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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Outstanding os..
Love ridhima n Anjli's bonding. .
Virat vadhera. ..Also in it...but love virat only wd manvi..
And ridhima suit armaan..
Big fan of ridhima aka shilpa Anand. ...
Hey but wts wrg ???i
Is armaan kidnapped ridhima or something else ???
But its totally rocking os ..
Thanks alot for pm dea. ..
Keep rocking Tc dear



thank u soo much dear...!!!
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ummm great guesses bt happens in story for that read part 2 that ill be posting soonn,,,


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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks dear
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thank u soo much dear
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part 2

A : ridhima ridhima suno toh..
R : mujhe neend ari hai armaan let me slep..

Ridhima lies down on bed turns her face away from armaan..

After an hr..
Ridhima was nt able to sleep n was just turning sides..!!
Armaan was sitting on couch n watching ridhima..

Armaan leaves the rum.. N comes back with ridhima's fav pizza sply made by armaan...

A : Ridhima...
No responce..
A : ridhima I know u are nt sleeping.. Plz stop acting..!!
R : armaan let me sleep...

A : pichle ek ghante se u are just turning sides...!! Tumhe bina khaye nind nahi ati hai... N more over aj toh u have something in ur heart that u are hiding...

R : mujhe bhuk nahi hai..kuch nahi chupsya maine.. So jao tum..

A : ridhima jo bhi tumhare dil main boldo plz... Dekho aise tumhe puri raat neend nahi ayegi.. N mere smne acting mt krna i know u in n out..

Hearing this ridhima gets up from the bed...
N shouts..
R : agar itna hi mujhe jnte toh toh mere dil ki baat kyu ni snjte..!! Kyu nahi jn paye tum ki main virat se nahi tumse shadi krna chati thi... Kyu nahi dekh paye mere ankon main tumhare lie pyaar.. Mere dil main tumhare lie felings.. Kyu tumhe aisa lgta tha ki u are nt the one for me...
Kyu armaan kyu ??

Armann was shocked hearing outburst of ridhima...!!!

R : armaan bachpan se leke aj tk u were my only best frnd.. Maine apni har baat tumse share ki.. Fir kyu tumhe aisa lga ki main tumhare sath khush nahi reh paungi.. Ki tu mere layak nahi ho...
Aj main kehti.. U were rite mr malik nahi ho tum mere layak nahi ho because tum anath ho ya nt rich.. Because tum apni bst frnd ki felings nahi smj paye.. Kya sach main tumhe aisa lgta hai mere lie money or status important hai..

Bolo armaan chup kyu ho..??

Armaan was nt able to speak a word...!!!

R : yahi soch rahe ho na mujhe ye sb kaise pta chala..??

Armaan just nods his head

Yaad hai tumhe jb usdin tumne mujhe mnane aye the about meri shadi with virat..

** flash back

Armaan's rum

Armaan was standing near the window holding his n ridhima's childhood pic in his hand

Ridhima tumhe pta hai aj di ne mujhe ek responsibility di hai tum mnane ke lie ki tum virat se shadi krlo.. di n jiju ne tumhare lie ek dom perfect match dhunda hai.. virat ek acha ldka hai uski family ke log bhi bahut ache hai tumhe bahut khush rakhnege. Viart London ka youngest indian business tycoon.. he is a perfect match for u.. unka family status perfect matches to urs.. thik hi toh hai na

Ab main is responsibility ko pura krunga... meri best frnd ko uske perfect life partner se milvake...

** end of flash back

A : tumne ye sab kaise..??

R: hairan ho na kaise pta chala..

** flash back

Ridhima returned froming shoping with virat

N she ran to her di's rum to show her new dress..

Out side rum..

Anji : atul kya tumhe lgta hai ridz manegi..?

Atul : I don't know anji.. mujhe bs itna pta hai virat is a nice guy n if ridhima likes him they will make a perfect match.. bt..

Anji: yahi na ridz mangi ya nahi.. sach btaun atul I don't know ki ridz use like krti bhi hai nahi.. n ridz abhi is sab ke lie ready nahi hogi..

Atul : if she likes someone else..

Anji : I don't know atul.. is bare main kabhi ridhima ne koi baat nahi kri..

Atul : tumse vo kregi do u think..

Anji : ofcource she is my lil sis..

Atul : then u are wrong.. kunki jahan tk me ridhima ko smj paya hn vo ye bat tumse kabhi nahi kregi.. aj tk kabhi usne apne dil ki baat direct btai hai.. bachpan se leke abhi tk.. bolo..???

Anji :hmm ye toh hai.. fir ab

Atul : ab kya armaan ko bolo baat krega vahi hai tum dono behno ka link...

Then atul anji go to armaan n tell him about their plan n armaan agrees to it..

** end of flash back

R : ye sab kuch mere smne hua armaan I heard every word of di aju n ur armaan..

Kitne aram se u convinced me marry virat ek bar bhi ye nahi socha ki jo ldki bachan se leke aj tk apni sari baten sirf tumhare sath share krti yhi vo apni baki ki life kisi or ke sath kaise share kr skti hai..

Armaan was having tears in his eyes seeing breakdown of her best frind of his childhood love...

(Yess armaan loved ridhima from the time he didn't even know meaning of love.. he has fulfilled every single wish of hers.. armaan is son of shishank's pa Balwinder malik. Shishank trusted him blindly n soo does balwinder. Balwinder ridhima's billy uncle was always by her side wen every armaan n ridhima faught.. after death of shishank balwinder took responsibility of the whole business n of anji n ridhima.. balwinder was the one who trained anji in business and her over when she became fully responidible. Before balvinders death he took promise from armaan to take care of anji n ridhima.)

Ridhima sat down on floor crying..

Armaan unable to see ridhima in this condition sits on floor n hugs her trying to console her..

A : im soorry ridhima plz mujhe maf krdo.. plz ridhima plz stop crying I cant see u like this...
R : mujhe kisi or ki wife bnte hue dekh sakte hop r rote hue nahi..

Armaan kept mum..

R : bolo na ab kyu chup hogye...

A : nahi dekhsata tumhe kisi or ka hote hue islie jara tha tum sabki life se dur..( armman was planning to shift lodon so that atul could stay with anji..)

R : tum kitne bde laalu ho

A : vo toh main hn... pr is virat use toh main nahi chodunga uski himat kaise hue meri ridhima ki insult krne ki... how could he reject u..

Ridhima busted out in laughter hearing this..

A : tum has kyu rahi ho..

R : tum apni shakal dekho.. tum pr gusa bilkul suit nahi krta...

Vaise mn gye na meri or viru ki acting ko..

A( shocked) : acting...

R : haan acting..

Tumhe yaad hai mera ek frnd tha collage main viru... hm dono milke kitni pranks krte the.. virat vahi hai viru...

A : viru vahi na jis ki gf ko mnane ke lie tumne uske ghar ki divar tapi thi..

R : yooo rite mr malik..

A : toh fir vo tumhare sath shadi..

R : actualy na armaan use pta hi nahi tha ki uske parents use yahan shadi ke laye hai n usne abhi tk apne parents ko kuch nahi btaya tha manvi ke bare main..

Jb mujhe pta chala main use baat krne gyi

** FLASHBACK

R : viraaattt...

V : kya hua JkiR(Jhansi ki rani) chik kyu rahi hai

R : virruu ke bache smjhta kya hai tu apne ap ko

V : kya bol rahi ho tum...

R : clg main toh bdi badi baten krte the manvi ke lie kuch bhi krsakta hn bahut pyaar krta hn ye vo.. n tumhare chakar main mujhe uske ghar ki diwar tk jump krni pdi thi... ab kahan gya tumhara pyaar bolo..

V: gya mtlb I still love manvi tujhe kya hua hai itna bhadak kyu rahi hai

R : pyaar manvi se krta hai or mujhe dekhne aya hai shadi ke lie..

V : whaattt...????

R : gud morning mr vadhera final apko pta toh chala..

V : shit yaar JkiR ye toh pnga hogya main toh manvi ko promise krke aya tha is trip pr mom dad ko humare bare main bta dunga...

R : dufer idiot

V : JkiR ab plz tu hi nikal is problem se mujhe

R : tujhse bdi problem toh mere pas hai...

Ridhima narets him about wat armaan fels n wants ridhima to marry him..

V : oye mtlb meri JkiR is in love with his childhood buddy.. very bad yaar tune itna bda sectret aj tk mujhse chupaya...

R : abhi in sab ka time nahi hai ye soch krna kya hai...

Atul : armaan ko realise that he is the bst for u..

R : aju..

Atul : ye toh main jnta tha armaan loves u pr tri felings ka nahi pta tha islie intentionaly I made u hear meri n anji ki convo.. n uske bad se im following u...
R : wat...

Atul : yes princes.. main aise hi tumhe aise hi bachu nahi bulata u are my first child...

R : aju u r the bst... love u..( n hugs atul) jb itna sab kia ab age bhi btao krna kya hai...

Atul : sabse pehle tumhari di n virat ke parents se baat krni hogi..

Atul makes anji n mr n mrs vadhera to agree for ar n virman marriage.. n also invites manvi n her parents to india...

Wedding day...

Ridhima was readying in her wedding dress in waiting for virat n his famly.

Bt then virat entered there with manvi holding her hand in casal dress..

Atul : virat ye sb kya hai..

V : im sorry jiju.. sorry atul ji main ridhima se shadi nahi kr sakta main manvi se pyaar krta hn n uske elava kisi or se shadi nahi kr sakta..

Baammm

Sound of slap that could only be heard..

V : dad

Mr v : virat how could u do this..?? agar yahi krna that toh shadi ke lie haan kyu bola..

V : dad vo mere n manvi e bech kuch mis understandings ho gyi thi.. bt aj I realised main manvi ke bina nahi je sakta...

Mr v : shadi koi mzak nahi hai kabhi haaan kabhi naa... krva di na humari besti.. ab kya krne aye ho yahan dfa ho jao meri nzron se...

V : dad hmne apko bina btaye shadi nahi ki hai pehle apke pas aye hai ashirwad lene... kyuki manvi chati thi ki humari shadi apki marzinse ho..

Mr v : dfa ho jao dono yahan se..

V : ridhima di jiju plz ho sake mujhe maaf krdena.. im sorry..

Anji : sory bolke jna bahut asan hai virat ab kon krega meri ridhima se shadi tum toh sory bolke chal die pr meri ridhima ka kya.. uski toh zindagi barbad krni tumne..

V : di main sabko bolta hn is main ridhima ki koi galti nahi hai main shadi tod raha hn bcoz I love some one else..

Mrs v : virat ye bolna bahut asan hota hai bt jis ldki ki shadi tuti hai uska dard koi nahi smj sakta .. tumne is ldki ki life pr kaisa dag dal dia virat..

V : mom agar ap chate ho main ise shadi krlunga pr aisa krne se koi khush nahi reh payega na main na ridhima n na hi manvi.. plz mom.. plz ap sablo smjho meri baat..

R : virat just get out...

N ridhima ran to her rum crying..

N the guest or rather I would say croud was gosping..

Armaan unable to bear this anymore goes to ridhima's rum n drags her with him..

A : chup sab log chup.. main krunga ridhima se shadi that to abhi n isi mandap pr..

N this is how ar got married

** END OF FLASH BACK..

A : mtlb ye sab tum sab ka plan tha.. or main aise hi guilty ki main bina tumhari marzi tumse shadi krli.. good ridhima jb tumne bola na shellfish.. main kitna dar gya tha...

R : hwww.. poorr armaan malik..

A : so mrs malik mujhe nahi pta tha ki tum itni intelgent ho..

R : soo mean armaan ek toh maine itni mehnat ki humare lie.. jao mujhe nahi krni tumse baat..
A : sorry na.. main mzak kr raha tha

R : abhi bhi sirf sorry bologe.. ab toh shadi bhi hogi ab toh boldo jo main itne salon se sunna chati hn

A : ohh toh meri wifi chati hai main apne dil ki baat bolun..

" ridhima bachpan se hm sath rahe hai.. har bat pr lde hai jghda kia hai n hamsha ek dusre ko support kia har decision mai.. ab ,ujhe nahi pta pyaar ki definition.. bt I just know I cant live without u.. tumse ldna tumhe manna hi mere lie pyaar ki definition hai.. I love u ridhima.."

R : correction.. mrs ridhima armaan malik bolo..

A : ups sorry.. I love u mrs ridhima armaan malik..

R : I love u too mr armaan malik

N hugs both hug each other..

THE END...

Ridhima : my heartly love not wealthy found love .. soo guys this was my story.. how I got my love.. n gave brains to my duffer idiot hubby.. jise lgta tha he is nt the one for me bcoz economically n socially is not of our status.. bt thak god maine uski baten sunli vrna pta nahi kya hota mri is love story ka hota ... bye guys take care..!!!

Another happy AR ending...

Hope u guys enjoyed it..

N yes aayyu baby thabku soo much for the title.

And yes.. AR are made for each other n soo does Virman (Virat Manvi)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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idiotic hubby ko de diya brain hihihiii...
Luved it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
lovely..!!
indeed it was a happy ending..!!
Loved this os alot..!!
:D :D :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
oh...it ended
i m sad dil...
but i am happy that it is a nice nd good ending
i loved it
wat a idiot he is but atlast ridhima is great
congo dil
lov u dil...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice OS
Really liked it. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Before the comment, wanted to say sorry...
kyunki maine itna time laga diya padke comment karne main hehehe...

I just love the story..
it was cute love story of two people... or two best friends hehehe...
Love it... totally awesome...
take care :)
Edited by RihooHaws - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
awesome os
loved it
beautifully written
thankx for pm

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