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Posted: 11 years ago
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A girl was there sleeping in the hospital her mother and her best friend were sitting there waiting for her to wakeup slowly slowly that girl open her eyes and looked at them the two most important persons of her life in tension that when will she wake as soon as she wakeup her mom hugged her and started crying and said"how are u??how all these happened??esa to kya stress hogaya that u fainted??"
"mom chill see i am completely fine no"said the girl sitting on the bed
"ya i can see that"answered her mom breaking the hug
"no problem it will be ok in sometime"said the girl
As her mom was going to argue more her cell rang she pick up her call "bt i cant...ok i will be there in sometime..bt i will go after doing sign"she said on call.
"beta i gotta go but i will be here in sometime"said her mom holding her hands
"mom dont worry i can stay here alone"
"alone kyu??I am here you dont worry aunty you go to office work is also important"said her best friend
"thank you so much beta You are here so I know that she will be fine..ok chalo m going bye"said her mom bidding bye to them and went for her work
As soon as she left there was a pin drop silence for a minute or two
"are you mad at me"asked the girl to the boy
"no why should i be mad at u???do I have that right???whom am I to u just next to nothing??"said the boy
"opps it seems like somebody is in bad mood...look here...look here...i said look here"said the girl finally making the boy look at her
"I am sorry please forgive me...please...pretty please"said the girl pleading at the same time maintainig the cuet face
"Dont make those faces"said the boy controlling himself hard not to forgive her so easily
"Then Please Forgive me you know na u r very important for me and i cant like it when u r angry with me"said the girl holding his hand as he was sitting beside her on the table but he immediately removed his hand from her grip stand up and turned around and said"do u think I like it very much to see u like this i hate it the most,I told you dont take too much stress of exams but you havent listen to me and u will never listen to me after all I am not important for you"
while he was saying all this the girl was crying silent tears were flowing down through her eyes.He heard a sob and turned around and see that her eyes were red and she was crying immediately he feel the pain she felt when he said that he is not important for her and he realised his mistake immediately he went to her sit on her bed and cupped her faceand rubbed the tears which were flowing down through her eyes and then hugged her and rubbed her back in a circular motion she also hugged him it was the most she needed it now a tight hug
"Shhshhh..sshh..stop crying am sorry"he said and then broke the hug and again cupped her face
"I am sorry its just that i was worried about you so I said all this I know Iam so stupid,so idiot,so.."he saterted saying all rubbish about himself but he was stopped by a peck which so turn in to passionate kiss from a gentle one both desires were raging around as soon as there lips meet they felt a sparkle in them,the kiss was going on for they even dont know what time both of them were not ready to break the kiss it was there 1st kiss atlast they broke it due to lack of breathe.
"Dont u dare...sa...say a word against my best friend cum boyfriend"she said catching her breath as they broke the kiss smiling at him seeing that smile on her face he also smiled he was happy with the fact that she was happy and bit better then before.
"If u would treat me like this whenever i speak word against me then i would always say like this"he said smiling at her and pecking her cheeks
"who said if u do bad mouthing about urself then only I will treat u like this"she said winking at him
"Dont u think u r becoming too naughty now a days"said he putting his hands on her waist
"ab wat can i do in that if person is like u then feelings become uncontrolable"she said putting her hands on his neck.
"bohat hogaya now its time to have some soup so that u can have medicine and then u become super fit and fine"he said removing her hands from his neck and moving towards the side table where the soup was kept
"eww u know na i dont like it...it tastes so yuck"she said to him to stop him
"no u have to eat shutup and eat this"he said making her shut and feeding her a spoon of soup in response as she gulped the soup she started making faces saying him she doesnt like it.
"dont..plzz dont make such faces and eat it,its for ur benifit only"said so he started making her drink all the soup by explaing her the benifits of the soup
atlast by arguing and manofing her he make her drink the whole soup and then he also made her eat her medicines although in that also she was arguing but he made her eat it
Soon it was night and her mom came it become a routine for 2 days her mom would come at night and whole day she was with her best friend cum boyfriend on the 3 rd day she was going to discharge but at night only she fainted and remained like that for 2 or 3 hours as her bf had gone for some work which cannot be postponed and her mom was late due to work after sometime the nurse came and see her in this conditon blood bottles were given to her,whole night her bf and mom were with her.
Next day her tests were taken out and it was evening when the reports were going to come
"Baby will u miss me if something happens to me"she said to him as he was sitting besides her and calming her down
"this is the 6th time u r asking me this question in last 1 hour"he said
"but mai kya karu mujhe bohat tension ho rahi hai what if something big happens to me??what if due to that i d..."said she getting hyper but she shushed her and said"esa kuch nai hoga just chill everything will be normal"
"but..."???
"if u trust me then no IF's n BUT's ok???"he said cupping her face in response she hugged him tightly they broke the hug as the door was knocked
"yes come in"he said and the nurse came in with reports handling over to them and went as he was going to open the reports she snatched that reports from him and opened it and what she saw left her bewildered as in report it was mentioned that she was having cancer seeing that she fainted he looked at her and got worried seeing her like this as soon as he was going to going to read the report the nurse came in and said sorry to them as the reports were exchanged hearing that she woke up and snatched that report from her and opened it in quick this time checking her name and she saw she was nt having any disease and then there was a 100 walts smile on her face in excitment she started throwing her hands in air but as the needles were attached of glucose bottle it broke in her nerves
Soon doctor gathered and he was much worried then before he was waiting outside when doctor came out and said"she is fine but she should be careful""thank u doctor"he said and went inside with angry face.
As soon as he entered he saw her holding her hears with left hand as her right hand was not able to move and she said"I am sorry..now this thing wont happen"
"everytime you say like this and again u do sometime bad to u"he said genuially moving besides her and sitting on the table
"But this is the last time paka"she said making a cuet puppy face
"no this time I am not going to forgive live the way u want to live as now i will not be in ur life...yes u heard it right I cant see u like this and u never take care of urself so its better that I leave ur life"he said and started moving towardsthe door but he stopped and turned around and looked at her who was laughing like manaic he couldnt help it but he also started laughing seeing her like this
"Gosh u girl arent u scared that I will leave u"he said closing the door and sitting on the bed besides her and also making her sit
"Nope because I know U wont ever leave me"she said taking his hands in hers
"and why do u think so??"he said kissing her hands
"coz I know that u love me and u wont leave me"she said looking in to his eyes
"who said that I dont"he said broking the eye contact with her and looking at thier hands
"U do"
"I dont"
"U do"
"I dont"
"Ok fine You dont love me"she said taking her hand sout from his grip and looking side ways
"no I love you and u r right I wont ever leave"he said making her face him and cupping her face with a genuial smile
"I knew that I am always right"she said holding his hands which were cupping her face and smiling.
"I love u ka answer I m right nai hota"he said with a pout
"to kya hota hai"she asked as if she doesnt knew what he mean
"bolona"he said in a pleading way.
"I love u"she said intensively looking in to his eyes with love.
"I love u too meri jaan"he said looking in to he eyes with the same intense and love which was in her eyes
Slowly slowly he came forward and started teasing her senses by giving her wet kisses just besides her and then moving side ways kissing her cheeks,nose,forehead side neck at last she couldnt control and she started kissing him on his lips their lips moulded togehter and started moving in sinc both were feeling complete in each and every senses he begged for entry in her mouth atlast she open her mouth and he entered in her mouth exploring each and every corner of her mouth at last they broke the kiss due to lack of breathe and hugged eachother
Being hospitalised is very bad feeling but if someone have boyfriend like this then it becomes benificial to be hospitalised
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Edited by Mansi98 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
So guys how was it??😃
hope u like it😊
This was for u diya
Happy birthday!!!
n also its written in halfsleep
so it must be boring
do give ur reviews will be waiting😃
n comment BIG😃
For further PMs add Mansi_PMs
Love
Mansi😊
Edited by Mansi98 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Unres
*faint * running in happiness gosh *i m dead*
Ohh my bff its was so cute
Cute 'cute' toh puppy koh kehte *swayam's dialogue* 😎 bt such cute n sweet os i hav never read
The gal totaly seems u as u r d one who ur mom n i need to pamper n care bt i love dat
Awwie d gal is so naughty i loved all dialogue of it
I can't "awsm ,superb, or grt job" dey will be too small for dis os

I jst can say i feeling very happy after reading ur os at mrng i was feeling low bt now i smiling like idiot its ahh !!so sweet os

U made my day bff .
Its true agar aesa bf ho toh mei toh whole lyf hospitalised hone ke liye tyaar hu 😳

P.s. I m first yaay!! Finnaaly after loong wait

Love u my bff 🤗
Edited by -Snowflakes- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Wao mans
It was so amazng
So emotional n romantic
D kiss
N dat cancer drama haha
Tat girl seem to b u
Anyways
Luvd it yaar
Gud work
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
heyyy mansii😊

i loved it yaar

it so sweet

cute

there is no specific couples but it had its own charm...

i was scared at first, as what is going to happen?

hospitals always scared me...so

hmmm

the boyfriend,he is so sweet😳

so much understanding😳

so much love😳

at first i thought he is her best friend, but that kiss shocked me😲

that was an awesome scene👏

u did a fantastic job there👏

i loved that portion👏

i loved that cancer thing,that most scared me...

but finally u give me relief

then the boy and girl's talk was so cute,

their love is so strong so no one can break it

end so sweet

so as always it was an awesome os



keep writing

keep updating

im waiting to read


sooo

with lots of love

keechu






Edited by keechu91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Romance In Hospital...Sachhi mein awesome tha...
I could only imagine SwaRon in this..
And that Cancer wala part...lolzz...wo report padh k behosh ho gyi nd jb pata chala ki report xchange ho gya h to turant uth gyi...hehehehe
Nd The Kiss...
Sb kuch cute tha...
Thanx fr pm...nai to main miss kr deti itna awesome os...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow aswom os...

i gessus ye ladki ap hi ho...

nd hosital me ye karte ha...

all in one gud os...

do write more..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
cute os
aww so awasome bf
nadat cancer was was hahahah 😆
n atlast that kiss
waise tesion for studiea dat was 😆 for me u kw
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awweee mansi
i had the widdest grin possible
while reading this...😃

first i thought u will make them
fall in love with each other in the hospital😛

then the sudden kiss...haaawww😉

then i found
lo karlo baat ye dono to already accelerated
motion mein hi hai...😆

swayam and sharon realtionship was so cute (i knw it
was not swaron but still i imagined them)

n i loved this swayam(i love all kinds of swayam)😉

love , ani
Edited by flyinghigh_ani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is the.first time

I am reading something like this

Nice that u haven't specified any couple

I love the hospital romance

Its like really really nice

And I loved that the girls keeps on fainting

Reminds me of vrushika

Tnx for pm

Kepp writting like this

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