My dream track (OS) part 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fabulous. Ishita was smartly handled Shagun.
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Superb.Ishita is selfless n helpful . Whenever Ruhi is in trouble She is the first one to help her even though her own mother Shagun is also there Whenever Ishita is in trouble he'll be there for her What a lovely bond! Awesome threesome. She even tried to save Adi too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This dream starts in Ishita's clinic while Ishita was busy with a patient .Then Subbu comes to clinic and asks appointment with Ishita in reception.He would be informed she is busy and he has to wait for few minutes.

Ishita gets free and was informed about Subbu.Ishita hesitantly agrees for meeting.

Subbu comes inside the room .

Ishita "Batayiye aapka kya problem hain."completely professional.

Subbu "Ishita mujhey tumsey kuch baath karnee hain."

Ishita "Sorry yeh clinic hain tumhaara ghar naheen kee tum koi baath karney ke liyen yaha aagayen."

Subbu "Ishita mere baath suno yeh tumharee life sey related hain kuch ungent baathey hain."

Ishita "Mere life ke baarey mey tum math soochna .Iskey liyen mere family hain mera amma appa aur Raman .Tumhey kuch fikar karney kee jaroori naheen hain."

Subbu "Mujhey Raman key baarey mey baath karney hain."

Ishita shocked "Raman key baarey mey."

Subbu "Tumhey sach mey lagatha hain kee Raman tumhaarey liyen saheen hain.Tum ney ussey shaadi key jisse pehley shaadi ho chukee hain .Jissey doosro sey kaisey baath karney kaa tameez naheen hain hummara bhasha naheen hain aur koi .."

Ishita "Basss bahuth boldiya tumney .Tumhaari himmath kaisey huin mere saamney mere pathee key baarey me aisey bolney kee.Tumtho uskey naam leney ke liye bhee layak naheen hon."

Subbu "Bass Ishita .Hum sab jaanteh hain kee tum iss shaadi sirf Ruhi key liye kiyya hain.Lekin tum yeh sabh kaisey bhool gayee jo ussney tumhaarey pariwar key saath kiya thaa .Ussney tumhaarey amma appa ko jail bhejha aur uss Ruhi key saath bhee kitna bhura barthaaw kiyaan thaa.Tum hee ney uskey baarey mey media key saamney bola tha."

Ishita "Main ney abhee bola kee tum Raman key baarey mey mujhey math boolna .Main Raman ko ache tarah janthee hun jo shaadi key pehley huan who sirf ek galath faimey thee.Aur mujhey tumhey samjhaaney kee koi jaroori naheen hain hummare shaadi key baarey mey.Jo tumney mere saath kiya uskey baadh tho main tumsey baath bhee naheen karnaa chahthee."

Subbu "Mainey jo kiya who galath tha main janthaa hun lekin Raman tumhey dhoka dhey rahan hain.Who kissey aur ladkee key saath ..."

Ishita "Basss kab sey bolthey jaa rahen hon .Main Raman ko ache tarah janthee hon khud sey jyaada.Who kabhee asiey naheen kar saktha.Mujhey usspar poora vishwaas hain."

Subbu "Vishwas uss par ." showing her some photo .

Ishita was shell shocked to see that photo and almost has tears in her eyes.It was photo of Raman with some lady where lady was kissing Raman on cheek .

Subbu "Abh kyaa bologee uss photo ko dekhkar.Tumhey abh bhee uss par vishwas hain."

Ishita was silent but her belif on Rman was still unfazed.

Subbu then tells her that the lady in photo was her boss Maya Phadnis.They came hear for some meeting and her boss being close with Raman before every one and he got that photo accidentally clicked.

Subbu "Ishita jaantha hun mainey jho kiya gaath kiyaa lekin main kabhee tumhaarey saath itna bhada dhoka naheen kar saktha jo Raman ney kiyan."

He leaves from there keeping photo on table.

Ishita was still shocked seeing that photo.The lady was little modern and person with her is surely Raman and she cant claime it is not Raman.

Her gut says Raman will never do it to her and he is loyal to every relationship he is involved.She then thinks about Subbu's words and decides to ask Raman about it and was about to call him but decides she will ask him personally.

Ishita reaches home and she finds Raman completely stressed and relaxing on his bed.

Ishita "Raman kyaa huan itney thak gayen aap?"

Raman "Tum aagayee .Kuch naheen yaar waha ek mussebath ko saath lekey ghoom rahan hun."

Ishita "Kyaa?"

Raman "Tum kuch samjhongee naheen .Merey liyen kuch coffee lekar aaon na"

Ishita leaves but her mind was still over that photo which she saw .Her heart trusts Raman but what she saw making it tough to decide.

Ishita takes coffee to Raman and he was on phone with some one.

Raman "Hain main jaroor aoonga ."

Raman "Han its my pleasure.ok thankyou miss Phadnis"

Ishita understood who was on other side it was same lady who was on photo.Ishita was scared listening that name as it is becoming threat for her relation.She controlled her emotion and gave coffee to her.

Ishita "Raman kaun thaa phone par."in low voice

Raman "Mujhey bhookar kyo naheen ho saktha aaj." Just keeping the phone not noticing Ishita but annoyed.

Ishita "Raman main ney bass aisey poochaa."

Raman notices Ishita and asks "Kyaa poocha?"

Ishita understood Raman was not t elling to her."Kaun tha phone par?"

Raman "Museebath ."

Ishita "Kyaa?"

Raman "Maya Phadnis.Unsey kuch deal karnaa hain hummarey company ko .Chennai sey aye hain."

Ishita "Phir museebath."

Raman "Uss deal key liye mujhey ussey jheelna padh rahan hain."

Ishita was shocked by Raman's words.

Raman "Aurath hain ya nahee koi ..."

Ishita "Kyaa huan itnaa gussa ?"

Raman "Kaisey bathaun yaar.Boloonga tho bhee koi vishwas naheen kareega."

Ishita "Kyaa deal mey gadbhad hain."

Raman "character mey hain.Who mujhpey line maar raheen hain yeh jaankar bhee main shaadi shudha hun."

Ishita "Koi paagal hogi naheen tho aappar line maar raheen hain."

Raman gives her regular pissed off look at her.

Raman "Main serious hun .Ussney poorey staff key saamney mazak karkey rakha hain."

He tell her how she kissed him on cheek with out his permission and trying to make advancements on him and Raman unable to handle her as she is is a woman and cant show his anger on her and similarly have to worry about deal.

Ishita burst to laughing listening this and Raman embraced.

Ishita "Ravan Kumar ek ladkee ko handle naheen kar pa rahen hain."

Raman "Funny.Tum sach mey naa.Tumhey gussa aana chahiye uss par aur tumhey mazak lag rahan hain."

Ishita "Maza tho hain.Koi ladkee mussebath ko galle laga raheen hain."

Raman leaves from there angrily and Ishita stops her acting and starts crying about her trust winning over the situation.

She then decides to take on that Maya .

She sees the photo and tears it to pieces.

After few minutes Raman comes back to room more annoyed.

Ishita "Abh kyaa huan .?"

Raman "Han mussebath key saath dinner jaana hain.Ussney dinner meeting arrange kiya."

Ishita "Tho jaon naa.Issmey kyan hain."

Raman "Please yaar tum tho mera madadh karoo .Mujhey naheen janaa wahan.Uss aurath key pass .Mujhey naheen patha abh kyaa toofan laayegi who."

Ishita laughing "Aap ek ladkee sey dar rahen hain.Tho kissey aur ko bhejiyee naa."

Raman "Tuhey kyaa laga mainey soocha naheen.Ussney mujhey bhulayan hain aur mainey haan bhee kardhee uss Mihir kee wajaha sey."

Raman "Kissey aur ko naheen bhej saktha ."

Ishita "Main saath chaloon fir."

Raman thinks for a moment "Han yeh theek rahegaa.Tum tho aa sakthee hon."

Raman "Tum ready ho jaon main wait karoonga."

Ishita gets ready and Raman was little relieved now as Ishita would be coming along with him to face that mussebath and she can handle her .

They both leave in Raman's car.Ishita was relieved as her belief in Raman was enact and Subbu was wrong.

They both reach the hotel and walk closely and there they meet Maya who was not expecting Ishita to come along with Raman.Now she has constrained her motion noticing Ishita.

Raman introduces them to each other.Ishita was careful not to fall for her tricks.

Ishita "Nice to meet you.Raman ney bathaaye aapkey baarey mey."

Maya "Its just pleasure kee aap donon har baath share karthey hon."

Ishita "Raman mujhsey kuch chupaatha naheen ."

They sit in a table and Ishita was close to Raman .Raman was silent after their introduction.Ishita did order for both Raman and herself without waiting for him .

She was acting to be very close with Raman and Raman enjoying it .Maya get's jealous seeing Ishita and Raman .

Then repeatedly irk's Maya with question and she was unable to answer about her family and belief over relations.

In end Maya makes an excuse and leave from there before completing dinner.Immediatly both Raman and Ishita burst into laugher and Raman praising Ishita .

They finish their dinner together and both leave for shopping as Raman decided to buy something for Ishita.

Subbu sees all this from distance and he gets a phone from Maya and he leaves.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very Nice. Raman freely shared about the musibath to her she didnt misunderstand Raman when Subbu showed the photo.They trust each other completely n faced the musibath together Good.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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reallyy amazinggg!!!!! awesum update!! loved how u portrayed ishita's trust on raman and how he openly expressed his Museebaat to ishita and taking her also to dinner party!!
keepp continuingg.. eager to read moree??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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...nice os...IShRa are made for each other...koi unke beech nahi aa sakta...but this version of bechara raman...was nice...real mein toh shayad ye raman kabhi dekhne ko nahi milega...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update !
Loved it !
Poor Raman 😆
And Subbu is such a jerk ! 😡
Glad that Ishita trusts him

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Posted: 11 years ago
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all the three tracks were super duper awesum vikas
loved them...
thnks 4 pm
okk...i know i have to reply on many of your stories but m working on reading them
will let you know whichever i m done reading with
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankitasidana

all the three tracks were super duper awesum vikas
loved them...
thnks 4 pm
okk...i know i have to reply on many of your stories but m working on reading them
will let you know whichever i m done reading with

thanks buddy,
No one has taken these much efforts to read my stories and give reply.
But thankyou.

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