Lost Love - An Imagination in my heart

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I Will only continue with this IF you guys want me too.

SO ALL KINDS OF COMMENTS INVITED.


Lost Love


He walked into the road that lead to her house . He desperately waited there every night. Thinking this night he will have the courage to talk to her. This time he will have the words that will make her love him.
But that night never came. Cause he was butchered by his own deeds and he had lost everything within his heart.

Three years. Three years had passed. He was a monster who repented being a Monster to her.

Three years had passed since that fated day. A day that had made her strong inspite of her heart breaking.

Many thought she would run away. But she did hadn't. She had completed her course. Everyone was proud of her. Everyone was in awe of her. Everyone was admiring her. But something was missing.

Something that had made her smile was now long gone.

He had disappeared from her life like a leaf falling from a tree. She felt incomplete without him.

The last words he had said to her still reverberated in her ears

You are such a selfish

Yes.. she was selfish. She was selfish of anything that could concern him.

Then she hadn't known what had happened.

Now it was all clear.

Her Manik had always loved her.

Now when she sat back in her house and recollected HIS actions she coudnt believe..

How could she miss those tears of sadness

How could she miss the pain in his eyes.

She remembered how he had just came and hugged her that night before. For one last time.

Before he could let go of her.

Before he could walk away.

Before he tried turning into a Monster.

After Musicana Fiasco Manik had disappeared. She didint know where. Her so called friends were bitching about her. Dhruv wanted something else that she coudnt give. Cause her heart was with Manik. She trusted him.

She still remembered clearly how she had shouted at Dhruv crying.

So this is the reason My Manik left me? SO this is the reason MY Manik deserted me. He wanted me to hate him. But I can't Dhruv. I LOVE HIM.'

She had ran away from him to find Manik. She had behaved like a maniac . Hopelessly searching for HER heart.

It took several days for her to finally realize that he is gone.

It took all the courage in her to go back to the college where she had thoughts and memories off only him. Her Monstu. She didn't care About Alya, Dhruv, Cabir, Mukti or anyone else. She found herself happy by just sitting alone in that store room where they had been together, behind the music wing, behind the college where they had kissed.

She hadn't talked about anything to anyone. Dhruv approached her. But her DON'T always kept him away. Cabir who knew something was going on in Manik's head for Nandu also tried to speak to her. But she didn't want anyone near her.

Three freaking years had passed since she saw him. It was killing her from inside.

She got up from her chair and went and stood near the window . Gazing out , she saw a black car parked in front of her gate.

Her heart leaped.

Her brain tried to calm her down

How could she. It was his car.

How could she just stand there gazing at it. She ran out through the door .

Suddenly she saw a person getting out from the car. A Ghostly figure.

Her legs failed when she saw him.

Her heart cried when she reached near him.

He just stood there staring at her . Like a ghost.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh my God Aaru dat was sooo beautiful...after freakin 3 years?? Dey finally found der Lost Love..
Okie U hve 2 cntinue dis please...😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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plz...plz cont soon. This is so good so manik hd disappeared & nobody knows where he is and he thinks nandu hates him bt in reality she is waiting for him. Oh I m so eager to read of their reunion.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please please please please continue...I would love to read the continuation ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Reserved
Unreserving.


This is SO good. Except for the Dhruv part, because I don't think Dhruv will ditch her. 😳 But HECK, this is so well written because this is what Nandini would do, like legitimately. Her friends doing that, and Cabir approaching her is all so true. This is something that can happen in the show, IF Manik left and I love you for writing it. Ladkiii, write more, LIKE seriously. You're an amazing writer <3 KEEP WRITINGGG <3 :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Reserve.
P.S. If show decides to make us wait for 3 years then I am breaking stuffs -.-
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this made me so happy
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Posted: 10 years ago
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looking forward to the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very well written 👏..so much pathos..
Three years, if this goes for more than 3 episodes I will be dead.😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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pkzz continue it..plzz plzz..its really nice...love it 😃

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