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Geeta

@Geeta.R

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

awww naughty shlok hehehhe but it was lovely to read he really does love her heheheh the romance aiii hiii mein to mar jawan... his boldness really shocked me but then i wouldnt expect anything less of shlok heheheh

thank you :)

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Geeta.R
awww naughty shlok hehehhe but it was lovely to read he really does love her heheheh the romance aiii hiii mein to mar jawan... his boldness really shocked me but then i wouldnt expect anything less of shlok heheheh
thank you :)
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yup our shlokie is exception when comes to romance and boldness... 😆
Glad u liked it dear...thank u sooo much 😳

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Tanvi.Alison
Oye Hoye... ☺️I loved the shameless sadu Akdu☺️ Typically every husband is the same when it comes to the kitchen romance😆😳
Loved the way he took a stand and supported his wifey darling when M-I-L Anjali barges in and yells at the poor lass😳 all in all, a subtly romantic, naughty and a sweet OS...

Keep writing more.. it's a pleasure reading your work👏👏👏

P.S. : I truly love the colored fonts😳

awww...glad you enjoyed it...thanks tanvi 😳

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: miac
Such a cute os..I hope we will get this scene in serial

thanks 😳

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Sahrish Pirzada

@SahriShrAvi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

i have read it long ago meerab... but dont remember that i commented or not... 😔
that time after climax i was like ...🤣🤣🤣🤣

and today i read it again and as it is juz amazingly written and again after this...

Shlok:astha stop lying...mrs. agnihotri yeh khana meri wajah se jala hai...kyun ke main aur astha romance kar rahey they...now happy...aap shayed tab se yehi sunnana chahti thi...
Anjali gave both of them a digusting look...and leave the kitchen saying...sheee itni besharmi wo bhi merey ghar main...

Shlok who was smirking asked astha to calm down ...but astha who was extremely embarassed seeing her husband's boldness for saying about their romance infront of anjali...started throwing on shlok all what comes in her hand at the moment...and poor shlok just found it safe to run out of the kitchen to save his life from her angry and aggresive wife...

Um cracked up

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Tussi great ho meerab...👏👏👏