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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ChasingLiberty

heyaa !!!

i finally read it !!! :D
first of all stop saying your story isn't good !!!
because it really is fantastic !
have more confidence in your work !!
i love the story the concept.. and the story isn't dragging unnecessarily .. which is a very good thing ..
i really like the equation Randhir and Sanyu are sharing currently..
and i really liked the cliff-hangers after every update !!
keep writing .. just longer updates next time !!! :P
this is i guess the only story i'll be following with the change in plot..
i really like it !!!
xoxo,
sonali !!!

Hahah, Glad you finally did it! 😆 Ok, Ok, LOL! Hehe, thanks I mean i wanted a simple thing in my story.. I hate dragging it LOL! Thanks so much. I'll update longer pakka promise! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
This chapter is dedicated to all my readers who took keen interest in this story and made me go forward and encouraged me to write. Thank you all. I'm really excited what would you think about this chapter.

Chapter - 4



"Why the hell were you yelling on the phone?" She asked raising her eyebrows

"Why do you even care?" He yelled furiously.

"Oh, I'm sorry." I explained him

"You should be." He said in conceited tone.

I don't know what's this guy's problem. Sometime he just flirts away and now showing his egoistic features. What does he think? I'll be impressed to such behavior. What an Idiot! and he's probably thinking I'll work with him in a jolly mode, He can't destroy me. I'll do that better.

"Now, can we just catch up the cab?" He asked in sarcastic way.

"So, are you planning to walk?" I responded in the same manner with more fierce way.

He kept quiet for some time, he eyes were teary he cheeks were stained. I kept my palm in a consoling way in his shoulder.

"Is everything ok?" I spoke up.

He pushed my hands in a vigorous way. "Don't you dare touch me?" He yelled. "I have my problems and I know you'd have them too so why don't you pay attention to you'rs isn't that a better idea?" He was fuming.

"Well, okay." I replied with my lowest energy.

As we got the cab, which was yellow in colour, it's colour was attracting me towards it . I would drive me into those photographic reveries and it was surreal. I took my DSLR camera out of my tribal printed bag, which my mom gifted me as I was fascinated with the prints it gave a lustrous appearance. I took a perfect shot of the cab, and those dusky kids were peeping in the either side of the cab, which brought a delighted smile onto my face after a long time before escaping my house.

"Show me. " He exclaimed.

"What? " I asked.

"The shot you took." He answered in a monotonous tone.

"Don't be lethargic. " I spoke. "There you go" handing over my dslr to him.

"This is what you can do?" He was smirking.

"What? Isn't it beautiful?" I was pouting.

"Um, it's fine. Not as better as mine." He said with a conceited voice.

"Now, can we sit inside the cab?" I exclaimed.

"Yeah, Men's first!" he pushed me aside with the jerk of his arm.

"What the.. " I whispered in disgust.

He was signaling his little fingers asking me to take a seat besides him.

"So, do you know Vardhan sir?" I asked.

"Well, yes I was his assistant for 6 months, and he called me up here." he said with a grin on his visage.

"Oh, that's exciting. " I was screaming with ecstasy.

"Hmm. In you're dreams." He whispered.

"Did you say something?" I asked as he was busy texting on his brand new mobile.

"Are you listening?" I shot up.

"Shut up will you, Miss Aggarwal. OH Sanyukta!" He screamed.

I moved my position to the window pane of the cab, It was a dreamy land of Kenya.. Childrens playing in the either side of the roads, the lush green trees and shrubs that attract you, with its tranquility, the women's gossiping about their husbands and charming love, the mothers singing lullabies to their kids, bring my childhood vision into my eyes. I wish she was here, I was in a reverie of childhood days, how dad used to hold my hands to lend me a particular support of whatever I wanted but now, It was all vanished, it was doomed, I was not their kids anymore. No relationship another orphan born.

Tears stained my cheeks, the gust and loo made my teardrops stick into the epidermis of my skin. Mocking into the other visions, I was still alone and dark. How I wished Kaustuki was here, the only support system for me.

"Hey, we reached our stop. " He shook my shoulder as I was sleeping in the cocoon of my dreams engrossed all over my brains.

"Oh, yeah !" I muttered.

"Hey you wait here, in the reception" He said taking a pause. " I'll be back in few mins , I've to search vardhan sir " He completed .

"Yeah, sure. Hey can you lend me your phone, I need to talk to kaustuki as my battery is dead." I requested him and made a puppy face.

"Um" He hesitated. "Well ok. " He gave me his shimmering new phone, which was really another wonder to me.

I told a lie, Yes I was liar, but for me I wanted to know who was he speaking to. I pretended as if I was talking to someone else and acted that I did not get the signal as I quickly made an escape and opened his text messages. Which read horrifying things

****

I know you're not ok. [Text: Vidushi]

What? I hope Parth is fine [Text: Randhir]

He is. How are you? [Text : V]

I'm not good. [Text: R]

Why? [Text : V]

Because.. you're a manipulative women , you destroyed my childhood, you did this to our parents [Text : R]

You were also included in that. [Text :V]

All because you said me to do that [Text : R]

Are you there? You B***h [Text :R]

***********

Suddenly I heard the footsteps of Randhir making a quiet new entry.

"Are you done?" He asked.

"yes, Sure" I replied with a lethargic visage.

"Well, take the room keys and we just have one room so adjust till 3 days." He answered.

"What? With you? Same room? " I screamed in terror.

"Yeah, so are you gonna stay in footpaths?" He chuckled.

"No!" I screamed "Ok then" I hesitated.

"Where VD sir? " I exclaimed and rose a question.

"Well, We can meet him tomorrow. " He replied.
He pulled forward his arm to join with mine and I walked with an non-enthusiastic kid.



Recap - Vardhan sir's introduction and more about photography, little bit about Randhir.

P.S - I hope this mystery will engross you all and it will move forward soon.

Take you're time to comment and like the post. Silent readers please don't be silent at least comment something.
Edited by -Infinity- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update! whats this randhir and vidhushi's relationship!!?? oh, i can't wait to know more about him! please continue soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago


superb dear... cant wait to know the mystery behind Rd-Vidhushi conversation... eagerly waiting for next part...pls update soon...
Edited by archakan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Suma, thanks off the pm.
Lovely concept..both are photographers..nice..their interaction during the flight..so typical !!
Kenya ,huh?? Oh , Masai Mara...my dream destination...so you have got ,Randhir as a photographer and Kenya , so I'm kinda hooked to this FF now.. Brilliant update..oh ,he is pissed off with Vidushi?? Why,how,when?? Ah update soonish pls...😊
Edited by Happy_hippy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
The mystery continues
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Posted: 11 years ago
The update was superb yr

I so luv dere little banters
Alwz fighting n mocking

Rd hides his inner turmoil wid his rudeness

Sanyu too missing her family bt she cnt leave her dreams

Sanyu so slyly got rd fone

The convo between rd n vids is very confusing
It seems he has a bad fight

Sandhir sharing same rum


Update soon
Eagerly wtng for next

Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update ..wt abt parth,vidushi n his parents??will b eagerly waiting for the nxt update...update soon...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb chapter suma
Update soon
I can't wait to know the mystery behind rd and vidhus convo
Thanks for Pm
Love Manu
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey suma 🤗
Fantabulous update
Well written
I m luving sandhir's chemistry 👍🏼
I guess vidu is rd's sis 😆
And sandhir sharing the same room ☺️
Gonna be fun
Update soon
Tysm 😊Fr the pm ..

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