ISHRA FF NEW* : Bol do agar tumhe pyaar hone lagee PART 2 UPDATED **

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Hello everyone :D I'm back with a new fresh FF. This FF is a continuation from their fight scene but in my way! To be honest their fight is dragging far too much then needed so I thought why not write something along this story line to keep my frustration away on the current track in the serial ... In this FF I am not going to include any Romi-Sarika drama and yes Shagun is going to be a positive character 😛

character list

Ishita Raman Kumar BhallaRaman Kumar BhallaAbhimanyu RaghavShagun AroraMihika IyerMihir AroraOm Prakash BhallaToshi BhallaMr and Mrs IyerSimmiParam'Rinki
Romi

Boldo Agar Tumhe Pyaar Hone Lagee

Raman was now irritated and frustrated by Ishita's behaviour. Since yesterday, he's been trying his best to make things right but no matter what he does, his Jhansi Ki Rani has taken an oath to not to budge from screaming and shouting on him. Last night, he switched off her phone so that she could get a proper sleep, since all day she had been on her feet and the cherry on cake was his fake accident drama!

Kya yaar Raman, tujhe bhi to sochna chahiye tha na aisa jhoot bulwane se pehle! Isse accha to yehi hota ki mera accident ho jata kamsekam tab to ye mujhpe aise ni bhadakti... Ab aisa kya karu ki Jhansi ki rani ka gussa shant ho jaye!

Mihir's Place

Shagun's trying Ashok's number from the last twenty minutes and it's been busy... who the hell is he talking to for so long? Ise shaadi ke related important baat karni thi or ye pata ni kis ke sath itni der se baatein kar raha hai.. uff sari preparations mujhe hi handle karni padegi as Ashok ke pass to time hi ni hai.. After trying his no for one more time, she kept her phone away thinking, he's very busy and won't receive her call.

Usually everyone feel very excited and happy while doing their wedding preparations but with her it was a different story. She had been pretending to show the world that she was very excited and happy but only she knew how much she suffered. Not even once did Ashok helped in organising for their wedding functions, yes he did gave her cheques for the expenses but never did he care to ask her for any help nor did he try to arrange for at least one of the functions for their wedding. She didn't know if she even wanted to get married to him anymore... Feeling very low she closed her eyes and kept thinking of all the past events where Ashok used to pamper her soo much out of love and gave her soo much happiness... Pehle sab kitna accha tha to ab achanak se aisa kya ho gaya jo Ashok mujhse door door rehne laga hai? Kabhi kabar to aisa lagta hai jaise wo mere sath bilkul b khush nahi hai... [She was in deep thoughts when the door bell rang. Getting up from the sofa, she made her way to the hallway and opened the door]

Mihika: Hi Shagun! [She hugged Shagun]

Shagun felt better by having her company. She hugged her back and escorted her to the lounge room

Shagun: Mihika so good to see you but Mihir abhi tak wapis ni aya, aaj uski koi meeting hai shayad

Mihika: Haan wo Mihir ne bataya tha ki wo aaj late ho jaega. Wo kya hai na aaj meri jaldi chutti ho gayi to socha kyu na apke sath thoda time spend kar lu

Shagun was touched. After her divorce with Raman nobody had ever cared about her apart from Ashok. She was happy that she finally has someone in her life who cares for her including Mihir.

Shagun: That's so sweet of you. Ek kaam karte hai I'll cook something for you umm lemme think ki kya banau [Mihika interrupted]

Mihika: Arre ap hi hamesha mere lie banati rehti hai I wish I could cook to main apke lie kuch banati but I'm starting my cooking classes from next week. So sabse pehle apke lie hi kuch banaungi pakka and as for now hum bahar ja rahe hain...

Shagun: Bahar kidhar?

Mihika: Kya yaar Shagun apki wedding ko itna kam time reh gaya hai and humne abhi tak cards tak bhi nib ante... to meine socha aaj hum cards deke aate hain and uske baad late night movie show and dinner. Girls night only khoob maza ayega ;)

Shagun: Wow that sounds amazing but the only thing is that the cards are kept with Ashok

Mihika: Han to no problem na hum raste mein Ashok se pehle cards le lenge and fir wahi se aage nikal lenge. What say?

Shagun: That's a great Idea. Thanks a lot Mihika for doing so much for me.

Mihika: Shagun ap meri nanand cum friend ho so no need to thank or sorry.

Shagun hugged Mihika.

Chalo ab chalte hai as I'm very excited.

Ishita did not feel like going to work today so she asked one of her work mates to do her shift. She didn't even want to go out of the room.

On the other hand Raman was coming back from work by giving the responsibility to Mihir for handling the meetings and all for the rest of the day. Mihir knew that Raman was upset and he felt it would be better if he attends the meeting and let Raman bhai have some rest.

Raman opened the door and was happy to find Ishita there! Finally he could apologise properly and get things right!

Taking of his coat and placing it on the chair kept next to the study table, he called Ishita. And yes, she ignored him again

Raman: Ishita mein janta hu tum mujhse bohot naraaz ho but please meine tumhara phone sirf isi lie switch off kia taki tumhe koi disturbance na ho. . tum subah se bht thak gayi thi isliye...

Ishita: Raman ap ke lie kam mazaak hoga but for me its everything! Kal raat ko waha ek baccha dard mein tadap raha tha or mein yaha araam se so rahi thi ... ap apne ap ko sochte kya hai? Jab apko mere kam ki koi knowledge hi nahi hai then why the hell do you interfere! Kis haq se apne mera phone off kia hun?

Raman: [hurt] kya matlab by kis haq se kia... tum- tumhara pati hu mein or tumhari bhalayi sochke hi [cut by ishita]

Ishita: Mere lie ap sirf Ruhi ke papa hain samjhe aap! Koi haq ni hai apka mujh par! Ainda meri cheezon ka haath lagane se pehle mujhse pooch lena! [It was all a lie from Ishita's side, Raman was her husband and he meant a lot to her but she said all that in anger as Raman accused her of cheating on him; all she could think about now was the accusation from Raman's side that he thinks she likes Mani! How dare he think like that?!]

Raman felt like someone just stabbed him with a knife on his heart. He was on the verge to cry ... No, he will not let her see him cry for her! In fact he just wanted to get away from her and go somewhere very far away!

He got up from the bed and left from their room. Ishita felt really bad for hurting him and she knew she shouldn't have said all that but she just couldn't stop herself! She was also very hurt and angry from yesterday!

Shagun and Mihika reached Ashok's house!

Mihika: Shagun ap jaldi se jake wo cards le ao mein apka car mein hi wait karti hu .

Shagun: Arre tum bhi aao na andar please aisa accha ni lagta

Mihika: Shagun apki shadi hone ke baad I'll always come to meet you khoob guppe ladayenge andar but filhal mein wait karti hu as agar mein andar ayi to ap fir se khana wana banane lag jaoge aur hum late ho jaenge.. ap jaldi jake jaldi aa jao

Shagun: haha okay

Ishita's phone was ringing, she saw the caller ID and it was Mani! She didn't wanna talk to him either as she was in a bad mood, so she kept her phone on silent and tried to get some sleep!

Shagun came out of the Ashok's house. She looked soo pale and stoned! Mihika asked;

Cards le liye Shagun?

Shagun didn't reply. Mihika, kept asking again and again but she didn't reply at all!

Mihika: Shagun kya hua and wait a minute tum ro rahi thi but kyu kya hua? Sab theek to hai na?

Shagun started crying again. Mihika hugged her and made her sit in the car.

It was 11:30 pm and no sign of Raman. She was restless as Ramanhadleft in a sad mood. She felt really bad for hurting him and wanted to say sorry but now he was not even picking her calls up. She thought of asking Mihir about it.

Even Mihir didn't have a clue about Raman"s whereabouts! She was panicking now as to where could Raman be at this point of time? Aiyoo Murugan please keep Raman safe and sound. Ishita ye tune kya kar diya tune Raman ko itna hurt kar dia.. .pata ni wo kaha aur kis halat mein honge? Mein bhi na mujhe samajhna chahiye tha .. unhone sorry bhi bol di thi fir bhi pata ni meine kyu aisie react kia... Murugan bas wo theek thak ho... she was getting very scared by every passing minute and the tears kept floating from her eyes... she didn't know what to do!

Around 12:30am Raman entered the house. Everyone felt relieved to see him back. Ishita could hear Raman's voice from her room! She felt relieved and was soo happy that he's back. She quickly went out of their room. There she saw him standing explaining mummy g that he was stuck in a meeting only she knew that was a plain lie! Not caring about where they were and whose gonna think what she ran to him and hugged him really hard! It was indeed a bone-crashing hug. Raman was shocked first but after a few seconds he hugged her back trying to calm her down.

Ishita: [while hugging him] Raman aise koi karta hai kya? Apne ek baar bhi mera call receive ni kia or nahi koi msg karke bataya ki app kaha hai! Meri jaan nikli jaa ri thi soch soch ke ki ap theek to hai na... [she broke the hug and started hitting him on his chest]

Raman was shocked as the whole family was witnessing this but at the same time he was enjoying this moment as he could very well see that his Jhansi Ki rani cared for him soo much. He was sure that he means a lot to her and definitely more than just Ruhi's papa!

Ishita: Bolo na chup kyu ho huh?! Aise kyu karte ho ap! Pata hai kitne ajeeb khayal aa - she didn't finish her sentence and just hugged him again as if her life depended on it. She didn't want to go away from him even for a second!

The whole family was having their aww moment witnessing such a sweet scene.

Raman: Ishita I'm okay bas wo thoda kam tha isliye but I'm fine!

Ishita: Whispered in his ears, I'm really really sorry Raman aaj subah ke lie. I am very very sorry.

Raman: ssshhh it's okay. Umm Ishita sab dekh rahe hain aise sabke samne accha ni lagta ... [he tried to change her mood and what better way then to tease her]

Ishita broke the hug.

Romi: Kya baat hai Bhabhi waah Bhai ap kitne lucky ho yaar inni caring wife mili hai apko to

Mihika: Waise Akka bhi bht lucky hai ki unhe Raman jiju jaise pati mile. But wow yaar akka ap to kafi romantic nikle... khullam khulla pyaar karnege hum dono types niceee haa ;)

Ishita was embarrassed and blushing hard.

Ishita: Mihika kya tum kuch b bole ja ri ho

Mihika: Sach hi to hai :P

Raman: Accha ab ap sab log araam se jake so jaeye kal subha baat karte hain...

In ishra's bedroom

Raman: Ishita I'm really sorry ki meine tumhe itna hurt kia but kya karu jab bhi us shani ko dekhta hun to pata ni kya ho jata hai but I know I shouldn't have said what I did ..

Ishita: its okay Raman. Let's just forget all that

Raman: Waise tumne aaj subah wali baat ke lie sorry boli right?

Ishita: hmm Im really sorry for hurting you

Raman: Wo to theek hai but sorry ka matlab ye hua ki tum mujhe Ruhi ke papa se zada manti ho right?

Ishita: Raman kya mat-i-mean-ap-kya

Raman: Oo-ho Jhansi ki rani bani sharmila tagore not bad!

Ishita: Raman mujhe bht neend aa rahi hai and ab hum dono ko so jana chahiye. Saying that she was about to take her bedsheet and pillow when Raman held her wrist.

Raman: Biwi ho tum meri or us haq se tumhe mere sath mere bed pe sona chahiye naki kisi sofe par! Samjhi meri madrassan? [he winked at her]

Dil Kahi rukta nahi

Dil meri suntan nahi

Chalta hi jaye teri Ore

Dil mera rukta nahi

Sari fizaon mein hai

Mehki ghataon mein hai

Tera aur mera fasaana

Jaanu mein bhi ye

Jaane tu bhi ye

Jaane hai saara zamaana

Kabhi kum na hogi ye chahatein

Pal pal badein ye hai mohabbatein

So guys, what do you think? should I continue or not? If possible, please comment and give me some feedback.
Thanks a lot for taking your time out and reading my work! Have a nice day 😊
Deepika
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Dipsi_

Thats beautiful deepika

loved it

Thankyou 🤗
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Thankyou 😊
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Hey keep it up! Really good going!

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Originally posted by: columbia

Hey keep it up! Really good going!

Thankyou 😃
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http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=MJb-W25TotM

Am a huge fan of this song one of the few Kumar san songs I love and this ishra vm on this song I watch very often
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Originally posted by: columbia

http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=MJb-W25TotM

Am a huge fan of this song one of the few Kumar san songs I love and this ishra vm on this song I watch very often

you know I found this vm yesterday only and I was like this song is so apt for ISHRA!! So started this topic haha and YES I JUST LOVE THIS SONG SOO MUCHHH <333 Its damn romantic ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was a great start..👏👏
Please continue and pm me...😊😊
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plz continue...
loved it...
amazng yar...the hug was a treat...
nd raman teasny ishu...aww...thts simply suprb...
nd mihu dialouges...
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Nyc start Raman teasing ishu part was a treat please continue soon..

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