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Posted: 10 years ago

TOO GOOD TO SHARE - PART 4 :


Rd's breath got hitched...

Parth started laughing...


P:saale shakal dekh apni...Rd punched him hard...

R:bata kahan hai sanyu

P:zinda hai aur tere liye itna hi kaafi hai samjha agar zyada natak kiya toh zinda bhi nahi rahegi..

R:theek hai m..mein jaa raha hun...pur pur use kuch mat karna...


Rd left the house nd parth locked the door...

rd stood outside nd was trying to hear sumthing dat wud help him get a clue about where sanyu was. ..

He heard parth talking to sum1...

P:haan aya tha voh yahan meine kuch nahi bataya use...ab sun tune usse baat karne ki koshish ki toh tu toh maregi...


He figured out dat he was talking to sanyu...He tried to break open the door nd after repeated failed events finally succeeded. ...

parth was sitting on the couch nd wayching tv he smirked at rd ...

P:jaa bathroom mein padi hai..

Rd ran inside nd opened the bathroom door...

Rd ran inside the washroom nd opened the door...His eyes welled up seeing her state...

She was semi conscious nd all covered in blood...


He ran nd carefully picked her up nd ram to the hospital...

Rd's pov


W*F has happened how can sum1 b such an asshole bloody bas***d...

suddenly it struck him goddamn it was his fault...shit how cud he let her go in the morning nd crap he fired vidushi before he made sure dat sanyu was alright...its all my fault (he was literally crying)...


After aboit 1 hr the doc came out rd ran to him...

R:d...doctor iz she f9...I mean...

D:she has sum minor and sum major injuries...

her hand iz fractured her finger in the other hand broken she has a severe injury in the head nd she iz out of danger bit we hv to do mri to b sure...

she has lost alot of blood...her thigh has a deep cut nd her ankle iz twisted...Rd's eyes had become redas the doctor listed out the things to him..

D:dis iz a police case nd we jv called them dey will arrive shortly...but r u her relative cause u hv to fill the forms mr shekhawat. ...

The police arrived shortly nd rd got parth nd vidushi arrested...

Rd asked the doctor whether he cud see sanyu nd he was allowed...He went inside nd saw her...

her body was completely filled with bandages...


He went nd put his hand on her forehead gently...


R:pagal ho puri ki puri kaha tha na meine mat jao vapas pur nahi sanyukta kisi ki baat kaise maan sakti hai...pagal gadhi theek ho jao phir dekho tumhe toh mein hi maar dunga...pur plz theek hojao ab dekho tum theek hojao...

After 2 weeks...


Sanyu was shifted to rds house nd a nurse was kept for her ...evn karan nd priya did nt object wat rd was doing for sanyu ...

Rd was taking care of sanyu nd priya relised dat he had fallen in luv wid her...


Sanyu had been recovering nd she knew dat she owes alot to him nd his family...


One night rd went to her room presumed her to b asleep nd ran his fingers in her hair...


R:acha hai tum theek toh ho rahi ho...bus ab jaldi se normal hojao...mein tumhare parents ko bhi le aaunga dont worry mein sab theek kar dunga...he placed a kiss on her forehead nd was leaving but she caught his wrist nd he was shocked nd was at a loss of words...


R:u...ummm u r awake

S:hmm..betho

R:hunh..

S:betho na


He sat nd she held hos hand nd tangled her fingers with his as if trying to feel his fingers ...

Both pf dem kept silent...


S:thanq rd thanq so much

R:sanyukta tum...

S:plz mujhe bolne do...

Rd thanq ...


mein janti hun ki tumhe yeh karne ki zarurat nahi thi pur tumne mere liye itnaa kuch kiya hai..jisse mein pyaar karti thi usne meri yeh halat kar di aur jo mujhse pyaar karte the unhe meine chodd diya...


tumne mere kich na hote hie bhi jo mere liye kiya usse I know 1 thing for sure nd dat iz ki u love me...nd... mujhe acha lagega agar mein kabhi bhi tumhare liye kuch bhi kar paun...

Rd luked into jer eyes...


she was not crying but maintained the eye contact as if trying to figure out the depth of his emotions...


rd caressed her hand...


R:aaa...dekho sanyukta luk u dont need to thank me nd meine tumhare liye jo bhi kiya voh isliye nahi kiya because I want sumthing from u...haan agar payback karna hai toh ek cheez kar sakti ho..

S:kya batao na I wud luv to do anything for u...

R:jaldi se pehle ki tarah normal ho jao...

Sanyu smiled at him nd he left the room..


To be continue...


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Edited by purnima209 - 10 years ago
twni thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank god sanyu jinda hain anyway nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
you penned down so beautifully..
thank you for the pm..
plzz update soonish..
Love
Ashka
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
acha hua parth nd vidushi ke saath
dey r such a stupids
poor sanyu
thanks for pm
continue soon :)))
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Posted: 10 years ago
The update was awsme yr
Poor sanyu dat cheapo parth hurtled her so much
She was badly injured

Thank god rd came there on time he saved her
He got vidharth arrested

He luvs sanyu so much
He's taking care of sanyu..

Sanyu also respects him a lot

Update soon
Wtng

Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
superp nd lovely part love this a lot.
update nxt prt soon.
thnk u so much for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update😊
Happy that sanyu is alive😊
Vidushi & parth arrested😊
Loved rd's concern😊
Thanks for pm
Update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsm update poor sanyu but thank god parth is now in jail and rd is falling for her...hmmm cant wait for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome n lovely update😳👏
love it to the core❤️
Beautifully U've pinned the emotion👏
Poor Sanyu...
Randhir is so sweet😳
Update ASAP
Thx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my gaawd...
last update padhne ke baad toh jaise meri saanse hi ruk gayi thi...thank god sanyi jindaa hain! And randhir is finally falling in luv with her! Wah! Kya baat hain bhai maza aa gaya!
U r such an awesum writer believe me i literaly go maad waiting fr d updates!!!! And when it comes i pounce on it like a crazy person...ab kya karein...ap likhte hi aisa ho!
continue faasht! Warna maar dalungi!
Thnx fr d pm...agli baar bhi bhejna!
Love
Noopur ;)

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