Celebration of Fates: RagNa FF, Part-23, Pg-147, 30/07 - Page 35

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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update charu
Raghav's teasing session was awesome😉
u beautifully explained raghav's POV
Raghav's anger is justified she shuld have listened to her heart n gav him chance of explanation
eager to read next update

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Posted: 10 years ago

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PART-10

Kalpi was pacing nervously in her vanity van. Today they were to shoot first promo of their show and she was very nervous already. Will she be able to pull on her acting mask while shooting for close or intimate scenes? After ten minutes she was called for shoot; she was dressed in a formal, ladies business suit and Raghav too was formally dressed as per his role. The shoot started and both started enactment of their respective parts. It was a short but intense scene. They both looked into each other's eyes, with a bit of anger and a bit of opposition for each other in their eyes. Then she turned to go away from him, but he caught hold of her wrist, pulling her towards him. She bumped into his hard chest and he took her in his arm with his one arm encircling her waist completely and his other hand free; her one hand on his shoulder. The look in his eyes intense, possessive, conveying to her he'll win her; and he'll win from her. For others it was supposed to be a fictional scenario and only another scene of one more daily entertainment soap's promo. But for Raghav and Kalpi time had stopped, they both were not acting that moment. The intensity in Raghav's eyes to not let her go was real and her reaction on his touch too was real, as was her anger. Soon the director said CUT and they had to part ways, but not before after turning their backs to each other, they'd turned their faces once for each other.

They shot some more promos, this time individual shots of Raghav and Kalpi, meant for their introduction. Kalpi and Raghav were also informed that the channel and production house had kept a press conference late evening. Both Raghav and Kalpana were to be formally presented before the media and viewers. Everyone had an idea about Raghav Singhania being the hero; but media was abuzz with curiousity as to who was the lucky girl who bagged role opposite him.

In the evening Kalpi was waiting impatiently for the press conference to start and get it done with. She was nervous as it was the first time that any of her show was going on-air at such a grand scale; and thus she knew the press conference also was to be on an equally large scale and important. Nervous yes she was but she was confident enough on her capabilities. The only thing which was worrying her was what will Raghav do today, to make her uncomfortable and how would she herself react to it. Raghav too approached there after five minutes and he smirked on seeing her. Kalpi was wearing a two piece dark-maroon coloured-sleeveless tunic, her midriff slightly visible; and Raghav was wearing a yellow coloured shirt, brown coloured pants and maroon coloured blazer. Irritated at him she said "Isn't that a bit too colourful for a black and white person like you?" He shrugged telling her "But we are the right match for each other" indicating the common maroon colour in their respective dresses.

She just shook her head, knowing full well it is so difficult to win from Raghav, and right now she was not in a mood to fight with him, just before the press conference. Soon the press conference started and the reporters asked some general questions from both Raghav and Kalpi, as to their respective careers, how will Raghav balance his big business empire and this show together, some questions about show and their characters. Kalpi was asked a question regarding the opportunity to work with Raghav "In your first show as a female lead, you are working with Raghav Singhania, a big name in film industry. How do you feel about it?" Obvious comparison between her and Raghav in terms of both experience and popularity irked Kalpana, but her face beamed with a smile to die for. Raghav had to stiffle a laugh at this, as he knew how much she must have hated this question in her heart. Kalpi replied to this and said "I take this golden break as a learning experience and so yes I am very happy to be part of this esteemed project. I am looking forward to work with Raghav".

One of them asked a question from Raghav about his experience of working on TV and since he has acted with established top actresses, what does he think about Kalpana Jadhav. "I have worked with Ms.Kalpana before in my theatre days and I know she is very talented. She shall soon make a place in audiences' hearts and she has a bright future ahead". Then another question came about their chemistry "What do you have to say about your chemistry Raghav Sir? Do you think viewers would like your chemistry?"

Raghav gave a meaningful smile and said "Well, I can assure you that our chemistry will set the screens on fire; in fact I can give you a live answer to that question right now". Saying so he stood up, extended his hand in front of Kalpana, who first looked at his hand and then at him, feeling her heart beating rapidly, apprehending the worst on such a public platform. "Bappa please save me today" she prayed as she read desire and challenge in Raghav's eyes. But she had no other choice; unwillingly she gave her hand in his and he made her stand.

"Are you all ready to witness Raghav and Kalpana's performance for the first time ever live?" he asked in a loud voice from the reporters, and got a loud "yes" in response.

"Can we have the music please?" He called one of background helpers and requested for one particular song to be played. By the time music was played, he had made some distance from Kalpana, standing afar from her. Soon the song started and he started lip-syncing and performing to it.

"BTW, if it is difficult to visualize, then please take help of Shahrukh's expressions and Ashish's face" 😆😛😳


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m6Y8xEfyXTs[/YOUTUBE]

Movie : Veer Zaara

Song : Main Yahaan Hoon (With English Translation)

Jaanam, dekh lo, mit gayi dooriyaan

Darling, look around; the distance between us is dispelled.


Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan..

I'm here, I'm here, I'm here, here!

He started walking towards her in slow steps, making her transfixed with his eyes and using his hand gestures, and expressions to convey what he wanted to. He reached her, he caressed her left cheek with the back of his right hand, and used his forefinger to tell her he is in front of her now.

As the music started in-between, he twisted and twirled her to dance with her intimately and closely.


(Jaanam, dekh lo, mit gayi dooriyaan

Darling, look around; the distance between us is dispelled.


Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan) -2

I'm here, I'm here, I'm here, here!

He gelled their two bodies together, with his hands wrapped tightly around her waist and took circles together with the words and music; as his eyes made love to her face.


Kaisi, sarhadein, kaisi majbooriyaan

What borders are there now? What obstacles?


Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

I'm here, I'm here, I'm here, here.

He let her go afar from him as his left hand kept holding her right hand, his face downcast and her face turned left side, her eyes also downcast. He then pulled her towards himself with a force which made her bang against his chest. She took support of his shoulders as he encircled her thin waist with his one hand and with his other he caressed her entire face and features, sometimes with his palms and sometimes with the back of his palms. Alongside he kissed her lips with his eyes as he looked at then intensely. (Please recollect Holi episode scene, where Raghav/Ashish's gaze was passionately caressing and fixed at her lips and face).

As the music started, he left her and both of them clapped their hands slowly in a dancing manner along with the beats, and moved in circles, their eyes fixed on each other.


Tum chhupa na sakogi main woh raaz hoon

I'm the secret that you can't hide;


Tum bhoola na sakogi woh andaaz hoon

I'm the impulse that you can't forget.

He took hold of her hand once again and brought her closer. With his one hand he cupped her cheek and chin; and then turned her. Removing strands of her open hair from her shoulders, he nuzzled lightly on her neck, placing a soft kiss there.


Goonjta hoon jo dil mein toh hairaan ho kyun

When I echo in your heart, why are you surprised?


Main tumhaare hi dil ki toh awaaz hoon

I'm your heart's very voice.

He grazed her bare arms on both sides with his hands, held her hand and made her arms cross in front of her. He moved his hands lightly on her midriff as he hugged her from behind, the little bare part of her skin also being touched by him as a result; and she burned under his touch. His nose caressed her cheek on one side.


Sun sako, toh suno, dhadkanon ki zabaan

If you can hear it, then listen to the language of your heartbeat.


Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

I'm here, I'm here, I'm here, here.

Kaisi, sarhadein, kaisi majbooriyaan

What borders are there now? What obstacles?


Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

I'm here, I'm here, I'm here, here.

He tapped his fingers with beats and words, on her neck and chest to signify her heartbeats; and again repeated the step of making distance between them with his hold still on her hand and pulling her closer again.(In previous same para: He let her go afar from him as his left hand kept holding her right hand, his face downcast and her face turned left side, her eyes also downcast. He then pulled her towards himself with a force which made her bang against his chest. She took support of his shoulders as he encircled her thin waist with his one hand and with his other he caressed her entire face and features.)

With the instrumental music they went on to did couple dance, with some sweet, romantic gestures. (Please feel free to use your imagination).

Main hi main ab tumhaare khayaalon mein hoon

Now I and only I occupy your thoughts;


Main jawaabon mein hoon, main sawaalon mein hoon

I'm in the answers you receive and the questions you ask.

Unable to bear her body's intense reactions to his proximity, Kalpi freed herself and ran away from him, making some distance between them. She let others think that it was a part of their act, when he held her hand again, slowly bringing her closer to him, lip-syncing the words perfectly; as she continued her backwards walk with downcast eyes. Finally he turned her and they were lost for few moments in each other, forgetting about others.


Main tumhaare har ek khwaab mein hoon basa

I'm at the center of every one of your dreams;


Main tumhaari nazar ke ujaalon mein hoon

I'm the light that shines from your eyes.

He passed his palm across her eyes, turned her and touched her close eyes again with one hand. His other hand caressed her arm.


Dekhti, ho mujhe, dekhti ho jahaan

Wherever you look, you see me;


Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

I'm here, I'm here, I'm here, here.


Jaanam, dekh lo, mit gayi dooriyaan

Darling, look around; the distance between us is dispelled.


Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

I'm here, I'm here, I'm here, here!

Kaisi sarhadein, kaisi majbooriyaan

What borders are there now? What obstacles?


Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

I'm here, I'm here, I'm here, here.


Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

With one swap of fingers he signaled something and the lights went off, and when some seconds later they came back he was not near her. Kalpi looked for him here and there, and he came out of shadows lip-syncing perfectly the words "Main yahaan hon, yahaan ho yahaan, kaisi...". He came closer to her again, intimately dancing with her, placing soft kisses on her cheeks on either side, sometimes nuzzling near her ears and neck from a distance, but close enough for her to feel his breath on her skin. As the song ended, he let his hold on her loosen, and left her hand lightly as she made some distance between them and they continued to still stare into each other's eyes.


(Credit for lyrics: https://www.hindilyrics.net/translation-Veer-Zaara/Main-Yahaan-Hoon.html)


The hall was full and dumbstruck for a few moments, too much in awe of what they had witnessed live just now. These two were on fire and had increased the temperatures of entire hall with mere four-five minutes performance. "Wow, they are...amazing" someone managed to whisper and clap. With that the entire hall erupted in loud cheers and applause. The media had just got the hottest news fodder and the producer-director were happy for the extra publicity this short but hot stint was going to give to their show; mentally noting down to utilize the amazing chemistry between Raghav and Kalpana.

Both Raghav and Kalpana bent down together to accept appreciation and say thanks as they stole constant glances at each other. Raghav with a winning look and with an added understanding that Kalpi was still affected by him. Also realizing that he too was equally affected by her, and now to be near her was not just going to be his revenge, or a way to prove his point; but also to get what made him happy; he wanted Kalpana close to him now, in fact even more closer. This time he did not mean plain warnings but meant to carry them out.

On the other side, Kalpana was trembling from inside, realizing that Raghav affected her. For the purpose of media, she maintained a calm exterior, but she was shocked and shivering inside, unable to forget the burning and pleasing sensations she felt with his touch and his closeness. She was afraid, now more with herself than from him. "If this happens ahead too, how I will stop him coming close to me" mentally cursing the day when she had signed the contract, for the entire twenty-episodes shooting was left. Unlike others, Raghav had understood and noticed her inward fights and shock, making him smile when she saw him. Her last thoughts on the stage in this conference being "Oh no, he knows".

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NIGHT-TIME: -

Kalpana had finally told her Aai that her co-actor was none other than Raghav Singhania", not wanting that she comes to know about it from someone else, or from media. Kamla's first reaction after being silent in shock for few moments was "Kalpi are you fine my child?" immediately understanding the reason behind Kalpi's weird behavior since past some days. "Yes Aai, I am fine. You don't worry at all Aai. Raghav has changed for better and we have sorted out our differences. It took time for me to accept that, but we finally accepted and now everything is perfectly fine between us" Kalpi said, lying to her mother as she didn't want her to worry unnecessarily day in and day out, continuously for so many weeks.

"Kalpi you're telling the truth na beta? Everything is fine right?" Kamla asked her again, unsure still about her daughter's well-being for she knew her well that Kalpi cared too much for her Aai. Hence she can tell her lie also. Though Kamla was never angry or upset with Raghav, she knew in her heart that whatever it was between Raghav and Kalpi must have been a big misunderstanding or another issue. She trusted her favourite student and her best friend's son a lot. She cared for him too, but she knew Kalpi was still hurt by him; thus her duty then and now was to support her daughter in times of her need, to help heal her wounds.

"Yes Aai. Why would I lie to you? Everything is okay now" she told Kamla with a big genuine smile in her eyes and on her lips. Fortunately for her, after some convincing, Kamla believed her and immediately requested her to arrange a meeting between herself and Raghav someday. "It has been years I have seen him and Gauri. Can you do this much for me Kalpi?"

Kalpi: "Yes Aai, I can do it. I'll request Raghav to take out time for you some day. But you know na he also has to look after his business with this, so he remains busy".

"Okay beta, no problem. I can wait for him some more" Kamla said and turned to sleep on the Diwan in living room.

"Aai" Kalpi called out to her; playing with her fingers she contemplated telling Kamla about her and Raghav's intimate dance performance this evening in press conference. By tomorrow morning it shall be all over the news and media. "Umm...Aai, Raghav and I had to...give an impromptu dance performance all of a sudden today in the press conference" she told Kamla with question in her eyes.

Kamla looked at her a few moments and patted her arm "its okay. I understand your profession and I trust you both".

"Oh Aai, I love you so much" Kalpi hugged Kamla, and gave her a kiss on her cheek.

"Ha ha, pagli" Kamla said "Now go and sleep".

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Kalpi was till awake, thinking about the shooting which was to start after three days; and their promos were to go on-air since tomorrow. "What will happen now? Why is it happening to me again? Oh Raghav why have you returned to my life?" she wondered, worrying like anything, as she remembered their evening dance and craziness which she had seen in Raghav's eyes for her.

Whereas on the other hand Raghav was too happy; after so many years he had felt her soft body against him and it had felt so...good! "Umm...I can get addicted to this" he thought "the countdown starts now Kalpi, it will be fun" with a smirk he took a turn in his bed and drift off to a peaceful sleep, dreaming about his closeness with Kalpi.

NOTE: I have added few more lines to the interview section as one reader pointed out the fact that no express replies were given in the update by Kalpi. So I have added some lines to this section. Please note that apart from this one question, Kalpi was asked other questions also which I have not highlighted separately. The added portion is highlighted in green.

Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction using characters from the show 'Ek Mutthi Aasmaan" on 'Zee TV". The characters are owned by creators and owners of the show.

PART-11


Edited by chahat4u - 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
Me first 👏Me first 👏
Oh my my👏 What an update Charu, it's amazing and the song is my Fav 😳and u described there feelings so well

I totally fell in love with this update😉


Keep up the good work and do update fast 😆 Can't wait for so long😆😆
Edited by Chin2_n - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
So sorry dear that I forgot to unres the comment yesterday. So as soon as I got some free time during my lunch break I'm typing this away on my phone.
Wow, Charu! What an awesome update! Totally ragnalicious ! Loved it to the core! I can't stop blushing even now. You are aptly named the 'queen of romance'. Raghav is going all out to make Kalpi uncomfortable. The promo shooting was nice. She was dreading the press conference thinking that he will create some situation there but never in her wildest dreams she would have thought of what's going to happen. The impromptu dance performance was out of this world. Loved your song selection. You have come out of the comfort zone of 'tum hi ho ' but gave us another fabulous song, again apt for ragna. Even though the purpose of the dance was to show the crackling chemistry between them, he was putting her in more uncomfortable situations. But once the dance started they forgot the audience. It was like they were alone, performing only for each other. They forgot their differences and just listened to their heart. Raghav was mesmerised by her and was making love to her through his eyes. The dance and the awesome song together with the sizzling chemistry of ragna and the effect was magical! The TV production house was happy that they could utilise the crackling chemistry of their lead.
Once the performance was over, they realised that they still affect each other. Raghav understood that it's no more about winning over her but he has fallen for her. Kalpi 's realisation that Raghav knows she's affected by him. At home she decides to confess everything to her mom. Kamala assured by Kalpi that they have sorted out their differences and so wants to meet Raghav. I can't wait to see him at her doorstep with that smirk on his face. Love you darling for such an amazing update. I think I'm going to read it again 🤗❤️
Edited by ragna_luv - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow Charu this Chapter is sensational..
The way you have detailed the whole shoot/reality actually. Rags determination and Kalpi's fear. the sensations and the racing hearts. My heartbeat was also at a faster rate.
Kalpi is going deeper in the emotions. wonder when will she finally be able to confront her feelings.
The songs and the way you have explained..uff!! tooo good.
The dumbstruck audience.. count me in too..
it was exciting to see it unveil.. everyone wondering was it real or acting... wow... too awesome

Love the song you have picked and the intensity from SRK😉
Edited by spontaneousmini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Charuuu dear you are just too much yaar! How romantic!!! Loved this sensuously sensationally sexy update! Uff RagNa magic on!!!! They set the stage on fire!!!
Kalpi is so affected by him! And Raghav finally realised that it was never Revenge for him infact all he had wanted was her!!!

Exceptionally beautiful episode my romance queen! U seem to be a die hard romantic yaar! Wish I could write such scenes!!! I am soo soo jealous of you right now!!!
Edited by priya_remix - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow charu dear its sooo beautiful romantic lovely update. A big hug🤗4 u.please continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome, looking forward to them working together
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Wow charu!! What an amazing update! First of all I must tell you I love the movie 'Veer Zaara' I love all the songs from this movie! This song especially is ah song that is so emotional!! I pictured every move of rags and Kalpi! You described it so clearly!! Hats off to you for that!! All the passion in his eyes towards her and she cannot help herself falling for each movement of his! He really knows how to get her in the moment!! Amazing you are!! Loved each and every minute of this wonderful seduction!! DAMN!! This man is HOT!!! LOL... Poor Kalpi trapped in his arms and his touch boy was to awesome! She had no choice but to give in!! And when she backed out it only made him feel more happy cause he knew she cud not resist him!! LOL her conversation with her mom only made things worse for her becasue she didn't tell the truth of how she really feels about him and I just feel it will land her in more trouble LOL cause Kamla is of the opinion that all what has happened before was rectified! Boy oh boy I can't wait for that day when he shows up in her door step LOL and again will take advantage of the situation!! Awesome your are! I think I said that already ;)!! Thanks charu for this amazing update and your talent is just awesome!! Love you!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg girl u set my iPhone on fire! Brilliant update loved it so much .

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