Asya/Kabhi FF Teri Galiyan Part 8 updated on Pg 95 - Page 67

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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok janeman finally uh unres 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hiii guys. How are you?
I am back with an update.
I know my demand didnt get fulfilled but this update is for aman who works hard to get one update. Princess101 who is missing this ff. And for amulya who says that i should ryt for loyal writers only. Thanku so much guys for your likes and comments. It means a lot to me.
I know i am late. But a happy diwali to ol of uh guys. May God olways bless uh. Love hh guys. Now with no more bakwas let me continue.

Part 8

Asad and zoya agreed to dance but on one condition that they wont dance on a romantic. Number.
Everyone agreed.
They both came on the stage catching everyone's attention and the spotlight.
Song started.
Asad did lipsing of the song.
Tenu hi karaan main chase
What a naksh, what a nain
Dil tera ho gaya fan
What a smile, what a style
Lut'ti neendo ki ye file
Kabhi soft, kabhi rude
Killer tera attitude
Zoya whose back was facing the audience turned and showed.some attitude according to the lyrics.
Tere liye hi toh signal tod taad ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chhad ke
Than zoya sang.
O teri ankh da ishaara mujhe fraud lage
Tu toh Majnu aawaara by God lage
O kasme waade khake
Apni pocket money bacha ke
Aaya tere liye paise waise jod jaad ke..

Ghar waalon ko bhi bye-shye bol baal ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chhad ke
Tere liye hi toh signal tod taad ke
Aaya Dilli wali girlfriend chhod chhad ke

Teri galli mein bhi aana start kar diya
Ik tere naam apna heart kar diya
Karne laga aankh matakka
Ab toh aashiq ban gaya pakka
Aaj abhi maine tera boycott kar diya

Teri saari harqatein main toh note karu
Tujhe thaane mein le jaake main report karu oye

Tu na kar aise fight
Tera mood main karu light
Tujhe scene mein dikha ke film Golmaal ke..

Naam tera hi likhaya maine wedding card pe
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chhad ke
Tere liye hi toh signal tod taad ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chhad ke
They both danced showing anger to eachother.
They didnt choose any romantic number as they were very angry and not in a mood of dancing with eachother or we should say they were too effected by seeing eachother with someone else that didnt danced together.

After dancing they both went in different corners and stole glances of eachother.
Than they both thought that this is the time when they should be with eachother not just glancing eachother. And than both got up and were about to approach when a girl named yashika literally dragged asad to the dance floor.
A boy named abinash also asked zoya for a dance, zoya was about to refuse him but than seeing him with another girl zoya fumed with anger and said yes.
Their whole gang was seeing them and facepalmed.
Rizwan-shit yar not again. Pehle hi yeh dono itna gusa the aur ab yeh yashika aur abinash.
Humaira-i know. I ll kill bith of them.
(Haha sorry abi and yashu dnt be serious. Yeh tumhe kuch nahi kahenge i ll save uh 😆
Laibaa-chill humz. Vaise dekha jaye toh yeh dono unintentionally help hi kar rahe hai.
Rishabh-ryt.

They both physically dancing with someone else but mentally they were imagining eachother.
Asad wanted to kill abi for dancing with her zoya and same was zoya's reaction. She wanted to kill yashu.
Suddenly yashu kissed asad's cheek as she is a big fan of KSG.
But zoya's anger has no heights.
She just left the place crying tears of anger and hurt.
Asad was himself shocked but for now he need to calm her lady love. He ran after her.
Zoya was walking in corridor ol lost. She was hurt, she wanted to he there with asad. Yes she love asad but sje wont tell him as according to her he dont love her.
She was lost in her thoughts when she felt a tight grip on her wrist she turned to find asad standind there.
Zoya-asad plz leave.my hand.
Asad-no. First you tell me where are you going?
Zoya- how does it matter to uh? Its none of your business. You go and kiss that yashika.
Asad was now angry-you really think so that i like her. Chii zoya how can you think about me like that. She just kissed me suddenly,.i didnt.
Zoya-plz asad i dont want to listen anything. Just leave.
Asad- ok miss faruki i ll leave but first come with me. And he dragged her to terrace hidind from everyone.
Zoya-where? Why i font want to go anywhere just leave my hand.
But he didnt listened her and stopped only when they reached terrace.
</div><div>On tereace nothing much was done but what was done was enough for zoya.
A table in middle, a candle and a bouque was kept.
Fairtale lights were there.
Zoya's anger transformed to hapiness she turned hug asad but met with his hurt and anger.
Asad-yeh sab maine tumhare liye kia because i wanted to confess my feelings for uh. But here uh r doubting on me. I just dont want to say anything.
He was about to leave but zoya caught his hand and did the most unexpected thing.

Zoya took asad's hankerchief and tied it around her neck like goons.
She than acted of chewing gum and said in tapori's language.
Zoya- ae item. Apun tujhse sorry bolta hai mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi hai.
Asad was first angry than amused and than smiling seejng her like this..
Zoya- dekh ek baat sidhi sidhi bolti hai. Apun ko tujhse love ho gaya hai. Tere pas do options hai ya toh chup chap ha karde nahi toh tujhe tere ghar se uthvake tujhse zabardasti ha bulvaungi.
Asad was.just at her confession.
Zoya knew he was.not angry but still be in her getup-bol na item. Pyaar karta hai mujhse ke nahi.
Asad-thodi si chichori ho par mujhe pasand ho. Aur vaise bhi dangerous yet cute proposal ko kon mana kar sakta hai.
Zoya-but this is only limited for uh. Uh know i always want to propose my pove like this.
Asad-haha. Aww my cute baby. I love uh some much.
Saying so he took her in a bone crushing hug to which zoya complied happily.
They broke the hug.
Asad cupped her face and kissed her forehead,.than her cheeks and finally he came to her lips but saw in her eyes asking for a yes. zoya just closed her eyes parting her lips.
Asad placed his lips on her gently, they first kissed loving but then sucked each others lips. They kissed eachother pationately enjoying eachothers warmth and their first kiss.
Finally they broke the kiss in need of oxygen and rested their foreheads.
After some time asya spoke in unison- our first kiss. And then blushed.
After some more time they got call from their friends to come for Mr. And Miss freshers.

So how was it?
I hope its quite long.
So next update after 50likes.
I wont go below it.
Bye guys take care.

Love Vish❤️
Edited by MagsDhingra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update yaar...
finallyy my babies confessed..
it was lovely
i loved jealous wala asya n that song...
sachi me that was a bit scary yet soo cute proposal...
n then they kissed...hayee..
..read ur note...aw i know aman is a sweetheart n jas n aman recommended this cute story to me..n i vl always say that..pls do write fr ur loyal readers.
continu soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
unres
Dhani, Dhani, Dhani
aapun tera kya karyaga?😡😡
waise aapun ne kahi pe sunna tha ki "har ek friend kamina hota hai" aaj dekh bhi liya
Update faadu hai, bole toh ek dum jhakaas; samjhi kya?
aur aapun ko lagta hai ki aapun ko teri yeh kahani "Teri Galiyaan" se love hogaya hai😉
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres

Hey Vish🤗
U updated finally!!
Aww tnx a lot 4 dedicating this update to me really it means a lot love u 4 that❤️
N i'll never stop promoting ur story😉
Aww Dilliwali girlfriend is one of my fav songs
Some jealousy n dance
N finally they confessed yaee
The confession was unique😳
N their first kiss hayee
Loved it❤️
Continue soon😃
Tnx 4 pm😉
Love always Aman❤️
Edited by aman1605 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Jealous asad & zoya was good
Song & dance sequence was nice
Finally they confessed & their first kiss
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww
loved it
finally they confessed
nice
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update!

confession done!!! great!!!

it was the most weird...hilarious yet unique confession!

asad se jyada main surprise ho gayi 😆

well done yashu n abi...

continue soon

p.s- count my like too...mere phone ka man nai tha aaj like karne ka 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awee lvly updt
I loved it so much
Loved jelly asya :-D nd their 1st kiss... Hhhaaayyyeee <3
Awesome one it was
Continue soon
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