Mahabharat The Lost Generation - Chapter 8 is up! - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Read both the chapters... again beautifully sketched the the evil possibilities that is lurking behind esp. the poison & hatred Shakuni is instilling more into Duryodhana's mind that he couldn't make out what is right or what is wrong.

Adiratha & especially Vrihasena realized what the future may have stored for them with the fiasco at Indraprastha following the uncontrollable rage of Duryodhana.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks hpatgiri,
I really appreciate you taking the time to give feedback on both the blog and here. Stay tuned!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys,
Check out the new chapter (The Choice) on my blog link.

mahabharat stories and tales. blogspot. ca

Hope you enjoy it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update 😊

Loved the way how Vrishasena explained his two little brothers about the duty as a soldier of Anga rather than princes of Anga. Vrushali was dysphoric knowing that two more of her sons are going to be separated from her although Karna was very happy with his two sons decision. As a responsible elder brother Vrishasena consoled his mother that he will take care of his siblings.

Post ur next part soon. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys,

Check out the new chapter (Pain and Joy) on my blog link.

mahabharat stories and tales. blogspot. ca

Hope you enjoy it!

Please leave a comment- all reviews are welcome!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: abstract2

Hey guys,


Check out the new chapter (Pain and Joy) on my blog link.

mahabharat stories and tales. blogspot. ca

Hope you enjoy it!

Please leave a comment- all reviews are welcome!



Nice update 😊

It seems Dvipata & sushena learned quickly then expected by their guru & elder brother Vrishasena. Satyasena revealing their earlier naughty deeds in front of their younger siblings 😆 that was sweet.

The speech given by Vrishansena as the captain of the army of Anga was very commendable.

post ur next part soon. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Update Soon.

Waiting for ur next chapter 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Hey everyone,
The all new Chapter 8 is up!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: abstract2

Hey everyone,

The all new Chapter 8 is up!


Very nice update.

The conversation between the half-prince Yuyutsu & Vrihasena was very interesting especially the way the so-called rituals & the concept of varnas are given a new twist/ taste in Anga.

The way Yuyutsu was asking about Anga & conversing with Vrihasena, he indeed respected Karna a lot.

Lastly u have given an apt name to the chapter - A Rose among thorns & the last lines were awesome

Do update soon 😊

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