ISHRA FF NEW* : Bol do agar tumhe pyaar hone lagee PART 2 UPDATED **

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

awww that was to sweet
n ishra hug was mind blowing
u definitely have to continue
n do pm m when u r updating
title its one of my fev song

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Sunita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

beautiful updatee!! loved it completely!

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

khulam khula romance...awww
loved it...
pls continue and pm me if possible

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Lovely start Deepika..loved the way Ishu hugged Raman in front of the family..😳😳 Pls update soon😃

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yhmfever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Superb !! Hell yea you should continue !!!
Pls pm me if possible !!
thank you !
Loved it !

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dkapi1

@dkapi1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Hello everyone :D Sabse pehle Thankyou so soo much for all the appreciation and likes for my FF 🤗🤗I'm really sorry as I couldn't reply to all of your comments but that doesn't mean I didn't read them! I read all of em and loved them soo much ❤️ Thanks a ton for reading my work 😃🤗

Today's update is a mess as I didn't like Raman getting hurt from yesterday's episode! Damn Ishita! How can she be so ignorant of Raman's feelings with all this Mani Drama! 😡I seriously hope that this mani jaap ends soon as this is getting too far and too much to handle! I just hate it when he cries 😭 so I guess all my frustration has come out this way 😛 Apologies in advance for this writing peace but I promise to come back with a better one! 😊

The scene continues from yesterday, where Raman is asking her to sleep on the bed with him.

Ab mujhe aise hi ghurti jaogi ya sougi bhi?

Ishita finally came out of the shock...

Mein bed pe kaise... I mean apko to pasand ni hai na bed share karna..?

Well ab mein hi keh raha hu ki so jao .. and please yaar kal bohot kaam hai .. I need a proper sleep, so please do me a favour apna mu band karo, move your ass and go sleep on the bed!

Ishita was shocked by Raman's behaviour! She was a lil embarrassed as well because till date they haven't really talked liked this ... like open and not shy! Well he certainly wasn't!

Err right??

Saying that she started moving towards their bed. She lied down to the very end right side of the bed in a very narrow space. Raman was observing the way she moved towards his oops correction their bed and the way she was sleeping.. he couldn't control any more and a chuckle escaped from him. Ishita was now annoyed

What's so funny Raman? Aj apki tabiyat to theek hai na?

Taking his place on the bed he lied on the left side of the bed.

Ab kya hua bolo na hua kya pehle to poora din bahar kahi gumshuda the fir achanak se prakat hue and ab mood ek dum different hai apka! Pata hai Raman I can never understand you...

After a small pause, he looked into Ishita's direction.. Ishita could guess that he needed to talk something very important and urgent but what?

Ishita?

Hmm

Ek baat poochun?

Hmm poocho

Tum kya hamesha se aise hi soti ho?

Aise matlab kaise?

Aise jaise abhi soyi ho melon door! Daroo mat mujhe tumme koi interest nahi hai kahi tension ke chakkar mein raat ko apni peeth na todh lena! Pata chale fir se tumhare clinic jake daant ukhadne padenge tumhare behalf par...

Uurghhh Raman aap kya kabhi serious ni ho sakte? Jab dekho betuki baatein!

Raat bohot ho ri hai... Good Night! Saying that Raman switched off the side lamp and went to sleep. After what Ishita just said, his mind started playing their fight from the morning; where Ishita said she is nothing to him then Ruhi's mother! That statement of hers kept playing in his mind like a loop. He was hurt, yes he didn't show it on his face but he has been thinking about it all day and today he realised that Ishita only takes him as Ruhi's papa only and not as her husband... This was very painful but he won't let her see him suffering... He had thought about it all day and he came up with a conclusion that he will now no longer have any sort of expectation from her side... He will only keep things to the point... The reason why he asked her to sleep on bed was that he didn't want her to keep sleeping on sofa as he doesn't want to be the reason of any of her pains and discomforts... She should lead a carefree and healthy life... she had already sacrificed her life for Ruhi and married him who she hated before... He could do this much for her and he had promised himself that he will stay in his limits. The reason he joked about the bed thing was that he didn't want her to get uncomfortable on bed and indirectly to lighten the situation up, he said he was not at all interested in her! Which was a total lie!! But he has to get a grip on his feelings! Baad mein dard mein tadpe isse accha hai ki abhi se apne ap ko sambhal lu...

Ishita on the other hand couldn't get any sleep at all... She was happy, excited, nervous and a little bit scared of all the happenings from the day... She was very happy that Raman was now giving her the right of his wife and sharing the bed together was a big step in their relationship... The moment Raman asked her to sleep on bed with him had made her very excited, happy and somewhat Nervous as to what might happen later the night... She was scared to lose him, it may sound weird to talk about losing him at this point where they are taking things forward in this relationship yet there was something in her heart that kept telling her that something was not right! But what could it be? Raman ko samajhna kyu mushkil ho jata hai kabhi kabar... abhi thodi der pehle ki hi baat dekhlo.. mujhe lag ki ab hum finally aage badh rahe hai lekin is Raavan Kumar ne waha par apne stupid silly baton se sab kharab kar dia... Par patani kyu mujhe aise lag ra hai that Raman has changed ... dunno why but he's a little different! Shayad mein hi kuch zyada soch ri hungi... mujhe so jana chahiye warna faltu mein hi kuch b sochti rahungi!

At Mihir's place

Shagun hadn't come out of her room all day after the return from Ashok's place!

Mihika knew the reason.. Well it was all her plan to show Shagun Ashok's true colours! Shanaya, one of her colleagues had told her that Ashok had planned a special day for her and she was excited about that! Mihika knew that it was the right time to unfold the truth... She had managed to first get into Ashok's apartment and one by one she managed to bribe the servants to leave Ashok's house for an hour or two... She tiptoed towards Ashok's room and yes he was shamelessly busy with her colleague. She loathed that sight! Without thinking for too long she closed the door of Ashok's room which was wide open before! Ashok thought it was one of his servants who shut the door and to be honest at that moment he didn't give a damn as to who did what all he wanted was pleasure! After that she came back to Mihir and Shagun's place...

If she had told Shagun the truth about Ashok she would have never been trusted, therefore, she came up with the whole INVITATION CARDS IDEA.

Finally, she was able to get Shagun out of the faade of true love non-sense from Ashok.. She did feel very bad doing this but it was important for Shagun's life and her self-respect!

Next Morning

At Bhalla's place

Ishita woke up and found the other side of the bed empty.

Lagta hai aj Raman jaldi uth gaye... Shayad office mein zyada kam ho... ek kaam karti hu inke lie jaldi se break fast banati hu and fir Ruhi ko uthake tayyar kar dungi.

She was about to leave, when Raman came out of the bathroom

Goodmorning Raman! She wished him with one of the most brightest smiles ever.

Morning! Raman said it with a smile.

Umm ye Raman ko kya ho gaya hai aaj no taane and no one liners! Chalo accha hai ek din kam se kam thoda sukuun milega she said that in her mind in a joking way...

Waise Raman aaj ap itni jaldi kaise uth gaye? She was ready for a one liner but nothing of that sort came her way!

Ishita, it's 8:30 am

Whaattt? Shit how can I be so late? Ruhi ko b tayyar karna hai and breakfast banana hai lunch b! Shit! Apne mujhe uthaya kyu nahi

Don't worry Ruhi ko tayyar kar dia tha meine and papa chodne gaye hai use school... breakfast and lunch Neelu se banwa dia tha...

Apne kyu takleef ki? Mujhe utha dia hota mein Ruhi ko tayyar kar deti!

Ruhi is my daughter also, and I have same responsibilities towards her as you! No big deal if I made her ready today! Chalo I got to go for office.. Have a good day!

Saying that he left from the house. Ishita was confused by his behaviour

Sab theek to hai na ... ye aaj koi taane nahi na hi koi one liners and na hi kud kud ... ye itne formally kyu baat kar rahe the.. kuch to gadbad hai!

She wanted to check if everything's okay with him and the way to do that was by texting him!

"Aap ne breakfast to theek se kia tha na?"

After a minute her phone beeped with a text saying

"Yes I did"

After seeing that message she couldn't help but text him again

"Raman apki tabiyat to theek hai?"

Her phone beeped with a text message

"Yes I am fine kyu?"

She replied

"Wo kya hai na aaj apke one liners ka break fast ni mila na that's why!:P"

Her phone beeped with another text message

"will ttyl as I'm a lil busy atm"

Ishita was now sure that something was definitely not right! She was getting restless...

I am really sorry for this update! I don't think any of this makes sense but this is what happens when I see Raman hurt and crying in the show! Ishita deserves something like this where she doesn't get any importance from Raman and realises what she's missing on!

But don't worry I wont bore you with this idea for another update I promise :P In the next update Ishita will realise what her mistake was and will try hard to manofy her hubby Mr Raavan Kumar bhalla :P xD

also in the next update you'll get to see Shagun's confrontation with Raman and his family and things will take a different route from there!

Thanks a lot for jheloing this bakwas and non-sense update but promise to come up with a better update next time. If you want PMs then please send me a buddy request otherwise it gets really hard to PM individually by going through the comments again and again. Sorry about that!

Please leave some feedback; be it good or bad J Also if you have any other ideas for this topic then feel free to tell and I'll try to incorporate them in my updates J

HAPPY DIWALI TO EVERYONE! J <3

Loads and loads of love

Deepika

Muaahhh :* :* :*

Edited by dkapi1 - 10 years ago