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daydreamers

@daydreamers

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

NOTE: underage kindly stay away...

kya hain yeh?
ajeeb uljhan h
chupaana h mujhko ye
par kaise?
raman kya sochenge?
jaan bhuj kar toh nahi laya na yeh
jaanti toh main bhi nahi kaise aaya yeh
koi kaareeb kaise chaha sakta h mujhe?
saalon ka darr chupa h isme
kismat se kaise ladu apne?
aakhr BAANJ jo hu me...

the above is ishita's pov..

The scene that struck me tonight: ishita threw the thing down n covered with tissues as if hiding it from anyone's notice...

I wud like to connect here smthn now... This is d lady who cannot conceive... This is her biggest FLAW as per her that puts off men...

She's been hiding this FLAW this INSECURITY in the reason of LACK OF INTIMACY with her husband...

The time she comes across anything that HINTS towards INTIMACY her INSECURITY her FLAW peeps out... This is when she tries to hide it... That may b by tissue pprs...

She doesn't want to face this FLAW of her.. She wants it under wraps...

But as Raman got this thru the mess... He'll surely bring out ishita's demons of d past n make her deal wid them...

He is the only one who'll bring out her INSECURITY to the forefront n he's the only one who'll deal wid it...

A very interesting loop indeed... Think reflect n reply...

This Is solely my interpretation ur views may differ so don't forget to put up your thots...

Waiting for ur precious thots..

If u want pm of my updates kindly buddy me...😊

kaise kahu tumse main
chaahne laga hu tumko main
tumhe dekh kar asia hi lagta hain mujhe
shaayad pehla kadam mujhe hi lena chahiye
mere kadam se kadam badhaogi na tum?
mujhe apna toh banaogi na tum?
kitna chupaaya tha maine
par mil hi gaya inko ye
sharam aane lagi h mujhe
koi rishta h to nahi inse
kaise bataaun main pyaar hain aapse
lekin pehla kadam aap badhaiye
shayad galti kar di maine
dusre tarike dhundne honge
waqt dena chahunga tumhe main
hadbadi me khona nahi chahta tumhe
raat ke andhere me aj
kehta hoon yeh
pyaar karta hoon tumse
bepanah, beintehaan
par rukungaa main tumhare khaatir
jab tum aaogi aur apna kadam badhaogi...

red gives raman's pov
black gives ishita's pov

P.S: THIS POST MAY SOUND LAME... EXTREMELY SORRY BUT TODAY'S EPI BOWLED ME OVER...😆

PIC CREDIT- GANDHARI...

GAN THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THESE PICS..😊

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daydreamers

@daydreamers

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 10 years ago

I know you will kill me. Kindly pm mein ki kaunse kaunse post meine res kar diye hain. I am so so lost 😆😆

Oh Man ! Thank God for your exams to get over. I love your verses, they are so through and through to the heart.

The insecurity, Yes ! She wants under wrap but doesnt realise that Raman wil unfold every other wrap to bring the real woman out, The woman he loves

Tumhe khone se darr lagta hai

Tumhe paane se darr lagta hai

Tumko chaakar bhi, batane se darr lagta hai

Kassh tumhare saath yeh zindagi jee jaun, taaki haste haste marr jaun !

Sounds lame but poet in me resurface everytime i read your post😆

Love you Sakshi Tanwar 😳😳😳

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KK2926

@KK2926

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

This is brilliant!!!!
I am so surprised how u can u write so good dear!!!
You have that talent... !!!!

Very nice and keep up the good work for us to read :)

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

Brilliant post 😃

I agree. when Ishita saw the packet, she was flustered, shocked, confused and somewhere scared too. Because what it indicated is what her biggest insecurity is. But what was interesting was, that she hid it, but didn't throw it. She hides behind the fear of her past, where she's been made to believe that she isn't desired. That she isn't going to be loved like a wife is. And that makes her shamefaced. But it doesn't mean she doesn't want that, or desire it. Which is why when the next day she realized that it was Raman's first step she was overwhelmed. She couldn't believe that he desired her like a man in love, not only loved, but desired. And that is what relieved her of her insecurity and made her confident enough to decide that she would confess to him.

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daydreamers

@daydreamers

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Let-It-Go
I know you will kill me. Kindly pm mein ki kaunse kaunse post meine res kar diye hain. I am so so lost 😆😆
Oh Man ! Thank God for your exams to get over. I love your verses, they are so through and through to the heart.

The insecurity, Yes ! She wants under wrap but doesnt realise that Raman wil unfold every other wrap to bring the real woman out, The woman he loves

Tumhe khone se darr lagta hai
Tumhe paane se darr lagta hai
Tumko chaakar bhi, batane se darr lagta hai
Kassh tumhare saath yeh zindagi jee jaun, taaki haste haste marr jaun !

Sounds lame but poet in me resurface everytime i read your post😆

Love you Sakshi Tanwar 😳😳😳

Ruchi check in d above links kya reh gya h 😆

Isliye I ask u res on first pg.. @ red.. U bowled me wid dis...

U know I have no single clue of wat I blabbered here in this thread... Today's epi hangover I ges...

I never proofread my writings... I never prepare neither for exams nor for such posts... Isliye results always shock me... This post is smthn totally tangent.. Mujhe khud ko ni samjha kya likha maine...😆

Thank u for those lines @ red they struck d chord more than wat I wrote in 20 lines...

Check 5.11 waha pe edit karna h tujhe I ges...

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: daydreamers

Ruchi check in d above links kya reh gya h 😆

Isliye I ask u res on first pg.. @ red.. U bowled me wid dis...

U know I have no single clue of wat I blabbered here in this thread... Today's epi hangover I ges...

I never proofread my writings... I never prepare neither for exams nor for such posts... Isliye results always shock me... This post is smthn totally tangent.. Mujhe khud ko ni samjha kya likha maine...😆

Thank u for those lines @ red they struck d chord more than wat I wrote in 20 lines...

Check 5.11 waha pe edit karna h tujhe I ges...

So much underestimation!

I loved it, It was so deep !

Awesomely put yr. 4 lines create ruckus in my head,.. U wrote 20 !! Bravo 😳

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

Sorry for delayed reply- hit my posting limit before i saw the PM! 😳

Aaanyway, love the post and the analyzation! 😉 So apt and the pic you chose for Ishu is great as well.👏
I never actually thought about the symbolic meaning of the packet before... definitely makes sense!😊
👏

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daydreamers

@daydreamers

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RomComFan
Sorry for delayed reply- hit my posting limit before i saw the PM! 😳

Aaanyway, love the post and the analyzation! 😉 So apt and the pic you chose for Ishu is great as well.👏
I never actually thought about the symbolic meaning of the packet before... definitely makes sense!😊
👏

thank you so much dear...😊

the pic credit goes to gandhari..

she was kind enough to lend me..😊

keep commenting keep enjoying...

its ur comments and thots that give heaps of encouragement for writers like me...

THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN...😃

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daydreamers

@daydreamers

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Let-It-Go

So much underestimation!
I loved it, It was so deep !

Awesomely put yr. 4 lines create ruckus in my head,.. U wrote 20 !! Bravo 😳

UNDERESTIMATION NAHI RUCHI BUT IT IS SMTHN I JUZ CUDN'T FIGURE... IF U SAY IT WAS GOOD THEN THANK YOU SO MUCH...

YAAR AISE PUBLIC ME SAKSHI TANWAR BULA K U R MAKING ME ☺️

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