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Posted: 11 years ago

Teri meri love story
Chapter 22


Sorry for making u all wait,😛 I didn't know how to start update as u all know I'm very bad at writing emotional things.. I have written something, I hope none ll be disappointed... I felt bad for Aliya , Sanam and Zain in this update..okay enough of my chatter, happy reading * best wishes*😆. Ignore typo's like always😛



Aliya screamed out for help... he dragged her to a shed located at back of hotel ... Aliya pleaded him to leave her...he tried to lean into her...Aliya pierced his face with her sharp prikle nails... making flesh of his cheeks to bleed... " let me go u moron .." Aliya screamed out loudly..., " you Bloody pricker, how dare u..", he tied her hands with a rope.. and warned her not move threatening her with a knife... his nearing creepy face made her hell scared... Her whole body was shivering, it's becoming hard for her to breath out of suffocation.. Aliya shut her eyes tightly... praying God to make this a dream...


she heard Zain shouting for her outside... she opened her eyes and looked in that direction...breathing heavily... Her creepy predator threatened her not to make noise... After few minutes he went outside to see whether Zain has left or not...taking Advantage of situation Aliya jumped out through window... she started shouting for Zain..she didn't find him, creepy man chased her, Aliya fell down stabbing to a heavy rock... Her one leg clashed with Heavy rock, it was paining very badly she could not move... man got hold of her Again...he dragged her to one corner and pinned her to the trunk of a tree... Aliya sensed rays of light on her face , she manged to look in that direction ,it was Zain and Rehan... she took a relieving breathe exhaling long held breath... She tried to push him away... Man caught her head and hitted her head to tree's trunk with little force... Everything went blank... she blinked her eyes twice to take proper vision... but every thing blurred, Aliya's,tired body didn't support her anymore and she collapsed down...

Zain lost his senses looking at Aliya in that condition, her face was fleshed with fear... he got scared, scared of loosing her... he saw her collapsing down, that creepy man ran away looking at Zain and Rehan.. ,Rehan Chased him...


Zain tried to wake up Aliya, he was tapping her cheeks to bring her into conscious.. Barkat and Sanam too reached there... they were scared seeing Aliya in that condition, Blood was oozing out from back part of her head, Zain was terror striken looking atb blood and he hugged her to his chest..


Barkat called Zain to bring him into his senses... they took her to hospital...Doctor examined Aliya and said there was minor injury on head and fracture to her leg.. , he dressed her head, and gave her painkillers... he said she needs atleast 20 days bed rest to recover soon, everyone were little relieved, but Zain was still horrified, that incident was still replaying infront of his eyes...Rehan reached there and Said Zain that culprit was prisoned...


Zain silently entered into her room, he looked at her Pale face... she was not conscious due to medicine effect... He looked at her hands, there were hurting marks of rope, he took her hand into his and silently cried looking at her...


Sanam was shocked seeing Zain like that... Barkat Asked Zain to leave and assured him she will take care of Aliya... but Zain didn't listen to her and asked them leave..Sanam tried to convince him, Zain was stubborn and asked them to leave..he assured Barkat he will take care of Aliya... Sanam left from there with confusion and Angry...


Aliya opened her eyes after 2 hours and looked around.. she saw Zain sleeping... he was sleeping sitting in a chair holding her hand, his head was resting on bed... She silently looked at him, it's been many days, she missed him so much, she simply stared at him not blinking her eyes.. ,ONE WHO TURNED HER FROM A CAREFREE GIRL TO WOMAN was sleeping infront of her... she smiled sadly...and cursed her fate for creating such circumstances which only hurt her more... She tried to sit pulling back her hand from Zain's Hand... Zain immediately got up with slight movement in Aliya.. zain looked at her with horrified face...


he hugged her and cried out expressing how scared he was... Aliya hesitantly hugged him back and tried to sooth him... " I'm okay Zain, dnt worry " Aliya stammered ,
" U r okay? And u want me not to worry about you..?" zain asked her in strained tone... " I mean, now I'm okay Zain, see I'm infront of u..", " That's what,why did u go away from me, why did u ask me to stay away from you, what if something happens to u?, what should I do, how can I live without u, dnt dare to go away from me Aliya ", Zain shouted at her in angry..., Aliya was shocked with his confession, she slowly moved back breaking hug...and tried to act normal controlling her emotions...

" look Zain, dnt think that I ll forget everything if u show ur anger to me...",
Zain looked at her in confusion wiping his tears... " what did I do..?" zain questioned letting out a small sob , " u came lately to save me, u know how scared I was, he was such a creep Zain, he scared me, u were climbing steps I called u, but u didn't listen to me, he tied my hands with rope..." Aliya showed him her hands with teary eyes... those tears were not bcz she was scared of that creep but about Zain's confession , she cried out bitterly masking the real reason...


Zain tried to console her...he's asked her to take rest... Aliya tried to fold her legs unaware of fracture...she winced in Pain... " , "Aliya, u got third leg, so careful dear.." Zain said sarcastically trying to lift her mood... " what do u mean zain" Aliya asked in confusion..." , " U have a fracture dear, u ll have to walk with support of third leg " Zain winked at her... Aliya who was not in a mood fight just gave a faint smile...


Sanam who was watching all these from outside entered into room and looked at Aliya and Zain sternly... Zain smiled seeing Sanam... " Now she is fine Sanam, no need to worry" Zain said to sanam with a smile... She was silent for few seconds and gave him a mean look.. " I know, I can see, she is perfectly fine " Sanam mocked Aliya... " Zain do u really love me anymore..." Sanam questioned zain looking at Aliya... Zain was silent, Aliya was getting scared..." What do u mean?", " I meant, what I asked, I want to be clear about anything that belongs to me..",
"What u r wanting to be clear.." Aliya was numb, hearing their conversation.. she knew where it will head to...

" why did u stay here to take care of Aliya..., Barkat was here, I was here, even we are her friends.. we could have taken good care too, but y were u so stubborn " Zain was listening to Sanam silently... Aliya tried to clear Sanam's Views...
"Sanam , we were best friends maybe that's y, zain might have stayed... nothing more than that..", "Friend? , I never saw him like that for anyone...he was so scared for ur life, and just know he said u ,before my entry, that he cannot live without u.. , is that friendship?"

Sanam's accusing 's helped zain to figure out his feelings for Aliya... he was pondering to give answer, he was lost in his thoughts, he didn't heed to Answer Sanam, he was struggling with himself to unmess the mess he created.. one thing was very clear to Zain, he now love's Aliya and only Aliyaa..., he was confused that how can he love Two Girls at a time...he didn't know, when and how he started loving Aliyaa...but he very well knew what made him fall for her...,Everything About her made him love her ... He Realised he cannot live without Aliya..., he saw Sanam, she was crying...she was looking at Zain with a last hope... She wanted to listen a " NO" from zain ... zain felt bad for Sanam...


He took a deep breath and walked towards Sanam, he hugged her.. " I'm sorry Sanam, sorry for hurting u, I never did anything purposely" he moved back breaking hug... " I tried my best to maintain our Relationship..." he said in a low voice looking at her... Sanam stepped back... " Dnt say No Zain... pls... yes I was possessive about u, but it's because I love u Zain..." , Zain didn't have answer bcz she was not at fault, he knew how possessive one can be for their loved one's, he felt same way for Aliya whenever Zubair Was around Aliya...Zain stepped back...
"I know Sanam, u r not at Fault, none of u are at fault actually..". Zain stood beside Aliya. " I'm the one to be blamed, I'm sorry I cannot love u... I love only Aliya, I dnt want to mess up things further..". Aliya looked at Zain with fiercing eyes... Sanam didn't say a word and left from there silently hearing Zain...

" Are u in senses..? , what did u say, have u have any idea..?", Aliya shouted at Zain catching her head... " God, now I have to make her understand.."

"I'm very much in my senses... I'm not in unconscious state like the other day when I kissed u... Thank God , I realised atleast now ..." Aliya was silent for few seconds... gripping back her emotions Aliya asked him.. " what's wrong with u, u both were in love from years, u broke her heart for a me, u properly knew me from 3 months.." , " I dnt say I never loved Sanam, I did, but I cannot love her anymore, bcz now I love Only you..." , " Now, ? What about tomorrow and rest of future...?", " what do mean, ?" Zain roared at Aliya wildly.. . " I mean, I dnt love u..., I donno, ur search for better things might end or not...!!, u cheated Sanam today, who know's tomorrow it might be my turn , I cannot love u Zain.."


Zain was taken back by her statement... he Sat beside Aliya and cupped her face with his both hands... " do u really feel that way about me..., do u think I took decision just like that, I struggled so much to figure out.. I tried so much to Love Sanam, but I couldn't Aliya... I was unaware of my growing love for u..., I missed u every day, every minute, everything around me made me pine for u, that empty closet when u left from our room formed empty space in me, from that day it increased with every passing day... , Aliya closed her eyes to hide her feelings... "Dnt lie to me, I know u love me too, just accept it now plss.". A stubborn tear escaped from her eyes... " I really don't love you...leave me Zain" she moved back.. " Stay away from me..", " dnt say that, just before I said u, I ll not let u stay Away from me..., u have to accept my love, I ll make u accept..." Zain left from there asking her to take rest..


That's all dearu's, I hope it was not too torturous!!,now all tomatoes are welcome.. I donno y I felt bad for Sanam in this uupdate.. !!! ,let me know how it was, hit like button and comment plss..
Edited by madhufx9... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am loving it zain accepted it...I hope aaliya does too and her pain I totally feel her pain ...gosh how could that man touch aaliya neways pls pls pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: katmaan

I am loving it zain accepted it...I hope aaliya does too and her pain I totally feel her pain ...gosh how could that man touch aaliya neways pls pls pls update soon

Aww thank u Kyati, I'm glad u liked it...
Evening I ll give tiny BZ update😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Gonna comment Rocket's style
What, r u kidding me?! It waf amazing Madhu... even I felt bad for Fanam... what Aaliya faid waf on point.. I know Zain won't leave her for another girl, but in real life, any girl would be worried, and rightfully fo. Fhe would think that he left the girl he claimed to love fo much... one he fought with hif parentf for, for her, then who'f to guarantee that fhe won't refeive (receive) the fame (same) fate af the other girl!
Wese u ferioufly love torturing Aaliya na.. bechari ka almoft r*pe hogya tha... I actually waf expecting a more heroic entry for Zain. And aife creep k liye tou jail boht choti faza hai... fuch people fould be ecfecuted (executed).
Bechaari Aaliya ko looli langri bana diya
Chalo at leaft Zain underftandf Fanam'f poffeffiveneff, he get'f where it if coming from... good 😊
Finally we got a confeffion, and the irony... it waf Fanam who helpef him realize hif feelingf... who gave the final pufh (push). I, for one, really enjoyed reading it 😊
Edited by neenzz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nazzz16

When r u updating madhu ??

Nazmin, yeh kya hi, I gave update, u liked it, but u didn't comment😭
I thought u ll be happy with this update😛??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update madhu ...
Simply Awesome
Superb !!
My network was bad so i culd not comment early..
Was waiting for ur update last nite :(
But sabar ka phal was very nyc :)
Finally zain has confessed ...
Even i felt sum way bad for sanam but m vry happy for zaya !!
N d last line wer zain said he ll make aliya accept him was rele amazing..
Exicted for next part :)
Continue soon !!
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Originally posted by: neenzz

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Gonna comment Rocket's style ha ha lol😆
What, r u kidding me?! It waf amazing Madhu... even I felt bad for Fanam... what Aaliya faid waf on point.. I know Zain won't leave her for another girl, but in real life, any girl would be worried, and rightfully fo. Fhe would think that he left the girl he claimed to love fo much... one he fought with hif parentf for, for her, then who'f to guarantee that fhe won't refeive (receive) the fame (same) fate af the other girl! Yes what u said is true, but she know's zain very well too, dnt forget that..😉 she is not worried about her..
Wese u ferioufly love torturing Aaliya na.. bechari ka almoft r*pe hogya tha... I actually waf expecting a more heroic entry for Zain. And aife creep k liye tou jail boht choti faza hai... fuch people fould be ecfecuted (executed). Awww did I torture so much 😆, actually I wrote more... but I deleted 😆
Bechaari Aaliya ko looli langri bana diya
Chalo at leaft Zain underftandf Fanam'f poffeffiveneff, he get'f where it if coming from... good 😊 actually I added that part bcz here everyone doesn't like sanam, but she is not actually very bad, they both.are just not meant to eachother... that's y I added it😛
Finally we got a confeffion, and the irony... it waf Fanam who helpef him realize hif feelingf... who gave the final pufh (push). I, for one, really enjoyed reading it . Thank u dearu... I'm glad u enjoyed reading it


Thank u so much for lovely lovely comment😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nazzz16

Amazing update madhu ...thank u dear😛
Simply Awesome shukriya😆
Superb !!dhanyavaadh😳
My network was bad so i culd not comment early..oh I'm sorry😛
Was waiting for ur update last nite :( sorry dear, actually I was struck in middle.. and I was tired too
But sabar ka phal was very nyc :) Aww thank u again..
Finally zain has confessed ... yes he confessed😳 no more phattu 😆
Even i felt sum way bad for sanam but m vry happy for zaya !! Finally u felt bad for sanam😛 I'm glad
N d last line wer zain said he ll make aliya accept him was rele amazing.. is it 😛 okay okay thank u
Exicted for next part :) next part is going to be tough for me, bcz I'm very bad in such stuff
Continue soon !!

Oh yeah I ll😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Fabulous
Superb
ZAIN CONFESSED...yahooo!!😛
I felt bad for sanam...but not that much😕😉
Zain apni malika ko accept karanay ki koshish karay ga magar MEZ chor kar chali jain gi! Right??!
Loved it❤️
Update nxt part ASAP

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zaya.harshika

Awesome update

Fabulous
Superb
ZAIN CONFESSED...yahooo!!😛
I felt bad for sanam...but not that much😕😉
Zain apni malika ko accept karanay ki koshish karay ga magar MEZ chor kar chali jain gi! Right??!
Loved it❤️
Update nxt part ASAP

Aww commented 😲, I thought I ll get ur comment in the eveining😉
Thank u thank u dearu😆,
Chodo, u didn't feel very bad, atleast u felt bad na, im happy for that😆
Wait and read😳
Oh yeah, I ll.give another tiny update to nite😛, If possible
Thank u so much for lovely comment!!

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