-OS on AR by dik..!! updated 13/04/2015 pmz later

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GOOGLU

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

awsm os
really luv whole idea
specially happy sappy ending
kash n virman forever
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Dik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

OS ~ 2
TRI MERI DOSTI KA ASMAN...!!!

part 1

on a beach a group of 8 friends are having a blast. they are sited around a table n plating truth n dare,

a young handsome boy of about early 20's is lost in his own thoughts.

"how can u do this to me.. it has been 12 years since u have gone to US, bt every year u were the 1st one to wish me.. n this time it has been 3 days u haven't replied to neither to my mails nor calls.. here are u..?? its not only my birthday bt also a very spl day for us.. our friendship day... i hate u for doing this to me..."

his thoughts very interrupted by one of his friends..

vivek : where are u lost ammy.. come lets dance..

the boy is none other that the cool dude Armaan Malik..!! most popular n handsome boy of his colage...

A : no im nt in mood..

vivek : hey.. its ur bday party.. n u are nt in mood.. thats nt done yaar ammy..

A : (thinking ) y should i spoil my day coz of her if she doesn't care.. me too..

vivek : where are u lost again..??

A: no where come lets enjoy..

every one moves towards dance floor n dancing on fast no's n enjoying their day...

suddenly music stops..

A : wat the hell.. music kisne bnd kia...

atul :chilly ammy.. main dekhta hn..

atul was about to go..

announcement

" sorry for the intruption guys.. bt now v have a spl dedication by miss chocolate.. for spl someone...

[song ~ tri meri dosti ka asman
Movie ~ radio
Singer ~ HR (my fav..!!)]

""Teri Meri Dosti Ka Aasaman
Teri Meri Dosti Ka Aasaman Jaane Kahan

Wohooo

Tere Mere Faasle Jo Kho Rahe Hai Zameen
Pal Pal Yahan
Wohooo

Teri Meri Dosti Ka Aasaman Jaane Kahan

Teri Meri Dosti Ka Aasaman
O Hoo Teri Meri Dosti Ka Aasaman Jaane Kahan
Jaane Kahan""

armaan gave his cutest smile showing his dimples... n he starts searching for someone here n there..

vivek : kya hua..??

armaan gave no responces.. n still his eyes searching for someone..

n his eyes fell one a girl wearing simple jeans n top moves towards armaan with a cake in her hand..

" happy birthday to u.. happy birthday ..'

armaan ran towrds her n hugs her tightly..

A : where the hel u were.. it has been 3 days.. mere ek bhi mail call ka rply nahi kia...

R: stop stop stop... mujhe bolne toh do..

A : bolo.. im very upset..

R : hath do apna..
ohoo..

she took his hand n tied a friendship band with the initials 'AR' frnds for ever..

R : happy birthday...!!! i did not replied to mails coz main bahut bsy thi shoping packing then travel.. n rahi baat call ki u know na i cant hide anything from u.. n mujhe tumhje surprise dena tha..

maya ( armaan's gf) : hey wats hapening...??

A : oh soory guys.. forgot to intruduse u.. guys she is my bestest childhood frnd Ridhima Gpta.. jo ki abhi abhi us se ayi hai...n ridhima ye..

R : atul anji vivek maya samrat rahul n muskan...!! i know all of u guys,.. tumsab ki frndship kb hue kaise hue.. all ur pranks masti.. i know evry thing...acha ab chalo.. lets cut the cake..

maya : eeuuu.. ye cake..!!

A : i love for this ridhima my fav cake..

R : chalo cut kro n btao kaisa hai...

A : tumne bnaya hai toh best hi hoga..

R : tumhe kaise bta..

A : bhul gyi.. Last mnth tumne hi btaya tha that u learnt aunty ka spl wala cake.. Mera fav wala..

R : acha ab cut bhi kro..

armaan cuts the cake.. feeds to ridhima then ridhima to armaan then armaan feeds cake to all others...!!!

all of them sat on beach for hrs n chated everything n nothing..

Muskan : lets have icecream..

Ridhima : grt idea..

Rahul : waiter..!!

Everyone ordered their fav flavours..

Maya : ill have black curent.. N ammy.. Blue bery..

A : no choclate..

Samrat : ammy u n choclate..

R : haan armaan ki fav hai chocolate..

Samrat : ridhima u sure ammy ne ajtk chocolate nahi khai...

R : armaan.. Really..

A : tumhare jne le bad maine kabhi chocolate ice cream nahi khai...

R : (bit emotional ) sachi strawbery...

Waiter comes with icecream..

Armaan takes chocolate n strabery cups..
He pics one one scop of starabery n places n his bowl.. N one scope of chocolate n puts it in strabery bowl..
Now both bowls have one strabery n one chocolate scoop..

A : yes my chocolate.. N mujhe pta hai tum bhi aj pure 12 yrs ke bad strawbery icecream khao gi.. Herr u go.. Humari spl chocolaty sfrabery icecream..

R : nodes her head..

Anji : guys thats realy cute.. Bt thodi si confusion hai.. Dont u think strabery ridhima ka name hona chahie..??

A : logicaly u are rite...
Bt humara logic thoda diferent hai.. Meri fav icecream is chocolate.. N ridhima mere bestest frnd.. Islie iska name chocolate..

R : n same goes with me.. Starabery me fav.. So armaan ka name straberry.. N best part is hm humasha share krke khate the icecream... Like this..

Ridhima shows them her icecream bowl.. Having one scop of chocolate n one straberry..!!

late nite 3 am.. all others frnds of armaan lefts.. now only AR are their n talking n both slept there on the beach..!!

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early morning..!!!

sunrays fall on their face n both wake up..

atul anji came their jogging..!!!

atul : u guys still here..??

A : haan vo hm baten krrahe the... dont know wen we slept..

anji : now u both go n freshn up..dont forget we have plans for today..

A : yes i remember anji.. afterall i have planned this trip..

R : ill also leave now.. see u guys later..

A : leave..?? where..??

R : to my hotel..

A : u can stay in this resort..

R : all rooms are booked..

A : ill talk to the manager..

R : i have already.. now ill go..

A : thats not done..

anji : i have a plan.. if u dont mind u can share my room..

A : thats a superb idea... grt idea anji..

R : thanku soo much anji.. bt i dont wanna disturb u..

anji : dont br formal ridhima.. u are armaan's best frnd.. com on its his bday..

R : ok.. if u insist ill get my luggae from reseption..

A : tum jao ill get it..

R : great news my mr bevakuf got some maners..

A : shut up.. ek toh help kro... upar se.. jao kudh le ao..

R : acha soory sorry.. dont get hyper..!!

ridhima n anji move to their room...!!!

anji : can i ask u something..??

R : ofcorce we are frnds now.. right..??

anji : yes ofcource..
i just wanted to ask i mean..

R : bolo na anji..

anji: i wantedvto ask about u n armaan.. u both are totaly diferent n how come u guys frnds..

R : long story anji.. i was 5 wen we became frnds... our frndship grew stronger as we grow up.. dad ko bahut achi business opportunity mili n hume us shift hona pda... bt me n armaan were always in touch.. daily raat ko sone se pele ek dusre ko mails krte the about our day...!!!

anji : aww thats too cutee..!!!

R : do u have a laptop or any ipad or something..

anji : soory ridhima i did not bring..!!!

R : its ok anji..main strabery se puch ke ati hn..

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other side armaan rum..
armaan was with maya..

maya : thats not done ammy..

a : chill baby.. she is my childhood frnd..
maya : n u did not tell me about her..

A : no one knows about her..
n he hugs maya..

ridhima opens the door with a bang..

R : upps wrong timimg soory..

maya : wat the hell.. dont u have maners... know krna nahi ata..

R: im soort.. il leave..

A : are dont be sory.. tumhe mere rum main ane ke lie kisi permision ki jarurat nahi..
acha u guys wait ill jst go n change..

(armaan moves towards the bathrum)

maya gave wired looks to ridhima...

R :no armaan u guys carry on main bs laptop lene ayi thi..

A: ( shouts from inside) : lelo na.. its in my suitcase..

ridhima takes out armaan's laptop n leaves from their..

maya : armaan u gave her ur laptop..?? u never alow anyone to touch it..

A : coz she is ridhima.. simple.. acha chalo lets go for a walk..

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scene shifts to ridhima..

ridhima was siting on a with armaan s laptop

samrat : hey ridhima mind if i sit here..??

R : nt at all have a seat..

samrat : ye to armaan ka laptop hai..

R : haan bt y are u shocked..

samrat : armaan ne apna laptop kisi ko hath nahi lgane deat.. n iska pasword ajtk main try nahi kr paya..

R : krte kaise dont know me na..!!

samrat : mtlb..

R : pasword main hn na...!!!

samrat : oh...

R : ill take ur leave..

samrat : ok..

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scene shifts..

armaan atul vivek n samrat..

samrat : thats not done dude.. tumne hume uske bare main nahai btaya.

vivek : she is too hot yaar.. do u think vo mere se ptegi..??

A : dont u dare every say that again... aj boldia.. age ill forgt u are my friend..

atul : armaan.. chill.. relax..

vevik : dude relax.. aise bhadak raha hai as if tri gf hai ya behan..

A : jo bhi ho.. humara relation u are nt the one to say

atul : armaan relax man.. tujhe toh pta hai vevik kaisa hai come lets go n have lunch..

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lunch table..

armaan went n sat besides ridhima..

anji : atul ise kya hua hai..

atul : narates her the event that took place in armaan's room..

anji : vevik ko warn krdena ridhima se dur rahe.. arman will break his legs..

atul : tumhe kaise pta..

anji : bad main batungi..

after some time..

anji : com on guys lets go.. water sports are waiting for us..

A : tum kahan jari ho..??

R : ill go n sit there..!! tumhe pta hai na mujhe water sports se dr lgta hai..

A : no ways im not gonna leave u here alone..

maya : bt ammy tumne ye trip kudh plan ki thi,, n u were excited..

A : i know maya.. bt i cant leave her here..

R : armaan maya is rite.. tum jao..

A : not without u.. if u want me to enjoy..u will come with me..

R : im scared..

A : im there with u..

trip goes on like this armaan always with ridhima.. never left her side sply with vivek..

maya was dam jealous seeing ar together she tried many times to grab his attention bt armaan was always with ridhima...

Recape ~ armaan's engagement..
Ridhima leaves for US..!!

Edited by little_angle - 11 years ago

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GOOGLU

@GOOGLU

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Awsm wrk dear..
Love AR frndship..
Here also maya...hate her..
Want someone dashing for ridhima...
Outstanding wrk dear..
Keep rocking..
Thank you for pm..
Egrly waiting for next part..

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Wonderful

Thanx for pm

Plz pm me for next

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Their friendship is so cute...

update super soon!!

I smiled all the time reading it :)

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Rajani

@polishedtechie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Nice concept.. waiting for more parts...

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Fabulous part,

continue soon 😊

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Dik

@Dik..

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: loveuarmaanu
amazing os
continue soon

thank u soo much dear..!!!

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Dik

@Dik..

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: GOOGLU
Awsm wrk dear..
Love AR frndship..
Here also maya...hate her..
Want someone dashing for ridhima...
Outstanding wrk dear..
Keep rocking..
Thank you for pm..
Egrly waiting for next part..

thank u soo much dear..!!!😊
maya n her evilnes is here again.. i could not think of any other name..!!😛