.. it will look beautiful with your lehenga...
yes.. and we will also wear our.. u know bhabhi.. like u hv pearls in ur chain.. i had pearls too.. anjali giggled..
antara too smiled... ok.. sure..
rashmi bhabhi.. u too..
ok..
antara..?
ji..
here is something for you from our side..Rashmi and Sam said..
what is it??
wowww.. u brought it.. we were actually waiting for this..Abhi and Anjali screamed...
do chk by ur self.. shikha replied and shrugged her shoulders...
Antara looked at the box and wishes slip..
Names of all of them were written on it.. Sam, Sid, Abhi, Rashmi, Anjali, Shikha..
antara again looked at Raghu..
why do u look at him every time...he won't say anything.. now open it.. come on.. Shikha said..
Antara opened the packing slowly.. her hands were shivering due to excitement and curiosity..
she looked at them.. and they all were looking at her with wide eyes and a big smile...
this packet was quite heavy.. so she put it on the bed...
she opened the packet.. and removed the white cover.. and her eyes popped out...
really???... Raghu screamed..
Antara's jaw was dropped... she looked at all of them...
what??? Rashmi asked...
say something...?? Sam asked...
this...this is sooo beautiful...
omggg!!! this is sooo beautiful... is this for me...??
they all nodded in yes at the same time...
wowww.. i luvd it...
it was a heavy lehenga choli.. red and cream color shaded pattern with pearl and embroidery work..
but why did you guys...??? she asked..
we were not at your wedding..and couldn't give you anything even after that..
so it's more like a wedding gift.. Rashmi said
and we want you to wear this tomorrow.. it's all done.. u don't need to worry about anything.. Shikha said..
she sighed and looked at them with so much love in her eyes...
this is cheating..wedding gift should be for me as well..
Sid and Sam glared at him.. and he sat back on his position.. ok.. all right.. no problem..
Antara giggled and hugged Rashmi, shikha and anjali one by one...
i really luvd it... thank u so much...
she was about to hug sam in excitement but stopped as he moved back..
she felt awkward...and lowered her eyes..
its ok.. and he patted on her head.. she bent down and touched his feet.. and Sid's too..
thank u bhaiyya.. thank u.. they blessed him.. and she smiled at Abhi...
it was my choice by the way.. i'm glad u liked it...
really??? it was your choice..?? Sid Said
don't listen to him antara.. he selected blue and pink colors..
antara chuckled.. but yes.. who selected this..
Sid and Rashmi and we all liked it too so here it is...
seriously.. its very pretty.. thank u so much...
she showed it to mr n mrs naik and they all praised the choice of their children...
mrs naik excused herself as she had some work and all ladies were about to leave too..antara packed the lehenga back and was leaving to keep it safely in her room...
but then raghu stopped them..
hold on ladies.. where r u going..
surprise is not yet done..
all ladies looked at him.. raghu asked sid to do the next announcement...
ok.. so as we all know that u could not do ur shopping or other stuffs.. we have planned something for you all..
we will do preparations by ourselves..
preparations like?? shikha asked..
pahle baith jaiye mohtarma.. sid said to them...
they all settled in couch and small bed..
raghu showed them some mehandi cones..
okay!! Thanks for that.. but we will do it by ourselves..what's ur surprise in this.. rashmi asked..
Sam got up from the couch.. and came in front.. he sat in front of Rashmi on his knees.. and everybody did the hooting...
let us do the honor...he said..
and Raghu, Sid and Abhi did the same in front of their wives..
Mr Naik came in front and captured their pic.. mrs naik too came in room hearing their hooting... and a smile appeared on her lips..
what happened to them...
nothing.. they r just being romantic.. mr naik replied and gave her a side hug...
seriously???? seeing their husbands like these they all screamed...
ummhmm..and all 4 nodded in yes...
all 4 ladies giggled and was about to get up.. but they held their hands...
"Abhi Naa Jao Chhod Kar.. Ke Dil Abhi Bhara Nahi..." they started singing...
Rashmi, Anjali and Shikha were used to of all these antiques of their husbands..but Antara was dying with embarrassment...
she tried to stop Raghu and nodded in no.. but he din't understand..
okay... u guys r in full mood today.. we got it... but we gotta go..
c'mon guys.. we have lots of stuffs to do...rashmi said...
Anjali.. beta u need anything.. shikha asked her..
no di i am fine..
u sure..
yeah!
ok.. u go and take some rest..
yeah!
she was about to leave.. when Abhi held her hand.. and moved closer to her..
he showed her hand and made patterns on her hand with his finger..
don't u want me to put mehandi on your hands..
she was lost in his eyes and nodded in yes..
good..!! he said softly and smiled..
she smiled back..
okay.. just 5 minutes.. and he made her sit on bed...
they all looked at each other.. and abhi smirked to rest of boys..
i'll win..
no way..!! they all screamed..
sam and sid dragged their wives too and brought them round...
hon! it will be fun..
you will remember this moment...
but kitchen stuffs??..
we will manage that...
u sure??
yeah!!
they agreed and got up to go and wash their hands..
but let me first put mehandi on mom's hands... it's her KW too..
i'll do that...mr naik came and said..
they all did hooting and mrs naik blushed...
Raghu saw Antara leaving the room.. she was going in their room to put the lehenga and box there...
he followed her.. she came in the room.. placed the lehenga on the bed and sat there after closing the door...
Raghu came there and sighed after seeing the door closed..
he pushed it a little and found it unlocked..
he came inside and she got up with a jerk seeing him here...
he asked her to stay seated.. and sat beside her..
you okay??
yeah!
u look upset..
no...i'll just come in 2 minutes..
Antu???
u don't need to lie to me...r u feeling uncomfortable about me putting mehandi on ur hands..??
its nothing like that.. i just came to put this dress here...
ohk,, but if there is anything.. u can tell me..
yeah?
yeah!
it will be fun.. come..
u go.. i'll be there in 2 minutes..
ohk.. he grabbed his laptop and left from there..
when he reached in living room.. his brothers and jiju had already started their work...
he turned on his laptop and searched for some simple designs on internet...
when other boys saw him.. they also got up to snatch the laptop from him,.. but he escaped..
we will get ours.. and they all left and came back in a minute..
all ladies giggles seeing them like this..
they were very excited for mehandi...
Antara came back after 5 minutes..
raghu made her sit on couch beside him.. he placed his laptop in front of him and she giggled seeing him like this..
don't worry..
i am not...
i'll make a good design...
i know.. and they both laughed..
when i was kid i was very good at drawing.. sid said..
but there is a diff between mehandi and pencil drawing... shikha said...
and they all chuckled..
Raghu looked at antara.. and took her right hand in his hand,..
he placed it gently on his knee.. and wiped it with his hand...
he took a mehandi cone and held it from top with fingers..
Antara made him hold it correctly and told him how to use it...
ohk.. cool... i got it... he said.. and she smiled...
he kept looking at the screen and then her hand.. screen>>hand>>screen>>hand...
Antara just kept staring at him...
she smiled when he made one design wrong and rubbed his temple.. some mehandi was applied on his forehead..
antara saw him and chuckled.. he raised his brow to ask what happened..?
she nodded in no.. and forwarded her left hand to clean the mehandi..
raghu kept doing his work...
after every 3-4 minutes they were showing their mehandi to each other..
some of them clicked pictures in between and then continued with their work..
when raghu completed her first hand we was super excited and showed the mehandi to everyone..
he looked for another design.. but he was not able to apply it on left hand.. and was not able to set it properly... he changed the position.. but still it din't work..
you please take a break now.. ur hand must be paining now.. u're doing this for 1/2 hr...
its ok.. i am fine.. but this side is not working..
its ok.. one hand is fine.. and i luvd this design.. she said..
thank u... but i'll fill both hands.. he said and antara smiled..
let me make some simple design...he said and held her left hand..
he was about to start it..
1 min.. she stopped him..
she moved her hair strands behind and gave her hand to him..
raghu looked at her in mischief style..
antu nodded in yes.. do whatever u want...
raghu took the cone and took a deep breath..and switched off the laptop
he made two three simple and small flowers on her hand.. she chuckled seeing those designs..
what are u making.??.
u're not liking it..??
no its gud.. but what are you making...
then he made one circle and filled it with mehandi.. this is moon.. he said..and she smiled..
and these are flowers for your pooja... he made one kalash on her hand.. this is for water.. he said...
antara giggled and looked at him... she could not believe if this all was real...
it seems to be like a dream.. tomorrow is my first KW.. and i never thought that i'll be able to keep this fast for him..or i'll hv these rights...
he himself applying mehandi on my hands..
i will never forget this..this is one of the most beautiful days of my life...
she was lost in thoughts and came back to her trance listening her name..
Antu..??
Antu???
hmm... yeah!
kahan khoyi ho??
she nodded in no...
its done..
she heard him and he showed her her hand.. and her eyes welled up...
he wrote their names inside a heart on her hand...
he made flower, star, hearts...
she looked at her hand and then him...
raghu saw her moist eyes so he looked at her hand...
and noticed their name inside the heart..
no i din't mean that...he looked at her was about to clean it..
but antara moved forward and hugged him tight.. ('course taking care of her mehandi.. that a girl can never ruin herself)
she closed her eyes but Raghu's eyes popped out.. everybody was there.. his parents too.. and he felt more embarrassed when they all sighed "Awww!!!" and turned their back from them...
he looked here and there and then slowly called her name..
Antu? what happened...
she din't reply and hugged him tighter..
raghu saw that no body was looking at them.. so he slowly moved his hand on her waist and hugged her back...
Antu?? what happened Jaan... why are you crying..? he called her softy in his husky voice..
Antata opened her eyes hearing the word "Jaan"... and he realized too what he said...
he held her from her shoulders and pulled her back...
ahem! raghu coughed and they all turned back...
she also realized that everybody was here and felt embarrassed..
its okay..don't feel bad... shikha said..
what happened to you...? why did you cry.. raghu asked and wiped her tears...
she nodded in no...
by next 1/2 hr everybody was done..
it was 7 pm now...
they ordered food from outside and all had their dinner together.. guys fed their wives by their own.. and this was first time when rantara ate from same plate...
they all moved to their respective rooms by 9:30 pm.. gals had to wake up early in the morning and then they had lots of things to do for next day...
rantara came in their room and she sat on the bed... raghu grabbed his clothes and went into the bathroom..
he took shower and came after 10 minutes wearing black track pants and black vest..
as he came out he saw her still looking at her mehandi.. she was smiling and he too smiled seeing her like that..
u liked it.. hmmm?
she looked at him as she heard his voice.. and nodded in no...
i know u liked it.. u din't expect it from me...
yeah!.. it's very nice.. but very very very special...
thank you so much for this surprise.. i'll never forget this... thanks a lot...
you're welcome...!! he said and kept his towel on chair..
u won't change...? he asked..
she showed him her hands...
oh! how will u sleep then...
i'll manage...thanks..
ohk..
he said and jumped on the bed..
r u gonna sleep like this..?..
yeah! why??
hmm...
woh! its a bit hot in there n u feel cold in ac so..
its ok..
ur family is very loving and caring... i am so lucky that i became a part of this family...
i..i still can not imagine how much love and respect they gave me...
raghu lifted her chin and made her look in his eyes...
he cupped her face in his hands ...u deserve that...he said and placed a soft kiss on her forehead...
he made her lie on her side and covered her with duvet.. she kept her hands outside and he smiled looking at her and clicked one picture of her in his phone..
he switched off the lights and slipped on his side...'good night'
good night..
after a few minutes antara tried to turn side to sleep.. but got tensed...
and poor girl.. she couldn't even rub her temple in irritation..
she got so much angry on herself... her waist chain was still on..
and not only because she was not able to sleep.. but it might get break..
she got up from the bed and switched on the lamp with her elbow..
raghu got up as she switched on the light..
u need anything..
no.. i am fine..
what happened then??
mehandi was on her palms and fingers only.. so she tried to open the lock from opposite side...
wowww... why din't u remove it before...??
i forgot it..
raghu was looking at her continuously..
she turned her back towards him and tried to open the lock..
after 5-6 minutes she got tired and sat on the bed..
why did u lock it so tight?
i thought it will fall down somewhere so rashmi bhabhi locked it tightly..
is it difficult to sleep with that on..
yeah! n it might get broken too...she got up and again tried..
she looked above as she felt him standing in front of her..
he held her wrists and removed her hands from waist chain softly..
may i..? he asked..
she nodded in yes.. Raghu sat down on his knees.. and brought her chain's lock in front by sliding it on her waist..
a shiver ran through her spine down..
her body stiffened as he lifted the chain on his finger and she felt his warm finger on her cold waist line...
he tried to open it but he couldn't pull the lock..
rashmi bhabhi bhi na...he said and looked above..
she immediately looked away..
its ok.. i'll do it tomorrow.. u sleep now...
1 min.. i got it..he said and flipped the chain..
before she could say anything.. he bent down and pulled the lock with his teeth..
she took a step back as his lips touched her waist...
he tried it twice and she could feel his tongue roaming on her waist..
she gulped her saliva and her breath got harder,,,
Raghu realized that as he felt her deep breaths and stiffened body..
he got up immediately and pulled the waist chain and rubbed her fingers on her waist to wipe the wetness...
they both looked at each other and moved back..
he put her chain on the table and walked towards the bed saying sorry to her...
she couldn't say anything and slipped on her side... raghu looked at her and covered her with duvet..
she closed her eyes...and turned to him..
i made the situation awkward while you were just trying to help..i'm sorry...
don't be..it's ok...
good night;..
good night..
they both turned their back to each other and dozed off...

precap: KW

thanks for reading..:)
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-Akki

Edited by DeadDevil - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wowowowowowowo omggg
this story is just way too amazing yaar
i cant tell you how much i loved this update
it was really beautiful, cute, romantic aahh i cant describe it
lol antu was teasing him about his proposal hehe naughty her
aww anjali fainted
plan cancled
aww raghu asked her if she was okay.. cute part
surprise surprise time :)
aww the waist gold chain part was amazing
it did the needful for us unknowingly hehe😳
the lengha omg amazing
raghu wanted his gift but brother backed him off lolzz funny part
mendhi time aww cute
raghu grabbed his lappy.. yayy go for it raghu
hand screen hand screen omg that was the highlight of this update
seriously so funny.. i started laughing at that
awww the designs were described beautifully
raghu couldnt get it right lolzz just like me.. i ruin it all the time
omg the hug.. uff
raghu hugged her when no one was looking naughty raghu😉😳
jaan.. omg that was totally unexpected for me.. i was rubbing my eyes thinking it wasn't real but hey it was yayy
both shocked hearing Jaan from raghu
sleep time... 🥱
and there antu cant sleep
omg i always ruin my mendhi.. urghh
poor antu.. having a hard time
ra..r.rrr...raghu...raghuu o...pp...en..opened her..ch...chai...chain... w...wit...with..hh...is...his...te..eeth..o..mm..gg
thats was so hawt
the feeling uff
chalo ji good night bhi kardia
the forehad kiss wass amazing
pls cont asap😳
Edited by honeybees22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
update done..
now working on coloring part..
PMs in an hour..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very beautiful update Akki

Very good to see the family bonding in Raghu's house. Everybody cares for each other. Anjali & Abhi are so cute.

That was too cute when Antara said Suniye & Raghu immediately replied hmm all were looking at them & Raghu's explanation tht she doesn't call him by his name.

Anjali & Abhi asking Antara about their love story & Antara went back to those days when got married & they teasing Raghu

Raghu knew that Antara would get hurt remembering those days & he comforted her

Antara got surprise. Wow. Waist chain was too beautiful & lehenga for Antara's first KW. Antu looking at Raghu everytime was too too cute & both talking with each other through eyes. Haayee aankhon aankhon main ishaara horaha hain😳😳😳

Mehendi session was too too good. Raghu looking at laptop & drawing designs on Antara's hand. How romantic he is😳😳😳 Koi bhi ladki keliye isse badi kushi ki baat nahi hosakti. Antu hugging Raghu & Raghu after confirming that no one is looking towards them he hugged her. Jaan😳😳😳 Haaye kya word thi😉😉😉

Raghu's goodnight kiss to Antara & telling tht she deserves tht love & affection was the highlight of this update. Raghu helping Antara by removing her waist band by his teeth.😳😳😳 Haaye maar daala😳😳😳 Phir rubbing his fingers on her belly to wipe the wetnesss😳😳😳

lovely update Akki
Edited by Nethravathi - 10 years ago

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