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Archana03

@Archana03

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#491

Hi anithu... i am new to dis forum... ur story is so gud and u take the story in a different way... this karthik and raji r so nice

Congrats for ur 25 the part...

Waiting for ur next update...

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#492

Originally posted by: Archana03
Hi anithu... i am new to dis forum... ur story is so gud and u take the story in a different way... this karthik and raji r so nice

Congrats for ur 25 the part...

Waiting for ur next update...

Welcome to office forum Archana..Thanks for your lovable comment..

Next update tomorrow..

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Archana03

@Archana03

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#493

wow dats nice anithu.. eagerly waiting for the update...
Then y no updates for endrendrum kaadhal..

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Smiles-20

@Smiles-20

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#494

Congrats on your 25th part Anitha! Enjoying the story a lot with KVRL together and Kaushik as the baddie.

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Archana03

@Archana03

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#495

Is der any update during Diwali anithu?

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#496

Originally posted by: Archana03
wow dats nice anithu.. eagerly waiting for the update...
Then y no updates for endrendrum kaadhal..

I stopped it Archana..and want to combine in this story...adhaan

I will update tomorrow as held up with Diwali shopping ma

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#497

Episode 27

Vichu,Karthik,Raji,Vishnu,Lakshmi and Susan in Conference Room..

Vichu:Susan..Where is Koushik.

Susan:Sir.He is in Client Escalation Call.He told me he has dropped you a mail morning.

Vichu:Ok Fine.Still i havent checked my mail.You people aware why this meeting??

Susan:No Sir..

Vichu:Susan.What the hell is happening in Office.I hear idiotic controversies between your team mates..This is the way you handle the entire team Susan??

Susan:Sir.I am sorry for what happened.But i thought of informing you.I was struck with back to back meeting.

Vichu:Karthik and Raji..You both are well educated..Behave as an adult..Is this the way you both behave in office??

Karthik:Sir it is not my fault..

Raji:Sir Karthik was too childish..

Karthik stares at her..

Vichu:Susan..Take Vishnu and lakshmi out..I want to discuss certain things to karthik and Raji alone..I will call you in next one hour..

Susan:Sure Sir.

Karthik:We are sorry sir..

Vichu:You people are in love???

Raji is shocked..

Raji:Appidi ellam ilaa Sir..

Karthik:Ennakum appidi oru thoughtae ilaa Sir.

Vichu:Fine.This is the last warning for you both.I normally never give any chances as i want things to be Perfect.Since in this one month i am seeing you both working hard and your innovations in things.Keep it up.But dont be childish like this.Whatever things are..Sort it out or fight outside the office.Is that clear to you both??

Raji and Karthik in Chorous:Sure Sir..

Vichu:Send Susan to my room..

Raji:Okie Sir..

Lakshmi and Raji in cubicle..

Raji:Arivunu onnu irukaa ivanukku.Chai..namakkunu vandhirukaan paaru.

Lakshmi:Yennadi achu.

Raji:Andha Angry bird a dhaan solren..

Lakshmi:yaaru karthik a..

Raji:Vera yaaru.avanae dhaan..

Lakshmi:Hei..raji..avan kovathaa dhaan nee pakuraa.But avan oru perfect anaa aludee.Appidi irukravangalukku dhaan kovam romba varumnu enga amma solluvaanga..

Raji:Avan panni vechirukura velayaa paaru..

Lakshmi:Enna pannan..

Raji:Namma Office Communicator la irundhu Karthik enna Unfriend pannirukaan..Loosu paiyan..

Lakshmi burst into laughter..

Raji:Enna ellipu unnaku

Lakshmi:Avan unfriend pannanu unnaku eppidi theiryum

Raji:Paaru message pannirukaan.."You are not in my friend list..I am frustrated with you..Good Bye nnu message panniukaan"

Lakshmi:Unga rendu perukkum 9STD padikuraa Girl and Boy nnu nenappu..Shabaa..Satyamaa eppidi oru personalities naan eppodhaan pakuren..

Raji:En mela dhaan thappunu solriya nee..

Lakshmi:Ilaa..neenga rendu perum loosunu solren..

Vishnu:lakshmi...sema dhaan poo..

Raji:Neengaluma vishnu..

Vishnu:Pinna enna raji..whole office la unga rendu pera pathiyum dhaan pesuraanga.Ennaku oru unmaiyaa sollunga.

Raji:Enna kelunga.

Vishnu:Ungalukku Karthik a indha office la join panradhuku minnadiyae theiryuma.

Raji:Adhellam onnum ilaa Vishnu.Just oru one month a dhaan

Vishnu:Lakshmi..Ennaku karthik a nalla theiryum.Avan oru ponnu kittayum eppidi attached a irundhum pathadhilla..Appram eppidi veriagiyum pathadhilaa..Ennaku Karthik aa chinna vayasula irundhu theriyum

Lakshmi:Raji..Nee koncham porumaiya irundhirukanam

Vishnu:Office communicator la Raji a unfriend pannitu..eppo Raji enna block pannitanu polambi thalraan karthik..

Raji:Avan dhaan thappu Vishnu..

Vishnu:Avan kovakaran..kovathila enna panranu theriyadhu.But Raji naan perumaiya solluvan.Avana madiri oru Human being neenga pakkavae mudiyadhu.Indha kalathilaa oru ponna patha..vazhiraa ambalangaa dhaan adigam..But karthik nermaiyana vaan..Straight a ellathayum face panravan..Avanoda Gunathukku friends romba avanukku ilaa.Anaa avaanaa purichukitta..avan dhaan best..

Raji listens everything silently..

Raji:Susan enna meet panna sonnanga..Namma appram pesalam..Bye Vishnu and lakshmi..

Lakshmi:Idhungala vechukittu namaa ennadhaan panradhu..

Vishnu:Freea vidunga Lakshmi..One week kulla they will start their fight again and live in their own world..haha..

Lakshmi:Appidi siricha

Vishnu:Onnum illayae..Seri coffee kudikka poren..neenga varengala..

Lakshmi:No Vishnu..I have meeting..will catch you later..bye for now..

Vishnu:Okie Lakshmi..

Karthik and Vishnu in canteen..

Vishnu:Hi Mr.Karthik..

Karthik:Ennada nakkala..

Vishnu:Ella Sir..vikkal..

Karthik Stares at him..

Vishnu:Dei feel pannadhaa daa..Raji yae vandhu pesuvaa paaru..

Karthik:Ava mathaa ponunga madiri illada..She cannot face problem..Sonna puriyamatengudhu..

Vishnu:Idhu unnaku koncham over a ilaa..

Karthik:Enna Solra..

Vishnu:Nee edhukku Raji ooda Body Guard madiri nadandhukura..

Karthik:Because She is different..

Vishnu:Enaa different..Mathaa ponnunga thappanavanganu solriyaa..

Karthik:Naan appidi sollala..Raji innocent ana ponnu..She needs someone to guide her to be bold , to carry herself..to become matured..Avaloda innocent ennaku romba pidichirukku..

Vishnu:Seri...

Karthik:Enna Sori..avalukku endhaa problem vandhalum..naan vandhu nipen..adhu neeya irundhalum Seri..Vettuven..

Vishnu:Ennadhu vettuviyaa..Dei..ennadaa loosu madiri pesuraa..

Karthik:Naan thelivaa dhaan pesuren..Ennaku ava melaa nee solramadiri love ellam ilaa..

Vishnu:Nambiten..

Karthik:Nee nambunalum..nambelanalam..adhaan unmai..

Vishnu:Shabaa..Mudiyala..Appidi enaa raji kku problem nnu solraa nee..

Karthik:Andha koushik dhaan..

Vishnu:Dei avaan casual a pesraan..Raji dhaan adaa migapadhuthi solraanga nnu ennaku thonudhu..

Karthik:Appo raji a mental nnu solriya..

Vishnu:Appidi sollala..Raji kku una thavira ellarum ketavanga..Ennamo problem irukuda..Paaru Ennakum Raji friend dhaan..Problem naa..namaa help pannuvom dhaan..Nee tension agadhaa..

Karthik:Nee solradhum rite dhaan..Raji kku edho past iruku daa..

Vishnu:Avanga sonaa ketupom..As usual nee avanga kooda pesu..

Karthik:Ava dhaan enkooda sanda potta..avaa realize panni pesatum..first..

Vishnu:Murugaa..

Karthik:Edhukku avara kupidra..

Vishnu:Nalla vandhu sendheenga daa..friends nnu..Eppidira same characterization ooda...

Karthik:Mudu nee..vaiyaa..

Lakshmi comes there running...

Vishnu:Enna achu lakshmi..

Lakshmi:Raji...unconsious agitta..Vishnu..

Karthik:Enna solreenga Lakshmi..Eppo Raji engaa..

Lakshmi:Namaa Cabin laa eppodhaan ukkaravechukittu vandhiruken..

Karthik:Vaanga polam..

Raji cries silently..

Karthik touches Raji shoulder..Raji is not replying..

Karthik:Enna achu raji..enna pannikittu irukaa..

Raji:Resignation letter type pannikitu iruken..

Karthik:Very good decision..Before that enna achu..nee enna panninanu sollu..

Raji:Kaushik enaa indha new release project ooda Deployment panna sonnaru...Naa correct dhaan pannen..Attach pannitu mail poten..Enaa thappu pennenae sollamaa..Ellaru minnadiyum..enaa romba kevalamaa..thittaru..Romba avamana pochu karthik..

Karthik:Nee enna loosaa Raji..

Vishnu:Dei medhuva pesu da..

Karthik:Face pannu raji..Namaa join panni just a month got over..eppidi thaan ivan thittnaa..ivaa thittanu sollaporiyaa..We have long ways to go in our field..If each IT Professional stops like you for these silly reason..then everyone can never acheive..Unnala acheive panna mudiyum..Naan unkooda irupen..kadasivariakkum..Life laa nerayaa sadikkanum..Enaa solraa..

Raji:Thanks karthik..

Karthik:Nee poi..Kaushik communicator la message pannu..

Raji:Ennanu pannanum..

Karthik:Can i have your 5 mins nnu sollu..avan kitta..naan enna thappu panenu sollunga..next time i wont repeat nnu message pannu..Avan ketavanavae irundhalum..nee eppidi ping panniyum avan harsh a behave panna..We will report to Susan..

Raji:Susan eppavum koushik ku dhaan support panraanga..

Karthik:Appo Vishwanathan Sir kitta sollalam..Dont worry Raji..Life la eppavum be Positive..Naan iruken..Seriya..

Raji:Sorry Karthik..

Karthik:Edhukku..

Raji:Unnaa thitunen laa..Appram curd ellam kotnenlaa..

Karthik:Nanumdhaan..

KR Smiles..

Vishnu:Hello nangalum irukom..

Karthik:Nee unnaku coffee venumnu sonniyae..Lakshmi a kuttikittu poyaen..We have some work here..

Lakshmi:Super bulb vishnu namakku..vaa pogalam..

Vishnu:oru second kooda naanga iruka matom..Ungaa smiling and kadala sessiona arambichukoonga..

Raji:Thanks karthik..

Karthik:Edhukku..

Raji:Unnoda motivation kku..

Karthik:My Pleasure..

Karthik(Mind Voice):Raji..nee oru devadaaa...Unnoda appavithanamana Sirrippu..unnoda kural...unnoda adakamana paarvaa..nee kandippa..nee dhaan...ennakagavae vandhaa oru devadaa..Pakalam namaa life laa ennadhaan nadakudhunu..

Raji:Karthik enna yoskirura..

Karthik:Onnum ilaa.Seri andhaa kaushik kku nee send panna mail a kammi papom..

Screen Freezes..

Precap:

Susan blast Raji in the conference room..before all the Team leaders and karthik records everything..

Karthik and Raji struck in rain..

Wait for a wonderful romantic and interesting sequence on what Karthik does..

Edited by anithu - 10 years ago

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Gayathri30

@Gayathri30

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#498

Thanks for the update 😊

Loved Vichu sir telling them off, but also giving them a second chance, very different here his character😊

Karthik🤣 him un friending raji 🤣 too jokes, then feels Raji blocked him, the characterisation for both Karthik and Raji in this completely different and unique, love their characters.

Vishnu and Lakshmi always getting semma bulb 😆but there concern for each other the friendship bond is awesome, Vishnu realising Raji has a past and something happened, shows the understanding and friendship he has with Raji was very nice to see... Thank you

Lastla Raji deciding to quit and Karthik supporting her was really nice... next update friday ok shall wait till friday to read the romantic update :) 😊

thanks for the update