THE JADED PRINCE [MG] 'Epilogue' Page 66 - Page 2

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PART 184

M-What do you want then?

G-I wanna sleep

M-Tum sudhrogi, nahi?

G-Nope

He pulls her into his arms into his lap

Geet is surprised

He picks her up and gets up and puts her on the bed settling down beside her

She comes closer to him

G-I love you

M-Me too.

G-Ufff...bolna bhi nahi aata. Bhondu kahin ke

She pulls his nose

M-kya bolna nahi aata?

Maan asks rubbing her cheek instead of pulling her nose

G-Shhh...kuch nahi

She nuzzles in his neck hiding her face into his neck

He pulls her close into his arms

She kisses his Adam's apple

Maan moves his hand slowly along her spine liking it all.. .yet wondering how far he can go

G-ooohhh

She touches his Adam's apple

G-Say something

M-What should I say?

G-It vibrates

M-It should...[Grins]

He buries his face in her hair

G-uummmh...

She moans slightly as it's a sweet tickle

He moves away-

M-Is something wrong?

G-Naa baba

She rubs her toes to his feet and Maan moves his face back to where it was taking a deep breath

She hugs him tightly moving her hands along his back

He hugs her too, feeling comfortable and drowsy

G-So gaye kya?

M-hmmm no...

He says in a deep voice

G-Hmm...kabhi to romantic ho sakte ho naa

M-What do you want me to do?

G-Nothing

Geet feels irritated aise samjhaane mein and turns around

M-Is this another of your fairy tale things? That girl code which is taught to you in young age that this and this is supposed to be romantic and now I am supposed to figure it all out somehow or are we because given some tips growing up too

She clicks her tongue

Maan pulls her close from behind nuzzling her neck

A smile comes over her lips

M-Tell me what you want me to do... I am new at this love thing

He says kissing he neck

Geet bites her lip slowly

s-How about simple tips about being romantic?

He raises his head a bit so he could whisper it in her ears and then bites it very gently

She moans softly

k-Nahi...it comes from inside

s- Can't you help me cheat?

k-No

He turns her around to face him again

She looks at him

s-Why not? You can be a bit partial...

G-No no no...because I am at the receiving end

M- Ah I see...

Maan smiles devilishly

G-And it can't be learnt and if you wanna learn then you should make an effort, you see

M-I see. But if I wanna learn... are you going to teach me?

G-No, you should learn from other ways

M-Like?

G-Well...you are intelligent enough

M-Maybe not when it comes to this romantic stuff...

G-Explore

M- Explore what?

Maan is grinning away in the dark

G-Sorry I can't help you

M-Maybe coz you don't know what the receiver wants to receive itself

He says with laughter colouring his words

G-ohhh think whatever you want to

M-I am...shall we then hmm? Do you like this? Huh?

He says stroking her back from her neck to the base of her spine...massaging her muscles

G-umm...hmm

She closes her eyes

M-Or is this better?

He slides his fingers over her hand from her upper arm to her wrists...just his fingers...moving them up and down through length of her hand

She takes a relaxed breath

G- Or maybe this?

He takes her hand in his and rubs his thumb on her palm...brings it close to his lips and blows hot air on her fingers

M-What do you think?

A ray of current flows down her body

She smiles

G-Well...you are a good learner. Keep up the good work

M-I see

G-You can go a long way

M-oh really...

G- Well you score...

M- I have a score too?

G-Yes...well it is out of ten

M-What did I score?

G-Well...you score...1...1 out of 10

M-1?

G-That's correct. One

Geet is all giggly under her breath

Maan sighs loudly...

M-Geet Geet... someday... someday... I am going to make you eat your words and break that scale of yours...

He says kissing the tip of her fingers and then nibbling on then one by one

Geet giggles aloud

It's hardly giggling matter for Maan... he is resolving building up his determination checking his limits... wondering how soon...so what if she is hard woman to please... He knows some women are harder to please than others...

They slowly drift into sleep entangled in each other's arms and legs

Subah kuch bachche khel rahe the

Teenage boys khelte ladte Geet ke kamre ke door se takraa jaate hain and door opens

They go-'GASP!!!'...Fist to they do khusur pusur as they are adolescence ki aisa hota hai kya, waisa hota hai kya...uss movie mein dekha tha kya...jiju ki body kitni sahi hai...sab khusur pusur mein lag rahe hain

Neeche ajake bhi khusur pusur

Some grownups ask-kya hua, kya kar rahe ho padna nahi hai?

Boys are like, upar thode jaa sakte hain

Grown-ups ask why?

Boys answer-khud hi jaake dekh lo

Poora ghar upar pohoch jata hai

There are several hanging jaws touching the ground

Geet lying half on top of him their feet are tangled along with the bedspread and her arms are holding him around his neck...he is holding her by her waist

Sab sochte hain, uthaye na uthaye...then they think...nahi uthate hain

They leave

Neeche jaake kya gossip maari sab ne'... 1.Maan is handsome and has a body to die for

2. itna zyada PDA aur kitna pyaar karte hain dono aur wo sheetal wo baawli hai

Sheetal is fuming mad...she feels that Geet always gets everything she-Sheetal deserves...even after sleeping with creep Geet is the one who gets it all. ...She is supeeerrr jealous... She thinks she deserved Maan...pehle nai laga...ab lag raha hai...thoda thoda

thodi der ke baad Geet ki neend khulti hai bekhabar inn sab baaton se

As Maan is sleeping wo uska ka haath dheere se side mein karke uth jaati hai

Maan ki bhi thodi se neend to khul jata hai as she moves so he pulls her back

M- Kahan jaa rahi ho?

He mumbles sleepily

G-Uthna hai naa

M-Don't wanna

G-Tum so jao, mujhe uthna hai

Maan finally opens one eye put the shoot up to sit straight achnak se poori neend udd gai

G-Tum so jao naa

M-Why is the gate open?


PART 185

Maan ki hi thodi si neend khul jata hai as Geet moves

He pulls her back

M- Kahan jaa rahi ho?

He mumbles sleepily

G-Uthna hai naa

M-Don't wanna

G- Tum so jao, mujhe uthna hai

He finally opens one eye and shoots up to sit straight...achanak se poori neend udd gayi

G-Tum so jao naa

M-Why is the gate open?

Maan ki to neend ab udd gai

She looks at the direction

G-Don't know...must have opened due to wind. I'll close it

Geet uthke band kar deti hai

Maan sees ki kisine chair durr uthake rakhi hai... aisa hawa se to nahi ho sakta, he thinks...so koi aaya tha kamre mei...kuan aaya hoga...he thinks he'll find out first and then tell Geet about it

G-Kya hua? [She asks as she reads his thoughtful face]

M-Kuch nahi... nothing. Where's my shirt? Why did you pour water on me last night?

Maan uthke yawns and stretches a bit

She smiles

G-Why? Huh?

She starts walking towards the shirt but almost trips on something on the way

G-Aauuu!

She looks down and bends

She picks up a football

G-Ye yahan kaise?

Maan looks at the football...and shakes his head-'nahi pata'

Abhi tak to Maan ko laga ki ek hi insaan hoga...ab usse shak hai ki poori football team came in while they were...

G-Ye to unn bachchon ki hai. Football gerke chale jaate hain kya ye log

M -Forget about it

Geet football leke bahar jaati hai

Maan starts looking frantically for his shirt. The football is giving him a bad feeling...jaldi se shirt utha ke pehen leta hai

Geet comes to kitchen football leke...baal-vaal upar kar liye hai...islie wo tatoo bhi dikh raha hai

G-Ye sab kya hai? Ye bachche bhi naa

Someone wolf whistles-'Nice tats...'comment aata hai kisi kone se

G-Huh?

Geet to bhul hi gayi thi, as Maan ignored it, so did she

G-Kya ? Tats? Tats kya hai?

'Tatoo...'

G-Ta...oh...[she touches the nape of her neck] Thanks

She says as her cheeks become red

A lot of people are giggle-giggle khusur phusur...

Itne mein Maan bhi neeche aa jaata hai with a shirt on... and there are several disappointed sighs... kya jiju... types... oh no... And of course many people are ogling him

She pours some tea for him and herself too

Though being stared at makes him uneasy but saalon ki practice waste thodi jaegi... he simply cut off their stares from his tunnel vision and ignores them all effectively...not even a single tell-tale blush o his cheek or look of guilt

G-Chai

Maan lekar sits on the table and leisurely sips the tea jaise khudke ghar mein akela baitha ho

G-Suno

M-Hm?

G-Chal rahe hain naa hum Purna? Naa mat kehna aaj shaam ki train hai

M-Wapas kab tak ayenge?

G-Kal

M-hmm

G-hmm kya hai? Bolo naa

M-I'll need to take care of some work today...then I can come...

G-hmm

M- I'll have to go back to the hotel

G- To jaldi aana. Jaake change karo phir kapde almirah mein hain

M-You'll stay here? You'll be fine?

Yeh sab baat ghar wale bade interest se kaan laga kar sun rahe hain... they are a bit shocked ki Maan aise kaise openly pooch sakta hai ki would she be comfortable here or not...after all its Geet's home and it wasn't polite to doubt their good behaviour in front of them

G-Off course I'll be fine. Tum jaoge kaam se, what will I do?

M-Sahi hai you stay... but call me if anything goes wrong here or people bother you too much. I'll come and pick you up in that case. ok?

Geet starts laughing

G-ok ok baba

Saare ghar walo ke fir muh khul gaye ki rudeness ki bhi hadd hai...how can he berate them openly that too in front of them

M-You are just too much..[she ruffles his hair lovingly]

He brushes her hand off and finger combs his hair to previous style

M-I'll go change then

He says getting up

Andar jaake Maan ne almirah to kholi kapdon ke lie par usmein Geet ka purana saamaan bhara pada hai...her old pics, the card and gifts from Ranjeet, the love letters, feelings for Ranjeet in a diary...saamne pada tha...almirah se kuch nikaalte gir jaata hai...gifts, roses, unki ki coochy coo pics

He glances at them but he knows uska hi mood kharab hoga and decided he can ignore it now... After all this... As it is all previous stuff... He infers that k ko time nai mila hoga safai ka warna she would have thrown it all out

So he takes it all and dumps it in the bin

As ab Maan taiyaar hone lagte hai and Geet helps everyone prepare breakfast

As Geet was making breakfast and Ma was complimenting ki meri bachchi khana banana bhi sikh gai

Geet smiles

G-Maa, mujhse achcha khana to wo bana lete hain

Side mein kuch cousin's kha rahi thi and they were like ki jiju ki abs perfect hain

Sis2- Nahi yaar... uss hero ki zyada achi hain...

Sis3- Nahi pagal that's all photo shopped jiju's got the real thing...

All of them have drooly looks on their faces and they hear ki Maan cooks too

So they go on ki does he cook for di often? Does he do it shirtless?... dhere dheere khusur phusur yai chal rahi hai

Geet looks at them.

G-What? Kya kaha?

Saari sisters' ek dum chup

G-Kya kaha tum logon ne

Sab attention mode mein aa gayi

sis1-Kya didi?

Sis2 -Kya baat hai di?

Sis3-Hum to TV heros ki baatien kar rahe the. Apka fav hero kaun hai ajkal?

G-Tumne kaha jiju, maine suna. Jiju ki abs, hai naa

Sis1-We said he is good looking enough to be an actor...

G-Kya khusur pusur ho rahi hai yahan?

Sis2-Nahi didi what are you saying!!!

Saari ki saari run away when they see Geet has heard them and wouldn't let the matter go...

Wahan Maan was coming downstairs and sisters mein se sis2 pretends to faint at Maan's sight [hai mei marjawa style] while sis1 sis3 catch her...they giggle and then run away inside the house

G-Maa ye kya khusur pusur hoti rehti hai? Koi nahi batata mujhe

Ma-Mujhe kya pata mujhe to kuch sunayi nahi diya..

Maa is being evasive

A boy comes, college boy

Boy-Di , tatoo story sunao naa. I too wanna tatoo

Ab Maan bhi breakfast kar raha tha and his ears pick up too-

M-Tatoo story?

He asks Geet..

Geet ishaara karti hai, her tatoo

Maan is frowning ki you showed it to them

Geet vigorously shakes her head and mouths, they saw

Sab dekh rahe the silent convo going on...more giggles and wide grins

Maa clears her throat...

Ma-Maan beta...lo ye khao...

She piles up food on Maan's plate

Boy-Diii diii

G-Kyaaa

Boy-Batao, tattoo story

G-Koi tattoo story nahi hai

Boy-To kyun karaya ye tattoo?

G-Aise hi

Boy-Jijs par bhi hai?

G-Nahi hai

Boy-Kyun? wo aapse pyaar nahi karte?

G-chup kar

Maan gobbles down his food rapidly...chup chap...not interfering in the convo

Boy-To batao naa

G-Arre ye Mauritius mein banwaya tha, bass itni si baat hai

Boy-Mauritius kyun gaye?

G-Honeymoon pe

Boy-oh kaisi jagah hai? Kya kya kiya

A girl whispers, tujhe pata nhi kya honeymoon pe kya kya karte hain, jo subah dekha waisa waisa

Maan manages to not choke and looks at Geet surprised... he didn't know that they were suppose t lie about it and he also over hears subah dekha wali line

Geet looks at him, her eyes asking what happened.

M-Kya dekha subah?

He asks the boy directly giving him full blast of Maan Singh Khurana icy domineering eyes...koi pathar bhi darr jaye uss se

Boy-kya??????????? Kuch nahi...wo...Ayesha se pucho...usne kaha

M-No you can answer well enough

Ladke ki halaat to aisi ho gai hai jaise abhi ro dega

Boy-Na...nahi...wo..wo..mujhe college..jaana hai...bye

Maan grabs him by his sleeve before he could flee...collar ghar me achi nahi lagegi...pakad liya Maan ne bachche ko

Boy-Jiijuuu

G-Maan jaane do naa usse, late ho raha hai

Maan gives him an arctic cold smile

M-This won't take minute now would it?

He glares straight at the kid ...sleeve se shoulder par agaya hai Maan ka haath

Geet looks at ma

M-Or maybe you forgot? And maybe everyone else forgot it too?

Maan says coaxing the kid towards a deal...as long as they don't mention it... Doesn't matter they saw... a whole lot of people have seen much more of him anyways

Maa-Haan haan...shayad bhool gaya hoga kya thi.. bacha hai Maanl beta jane do..

G-Maan, jaane do please...bachcha hai

Maan chod deta hai aur maa ko ek look deta hai thoda surprised sa...he thinks that if even she knows then probably the whole house knows

Bahcha bhaag gaya



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u could have asked the mods to shift the thread to the GF na Neelu...
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before commenting i need to catch up with previous 100 parts or so ...
so give me a little time😳
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Amazing updates i really like maaneet convo maan is really trying thnx 4 pm
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kya maan...bachche ko darra diya...chalo lovey-dovey moments ki kuch toh shuruat hue...

nice updates...

loved dem...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Aww...yaar geet ka ghar pura ka pura dharmshala hai..kitne rishtedar hai..😆
And maan try to be romantic. ...
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Read all d parts of ur ff.
Lovely
Loved d bonding of maan nd geet.
They both r so understanding can also talks wid their eyes.
Geeta maa nd family also accepted maan.
Plz add me in ur pm list.
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Hey all,
Sadly my computer crashed ...so would need some time to update...please bear with me...

Thanks
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lmao
Romance goin on
But kebab mai haddi hai family

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