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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello guys ,

I had a some spare time . ( yeah right ) Okay i was so willing to write an os , Even tho my hectic schedule . Still i decided to write something , Not my first os . But still
Hope u like it !!
Based on the sbs . !!!!


Here it goes :D


Raman beats all the goons and finally free Ishita. She comes out of the car and without waiting a second she crashed her body into his . The feeling that she could have lose him , Made her cry so much . and now the feeling to never see him made her weak . She needed a support . Raman turned a bit . and she tighened the grip . She hugged him even more tightly . She didnt wanted to leave him .

Raman : Ishita , look everything is fine . I am fine . You are fine ,
ishita : what if something had happened to you . she said crying

Raman felt so bad, mihir and his prank could turn out to be like this, he never expected that , and obviously mihir too . He would the last one to plan something like that , if he knew that Ishita will panick at this level .

Ishita started to check on his wounds.
iSHITA : RAMAN you are hurt , and she started to cry even more , like she was feeling the pain he had with these wounds .

Raman : ishita , wo sab ek mazaak ta, Mera koyii accident nahin hua .

She took a step backward, Still looking at his wounds.

Ishita : Raman you lied to me .
Raman looked down in shame , He didnt know it would turn out to be a ugly joke .

Raman : Wo ishita . I wanted to apologize.
iSHITA : u wanted to apologize , really raman , APOLOgizing by making a bigger mistake
Raman : ishita , woh ,
He was about to hold her arm when she signaled him to not .
Ishita : Dont touch me Raman . !!!

She took few seconds and registered what all happend.
And she started to leave from there,

Raman : ishita please stop .

He started to follow her , She was walking on a speed . She was angry , she was hurt , He could sense that .

Raman grabbed her hand ,and pulled her near a tree. She tries to get away from his hold . But he was too strong for her .

Ishita : Leave me Raman , You've hurt me enough, Stop it now . I cant bear it anymore .
He blocked her by putting his arms around the tree .

Raman : You will have to listen me .
Ishita : Do like you always do . Force me to listen your decisions . And scream on me . im fed up .

Raman : Ishita please , Listen to me .
Ishita : Like i have other choice. Tumhare decisions se to meri zindagi chalti hai .

Raman wanted to talk , but this women wasnt letting him .
KITNA bolti hai yeh aurat . he whispered under his breath .

He moved closer and put his hands on her waist ,
Raman : Shut up !!!!!
Ishita : See thats what you always do . Scream on me , Lie to me , No respect for me . Akhir mein ho kaun , a caretaker or maybe a maid ,

Raman was now angry , this women was crossing her limits . He didnt wait further and pressed his lips against hers. He didnt stop kissing her , She was not responding , but after a moment she started to respond with equal passion . She puts her arms around his neck .
He could sense how happy she was , Maybe the moment she was waiting .

Raman broke the kiss when he was actually out of breath . But ishita just grabbed his lips again . and started to kiss him , giving him entry in her mouth . and they kissed for a while .

and she was finally out of breath and broke the kiss.

Raman looked into her eyes, : I didnt know it was so easy to shut you up . I guess you pretty liked that way too ., he winked at her .

She blushed and responded : I guess i should never stop talking , if you would shut me up like that .

Raman : Everyone loves to be kissed by me . RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA JO houn .

Ishita : What do you mean by everyone , Who else do you kiss like this ,
Raman : WOmen dies to kiss me and i just entertain them
Ishita mouth was open and was making a perfect : O
Raman kissed her on her lips again .
Raman : You are my superwomen.

Ishita : Ravan kumar . bdw what did u wanted to tell me

Raman : That i love you , Dumbo !!!!!! and that you should keep me hugging like you did before , Kuch kuch hota hai .

She once again crashed her body into his and hugged him like there is no tomorow


Hope u like it .!!!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Awww..such a cute OS😳😳..show mei bilkul nahi milega😆..par nice imagination..loved it..thanks for taking the time to write inspite of a hectic schedule😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww cuteee N lovelyyy OS!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow
Such a cute n adorable os
Keep it up
Keep writing
Thanx for pm
Take care!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice OS 😃
would love to watch smthng like thi in d show 😉

ty for d PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for PM.
It was so Lovely and Romantic OS.😳
Ishra kiss was so cute and their conversation was so nice.😳

PriyaCherry.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
awww such a cute romantic OS...
dreamy and loved it totally! ☺️❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This put a smile on my face. If only it could be so easy on the show as well, LOL!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That last part was so cute, especially his Kuch Kuch Hota Hai!
Thanks for the PM.
Awesome OS! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so cute

😳

kash aisa sach main ho jaye

thanks for the pm 😃

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