True love - A sandhir os

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey everyone,i am here with an os of mines ... thought of this os came in my mind while listening a punjabi song ... hope you all like it ..Do read and please leave your rewiews ...

These will encourage me to write more ...Do read and then like ,comment and share ..


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TRUE LOVE


RANDHIR'S POV - I was sitting with my bestie Sanyukta, parth, yoyo ,jiggy and kaustoki...

I was showing the ring to all my friends... Today i am gonna propose to my girlfriend vidushi for wedding ..
We are together from six years ... and now my parents want me to get married .. so before telling everything about us to my family,i want to confirm it from vidushi that whether she is ready for wedding or she needs time ..

My chain of thoughts was broken by sanyukta's voice

"Kya baat hai randhir, itni mast ring ... vidushi is so lucky man"- she said looking at the ring which was kept in ring box

'Arey sanyukta ji itni hi pasand hai toh ap rakh lo,randhir bhaji dusri le ayenge,kyun randhir bhaji'- yoyo said in funny style making sanyukta laugh

'Arey mujhe randhir kyun dega ring,mujhe toh mera prince charming ring dega,jo k ek gentelman, smart hoga,iski tarh budhu nhi ... bilkul aisi hi diamond ring'- sanyukta said looking at ring again

'Bakwas band kar aur aise hi dekh rahi hai,le hath mein pakad kar dekhle'- i said..I was holding ring with my thumb and index finger ,i was giving ring to her,she was about to take the ring from my hand,when i saw vidushi standing at some distance and looking at both of us with doubtfull eyes ...Sanyukta took ring from my hand ... she hadn't yet seen vidushi .

"Its so beautifull randhir"- she said lovingly staring at the ring.
Vidushi's eyes became red due to anger ..

End of pov...


PARTH'S POV


We all saw vidushi looking at sanyukta and randhir with hate and anger in her eyes ...

Sanyukta gave ring to randhir and he started running towards vidushi

'Please vidu,listen to me,you are misunderstanding the situation,tum jaisa soch rahi ho waisa kuch bhi nahi hai'- randhir said in pleading tone

'Oh so mr.rss will tell me k kya sahi hai aur kya galat .. shut up randhir, you are a cheater.. i am your girlfriend and you are giving ring to sanyukta, just leave me alone ... we are over'- Vidushi said shouting

'Don't say like this vidu,baby you know na i love you so much, and i can't live without you,mein toh bas sabko ring dikha raha tha jisse mein aaj tumhein propose karne wala tha marrige ke liye'- said said standing in front of her,blocking her way '

Oh please randhir, i don't need all these explanations,i earlier told you to stay away from this sanyukta, but tumhein toh iski hi parwah hai na,and moreover i am tiered of listening these stupid eplanations from you"- she pushed him and went out ..

Sanyukta went near him and helped him in standing properly ... Randhir hugged her crying and i noticed some tears in sanyukta's eyes too ... she was consolling him ...

It was normal ... vidhushi always hurts randhir and sanyukta consoles him ..
Both are childhood friends ... best friends Even their parents wants them to get married ...but they both denied as randhir loves vidushi

'Randhir tu tension mat le,sab kuch theek ho jayega'- sanyukta said

'Kuch theek nhi hoga sanyukta, she .. she left me .. my vidu left me'- randhir said between his sobs

'Kuch nhi hua randhir, i vl talk to her,and i will make everything allright'- sanyukta said in a confident tone

'But she doesn't likes you sanyu,she always treats you badly,still you will talk to her,kyun'- randhir asked breaking the hug

'Wo isliye kyunki mera sweet sa best friend,use bohat sara pyar karta hai,aur iske liye ittu sa kaam toh mein kar hi saktihoon na'- she said cutely like a kid makingrandhir smile.

' Acha chal ab band kar ye rona dhona aur mere sath chill marne chal,hum log masti karenge bohat sari .. and i will talk to vidushi after sometime,tab tak shayad gussa shand ho jayega tumhari lady hitler ka" - sanyukta making randhir laugh

She is the only one girl in this world which can make him laugh,even in his worst mood

She wiped his tears and removed all the stains of tears from his face with her hands ..

These two best friends are really very best for each other ..

"Chal chalte hai"- randhir said smilling ..The two went out ...
i was about to leave when my sight caught something under the chair where sanyukta was sitting There was some notebook kind thing ..

"May be sanyukta ki ho "- i though

I picked that note book and then i got to know that its sanyukta's dairy.. her personal dairy .. jisko aaj tak usne randhir ko bhi nahi dekhne dia .. I openedthat dairy and read it ..i was so shocked after reading it ..

End of pov



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No one's pov

Sanyukta went to vidushi's house..
She rang the door bell .. when vidushi opened the door,she looked at her in angry way and tried to close the door on her face .. but sanyukta didn't let her closethe door ..
She entered inside the house and made her understand the whole situation .. after alot of pleading by sanyukta, she finally aggred ..
She understood that it was just a misunderstanding ... she thanked sanyukta for clearing this misunderstanding ..
She was too happy that randhir will propose her for marriage.
"Sanyukta i am so exicted k randhir mujhepropose karega,i am so happy" - vidushi said in excitement 'Even i am happy for both of you .. tum jaldi se ready ho jao tabtak mein randhir ko bata deti hoon,k meintumhein lekar aa rahi hoon'- sanyukta said
'Sanyukta i want to look best,toh use bol dena k 1 hour baad hum dono sath aarahe hai,aur please help me in getting ready'- vidushi said jumping in excitement
'Yea ofcouse vidushi'- sanyukta said Sanyukta informed randhir and he was really very happy ...

Randhir's pov


Oh my god m so happy sanyu you are awsome yaar,you are my saviour tu best hai yaar ..tune vidushi ko mana lia, i can't explain k mein kitna kush hoon ..
My chain of thoughts was broken when parth entered in my room ..

'kya kar raha hai randhir "- parth asked

"kuch nahi paro, mein bohat khush khush hoon,sanyu ne vidushi ko mana lia,she is such a sweetheart na"- i said smilling"

Yeah she is, par tuje kya hogya jai randhir tu itna andha kyun hua pada hai,vidushi don't love you"- parth said in a frustated tone

"Kya bakwas kar raha h parth,mera mood spoil mat kar"- i said rudely

" Randhir, tu samajh kyun nahi raha,vidushi doesn't loves you,inface sanyukta loves you yaar"- parth said

"What the hell is wrong with you parth, kya bakwas kar raha hai,sanyu is my best friend and thats all,she doesn't loves me"-i said in a convincing tone
But may be he was not convinced

" Tujhe mujhpar yakin nahi hai na,toh ye padh,sanyukta ki personal dairy,jo aj tak usne tujhe bhi nahi padhne di"- parth said giving me dairy
I read the whole dairy,and i was shocked .. he is telling the truth .
Same sanyu's dairy,same handwritting hows thispossible

"Randhir, she loves you more than anyone else, and even you loves her,tu jab uske sath hota hai toh hmesha khush hota hai,only she can make you smile .. she cries when you are in trouble,she is the one for you randhir"- parth said

"parth, i need some time,please tu jaa yahan se"- i said and parth left my home


SANYUKTA'S POV

It has been 1 hour since i informed randhir that vidushi will meet him in park near her home ..

'Vidushi jaldi kar,randhir might be waiting for us"- i shouted in frustation

"Not for us sanyukta, he would be waiting only for me"- vidushi said looking at her in mirror

i rolled my eyes ...
She is so irritating yaar ... but still randhir loves her and i can do anything for his happiness .. it pains in my heart when he says I LOVE YOU to vidushi,or hugs her,or sits close to her ... but if all this makes him happy then i can bear this pain happily ...

I and vidushi went to park .. we were standing at the entrence,when we saw randhir standing,at some distance .. he looked at us .
Vidushi started walking towards her and randhir too started to come forward .. my eyes became moist .. but i controled my tears ...
Now randhir and vidushi were standing in front of each other ...i turned to leave .. tears started coming out of my eyes ... i took just two or three steps but then i felt someone's grip on my wrist ..
When i turned,i noticed that it was randhir which was holding my wrist ..

"Ro kyun rahi ho"- randhir asked

"Arey nahi ... kuch nahi ... bas aise hi "- i said wipping my tears and forcing a smile
He holded my hand and made me wear a ring in my ring ... the same ring ... and kissed my hand
I looked at him with confussion on my face

"Kya socha tune,k aise hi mujhse picha chuda legi tu,itni asani se peecha nahi chodne wala tera,soon to be Mrs. Sanyukta Randhir Singh Shekhawat .. aur kyun nahi bataya mujhe k you love me"- he said showing me my dairy

Oh shit .. ye ise kahan se mili ... i looked at him fearfully ... kahin isne read toh nahi karli dairy

"Arey why are you scared"- he said cupping my face sending shivers in my whole body .
He moved his lips towards my ear and whispered I LOVE YOU SANYU and pecked my earlobe ..
I closed my eyes to feel this movement ... it was like a dream come true for me .. i was feeling on top of the worldSuddenly he shruged me and took me out of my randhirland

"I want to hear the same from you sanyu"- he said huskily
I opened my eyes.

"Randhir but you toh loves vidushi"- i said

"I love you only my sanyu, and all thanks to the curcumstances,mujhe pata chala k my TRUE LOVE is you only ... only you can make me smile even in my worst mood ... i love you bayby ... and i want to hear the same from you"- he said intensly

"I love you so much randhir"- i hugged him as tight as possible because i wad afraid that he might leave me ..
But nooo ... he is with me .. now ... and forever ... my TRUE LOVE ...



So guys .. i did my work ... now its your turn to tell me youe rewiews ...
I took 3 hours to type this os ... so ek like aur comment toh banta hai na 😳

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Edited by lonleyangel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very touchy and emotional... just one line is making me intriguing.. Sanyukta helped Randhir to stand properly... does that mean there is something disability with him ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sparkling_gems

very touchy and emotional... just one line is making me intriguing.. Sanyukta helped Randhir to stand properly... does that mean there is something disability with him ?

Thank you so much arey nahi ... wo toh vidushi ne use push kara tha na .. isliye use help kia tha and moreover he was heart broken
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Originally posted by: lonleyangel

Thank you so much arey nahi ... wo toh vidushi ne use push kara tha na .. isliye use help kia tha and moreover he was heart broken

Ohh okay..i thought he has some walking disability. btw read the next portion of the OS.. and very well written. Love how RAndhir realized his true feelings for Sanyukta.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful update👏
A very beautiful story😊
Continue writing more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome
lovely
beautiful
heart touching os
sanyu was such a sweet heart
finally rd confessed his love to sanyu
loved it
keep writing :))))
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This OS is so awesome!
So heart touching!
I loved it to the core!!!!
I adore it
Loads of love
Anu
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yr it was amzng
So cute
Beautifully wriiten

Sandhir best frnds
Rd luvs vids he's going to propose her
Bt vids is so selfish she alwz treats sanyu badly n she also insulted rd n broke up wid him
Rd was broke sanyu consoled him
She luvs him so much she can do anything for him
She convinced vids for him

Thank god rd realised his true luv
He proposed sanyu

All in all I luved it
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey superb update!!!
Friendship turning into love...
Awesum dear...
Thnx for pm...

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