ARSHITS:"THAT TOUCH(INTENSE) last part updated 4/11 page 20

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mine😉

yupiiie i am first to comment  🥳
beautifully written story koonji ..👏👏👏
the pain the emotion were beautifully described ..
my heart went out for khushi 😭😭😭😭
Aryan was so cute boy and naughty too he bit khushi 😆😆😉
"daal main kuch tou kalaa hai Arnav tou maar hi nahi sakta "😕😳
amazing Shot dude ..👏👏👏
eagerly waiting for next part 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
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really an intense one. full of emotions. wonderful update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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where is he???😲
damn that was indeed intense..i felt the emotions Khushi is going through...
anjali's concern and all.!

beautifully written koonj.👏
u have improved quite a lot since i read ur work last time.😳
mast haa.!😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb one
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
Where is Arnav.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved the start of That Touch.. really touched by khushi's pain.. 


thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This has really gotten me curious...
What has happened to Arnav??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice part...
khushi is living with anjali...
aryan is anjali's baby?
where is arnav?
update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was really beautiful and intense!

I see you are growing as a writer and you have improved so much.Keep it up sweety.Loved it:)