mg os Anjana Rastaa.. part 1,2,3 on page 1 note on page 4

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please fast fast run run and thud not so easy
to run away from me say a man near 28 pointed his gun
to other man who are shaking l;ike leaf he just want to say
something but thud next moment that man fail on pool of blood
his life less body dam mummer that man called out bas*** in frustration
he is so near to know about truth dam again they success in their mission dam


he called someone and say dead that man is dead , i am going to that place
yes i am not obey your so called order and i am going on that place did you hear me he just cut the called and dialed another number yes u come in xyz building in 5 min mr. chopra get it dam i don't care that how u come there but u have only 5 min to reach there


after 5 min tall handsome man waiting for someone his eyes ear taking small sound and moment just than someone say Inspector Adi chopra reporting sir next order sir


man - mr aditya i am going inside don't interfere just lesion i am going as customer and u have to watch here and give me knowledge about every single person entry and exit get it this blue tooth it connect us with each other get it


adi but sir its danger


man - he just cut him ager danger se darta to ye MAAN SINGH KUHRANA police ki noukari join hi nahi karta get it


now take your position and if u want smoke than smoke it but u have to wake up full night get it adi nodded in yes and mummer yes robot singh khurana


maan u say something


adi nodded in no in fear


maan just pull out his in shirt make rincle on shirt just mess his hair entered in building with silly smile like a spoil birt who come there for just fun


he entered in hotel no one hotel of Mumbai may be daily tun over in lakhs each and everything is there sharab se lake shabab tak


maan know he took big risk he have to hide his identity for next one hour because his department need that much time to send him back up
and he have to move fastly so he observed all placed from which force can entered his mind already start to work on it adi called him robot but yes maan brain like machine just perfect in all sense maan eyes caught something odd a girl in red dress other man dragging her like she lost all her sense but what caught maan eyes is mark on that girl hand like they are tightly tied maan feel something fishy maan just start to follow them


here outside adi also saw that couple and mummer in phone sir girl in red dress with man not look normal maan ans just hu i am following them i will send sms where they are going


that man stop on floor 1 in front of room no 123 that man drag that red dress girl in room and shut the door now maan is fix how he will entered


but today god want to help maan there a waiter coming with trolly to that room itself maan just come in action and took slow soundless step and next moment that waiter laying on floor and lost his hosh maan just pull him and lock him wash room after took off his cloth now maan entered in room 123 as waiter




when maan entered in room he set on fire that man only in his UNDER GAR***** and that again without any hosh laying on bed like log her face is other side so he cant see her face she lying like kuch khaber hi nahi hai kisi cheej ki


maan control his anger and say room service sir


that man nodded in yes and say with attitude don't disturbed me for next few hour get it and i ask that u brought na


maan just nodded in yes and give it it is cigarette packet along with bear bottle and red satin cloth maan get idea that what this man up-to he want to brake his face but he have to took pas-ions he just nodded in yes


maan once look in room like some camera or something but there is nothing and maan come in action and he just hit that man down and poor fellow cried in pain and fail on ground next few punch and that nawab just lost his hosh


maan went near bed and try to wake up that girl but no response he turn her face to his side and froze in his place so beautiful face like fairy fair skin like Perl beautiful feature robot singh khurana stone heart start to beep like ...



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Part 2




maan once look in room like some camera or something but there is nothing and maan come in action and he just hit that man down and poor fellow cried in pain and fail on ground next few punch and that nawab just lost his hosh


maan went near bed and try to wake up that girl but no response he turn her face to his side and froze in his place so beautiful face like fairy fair skin like Perl beautiful feature robot singh khurana stone heart start to beep like ...


a painful l moan come from that girl mouth and maan come out from his la la land he scold himself on duty what are he doing but she looking so small when he saw her closely she again moan in pain and blood stain on bed take maan attention


maan look neetaly and his eyes winded in shock it its may be she get period but shje is all behosh maan just took some water and spread on her face and she start to get hosh


she mummer please chod do please ma ...bacho ma


she slowly open her eyes and try to adjust her view and handsome face come front of her she get scared and try to wake up but cried in pain and look down get shock of her life she get her period so many emotion come in her face scared , embresed , shy she want to hide herself she just cover herself with cover and maan get her mind he turn and give his back to him shut he mummer isese acha to goli chalana hai he also feel embreseed first all this rade tension upon that this girl


at last maan broke silence ,he know for her it was hard and she scared with him maan say with low voice don't scared i am undercover cop (police ) geet took deep sine and mummer wo meri bag i need i need maan get her unsaid word and try to serch he found it near sofa he put near bed and went to galary so she ...


after some time he hear soft voice suniye


maan turn around and agian blow with her beauty now she is in salwar and before they talk maan found red dot on her shoulder it s gun shot dot he just run to her and pull her down she fall on ground with shock and bullet touch near vase and it broke with sound




geet shake with fear maan took her in hug and say softly its ok u are safe u are safe


next he hold her till she get normal she so much scared last few hour change her life and its look like nighmear to her


other side poor adi all confused voice of girl maan singh khurana ki soft and caring voice he want to ask so many question but he scared with maan reaction but when he hear gun voice he ask r u ok sir please ans me


maan ans adi i am coming out of hotel for moment ok i have a girl with me wait for me there


maan just say her to cover her face and both come out from hotel where adi waiting for them


maan just come to adi adi want to ask so many question but keep quite



maan - inspector adi please took add from miss and please send her home with police protection adi nodded in yes



maan - send him some image ye image dekh lo main plan bhi diya hai how all force entered in hotel




maan turn to geet and say u are in right hand they will send u safely home ok


geet who want to say something but keep quit she don't want to go away us hug main jaise kuch tha jo geet ko badal gaya


maan took some step to go


adi - wo apka intazar kar rahi hogi


maan - in angry tone adi duty first


adi - today is Bhai bhooj please i will go inside u go for while


maan - took deep breath mr aditya she is sis of Msk and she know police officer don't have any festival or chutti so ...For police 24 hour on duty and maan just went to hotel

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Part 3


maan - in angry tone adi duty first


adi - today is Bhai bhooj please i will go inside u go for while


maan - took deep breath mr aditya she is sis of Msk and she know police officer don't have any festival or chutti so ...For police 24 hour on duty and maan went to hotel


adi weep his tear he know how is his sir is geet looking the way where maan go she want to say something same time adi get call and he went littel fer to take call and when he come back that girl geet handa gaayab from there


adi serch her near hotel but she gaayb like she is not there adi called maan and say what happen maan want to shout on adi but he control himself and he ask how much time left for froce come adi say more 10 min maan say hu ok i will come out here i capture all way in my mobile


after few min maan come out and found adi on floor all behosh someone hit him on his head


maan try to wake up him but no use maan bend littel down to pull adi sam e time someone hit him on his head and maan cried in pian and he lost his hosh before he lost his hosh he saw women figour


after some time maan get his hosh and found himself all tied with chair and some people around him he try to open his hand but it is so tight same time he hear a voice same voice that girl maan look to her and froze


tic tic maan sing khurana itana aasan nahi hai she standing in short and top and sigar in mouth and pointed gun to him


maan - u ,u


geet - yes its geet Handa u want to trap my boss i trap u and your joker wo that cop
so how was that


maan give angry glare to him and ask in cold tone where is aditya kya kiya uske sath


geet - oh mr msk hold hold take breath mara nahi hai bahi tak usko


maan hissed miss handaaa just once touch him than i will show how bones will brake


next second maan get tight slap from geet blood come from lips of maan his eyes turn blood red ...he want to broke all things he give angry glare to her


she bend littel and mummer ye haat dikate nazuk hai lakin utane najuk nahi hai get it and stay clam till my boss give me next order get it she took maan hair in her hand pull it hard say in cold voice


maan control his all emotions he dont want to give chance to enemy he somewhere hurt and shock girl who look so innocent in room her reality like this but he is cop he know how people have two face and he tense for adi he want him safe and good his mind start to work like robot he look in room there are 3 people along with this girl after few second he fainted pretend that he fainted


geet - what the hell come here fast brought water hurry up she shout angryly


she sprinkle some water on his face but he don't get hosh other man mam we need to open his hand and leg it turn cold


geet na we can not took that risk he is bluddy cop get it


man - but mam boss order we hace to put him alive and safe


geet - wahi to nahi to isko kab ka shoot kiya hota main ye boss ko bhi ab ye idiot kab hosh main aayega pata nahi try once again dam

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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me thud thud thud...👍🏼
Mind blowing update...👏


Maan Singh Khurana... Back in action...

Awesome update... Maan saving the girl... after seeing her

face... what happened to maan...❓
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Mahi lekin is OS ka baaki ka part kaha hai
Edited by kamnagupta7 - 10 years ago
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Nice ...waiting for d nxt..
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hi mahi
nice start
keep some name of the story
maan as inspector ..
geet in trouble ..
poor she
thank u for new story
waiting for next
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wonderful os dear loved it👏

HAPPY DIWALI😃
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Congrats on the OS! Well written! superb intense update! Maan saves her! update soon

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