OS:A Hospitalised Lovestory

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Anaya13
Res 🤣

Anaya!😡unres kar on A Secret Crush😡

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

really nice os dear... I imagined one n only swaron in it... love is soo strong yr... I got tensed bt when I read report changed... I felt releaved... thanks 4 d pm

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Sana

@SaNa_sTaR

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Sorry for late reply 😳

Awesome work Mansi! 👏

Loved it ❤️

I naturally imagined SwaRon while reading this for some reason 😊

The boyfriend was so sweet...she knew that he would not leave her 😆

The report part was scary...but it was the wrong one...phewww 😊

Keep writing more of these 😃

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Diya

@diyaswaronholic

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

My baby!!

Meri naughtinnocent!!
Yeh itna acha tha!

ANd ur talking about boring!! -.-

Haye pehli baat

thank u sooo muchh for wiritng this for me!
Moreover thank u muchh more for staying up late and writing this!
meri jaan i can never stop thanking u enough

AB back to the OS

Tooo sweeettt

Hehe My Swayu is tooo cuteee!!
sooo cutee!!
AUr shary niceee!!

haye twist pe twist!
Meri jagah le mat!! I AM THE TWIST QUEEN😡

Jokign!! 😆

Achaaa!

Chal ab gussa na ho!

Loved the os sooo much!

woh cute moments!

hayeee!!!

Love u much much moreee !!

THANKS for writing it once again!!

thank u thank u!!

Am sooo sowwie for commenting late

Soo sowwiee

Plz maaf karde *pouts*

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Ann Louis

@Anaya13

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

I read it!!! Gosssh it was like sooo cute!!!! My my ammi u write sooo well!!!! The story was just SOOO gaaah so adorable!!!! And they were so cute together!!! Cute and romantic perfect!!!!!. And the BF was SOOO cute!!! Okay everything in this story cute! Yes am over using the word cute but whatever!!!!!! 🤣 , and guy getting angry over the girl 😳For not taking care of herself

Love it ur a awesome writer ammi!!!🤗

Edited by Anaya13 - 11 years ago

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@Incorrect

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

heyys nut

u wud very well know how wud i react after reading ua title

oh goshh😆

the concept was too gud and lovely

the caring mother and super caring boyfriend

loved the cute conversations between the both

gf & bf they seem to be a cute couple

it was gud to c the gal having a enormous faith in their love

the trust between both of them the love was very well written

i liked the part where the boy was angry on the gal for not taking care of herself it was sweet

all in all a sweet os

p.s i know m a bit laye n u know y m late

love

your devi😆

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Aru

@Aru_A

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Awww...!!!!

Oh teri kiii!!!!

Hayyyeee...

kitnaaa zyyyaada PYYYAAARRRA OS...

haayyyeee...

i'mm so glad i got to read this...

and the whole manaofying thing...awww...

aur kisses to bas... ;) :P

honestly saying, when the cancer thing came in, i actually got scared, and i actually smiled in relief when i found out that the report was wrong...

ohhh...this was ssuuuppperrr cuttteees n awww...\oh i can't stop the awww...

just one thing, a bit language refining. coz it gets difficult to understand sentences without the full-stops(periods) u know. just this one thing, maybe coz u were in half sleep, thats why it turned out this wayy...but honestly...this was so so so so so so so so so so swwweeet and cuutttee...

#HospitalRomance ;)

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Hey Mansi
I know I am late
But its better late than never
Coming to the os
It was vei sweet
The naughtiness,cuteness,love,fight
Everything was justified cutely
Gosh the exchange of reports
And then the way she started laughing wen he said he wl leave her :P
Vei cute
Keep it up.
Loved reading it.