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anithu

@amrithatec

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Posted: 10 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: Archana03
Hi anithu hw is ur health NW..

Thanks for the concern Archana..I am good..Still throat pain is there..i will back within tomorrow

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Archana03

@Archana03

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Posted: 10 years ago

#552

Oh OK anithu take care of ur health...

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anithu

@amrithatec

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Posted: 10 years ago

#553

Episode 30

Raji's Flat..

Karthik calling..

Karthik:Phonea edhu raji...Why so late..enkitta pesuradhaa thaviraa..Enna velaa ivalukku

Raji:Sollu karthik..

Karthik is silent..

Raji:Enaa karthik irukiyaa illayaa..silent a irundhaa..ennaku eppidi theriyum sollu..Kovamaa..

Karthik:Yen ivalavu time agudhu phone edhukaa..

Raji:Karthik i was taking bath..

Karthik:Phone a rest room ku edhutu poradhu..

Raji:Idhu unnaku too much a ilaa.

Karthik:Seri nee inniku free yaa..

Raji:Karthik lakshmi veetla illa..unnaku theriyumlaa..

Karthik:Seri ennaku oru call varudhu..naan unnaku thirumbavum call panren..

Raji:Seri karthik..

Karthik:Thirumbavum kulikka poidadhaaa..

Raji:Rombathaan..

Raji's Mind voice:Ayyoyo..Wash panna marandhutomae..Seri evalavu neram agum..

Suddenly a knock at the door..

Raji:Yaaru...

Karthik:Ellam ungalukku therinchavangaa dhaan..

Raji:Therunchavanga naa..

Karthik:Sondakarangaa..

Raji:Sondhakaranga naa...Amma vazhilayaa Appa vazhilayaa..

Karthik's Mind voice:Nakkal pidichavaaa..

Raji:Hello yarungaa..

Karthik:Neenga first door open pannunga..Appo theriyum..

Raji's Mind voice:Lakshmi veraa ilaa..evanavadhu thirudanaa irundhaa..ilaaa porukkiyaa irundhaa..Seri kaivasam..Manjaa podi..Mulagaaa Podi irukulaaa..Raji kalaakuraa dee..

Raji slightly opens the door and without seeing applies both Manjaa and Mulagaa Podi on karthik without seeing..

Karthik starts shouting..

Karthik:Adipavi..loosu...Patti kadu..

Raji:Karthik neeyaa..

Karthik:Pinna veraa yaraairukum..

Raji:Sollavendiyadhu dhanae..

Karthik:Yendi ennoda voice kuda unnaku kekalaa..

Raji:Sorry Karthik..

Karthik:Ennaa nikuraa..Poi water konduvaa..idhu kooda vaa sollanum..

Raji:Seri iru varen..

Karthik:Shabba..enna raji idhu..

Raji:Illa karthik..Lakshmi ila laa..adhaan evanavadhu rowdy ilaa thirudhaan vandhaanu ninachen...sorry...

Karthik:Ninapaaa...ninapaa...irundhalum..nee eppidi alert a irukradhu nalladhu dhaan..

Raji:Amaan edhukku indhaa sudden visit..Sollavae ilaa..

Karthik:Nee thaniyaa irukiyaa adhunalaaa..

Raji:Adhunalaaa..

Karthik:Ilaa Something Something..pannalamaaa..

Raji:Karthik venaaa...kitaa varadhaaa..

Karthik:Vandhaaa enna pannuvaa..

Raji:Sollamataen..

Karthik:Yen...

Raji:Adhu vandhu..

Karthik:Edhu...

Raji:Karthik..venaaa..

Karthik:Ennaku venum raji..

Raji:Ennadhu

Karthik:Coffee venum..

Raji:Avalavudhanaaa..

Karthik:Nee enaa ninaichaa..

Raji:Naan onnum ninaikala...Nanum unnaku coffee venumanu dhaan kekalamnu ninaichen..Nee ketutaaa..

Karthik:Naanga nambitom..

Raji:Seri seri...naan coffee ooda varen..

Karthik:Nalla coffee a irukatum..

Raji Stares at him..

Karthik gets a call from Vishnu..

Karthik:Sollu vishnu..

Vishnu:Nee enga daaa iruku...Namma oru movie ku pogalamaa..

Karthik:illa da..oru friend veetuku vandhiruken..

Vishnu is shell shocked..

Vishnu:Friend aa..appo naaan yaaru..

Karthik:idhu new friend daa..

Vishnu:Machaan idhellam serilaa solliten..

Karthik:Dei...

Vishnu:Andhaa new friend...Raji dhanae..

Karthik:Eppidiraaa..

Vishnu:Dei naan vishnu daaa..

Karthik:Seri...adhukku enaa..

Vishnu:Ennaku unnapathi theriyadhu..Enna Romantic day out aa..

Karthik:Yes Machaan..Light aa

Vishnu:Adapavi..nee yaa daa..eppidi..

Karthik:Eppidi..

Vishnu:Oru ponnu vandhadhum..Friend...ellam dust bin nnu prove pannitiyae daa..

Karthik:Everything is fair and good in Love Machaan..

Vishnu:Appo neeyae othukraa Love nnu..

Karthik:Irukalam..illamaa..Special friendship a kooda irukalam..

Vishnu:Dei dei...love aa love nnu accept pannaa ungaa rendu perukkum enna problem..

Karthik:Lakshmi oorla illanu enna nee mokkaa podrayaa...Ennaku nerayaa work irukudaa..Namaa monday pakalam..

Vishnu:Seri... seri...Bye machaan..Naan lakshmi kku phone panni time pass panren..

Karthik:Ok vishnu..Appram ennaku ini nee weekends call pannadhaa...

Vishnu:Great insult to Vishnu...

Raji comes with Coffee..

Karthik:Oru coffee podaa ivalavu neramaa Raji..

Raji:Filter coffee adhaan..

Karthik:Unnaku filter coffee ellam podaa theiryumaa..

Raji:Ennaku samaikka nalla varum..

Karthik:Paraaa..

Raji:Seri nee innum answer pannalayae..

Karthik:Suprise..Kanna moodu pakalam..

Raji:Seri...

Karthik:Eppo open pannu raji..

Raji is surprised..

Raji:Enna karthik ivalavu chudis...

Karthik:Unnaku dhaan..

Raji:Edhukku sudden aa..

Karthik:Raji unnaku light colours innum nalla irukum..adhaan ennoda cousin ingaa bouquet vechirukaan..pathadhum vangiten..

Raji:Appo naan podradhu ellam nalla illayaa karthik

Karthik:Appidi ilaa..Office kku indhaa madiri light colours potaa..nee dhaan IT devadhaaa..

Raji:Appidi yaa solraa..

Karthik:Amaan Raji..

Raji:Seri evalavu naan tharunanum sollu

Karthik:Ennaku money ellam venaam..

Raji:Appram..

Karthik:Namma inniku Marina beach pogalam..enkooda nee vandhaaa eppo podhum..

Raji:Seri ingayae wait pannu..Dress change pannitu varen..

Karthik:Idhulaa irukuraa dress onnu pottutu vaa..

Raji:Neeyae endhaa colour nnu sollu

Karthik:Pink with yellow Designer chudi...pottuvaaa..

Raji:Seri..

After 20 mins Raji comes with the wonderful designed work Chudidhar..

Karthik:Hey raji summa alraa theriyumaa..

Raji:Nejamaaa..

Karthik:Amaan Raji...Seri polaam vaaa..

Karthik and Raji in bike..

Karthik:Enna Raji yosikuraa..Enkooda vara bayamaa irukaa..

Raji:Cha cha...indhaa ulagathilayae...naan safe aa nambikaiyaa endhaa nimashamum irukaa mudiyuraa orey aal nee dhaan karthik..

Karthik:Something is worrying you raji..Enna achu..

Raji:Karthik..Naan eppo bayandhu...confidence ae illama irukenae..naan eppidi ilaa..

Karthik:Theriyum Raji..nee dhaan sollirukiyae..

Raji:Amman Karthik..Ennakae enna ninachaa...

Karthik:Raji Stop..Namma beach ku poi pesikalam..Amaidhiyaa iru...Chillunu vara kathaaa...nesi...Endha problem kku oru solution irukum..Adhuvum naan unna namburen..Endhaa puyal namala nerungi vandhalum seri..Naan unkoodavae irupen..Idhulaa endhaa doubt irukaa..

Raji:I trust you more than myself karthik..

Karthik:Appo just be silent..Iyarkaiyaa nesi raji...Just oru pass kodu..Ellathayum...face pannu..prove pannu...kadandhaa kasapanaa..vishiyathaa..marandhiru nnu sollala..anaa..struggle...challenge...You are the best nnu oru confidence varum..Idhuvum kandadhu pogum..

Raji:Pidichiruku..

Karthik:Enna..

Raji:Unnoda Motivational thoughts enna izhukudhu..

Karthik:Enga izhukudhu Raji..

Raji:Pesiyae ellarayum nee unpakkam izhukuraa karthik...magnet madiri..

Karthik:Appidi ellam ilaa..Pidichirukku..adhulaa..enna sonnalum unnaku appidi kekanumnu thonudhu..Avalavudhaan..

Raji:Nee oru Kadhal Mannan karthik..

Karthik:I am blessed Raji..

Raji:Yen appidi solraa..

Karthik:Naan ellarkittayum pesaamataen..Adhuvum Girls...naa..i will stand 10inches apart..

Raji:Appidiyae appram eppidi enkooda mattum pesuraa..

Karthik:Adhudhaan ennaku theriyala..You have something special..You are a unique piece God has created karthik..

Raji:Appidiyaaa..

Karthik:Amaan..Seri seri beach vandhiruchu..vaa pogalam..

Raji:Vaa..vaaa..

Karthik:raji unnaku beach naa romba pidikumaa..

Raji:Appidi illa..Alai yaa pathaaa..Romba poramayaa iruku..

Karthik:Ennadhu Poramayaa iruku..

Raji:Amaan karthik..Alai ovavaru vatiyum..evaalvu adigamaa..karaiku varumbodhu..onnu solludhu unnaku theriyala..

Karthik:Ennaku unalavukku ellam rasikka theriyadhu..So neeyae sollu

Raji:Alai kku karai melaa kadhal...Adhunala dhaan..ovavaru vinadiyum..vandhu vandhu..naan iruken..Unnaa naaneppavum pathukittae vandhu thoduven nnu sollamaa solludhu..

Karthik:raji...

Raji:Ennachu Raji..

Karthik:Nee oru unique figure nnu sonnenae eppo puriyudhaa..

Raji:Ennaku appidi thonalaa..Ennoda manasulaa patadhaa solren..

Karthik:Nalla iruku..

Raji:Edhu..

Karthik:Climate dhaan..

Raji:Kaal ninaikalamaa Karthik..

Karthik:Seri vaa..anaa oru condition..

Raji:Sollu..

Karthik:Ennoda kai yaa pidichukanum..

Raji:Eppavum pidichittu irupen..Vidamataen..eppavum..

Karthik Smiles and says Thanks..

Raji splashes water on karthik...

Karthik:Hey Raji...enna idhu chinna pilla madiri..

Raji:Summa dhaan..

Karthik:Unna enna panren paaru..

Karthik and Raji plays hide and seek Game..

Karthik:unna pidichu katren paaru..

Raji:Mudinchaa pidee..

Raji runs faster...and karthik unable to catch her..Sudden idea strikes karthik..

Karthik's Mind voice:Iru unna enna panren paaru..

Karthik pretends like missing and raji gets tensed as she is not seeing karthik and starts to search...Raji starts crying..Karthik is shocked and comes before here..

Karthik:Raji...naan ingaa iruken..

Raji gets Angry..

Raji:Engaa ponaaa..

Karthik:Illa sumaaa..maranchukalamnu dhaan..

Raji starts crying more..

Karthik:raji sorry...

Raji:Neeyum unnoda sorryum..Eppidi bayandhuten theriyum..Dont play with my Feelings karthik..

Karthik:Seri raji..nee sollitaa laa..neee i wont repeat..Indhaa kercheif...thodaaa...Eppidi sevandhirukku paaru..

Raji:Nee thodachu vidaa mataaa..

Karthik:Avalavudhanae..Raji angaa paaru...

Suddenly karthik pinches her cheek and says...

Karthik:so chweet..

Raji:Hei ennada panraa..

Karthik:Hey unna yaaro kupidraanga paaru..

Suddenly karthik comes closer and slowly seggrigate her hair and feels her aroma smell of her hair...

Raji:Hey ennadaa panraa..

Karthik:Raji i love your hair...

Raji:Ennadaa sonaaa..

Raji chases karthik and karthik holds Raji hands ...

Raji:Vidu karthik...

Karthik:Mudiyadhu..

Raji:Ellarum pakraanga daa..

Karthik:Pakatum..

Raji:Unnaku vekkam ilaa..

Karthik:unnoda vishiyathulaa ilaa..

Karthik comes closer to hear and toucher her neck...Rain starts flowing ..

Raji:Karthik mazhaa daa..

Karthik:cha cha...Nalla time laa emaan madiri vandhiruchae...

Precap:

What happens next in Karthik-Raji life next..

Karthik and Raji drenched raji and gets cold..

Vishnu:Dei iru..unnaku cold and cough

Lakshmi:raji kkum vishnu..

Karthik:Adhunalaa..

Lakshmi:Ennamo iruku..

Vishnu:Kandu pidikurom..

Karthik and messai heated conversation in karthik's Flat..

What happens next

Stay tuned

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Edited by anithu - 10 years ago

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Rajee71

@Rajee71

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#554

Very nice update, Anitha...

KR phone conversation, meeting in home and in beach... Wherever they are , lovely moments...

Super update... 👏

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ammukuty

@ammukuty

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#555

Super update anithu but some change of name in dialogues ma see it

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Gayathri30

@Gayathri30

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#556

very nice romantic update, loved the entire part. KR and their love blossoming was nice to see, thank you for the update. KR were cute the beach running after one another and raji getting scared karthik not there, all nice to see.

Vishnuku eppavume bulbu hahahaha.

precap - meesai and karthik heated conversation ahh?? aiyo yenna athu?

kekama iruka mudilaa when is the next update😳

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: ammukuty
Super update anithu but some change of name in dialogues ma see it

Thanks Ammu..But i cant find it..Tell me where the change in name..If it is mistake i will recitfy it...

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#558

Super update,Ani sis...loved it...

oh athu karthikthana...but after that...hahaha...😆.

raji,mulaga podilam karthik moonchila kotti...aiyoo...sema comedy.🤣..

their beach scenes r very cute...😳

precap...KR ku cold...serithan...😉

meesai n k heat convo...ennathu ithu...problem onnum illaiye...waiting

thanks for the pm

Edited by shiningstar77 - 10 years ago

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Lily Padawattar

@plily

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#559

Lovely update Anithu sis . Enjoyed it very much. All KR scene are awesome. Their conversation about how they feel about each other shows their friendship moving to the next level. Lovely bonding and understanding . Vishu as usual rocks . Thanks for pm sis. 😊

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muthucheenu

@muthucheenu

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#560

Dear Anithu ma'am, thanks for an interesting, romantic update. Raji's views on the relationship between the waves and the shore was superb and unique too! Its always nice to see KR together. KV's convo was interesting too. Thank you ma'am 👏