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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#821

Bahon ke darmiyan, do pyaar mil rahe hain

Jaane kya bole mann

Dole sun ke badan

Dhadkan bani zubaan

Jigs, this update was just heavenly.👏 It could not have been more meetha than this Jigs. Thank you for such a lovely update.

When Arnav said that he does not want to have just sex with her instead he wanted to make love to her, I fell for him more.

And truly he did make love to her in every way. It felt as if their hearts were waiting, their souls were waiting to become one and finally they both were united in every possible way for ever and ever.

This weekend at Hampton indeed turned out to be memorable for both of them in every way. She confessed her love for him, he came to know of her past and finally they took their relationship to a whole new level.

So Anjali's baby shower is coming up next. Will the family know about their love for each other during that time??

Edited by canapoem - 11 years ago

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Shalini

@tvmania

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#822

I am at work and I have so much on my head to finish nevertheless I will do everything after I read the update since I know I cannot concentrate on my work unless I read the update when I know it's going to come up in few minutes ☺️

****Editing after reading update****

I did a mistake reading this update at work , now how on earth am I going to concentrate to finish my deadlines😭 , I know I will suffer but chalta hai 😉 .The update was so amazing and it was much way more than meetha, the way Arnav had expressed his feelings for Khushi to live with her forever was much needed for her since she already has a bitter past.

Coming to your writing what can I say it always amazes me to how you write and bring out the emotions I do not know if I can ever write in such a splendid way👏. I will never have the confidence to write any fiction😆 .

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#823

Jigs, very quickly, I now believe you... 😛 I so believe you now. This is what I have been waiting to read since you posted the picture of his penthouse bedroom... This was definitely worth fighting over seats... 😆 I actually need gallons of that thanda thanda paani, one glass alone won't do... That was a super explosive dhamaka!! 👍🏼

Gilrl you graduated to a seasoned pro of a writer with this update... 👏 Keep it up. But keep'em coming, definitely need more... 😳 One time won't cut it. 😉

I can't wait to read the report from Re Re tomorrow AM... 😆

This was worth waiting up to read definitely... 👏 👏 👏

Bonne nuit. Buenas noches. Shubh ratri. 😉

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Jay

@jduke

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#824

Jigs, I loved reading this hot hot update😳. You detailed Arnav & Kushi first time love making so brilliantly and magically 👏. Arnav is such a sweet heart checking for Kushi's comfort throughout their sizzling romance. Finally Kushi let go all her inhibitions, insecurities and just remembered that she loves Arnav and Arnav loves her and this is what going to be there forever.

Waiting for their romance at Raizada mansion and Anjali's baby shower. Will Raizada family notice change in their Chote's behavior? Or will our couple announce their relationship status after the celebrations?

At last our week long stay at Hampton paid off 😉 and looking forward for many more strippings at NY pent house.

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#825

Jigs i didnt unresd my comment on last chap coz u left us hanging.
Now will comment as soon as i got time as i m still to brush my teeth.
hehe...

*Edit*
first of all jigs, a big soorrryyy for commenting so late that u already posted d teaser for nxt chap. In my defence i have become too lazy as well as busy after shifting back to my native place so much so dat i m hardly able to stalk dis thread or any other story i m following.
Uh-oh i m digressing frm commenting.

Arnav now knows abt khushi past. I m glad he supports khushi even though i was sure he wouldnt abandon her after knowing abt her past.
Khushi has come a long way from getting backstabbed by samar to get her true love in arnav. She also have grown as a person.
Loved how khushi tried to overcome the insecurity of being less rich coz arnav will be hurt wid her behaviour n she also indulged him in wine vineyard just bcoz he likes it n not to pay him back for anything or just to impress him.
Even if she wants to impress him there is no need coz he is already impressed n in love wid her.
Finally they made love n not just sex. Sigh i just died n went to heaven after reading dis hot n sensual n also heartwarming update. But i have to come back to continue my comment u see heaven has no internet connection. Haha..
Loved the one liners in chap especially the ones said by arnav.
I want to make u mine not just tonight, but forever.
Jigs u have outdone urself wid dis chap.. Huge applause for u.

Outstanding chap...

P.S. Just realised i was blabbering lot in dis comment.

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#826

Whoa that was way too hot to handle..Definitely worth the wait..

Their culmination was beautifully described..and Arnav was such a sweetheart by being so tender and caring towards Khushi knowing that its her first time...wish they would have been there for some more time..😉

All in all a super hot update!

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#827

Now this was hotter than any hot red chilly!😉

And I read it as soon as I opened my eyes this morning.

Imagine my state!

Needed a cold cold shower to cool down.

You gave us what we wanted, Jigs.

Thankyou so much.

But of course, we want more of the same.

And I'm just waiting for Anjali's Godh Bharai.

Will they be able to keep their hands go,themselves?

Or will the family know what they are up to?

The whole lovemaking scene was beautifully written.

For they did make love.

Loved the tenderness along with the passion.

Every gesture speaks of their extreme feelings for each other.

Loved the update, Jigs.

And I loved our dear Re Re's poetry.

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#828

UnRes 😊
Jigs firstly very sorry for the late comment...
That was a hot... est update dear..
Loved their love, passion , care everything. ..
This kushi who was bold before lovemaking nd shy after that
is very cute.. 😊
Arnav arranged for a bath to relax kushi.. awww!!! So nice..
love this caring nd tender arnav...
They have used the dining table for a different use nd I'm remembering
this update whenever I look at any dining table 😆
Waiting for more encounters in newyork jigs..
Again U have proved that u can write any kind of emotion be it happy, sad or hot for
that matter anything to perfection 👏 👏
Take a bow jigs..

Edited by pravallika - 11 years ago

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maitricuteheart

@maitricuteheart

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#829

Awesome dear... finally they are one by soul body n mind... hope they never lose this thing between them...!!!! I knw I m being unreasonable bt update soon...!!!

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#830

That was one fantastic update. So much love and passion... very beautifully written and I enjoyed reading this update :-).

Arnav was so caring and he wanted to make sure Khushi wanted the same thing. Both of them love each other so much. Continue soon. Will wait for next update...