Hey guys!
So. I have written a poem. Well, not really a poem in the strictest sense, but I have written something. I have plenty more in my drafts folder. So this is going to be a thread of all my poems I've done on qh. Please tell me if they are good or not, and if I should just stop wasting my time. 😆
This poem I wrote, is centred around the relationship between Tanveer and Aahil.
In Aahil's pov!
toothless.
I had a dream that you bit
out my pale, fragile teeth
Made a necklace with each of them
Wiped the blood off with silk
and then you looked
me dead in my toothless face,
whispered
"I'm sorry, but you were going
to eat me alive either way."
And in that dream I said, yes.
Yes.
Okay. I know, it was very short. Sorry for that.
And if you didn't get what the poem meant, here is its dictionary:
The teeth are a metaphor for Aahil's entire life. Tanveer stole it from him, and she wears it proudly too, even though nobody can see it apart from herself. < That's the necklace metaphor there. And the dialogue, its Tanveer admitting that Aahil is going to be the end of her, no matter what she does, so she may as well take the last of what he calls his, for she is greedy. And Aahil agrees with her, because inside, (this is a dream, after all) he knows that he is going to be the end of her, too. Oh, and the silk just signifies her power and stuff.
And sorry for all the creepy vibes it gave you, if any. I sort of have a stomachache too.
I hoped you liked this one!
Thanks for Faru and her lovely encouraging ways. I love you bae 🤗
sorry for any erorrs.
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Kumkum Bhagya
