JUST YOU?? AND ME (SEASON 2) PART 6 updated on page 20 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing concept loved it update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sorry for the late reply.
sooo amazing update with vry cute sa narrrion. maza aa gaya.
plx update next part soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Yeah egarly waiting fr d nxt part..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its superb awesome fab lovely lovely lovely fab
amazing awesome lovely lovely lovely part.
story ka hero bohot cool hai.😉
his family members testing her .
their first meeting really excited.
its very very funny awesome part.🤣
love it. update asap.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...
i was fan of 1st season...
n mow 2nd season...
yeeepiee...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
awsm please post next part ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey..
hahaha i liked it.. this part was really fun to read... the way arjun was constantly commentating.. XD
and the part where his whole aunty gang was pounding on him... hehehe. that was funny (it actually is veer irritating). and his anticipation and anxiousness for his would be wife..!! it was a good read
thanx fr the pm
PM me the further chapters too ..
love,
Annesha :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks a lot guys for your lovely reviews.. love you..

PART2

She was looking down... She was feeling shy.. After all she was bride... She stood next to me.. Everyone was looking at us... But I wanted to see her.. I bent down a little and looked at her side.. I could see only her left profile.. Her red cheek.. Her pink dupptaa.. Her shimmery eyes.. With black khol outlined... She was smelling so good.. I forgot everything in front of her beauty... I wanted her to look at me once.. I want her to go flat on me too.. After all I was not at less than her when if comes to looks.. But damn my luck.. She was just looking down.. I just cant understand why these girls blush a lot..


I was just looking at her just then one of my %&*()-)&#( cousin punched my back. Which broke my gaze on her n I looked back.. I felt like killing that bas***d.. How dare he..

My cousin: Or..?? Kya dekh rha h. ??

My other cousins too joined him... They were all smiling like maniacs...

Me: Kuch be to Ni.

Cousin:,bhabhi ne ghar hi Ana h.. KitnA ghooregaa... ( they all burst into laughter .)

He was too loud I m sure nandini must have heard him... I looked at nandini.. Who was looking at me.. She was embarrassed.. I was embarrassed... She just forced a smile at me.. I smiled back.. This was the first time we both looked at each other.. I was just looking into her eyes . She looked away.. I looked at my cousins.. Who were still busy in making fun of me.."bhagwan ye cousins banata hi kyo h.. "

I really wanted to apologize to her .but kese?? Kya soch rhe Hogi Vo?? Sab finish..


We were asked to settle down on the wedding chairs.. We sat there.. Soon the rituals started.. They did godd bharai of nandini.. They put a red saree on her head... Put some make up.. I was just looking at them.. All the ladies spoiled her make up.. But still she was looking most beautiful out there.. My stomach was full of butterflies... I was really happy that such beautiful girl will be in my hand.. Then came my turn.. They gave me a towel n put it in my lap.. Then they put some clothes on my lap.. Dried coconut... Put tika on my forehead.. Then asked me to put a ring on her finger..

My mum. Aka drama queen gave me a diamond studded ring and asked me to put it in her finger.. She forwarded her left hand front ...which was filled with mehendi... Her nails were perfectly filed n polished.. I wanted to grab it immediately but I was holding back.. I didn't want to show others how much desperate I was to feel her.. I was waiting for someone to ask me to do so.. I was pretending u see... Inside I was dying .

Minutes passed but no one was asking me to hold her hand.. Was waiting waiting waiting.. Then that girl in blue.. Wat was her name Mitali ... Interrupted... That irritating girl.

Mitali: Abi haath pakane me be confused Ho kya...??

N everyone started laughing.. I was so much irritated with her... Wat does she think of herself..?, "me ladke walo Ki Taraf se hoo..taraf se kya.. M a groom.." How can she talk to me like that?? If she was a boy.. I wud have killed that asshole.. Everyone was still laughing.. Even Mr. Hitler was laughing...i seriously wonder m I really his son.. Or he just pretends to be my father...


I grabbed her hand.. It was cold.. It was soft.. I slide the ring into her finger.. It was looking so beautiful in her beautiful hand... Everyone clapped..n we looked at each other.. N smiled.. I looked around.. Everyone was congratulating each other.. But.none congratulated both of us..

Then the moment came for which everyone got

Ready... Itna taiyar huye.. THE PHOTO SESSION... I know that there was hardly anyone .. At least from my side who was interested in my roka . They all were only interested in clicking photos.. Food and wat all gifts ladki wala gave to them... Girls at every corner were taking their selfies snaps.. N uploading them on fb.. Watsapp.. Etc etc... Honestly they were all looking horrible.. At least in front of my angel.. I wanted to talk to her.. But these relatives.. They all wanted to click snaps with us..


One after the other... Khatam hi Ni Ho rha tha.. After 2 hours.. Nandini n I were hell tired.. But still photo session was not getting over.. Just then.. My saviour came.. Humara ramu( my servant) he screamed...

Ramu: KHANA LAG GAYA... AJAO..

Listening to him .everyone ran to the banquet area... Leaving both of us alone.. Bhukkad sare k sare.. But I was very happy... I looked at her . She looked at me.. I smiled.. She smiled. I looked away.. She looked away..I was collecting all my courage to talk to her.. We were both full of embarrassment... Hesitation... Finally I broke the silence..

Me: Hi

Nandini: Hello..

Me:,so.. This is our first time.. I must say u are so beautiful...

She blushed.. I could see her cheeks truning even more red..

Nandini: Thanks.. ( looked down)

Me: Vese m really sorry on behalf of my cousins.. They should have behaved properly .

Nandini: Even m sorry on behalf of Mitali.. She is like that.. She.speaks with out even thinking.

Me: Ya she should have behaved...

Nandini gave me a look... I could figure out she didn't like wat I just said...

Me: M sorry... But... Just let it be.. We hardly know each other..

Before she could Say anything.. Devils.. I mean my cousins entered n pulled both of us to the banquet area...


Hope u all like it.. Plz leave ur precious comments below...

p.s : ppl who want pms plz like the prologue and send me buddy req.


Edited by samridhigoodiez - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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TERE PEHLE K COMMENTS BE RESSED H..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ress


Unress
Moi came second 😭 😭

Glares pritha 😡 😡

Chalo koi next tym I will stalk wid full dedication 🤣

Di the update was amzng
It is really different n intrstng
Moi luved it to the core

Arjun fully flat on nandani
For him she's the only girl beautiful present their
He just want to see her n talk to her
Bt damn his cousins ruined his gawking session
Both were so embarrassed

He want to talk to her
Bt all rituals n relatives not leaving them

Finally alone tym mil hi gya

Their talk was so cute
Both were so shy

Bt again devils kabab me haddi ban gye

Arjun is very funny
The way he describes his family his hilarious


All in all I luved it

Wtng for next
Update soon

Luv u di
Keep smiling 😊
Edited by newmoon18 - 11 years ago

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