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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
I love you

How can I not?

Every tooth is every drop of blood in his body. Every bones in his body. Every flesh in his body.

And she wants it all. And she takes it all. And parades, and struts and frets and sashay her way...showing, exposing revelling. Your every fibre belongs to me, she says.

But dream it was. Dream.

And don't they say dreams are reflections of our innermost thoughts. No, they didn't say. But I am.

Why is being toothless not a problem for him. He wants to give her all he can, all of him.

She owns him.

He was gonna kill her anyway. So why not.

Why not.

Why not give her all that she wants. Why not. He wants to. And he can. So he does.

Toothless he is now, but he was gonna kill her anyway.

I love you too.

Yes.

She does own him. From the soles of his shoes to the words on his tongue, she owns him.

Being toothless is a small task for Aahil, because even if he gives his soul to her, it wont be enough. He thinks that. Not me of course. 😆

And he knows that he is going to be the end of her, because every thing he touches, it burns into ash. So he may as well give all that he thinks he can put his name on to her. He thinks that too. Not me. Never.

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#12

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
You were gonna eat me alive anyway

GAHHH

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#13

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
You awesome dippy babyyy

you're awesome too, love!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sahil333
Brilliant Suds 👏. I like poems 😉.

Great, along with the dictionary, oh I like it A LOT. Very smart of you. 👍🏼

TQ ❤️🤗

Thanks love!

I like poems too, they tell so much in so little.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath
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OH. MY.GOODNESS. What. Was. That. I almost shuddered and cringed at this. It gave me all sorts of vibes.
WHAT IN THE NAME OF THE HELL EVEN?!!

I had to read it the second time, ONLY then I realised this has such a deep meaning. Yes I din't get the meaning in the first place, but second time it got all clear.

Oh man Sarru!! Wow. This was just so effing creepily gorgeous and cringing-ly beautiful. Those sorta things which make you want to cry but all you could do is sob with muffled cries...

Toothless.
Heartless. Lifeless.

Oh man! Your titles!!

I had a dream that you bit
out my pale, fragile teeth

She dug out every part of emotions and feelings from him, his heart and his soul, which were ever existed in him. Making him "toothless" aka Heartless.

Made a necklace with each of them
Wiped the blood off with silk

She made a beautiful joke about those feelings and emotions of his and took away any love left in his heart..

:'(( OH GOD!! This is so...so..I don't even know! THIS IS SO PAINFUL.

BUT.

Yes. He would eat her alive either way. He would.

Oh Sudsie!! Sarru! You are the best thing ever happened <3 Love you babe!! :*

Haha, I thought it would give off creepy vibes 😆

I kinda had a bit of stomach ache too.

Thank you so much 🤗

YES YOU GOT IT IN ONE.

TOOTHLESS = HEARTLESS, LIFELESS.

If you think about it carefully, what would you be without teeth?

With teeth you can eat. With teeth you can speak (better, anyway.). They are such important things, because with food, you die. If you cant speak, how can you have an opinion about anything at all? Simple hand gestures will not be as effective as the power of speech.

Tanveer bit those teeth out- she took his beliefs, took his opinions, took his ability to fend for himself, she took it all out.

And then she paraded around with everything that he could never call his around her neck.

Tanveer likes playing with Aahil's mind. He has become a toy for her.

And Aahil, poor, broken Aahil, knows that he is going to be the end of her, but for the wrong reasons. He thinks that he is filth, something that should be thrown away, and just his touch will end Tanveer.

Which, of course, is wrong because he's gonna find out the truth and then kill the bitch with thin daggers. They're more painful.

I love you too love <3 🤗

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#16

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2
Suds...

This is creepy n haunting even with a dictionary.

I don't know what to comment.
I don't have words to comprehend.

It's not anymore about good, bad or Ugly.
Because clearly what I see is the iris.

What are you woman. Why are you even here.
You belong elsewhere...A star that blinds me with its brilliance.
Love.
Juliet!

I know, its creepy shit. 😆

Oh, thank you so much for these lovely words babe!

You make me blush all sorts of colours <3333

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#17

Originally posted by: TVD-IANcrazy
OMG Suds. 😲 That was mindblasting...just the newest and shiniest version of bloody awesomeness. Wooohhh girl!!!! How very gory yet fantastic. 😆 The gore didn't creep me out. Well, they never did. 😆 Absolutely love it. ;)

Thank you so much love <3

Gore f**ks me up bro. I cannot even read the word blood without feeling like my legs are going to break 😆

I'm a little f**ked up like that, but I think you know that already.

Thank you

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#18

Originally posted by: sylvia99
Beautiful.

thanks love <3

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#19

Originally posted by: Tamara27
I shivered, Sudsie.
I mean...

F*** man!

Farz will tell you I don't really do deep poetry, but you know that I'll read anything you write...

And now I'm cold.
Frozen.

What the hell, woman...?

This is so deep, man.

No words, really.

I wanna say share more, and really, you must... but I'm a summer girl, and you've given me goosies here.

I love you ❤️

Thanks love.

Aww babe thank you for reading even if you don't like poetry 🤗

It is a little creepy, I'll admit that. But I'm a f**ked up woman, so.

I love you too <333

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Okay. This poem might trigger anyone? idk. It's about prostitution.

You know when it was said that Seher was going to enter prostitution or something? I don't really know what happened because I don't watch qh anymore, but I wrote this then. It's not really good though, and I don't know what to do with it, so. This is sort of Seher's pov, but not really, because I honestly do not know what stuff she did when she was a teenager.

Its not all teeth pulling creepy like the last one. Still f**ked up though. And sadly true in the real world, too.

animals.

who told you about the animal inside of them?
who told you about the things that crawl on all fours
eyes full black like the absent moon
waiting for you in the dark?
you are sixteen and you aren't afraid of anything
have learned to howl at the sky
like you are already broken, like you already
can't feel it
when they come up to you at the black lit streets
mouths twisted into a snarl
you can see their teeth, and you don't run
instead, you offer up your neck, your thighs, your arms
to the ones who burn like cigarettes on skin
to the ones who never apologize
to the ones who draw blood like it is their calling
and it doesn't feel good, but it is what you know
what you've seen, what you've come to expect
without blinking
"boys will be boys"
part of you wants to choke on that phrase
wants to stab it through the heart and watch the life
drain out of it
"boy will be boys"
some will be animals
boys are trouble
the kind of trouble you have learned
to go looking for
and the real heartbreak of that
of all of this
is that you always find it