Abhigya OS the difference

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Neil wanted revenge. Abhi had insulted him infront of everyone! And he had not been beaten up in jail because of his stupid wife. She had even managed to save hime from his goons. But not this time. He had to do something and he knew what. He would kill abhi and anyone who helped him.

Abhi had gone out with tanu and Neil was following him. Pragya was also out. Abhi got out of the car to enter the building where he was meeting the producer but he was pulled back vigoursly it was Neil. He punched abhi. Abhi was shocked to see him. Abhi punched him back but Neil got out a knife. Tanu didn't know what to do and quickly left the car without saying anything. Abhi turned round too look for tanu but she was gone. Abhi was shocked more now. Tanu had left him...

Neil was about to stab abhi but abhi moved. The scratch was on his arm. They carried on fighting.

Coincidently pragya was also there. She had just met bulbul and was going home when she saw tanu running past hurriedly. She looked behind her to see abhis car. No one was in there. She looked around worried and heard abhis voice along with another.

Following the voice she reached abhi and Neil. Both were fighting and punching each other. Neil kicked abhi and he fell on his stomach. Pragya didn't know what to do. She saw a large heavy stick on the floor and picked it up and began to walk towards Neil. Neil had picked up the knife and was walking towards abhi to stab him but before he could a large stick hit his head and he went dizzy. He fell on the floor. Abhi got up again and was surprised to see pragya.

"Are you okay?" Pragya asked

She looked at his bleeding arm and wiped it with her dupatta.

Abhi looked at her. Tanu had left him but pragya had saved him but he didn't want to show it.

"Wow chashmish! You should be some boxer. You hit him and he fell! Wow! Chashmish power!" He teased her but stopped when he saw she was crying .

"God now what happened!" He asked

"What if I hadn't come on time! He would have killed you! And what about tanu! I saw her walking past hurriedly!"

"I'm fine chashmish!" Said abhi smiling at her cocern.

He thought again how tanu had left him in danger but pragya had instead come to help him even when she hadn't been there.

"Come lets go home." Said abhi not wanting to think about tanu.

They arrived hime and abhi went to his room. He looked at his phone. Tanu had text him saying she was coming to meet him.

Pragya had gone out with daadi and tanu had arrived. She went upstairs to meet abhi.


"Abhi" she called and hugged him but he pulled away

"What happened?" She asked

"You know exactly what!" Abhi shouted

Tanu didn't know what to say.

"You know what! I thought you loved me but you don't. Pragya helped me you didn't ! Get out!" Abhi shouted

"No abhi I love you and you love me!" She said

Abhi ignored her.

"Abhi you love me don't you!"she asked

"No I dont I love pragya!" Abhi shouted

Tanu was shocked . Abhi was surprised as well but he didn't regret what he had said. He did love his chashmish!

Tanu left in anger. Abhi hadn't realised that pragya had listened to what he had said. She had come back to get her phone. She went in and picked it up. She smiled at abhi and abhi smiled back.


Hope you guys liked it !


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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice and cute update I love it ...abhi in this story is not stupid. I love this idea ... after pragya help he realized that he loves pragya ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nicely done Simi!! I like how Pragya didn't think twice about saving Abhi. Very in character that he tried not to show his reaction at first. And yay for him finally rejecting Tanu and Pragya hearing. Now they can start fresh. Thank you for this story :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it.
Cute and a lovely OS.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story i wonder if something like this will happen in the show to make abhi realise he loves Pragya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome!!!!! It was really good!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I didn't like it ... I loved it . Only one problem ... It's an OS there has to be more 😔 I'm not surprised that Tanu ran away loved everything
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was beautifully written Simi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww hehe this was so adorable!!!!!
Gosh, Tanu is as selfish as ever, Pragya is the saviour and Abhi realised his love.. beautiful.. I can imagine the smiles at the end.. adorable!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice OS Simo! I KNEW that Chudail would dig her own grave! *LOL* You kept both AbhiGya in character and realistic (how she would help him without thinking about herself and how he would try to hide his feelings, atleast initially) and YAY! New beginning!

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