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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anky_s

Truly enjoyed the update. Very nice. Maan dev convo in the beginning was amazing. And the way Maan proved his point to Dev by mentioning all flaws Geet has right at her face was hilarious and empathetic. Maan though kinda insulted Geet but also made her aware of her lackings. But most amazing was he managed to keep Geet shut, that was one hell of an achievement. Thanks for pm.

Oh wow! I loved your review! Really made me smile! Thank you!
😆 And yes, making Geet shut up was a great achievement!😆
And I am really glad you enjoyed the scene where Maan proves his point. I really strove a lot to make it look funny. Glad you appreciated and enjoyed my effort!
Thanks a lot for reviewing my update!
Take care!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ms.nautanki

Heyyy... Niceee really niceee ... M soo lookin forward to this ff already😃

Thank you!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ajenn

Both Khurana's are full of attitude. Love they way Dev and Maan talking about parties and how the ladies behaves around them.

Maan practically insulting the Geet's attitudes but he got a point there. And Geet is really funny , full of dramatic antics...
Eagerly waiting for next part ...

Hey dear!
Thanks for reviewing!
Glad you enjoyed the update!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-

Amazing update will now maan help geet to change her ??? It will be amazing... Waiting for their official meet!!!

Glad you enjoyed it!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

entry of two dashing mundas...

loved their irritation towards the page 3 parties and other artificial dikhaavas...

maan is full of arrogance though to a great extent i agree with him in his thoughts...

but i loved the story more now getting a little more idea as to what is going to come up😃

maan training geet... is it? ...

will be waiting for the next...

Hey Di!
Glad you enjoyed the update!
Thanks for reviewing it!
And even I agree with Maan to some extent! 😃
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Originally posted by: chavvi16

hmmm ready MSK for this
well he better be this one instance shall change his life
and hers too i mean geet of course

Hmmm... Yes!
it will change everything!
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Posted: 10 years ago


CHAPTER 3. AND THE BACHELORS MEET THE GIRL!

"Dev! Tumne aaj ki meeting ki presentation tayyaar karli?", Maan asked as he speared his fork into the piece of omelet and took a bite. It was the morning after the Page 3 party and Maan was seated at the head of the dining table in the dining room having breakfast.

"Haan bro! Everything is done! You need not worry.", Dev muttered as he took a swig from his glass of Orange juice. He was seated on the left of his brother on the longer side of the table.

Maan nodded, "Aur woh site report? Woh kab tak ready hoga?", Maan asked as he speared another piece of omelet.

"Haan bro! Woh kal tak ready ho jaayega!", Dev spoke as he took a bite from the sandwich in front of him.

"BAS!", came a shout and both brothers looked towards their younger sister Annie who was seated on the right of Maan but right across Dev.

She glared at both the boys, "Bas hogayi yeh Office ki baatein! Hum yahaan breakfast kar rahe hain aur aap log Office ki baat lekar baith gaye! Ek toh pehle hi aap dono Office mein poora din ghuse pade rehte ho. Subah jaldi nikalte ho, raat ko der raat ghar aate ho, ghar aane ke baad bhi kaam ki baat hi karte ho, Study mein ghanto ghusse rehte ho, Office mein hi khaate ho, peete ho, sote ho, this is getting ridiculous boys! Kam se kam khaane ke table ko toh chod do!", she nearly shouted at the end of her tirade.

Maan calmly placed his fork and knife on the table, turned towards Dev and spoke, "Please remind me Dev, hum Annie ko kyun jhel rahe hain?"

Annie frowned at Maan's words.

Dev looked at Annie morosely, "She is here because her husband is out of town and as we are her brothers, she is hanging around here till Arjun is back!"

Now Annie shifted her frown towards Dev.

"Achcha?", Maan muttered as he looked at Dev pensively, "Toh humaare saath hi kyun? Yeh Daadima ke saath farmhouse mein kyun nahi rehne gayi? Waise bhi Daadima wahaan akeli hai! Yeh humaare hi sar pe kyun aake baithi hai?"

Annie huffed at their attitude, "You two are impossible! No wonder Daadima humaare Khurana Mansion ko chodke sheher ke baahar humaare Vacation Farmhouse mein shift hui; aap dono se door jaane ke liye!"

Dev rolled his eyes, "Excuse me little sister! Let me tell you ki Daadima isliye shift hui kyunki woh sheher ki shorgul se pareshaan hogayi thi aur shaanti ke liye sheher ke baahar shift hogayi! Raaee ka pahaad mat banaao!"

Maan finally looked at Annie, "Annie! Truthfully tell me! Tum humaare sar kyun khaa rahi ho jab tum Daadima ko company de sakti thi?"

Annie shrugged as she shredded the paper napkin kept in front of her, "Kya karun Bhai! This house needs bahu, some women to take care of everything in this house aur aap dono ko patni ki jaroorat hai jo aapka khayaal rakhe, aapko khaana khilaaye aur ghar aate hi aapko aapke kaam se door le jaaye! Aur jab tak yeh nahi hota tab tak main yeh saare farz nibhaaungi! Samjhe?"

Maan and Dev looked at each other and rolled their eyes. Both thinking of same thing; Patni? And me? Ya right!

Before Maan could explain exactly what he thought of her idea of staying here till they got a wife, the doorbell rang. Annie sprung up from her seat eagerly, "Darwaaze pe koi hai!" Then she lessened her excitement and looked at both the boys with haughtiness, "Jab tak aap dono ki biwiyaan nahi aati, darwaaza kholne ka kaam toh mujhe hi karna padega!" Feigning dislike at doing the chores of the hostess, she stalked off. Both boys waited till she was out of the room before they started chuckling.

As Annie walked towards the main door, one of the servants had already reached the door and opened it. Annie had to stop walking momentarily in surprise once she got a good look at their guest standing at the door. It was a simple girl dressed in a very traditional Patiala salwar kameez with a jhola bag along her shoulder. She entered the house with her eyes widened at the grandness of the house as if she never seen the interior of such a house. And looking at her dress, Annie was sure that the girl hadn't. Annie noticed a sense of excitement on her face and wondered who she was. The girl had yet to notice Annie when she got stopped by the servant.

The Servant opened his mouth, "Madam! Aap aise andar nahi ghus sakti!", he stopped the girl by stepping in front of her.

The girl looked at him with confusion, "Arre! Insaan ghar ke andar nahi aayega toh kya darwaaza pe khada rahega? Hato! Mujhe Maan Singh Khurana se milna hai!"

She took few steps before the servant reached her and stood in front of her, "Madam! Aap aise andar nahi jaa sakti! Aap apna naam toh bataayiye!"

Geet huffed in annoyance, "Arre! Main aapko kyun apna naam bataaun? Aap kaun hote hain mera naam poochne waale?"

Before they could continue arguing, Annie stepped in.

"Suno!", she addressed the servant, "Tum jaao! Main dekhti hoon!"

The servant walked off and Annie turned to Geet, "Mera naam Anvesha hai, Mrs. Anvesha Rathod aur main iss ghar ki beti hoon!" She raised her hand and the girl shook hands with her. The girl's whole demeanor changed from annoyance to cheerfulness in minutes and her smile was so wide that even Annie could not resist from smiling back.

"So tell me how may I help you?", Annie asked as she gestured the girl to sit on one of the couches spread around in main hall of the house and took the seat right in front of her. The girl fidgeted nervously and pulled out a piece of paper from her purse. After glancing at it, the girl lost all her inhibitions and burst out with boldness, "Mujhe Mr. Maan Singh Khurana se milna hai! Woh ghar pe hai?"

Annie nodded, "Lucky for you, woh abhi bhi ghar pe hi hai, aaj woh Office late jaayenge! Waise kaam kya tha?"

The girl smiled sheepishly, "Thoda... Bas kaam tha!"

Annie rolled her eyes. Of course kaam tha! When are her brothers not working? She smiled at the girl, "Tum yahi ruko. I will get my brother!"

The girl nodded and smiled back.

Annie walked away to the dining room to get her brothers only to see the dining room empty. She questioned the servant cleaning the plates about her brothers and he replied that they had already shifted to the study. Annie rolled her eyes again. Of course, they are cooped up in the study. Where else would they be? She stormed off to search for them while muttering about idiot brothers who love work more than their life.

"Maan Bhai! Dev Bhai!", Annie came shouting into the study where Maan was explaining one of his Architectural plans to Dev while standing near a whiteboard which was littered with words and phrases scribbled by Maan. Dev was seated in front of him in an armchair looking at the board and nodding his head wherever needed while twirling a pen in his hand.

Maan looked at her in annoyance for interrupting him but Annie ignored his expression and started speaking, "Aapse milne koi ladki aayi hai!"

"Ladki?", Dev raised an eyebrow and looked at Maan curiously.

Maan frowned for a moment but then his expression cleared and he replied, "Ladki? Haan! Shaayad personal assistant ke post ke liye aayi hogi! Main ghar pe hoon toh Office waalon ne use ghar bhej diya hoga! Yeh Office waale bhi na!" He looked at Dev and shook his head, "Just because maine kahaa mujhe ek PA urgently chaahiye, yeh logon ne use ghar pe hi bhej diya!", he looked back at Annie, "Fine! Send her in!"

Annie scurried away and Dev looked at Maan in confusion, "PA? Bro! Why are you hiring a PA?"

Maan shrugged and looked back at the whiteboard, "I am fed up of reading ridiculous unwanted mails and getting useless phone calls. Aadhe phone calls toh koi na koi Page 3 party ke invitations hote hain and don't get me started about mails. Har festival pe ek greeting card aata hai, koi mail se toh koi email se. And sometimes people even send me card for days like Health Day and World Sight Day. Now it will be rude of me to not to reply so mera aadha din unko greeting cards bhejne mein jaata hai. And do you know what the worst thing is? India has days and festivals like these every other day." Maan sounded exasperated at the end and he sighed loudly.

"The PA will be able to screen such mails, emails and phone calls and pass on only the important ones. And she can reply all those greetings and emails as much as colorfully as she wants. And she can fill my daily schedule in such a way that I won't have to go another Page 3 parties like yesterday. Aur Daadima ke calls bhi wahi handle karegi aur mere phone na pick up karne ke liye excuses bhi Daadima ko wahi degi."

Dev chuckled at his brother's reasons for hiring a PA.

Before Dev could comment on his brother's reasons, Annie entered the room with a girl. Dev straightened up in his seat once he got a good look of the girl. She was the waitress; the waitress that his brother had so annoyingly insulted yesterday night. Is she here for the post of PA? Oh wow! This is going to get so interesting. Dev grinned in anticipation at the upcoming drama and looked at his brother who had his back turned to them staring at the whiteboard.

The girl opened her mouth and chirped happily, "Hello ji! Satsriyakal! Mennu na aapse ek bahut jaroori gal karni hai..." when Maan turned around and burst out, "TUM?" He looked at her in horror.

The girl just smiled happily, "Haan! Main! Pehchaana aapne mujhe?"

Maan rolled his eyes, "Tumhein iss post ke liye mere Office waalon ne bheja hai? Lagta hai un ghadon ko naukri se nikaalne ka time aagaya hai agar woh sochte hain ki tum meri PA banne ke laayak ho! Annie! Send her back!"

The girl frowned and folded her arms against her chest, "Dekho ji! Kal aapne mujhe itna insult kiya, maine kuch nahi kahaa kyunki main wahaan kaam kar rahi thi aur aap mere guest the! Lekin aaj main badtameezi nahi sahungi! Ek toh main aapse business ki baat karne aayi hoon aur aap ho ki meri beizzati kar rahe ho!"

Maan looked at her amused, "Business aur tum? Ya right!"

Maan looked away from her and out of the window nearby.

The girl's jaw dropped open at his attitude, "Oye Hello Mister! Sheher ki ladki nahi hoon toh mujhe kam mat samajhna! Aap paise waale hogaye toh aap koi mahaan insaan nahi ban gaye! Apne se kam paise waalon ko apni paaon ki jooti samajhna ban keejiye aur izzat se baat keejiye!"

"Fine!", Maan spat out as he sat on an armchair nearby and looked at her with utter concentration, "Toh bataao! Apne business plan ke baare mein!"

Annie by now was beyond shocked and looked at the scene in front of her with surrealism while Dev looked on with a growing amusement.

The girl opened her mouth and then shut it again. Now that she had the chance to present her thoughts, her confidence went away and she looked around nervously.

Maan smirked predatorily, "Exactly! You have no plan! You are just here to annoy me! Annie! Get her out before I throw her out of the window myself!"

The girl's jaw dropped open at his words. She let out a shriek and started shouting, "Hey Babaji! Kaise insaan ho aap? Ladki ko uthaake khidki se baahar phenke ki baat karte ho!"

Even Annie was outraged, "Bhai! This is not a way to talk to a girl! Please show her some respect!"

Maan smiled at Annie sarcastically, "Then tell her to act like a girl! Bhopu jaise gala phaadna band kare!"

The girl's jaw dropped open again, "Haw! Dekha dekha! Abhi bhi kitni badtameezi se baat kar rahe hain!"

Maan marched over to the girl and towered over her, "Mera ghar, meri marzi! Main kaise bhi baat karun! Tum hoti kaun ho mujhe tokne waali?"

The girl opened her mouth to retort when Dev intervened, "That is enough ladies and gentlemen! Kuch jhagda next meeting ke liye bhi chod do!"

Maan turned around and stormed off towards the window. He leaned on the window sill and looked out. The girl fumbled with her duppatta while Annie looked confused and unsure on what to do.

Dev finally got up from his seat and walked over to the girl. He looked at the fidgeting girl with a smile on his face and spoke with gentleness in his tone, "Miss! Kya tum bata sakti ho ki tum yahaan aayi kyun ho? Aur hum tumhaari kya madat kar sakte hai?"

The girl looked at him wide eyed. After getting rude responses from the elder brother, the politeness from the younger brother shocked her. She bit her lip and spoke in a soft and polite voice, "Mujhe toh bas Event Manager ki naukri chaahiye! Lekin meri kharaab angrezi ki wajah se koi mujhe woh post nahi deta! Agar yeh Mister meri thodi bahut madat karde aur mujhe Angrezi sikha dein toh main aap sabki bahut shukr guzaar rahungi!"

"Ya right!", Maan muttered from over the window.

The girl looked at Maan in indignation. She marched over to him and grabbing his shirt sleeve she made him turn around. Such was the force of the girl's hand that a shocked Maan turned around right away.

She glared at him with righteous anger and shouted, "Kal toh bade daave kar rahe the ki aap mujhe thodi training se badal sakte ho!"

She turned towards Dev and pointing her finger at Maan she spat, "Toh aap inse poochiye ki kal sirf badi badi baatein kar rahe the ya mujhe train karne ki himmat bhi hai? Main koi favor nahi maang rahi! Main paise dene ko bhi taiyyar hoon! Phir bhi yeh mujhse aise bartaav kar rahe hain jaise main koi road pe pada hua kachra hoon!"

She turned back to Maan, "Mujhe pata hai aise training ko paise lagte hain! Aur main paise dene ko tayyaar hoon!"

Maan looked at her with amusement, "Oh really? Aur kitne paise tum mujhe dogi?"

The girl looked at him haughtily and continued to speak in loud voice, "Poore paanch hazaar! Samjhe? Koi kam paisa nahi hai! Meri salary ka aadha hai! Main aapko 5000 har mahine ke dungi! Samjhe?"

Annie inched over to Dev and whispered to him, "Kya ise pata hai hum itne rich hain ki 5000 hum ek din mein kharcha karte hain?"

Dev shook his head, "I don't think so!"

Maan shook his head, tired of all this shouting and glared at her, "Baith jaao! Aur mere kaan mein chilaana band karo!"

The girl sniffed in annoyance, "Maine kahaa na mujhse itni badtameezi se baat mat keejiye!"

Maan looked up in annoyance and then roared at the girl, "Baitho!"

The girl stumbled back at the intensity of his anger and looked at him with fear. She gripped her bag against her chest tightly using it like a shield. Annie stepped forward and smiled at the girl, "Baith jaao na!" The girl smiled hesitantly at her and then gulped under Maan's glare.

Dev decided it was time to intervene, "Suno!"

The girl snapped her head towards him still looking a bit scared.

Dev smiled to ease her, "Pehle humein yeh bataao ki tumhaara naam kya hai!"

The girl smiled softly at him, "Geet! Geet Handa!"

Dev smiled widely at her, "Toh Miss. Handa! Please have a seat!"

Geet was again surprised at Dev's politeness and respectful tone and nervously sat down in front of him with Annie standing right behind her and Maan standing by a nearby window.

"So you are going to pay me?", Maan growled.

Geet nodded haughtily.

Maan turned around and glared at her, "Toh tum mujhe tumhein train karne liye paise dogi?"

Geet's eyebrows rose and she blinked twice, a bit freaked out by his attitude and tone.

Maan stalked over to her and then towered over her, "Tum Maan Singh Khurana ko paise dogi? Tum?"

Geet gulped and nodded fearfully.

Maan let out his anger loose, "SAMAJHKE KYA RAKHA HAI MUJHE? KOI SADAK CHAAP TRAINER? JO LOGON KO TRAIN KARTA FIREGA?"

He turned around and started pacing while Geet looked at him scared, "Main Maan Singh Khurana hoon! Khurana Constructions ka maalik aur CEO!"

He glared at her angrily, "Jaanti ho kitne meetings attend karta hoon main ek din mein? Kitne log mere under kaam karte hain? And you want me to be your personal coach? As if I don't have anything else to do! Bekaar samajh rakha hai kya! You know what! Why am I running a construction company here? Jaake ek coaching center khol deta hoon aur tum aajaana apna 5000 leke!"

Maan threw himself onto a chair nearby and glared around the room.

Geet looked down sadly. She had come here with high hopes of getting better life and now all her hopes and dreams were en route to turning into ashes. She felt tears well up in her eyes and before she knew it, she started sniffing and crying.

Maan rolled his eyes at her tears, "Oh! Shut up! And stop crying like someone is dead!"

This only made Geet cry more.

Dev rolled his eyes while Annie sighed and patted Geet's shoulder. She glared at her brother, "Maan Bro! Please talk to her normally. You don't have to be this rude to the poor girl."

Geet wiped her face with her duppatta and Maan rolling his eyes handed her his kerchief.

Geet looked at the kerchief distastefully, "Ab yeh kiske liye?"

Maan replied sarcastically, "Tumhaari aankhen pochne ke liye. Yaad rakho. Rumaal se aankh pocha jaata hai duppatte se nahi! Dono mein confuse mat ho jaana."

Geet huffed, "Mujhe pata hai dono mein farak. Itni bhi bewakoof nahi hoon."

But she wiped her face using his kerchief.

Dev smirked as he leaned back on his chair and stared at the people in front of him, "Bro! Mujhe Geet ki baatein badi dilchasp lag rahi hai!"

Maan gave him a sarcastic look as if saying Oh really?'

Dev ignored his look and continued, "Aap hi the na jo kal daave kar rahe the ki aap iski kaaya palat sakte ho! You can even change her to such an extent that everyone will believe you blindly when you say she is a princess of some made up Rajasthani city! Kya hogaya us daave ka?"

Annie, Geet and Maan all stared at Dev in silence wondering where he was leading this conversation to.

Dev smirked at his brother, "Bro! Main kehta hoon ki aap India ke sabse smartest insaan honge agar aap utne saare socialites, jo gidd ki nazar se har insaan ko observe karte hain, unko ullu bana do toh! Infact, main toh aapse shart bhi lagaane ko tayyaar hoon! Kuch mahine mein ek international conference hain, desh videsh ke top bosses wahaan honge, India ke sabse jaane maane socialites bhi honge, aur various consulate and embassy ke members bhi honge! Aap tab tak ise train keejiye aur wahaan le jaayiye! Aur kisi old city ki Raajkumari ke naam se introduce kijiye! Agar kisiko shaq nahi hua toh aap jeete, aur shaq hua toh main jeeta! Geet ke saare training ke kharche main pay karunga! Saare expenses mere pocket se jaayenge! How is this bet bro?"

Before Maan could reply, Geet piped in, "Hey Babaji! Aap meri training karwaayenge? Arre waah! Aap toh bade achche insaan lagte ho! Aapke bhai se toh bahut behtar!"

Maan ignored Geet's words as he smirked at his brother, "Challenge? Aur Maan Singh Khurana ko?"

Dev nodded.

Maan looked at Geet from top to bottom. He looked at Dev and spoke while pointing at Geet, "Is ladki ko, jisko na dhang ki English aati hai aur na proper rehen sehen ka tareeqa!"

Geet pouted at his words, "Itni buri bhi nahi hoon main!"

Dev nodded and Maan thought for few seconds. Wanting Maan to take the bet, Dev decided to push him in the direction, "Kya baat hai Bro? Darr gaye?"

Maan's eyes flared up in anger, "Maan Singh Khurana kisi se nahi darta!"

He then smiled smugly at Dev, "Main tumhaari shart manzoor karta hoon! I will take the bet! Main is ladki ko normal ladki se princess bana doonga! Aur aaj se abhi se iski training start! Annie! Ise le jaao aur humaare kisi guest room mein thehra do! Ise beauty parlour le jaao aur facial, manicure, pedicure aur jo saari cheezein tum khud karti ho, iska bhi karwaao! Tumhaare favorite boutiques se iske liye kuch fashionable kapde khareedo. And call the tailor home! No one needs to see her before we reveal her. And take the money from Dev for it."

Matter solved, Maan pulled out the newspaper and started to read it. Dev pulled out his mobile and started playing with it.

Annie frowned as she took in all what all had happened in last few minutes. In a matter of seconds, Maan had gone from shouting at Geet to training Geet. And Dev actually egged him on. What is happening here? Even Geet looked bewildered at the sudden change in situations.

Noticing Geet's confusion and scared expression, Annie decided to take charge and talk on behalf of the girl.

Annie glared at her two brothers, "Enough! Enough of this madness! And what kind of bet is this? Aise kisi ladki ko kahoge ki yahaan shift ho jaaye, jaise raaste se koi patthar uthaake ghar laaye ho!

Maan looked at Annie in confusion as he looked at her from behind the paper, "Kyun nahi?"

Annie growled loudly, "Oh God! I am stuck with idiots. Kyunki aap iske baare mein kuch jaante nahi! Uske mummy papa ka kya? Yeh toh shaadi shuda bhi ho sakti hai!"

Geet squeaked at that moment, "Shaadi? Hey Babaji!"

Maan rolled his eyes, "Jaise is ladki ne kahaa, Hey Babaji! It is a scary thought! She and married! Babaji hi bachaaye uss bechaare ko!"

Geet's jaw dropped open and then she huffed and looked away.

Annie growled again, "Bas karo yeh naatak! Geet! Jaao! Apne ghar jaao! Apne mummy papa ke paas jaao!"

Geet looked down sadly, "Mera koi nahi hai!"

Dev jumped up, excited at that, "Dekha iske koi parents nahi hai! Toh koi ise miss nahi karega! Toh tumhein iss bet se problem kyun hai?"

Maan nodded, "Exactly! Kisiko iski kadar nahi hai! Kisiko isse faayda nahi hai sivaai mere! Toh tumhein kya problem hai? Leke jaao ise naye kamre mein!"

Annie rolled her eyes, "Lekin baad mein ka kya? Aur yahaan pe rehne ke liye kya ise paise doge?"

Maan frowned, "Paise? Paise ka yeh kya karegi? Hum ise kapde de rahe hain, khaana de rahe hain! Paisa ka yeh kya karegi? Champagne piyegi?"

Geet looked at Maan with horror, "Hey Babaji! Main shumpaayin nahi peeti!"

Maan scolded her, "Shumpaayin nahi sham-pain! Aur beech mein bolna band karo!"

Geet annoyed at Maan's attitude, complained to Dev, "Dekhiye na Devji! Yeh mujhse kaise baat kar rahe hain!"

Even Dev was fed up at the high handed attitude Maan was dishing to Geet, "Bro! Kuch toh socho! Even she has feelings! Stop being rude bro!"

Maan looked at Dev in confusion, "Feelings? What feelings?"

Geet was fed up of this man, "Hey Babaji! Aap kaise insaan ho?"

Annie was still trying to make sense of what is happening, "Bro you have to tell me! Yeh ladki kab tak yahaan rahegi aur jab aap dono ka bet khatam hoga toh is ladki ka kya hoga? Aapko iske future ke baare mein bhi sochna hoga!"

"Annie! Are you forgetting that she is the one who came here asking for help? We are just helping her!", Maan retorted.

Annie just shook her head. This has gone beyond limits. Forget it. She was giving up trying to make any sense out of this madness. She took a deep breath and simply decided to go with the flow.

Maan looked at Geet now, "And you! Why are you still here? You should be up with Annie, getting a makeover! Out! Get out!"

Geet slapped her forehead as she looked at Maan with a sickening look, "Aap sach mein bade hi akdu khadus insaan ho, nahi? Aapko apne sivaay koi aur dikhta nahi hai, nahi? Meri naukri ka kya, mere kamre ka kya? Aapne yeh sab ke baare mein toh kuch socha hi nahi!"

Maan looked at her in surprise, "Naukri? What naukri? Oh yes! Your waitress job? It is obvious, you will have to quit. Once your training is done, you will be snapped up by companies with better job offers. So go! Quit! And as far as your room is concerned, ab waitress ke job pe ho toh khud ka ghar toh nahi hoga! Rented hoga! Talk to the owner and get the problem solved! That's all! It is so simple! Yeh sab bhi mujhe hi tumhein bataana hoga?"

Maan shook his head and went back to his newspaper.

Geet got up in shock, unsure of what exactly happened here. Annie grabbed her arm with a sigh and looked at Maan tiredly, "Bro! Atleast use aapka bet toh samjha do! Bechaari fully confused hai!"

Maan took a deep breath, got up, walked towards Geet and stood in front of her. Geet looked at him with lost expression.

Maan gave her a stern look, "The bet is simple. You will stay here for next few months and I will train you. Training khatam hone ke baad, we will take you to a big party where I will introduce you as Annie's friend and a princess! Agar tumne sabko yakeen dilaaya ki tum koi princess ho, toh main shart jeeta. Aur tumne yakeen nahi dilaaya toh Dev shart jeeta. Ab in sab mein tumhaara kya role hai?"

Geet bit her lip as she listened to his words with concentration.

Maan continued, "Tumhaara role simple hai. You will listen to me and follow my rules. Maine jo sikhaaya use tumhein shiddat se practice karna hai. Hum bet jeete ya na jeete, tum yahaan se itna kuch seekhke jaaogi, ki tumhein apne sapno ko job aaraam se mil jaayega! Samjhi?"

Geet grinned and nodded. Maan looked at Annie impassively, "See! She understood! Now can you please go and get her room ready while she gets her things?"

Annie huffed and stomped away. Maan Bhai ka kuch nahi ho sakta! Babaji hi bachaaye Geet ko!

Maan noticed Geet and frowned, "Ab tum yahaan khade rehke kya kar rahi ho? Jaao! Go!"

Geet just shook her head at his attitude, turned around and walked away. Hey Babaji! Yeh sab kya hogaya? Main toh sirf ek simple training chaahti thi taaki mujhe agle interview mein select kar liya jaaye! Aur yahaan toh mujhe ek alag hi duniya mein le jaane ki baat ho rahi hai! Aur upar se yeh bet aur Maan Singh Khurana! Her face crumbled as she remembered Maan's attitude towards her. Kaise insaan se paala pada hai! Hey Babaji! Meri raksha karna! Warna mennu toh paagal hi ho jaana hai!

NOTE:

Just because this chapter is so long, that does not mean all of my chapters will be so long.

This chapter was long because after the starting two small scenes, rest is one scene with no brakes!

Also, the length of this chapter is the reason it took me so much time to put this chapter up!

It took me one whole week to write it!

Thanks, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

P.S. Annie is added to the Chracter Sketch!

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Posted: 10 years ago
this time main khushi one
and this on the variance
whatever that means
Arre! Insaan ghar ke andar nahi aayega toh kya darwaaza pe khada rahega
loved this line man
so true what she said
hawww bechari ko rone bhi naa dein
bade aaye train karne waale
khud bhi trianing ki zaroorat hai inhe
beta maan this is not good for you
trust me you will regret saying what you said about her
okay i know he was being truthful
but really has he no heart man
bechari bachi ko kitna kuch sunaya
hope she gives it back to him too
that will make me so happy
but not now dheere dheere
so he knows never to mess with girls
sochte kya hain yeh ladki hai toh kuch bhi keh denge
geet puttar tennu bhool pana asaan naa se
of course he will remember you
although true he did meet many peeps there in the party but why do i feel as if geet is the only one he would be able to recall from the party
i hope thats true
hmm but then no one else came to him to train her
does he know what he is doing
well maybe in training
but rest i think he is clueless about
maan dev this bet you guys might win
but to be fair geet will be the real winner
wait and watch
Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!! brilliant update dear...amazing...😃

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