ZaYa SS| Deja Vu | Chapter 1-Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys. Okay, this is the first time I am trying to write something.
So, please bear with me and my typos :P
-Niharika :)

.Prolouge.
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"Where?" He hissed into the bluetooth, panicking.

"I don't know! You are in the room genius, you figure it out!" Said a voice from the bluetooth.

"What is the use of the damn blueprints Haider, if you can't tel-"

"Left. Okay go left. There is a passage behind the door. You have security coming in 17seconds. Go down straight and exit. We'll be waiting for you. Go. Go. Go."

He ran through the dark passageway, his face hitting too many cowwebs for his liking.

"Aaah. Light!" He screamed.

Panting, he stood out the covert exit door disguised as an entrance to a magician/fortune tellers shop.

A black SUV pulled up and the door opened.

He scrambled franctically inside and the car sped away.

He looked around to find the back seat empty.

"Guys?" He called out.

The seperation rolled down and he heard the familiar sound of the safety being pulled off of a gun.

"Hello genius." A voice said.

"Suddenly, I don't feel like one." He murmered to himself.
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craziness05 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sounds interesting
Continue soon and do pm me😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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prologue really interesting.update soon next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@craziness05- thanks :)
I would surely pm you if I know how to do it and what it means 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

prologue really interesting.update soon next part.


Thanks :)
I will most probably update tomorrow or day after :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Well.. Seems interesting..
I loved it.. Do continue soon..
And do pm me if u cn..
Thanks a lot!:-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan

Well.. Seems interesting..
I loved it.. Do continue soon..
And do pm me if u cn..
Thanks a lot!:-)


Thanks a lot:)
Like I said, I'll update in a day or two whenever I find time :)
Can you tell me what is a pm? I am fairly new :p
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really got me hooked...update soon!
Cant wait for it to unfold!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I woild definitely love to read more... esp since it's my favorite genre 😉
And I don't believe it's ur first time writing... and if it is... then u're amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its intriguing ..I'd love 2 read what happens..plz update soon!:)

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