VRIMARFF- KITANI MOHOBBAT HAI

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guys i m new at if ... and i like to write VRIMAR STORIES AS FR ME IT WAS VRIMAR CHEMISRTY😳 😛VCH MADE TAAREY SO POPULAR...👏
P.S. all eggs nd tomatoes r allowed
GUYS HERE IS THE TEASER OF MY VRIMAR FF- KITANI MOHOBBAT HAI
REPORTER- MAM U HAVE CREATED MANY COUPLES WHO R FAMOUS TILL DATE LIKE ARMAAN-RI😳DHIMA, SWARON, TAAREY ... AND NW ANOTHER LUV STORY CUMING UP BY PALKI MALHOTRA ... ANY THING U WOULD LIKE TO SAY TO THE VIEWERS AND UR FANS WHO WERE EAGERLY WAITING FR UR CUM BACK...
PALKI- YAA I M VERY FORTUNATE ABT THE FACT THAT THE JODIS CREATED BY ME DO VERY WELL... AND YAA THIS TIME TOO IM SURE THAT THIS TIME ALSO MY SHOW WOULD DO WELL I M RECREATING THE MAGIC OF 1 OF THE MOST HAPPENING COUPLE OF TV.. ''VRINDA DAWDA AND KUNWAR AMARJEET SINGH'' I M GETTING THEM BACK ON HIGH DEMAND VID ANOTHER SHOW '' KITANI MOHOBBAT HAI'' ...
... ab kya puri story thodi na bta dungii... likes thoko story ka 1st part paaoo...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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pari sirf post nahi pm bhej taab jakelikes aur comments milegaaa
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Nice concept...
Continue n update soon...
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sooo guys i m here vid the first part of my VRIMARFF- KITANI MOHOBBAT H...
P.S.- guys do remember its a vrimar story nt a taarey story.. so ill b true to their personality.. and their love story would progress slowly...
PART-1
a girl sleeping on her beautiful bed... đŸ„±sun was trying to adore her beauty through the window... the DIVINE BEAUTY was none other than MISS VRINDA DAWDA... she slowly flatterd her eye lashes in order to see the beautiful day...
she went towards mirror and opened her eyes.. ''thank you krishnajii'' fr a new day...
BHAVIN CALLS- gud mrng mera bacha uth gya...
VRINDA- haaa... (sleeping tone)
HIRAL- vrinda jaldii aa breakfast is ready...
(she immediately saw the watch) .. o god its 11.30 ..already.. bhavin ill talk to u later... byeee...
i m late 1 bje to muje palki mam ne apne office bulaaya h.. (chal vrinda beta fatafat ready hoja..)
here vid our rockstar... as usual he was adoring her beautiful bikeđŸ˜†đŸ€ŁHEY BABY.. kitne din ho gye mene tumhe pamper ni kia h ... awww my baby is upset vid me... muaahh... but kya karu swthrt D3 end hone ke baad indore jaana pda u knw aftr so many days family k sath time spend kia... bt nw i m back vid u... (here miss charlie came )AGN U R ROMANCING VID UR BIKE.. she is literally irritated vid his behavioursory baby jhagda hum baadme continue karenge abi palki mam ne bulaya h apne office ... bye bye..
both r getting ready to go to mam's office but they themselves dnt knw vat destiny has in store fr thm..





PART-2
guies amar was already there in the office and sitting on the chair bt his back was facing the enterance door(hope u understand vat i m trying to say)
vrinda reached palki mam's office...
VRINDA- helooo mam
PALKI- ohhoo ye lo aa gyi meri gujju heroine..
(amar rolled on the chair to see and both were shocked to see each other .. amar stood up frm the chair..) and not to frget ...LLHH
(Both were seeing each other as if meeting aftr ages.. both of their heart were craving to see each other bt both of them are on denial mode fighting vid their hearts... amar was lost in vrinda and vice-versa... palki was noticing this.. she was vry much aware of their feelings frm the frst day itself ...)
PALKI- helo... itnaa sannate kyu h bhai
(both came into the real world)
Amar- oh hii vrinda tum yha kaise.. i mean i dnt knew that tum b yha mam se milne aa rhi ho
palki- le usse aaye hue to 10 min ho gye ye ques. to tuje 10 min. pehle poochna chaiye tha.. vaise amar soch kya rha tha tu...
Amar - niii... (hesitatingly... bechaara pakda na jaayekai )ni kuch nAI...
vrinda- hii amar vo muje to yha mam ne bulaya h tooo... (cutted by palki)
palki- are baitho me tum dono ki confusion door karti hu... actually sum days ago ekta cald me up that she wasnts to make a kitani mohobbat hai -3... and she wants me to become a creative head as well as the co producer of the shw.. whch means sirf name Balaji ka hoga and all the decisions realted to the shw vil b taken by me... its a joint venture between me and ekta... so yaa i talked to ekta that i hv finalised the lead couple...
amar& vrinda- wow mam ... kon???
Palki- tum dono...
shocked ! shocked! shocked!
VRIMAR (together) vat hum dono ...
Vrinda- bt mam apne to mera audition b ni liya to pir
palki- abey kaise dhakkan ho tum dono i mean seriously u both think ki muje tum dono ka audition lene ki jaroorat h... and trust me guys big banner project h... shw name se hi itna popular h of ekta kapoor .. uske upar tum dono as a couple who has immense fan following and evn demand and the cherry on the cake is STAR PLUS... and nt to frget i m the creative hahahsochlo decision tum dono kaa hoga bt i would personally suggest that itni achi oppotunity ko apne hath se math jaane doAmar- mam i m ready (without taking a pause) ( vrinda was literally amused ki itni jaldi usne haa kar dii .. moreovr she was nt able to digest it...)
Vrinda- bt mam i need some time to think...
Amar- haa mam isse to time chaiye hoga apne would b betr half se jo poochna padega isse (giving an angry glare as if taunting her đŸ€Ș
Vrinda - aisa kuch ni h me abi b apne decisions khud leti hu .. rishta paka hua h to kya hua its still my life ( ahha our jhansi ki raani answered back vid full on attitudeđŸ‘đŸŒ
Palki was noticing all these happenings nd sumwhere she got the doubt ki koi jal rha h 😆đŸ€Ș
precap- (press conference and launch party and amar hurts himself in the party ... )
sochte raho kyu

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  • PART-3 RECAP- vrimar meet and amr gets jealous Amar- watever Vrinda- mam i m jst saying that i need time to think i cant make instant decisions.. and moreover its related to my career Amar- ohh realy u need time to think... WOW.. (literally shouting) time to think whether to work vid palki mam or not rgt? the person who made u vat u r today... yes miss vrinda dawda take ur time and decide...(sarcastically) Vrinda- mam i m too ready.. fr this project...(giving an angry glare) to amar (amar had a victory smirk on his face... :D) Palki- vrinda u take ur time ... i m in no hurry... Vrinda- no mam i said na i m ready... i jst wanted time to think over (luking at amar) bt i guess logo ne iss chiz ka kuch aur hi matlab nikaal diya.. i respect u mam and i knw it... muje kisis ko prove karne ki jaroorat ni... ye mera decision h.. i m ready to work in KMH... Palki- grt thn.. ill call ekta thn.. nd vry soon v vil make an official announcement... they both signed the contract and left frm the office... they left frm the office nd were heading towards their respective vehicles at the parking... Amar called vrinda... bt she was vry annoyed vid him bcz of the scene he created in mam's office.. amar- vrinda listen plss Vrinda- kyu abi b kuch bolna baaki h.. say thn... Amar- luk i dnt wanted to hurt u.. bt pta ni.. (cutted by vd) Vrinda- u hv always hurted me... amar.. (LLHH) Amar- aur is baar tumne muje hurt kia... well congrats fr ur new life... i hope u and bhavin khush ho sath me Vrinda -yaa i m vry happy (sumthng broke in amar he dint feel nice hearing it) bht khush hu me... bhavin luvs me a lot bht caring and luving h .. a perfect life partener... infact uski family b meri bht care karti h .. bhavin mujse bht pyaar karta h nd(cutted by amar) Amar-( cuming closer to her) aur kya tum bhavin se pyaar karti ho? (intense tone ) (LLHH) Vrinda- h... (hesitates vid such a close proximity) haaa haa me b usse pyaar karti hu Amar- (cums more close) ( nw both cn feel each other) really? tume to sach me jooth bolna ni aata ( hailaa beti pakdi gyi) amar goes on his bike frm their... vd was confused b/w her heart nd mind she brushed away the thoughts nd headed towards her car.. In evening... palki calls both of thm that the press conference is tomorrow morning and thn in evening their is launch party of the show... BOTH OF THM REACHED AT THE VENUE WHER THE PRESS CONFERENCE WAS HELD... vrinda was wearing this outfit... (pic updated) amar was as usual liking dashing in casual.. palki introduced vrimar as a lead couple of the show to media fr their shw named KITANI MOHOBBAT HAI... Reporter- mam u r an amazing creative as v knw the shws and jodis created by u r popular till today... so this time u r trying to recreate magic of an already established couple of d3... Palki- actually in d3 i was bound vid certain rules nd regulations so i was nt able to explore the sparkling chemisrty b/w vrimar bt KMH vil b recognised by THEIR CHEMISRTY... precap- amar hurts himself at the launch party and vrimar arguement " with Nikita Bhatia and 7 others.

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  • 6/14, 11:30pm
    Dimple Jaswani

    SORY FR THE LATE UPDATE GUYS... soolllyyy PART-4 VRIMAR FF- KITANI MOHOBBAT H RECAP- vrinda agrees and signs the contract of shw and press conference. So press conference went in good swing vrimar met ekta and gave lot of interviews vid PM , EKTA abt the shw... Palki- (aftr the press conference got ovr) so hope u guys enjoyed nw b ready fr the launch party at ngt ...and yaa amar bring charlie too and vrinda u too cum along vid Bhavin... Amar- yaa mam ufcorse ill bring charlie as obviously shez my g.f. (sarcastically luks at vd) Vrinda- grt thn ill also cum vid Bhavin as he is my beau...(returning it back to him ) (palki thinks - aaj jarur party me kuch drama hone wala h (B|) Palki- chalo thn meet u guys at ngt... ( ^_^) AMAR WENT HOME AND TOLD CHARLIE ABT THE PARTY.. ALTHOUGH SHE WASN'T HAPY AS SHE NVR WANTED AMAR TO WORK VID VRINDA SUMWHER SHE HAD DOUBT ABT AMAR'S FEELINGS FR VRINDA BT SHE CANT AFFORD TO LOOSE HIM AS ''THE TAG OF KUNWAR'S GF CAN ONLY MAKE HER SURVIVE IN THIS INDUSTRY AT NGT (PARTY WAS GOING ON IN FULL SWING... IT WAS A BIG HIGH CLASS PARTY VID ALL THE REPUTED PRODUCERS AND THE WELL KNOWN FACES OF INDIAN TELLYWOOD) AMAR ENTERD ALONG VID CHARLIE ... PALKI AND THE OTHER PEOPLE GAVE HIM A WARM WELCOME HE WAS VRY HAPY AS HE KNW THAT THIS SHW WOULD GIVE A NW SHAPE TO HIS CARRER BT WAS UNKNOWN VID THE FACT THAT THE SHW WOULD CREATE A HUGE HAVOC IN HIS PERSONAL LIFE TOO Well he was talking to the ppl and producres bt his eyes were searching sum1 else (v all knw who ) SO HIS WAIT FINISHED AS THE DIVA ENTERD THE PARTY VID HER KILLING LUKS (Pic of the dress uploaded ... ) AMAR GOES NUMB SEEING HER ... Amar- (god damm shez luking hell sexy ) Vat kya bakwaas kar rha hu me.. bt ye chommu iske sath bilkul fit nhi ho rha ... W*F vrinda ne kya dekha is gadhe me Isse betr to me hu Vrinda (holding bhavin's hand) hey guys (to charmar) Charlie- hi baby kaisi h (she immediately hugged her ) hi bhavin.. Bhavin- hi Vrinda- bhavin this is amar my CO-STAR (stressing on it) Bhavin- ofcorse i knw bht taarif suni h inki and u both r highly appreciated fr ur chemisrty ,... dekhta rehta hu ye sab social networking sites p.. u both r immensely praised Amar- yaa ofcorse it is so bcz (pulling vrinda towards himself) V MAKE A GRT COUPLE (intensely gazing at vd bhavin dnt like it) (vrinda felt a bit weird and she pushed him away vch made amar angry) Charlie- vats wrong amar vrinda se aise kyu behave kar rhe ho hamesha vrinda ke aas paas rehne se tum weird behave karte ho vats wrong amar(shouting) Amar- nothing .. kitni baar kha h tumhe... hamesha 1 hi swaal pooch kar tum mera dimaag khrab karti ho... (he goes frm ther ) Palki- so guys i hope evry1 is enjoyng the party ... so let me introduce u THE STARS OF TONIGHT AMAR AND VRINDA (big applause fr thm.. )

    VRIMAR CAME ON STAGE EVRY1 WAS GREETING THM MEDIA WAS SURROUNDING THM THEY MADE POSES FR THE PICS Palki- so u both also enjoy vid ur respective partners cummon guys BURN THE DANCE FLOOR Vrinda along vid bhavin started dancing amar was nt liking it at all... they were doing a couple dance... Charlie- amar chal na apan b dance karte h.. Amar- nhi u enjoy mera man nhi h vrivin were dancing having fun... (bt kisi ke jalne ki badbu aa rhi thi amar had a glass of drink in his hand in anger he broke the glass through his hand he got hurt (awaaz b aayi so all startd luking towards amar) Precap- amar agressively smacked his lips on vrinda's lips in short (VRIMAR KISS

  • 6/14, 11:33pm
    Dimple Jaswani

    holllaaa honney buns nd i m back... part- 5 vrimar ff - kitani mohobbat hai recap- launch party , amar hurts himself blood was flowing frm his hands ... cahrlie ran to him C- oh my god ye kaise hua... u ok amar? A- amar was nt responding (he was jst staring vrinda) ...chalo gar chalo me dressing kar dungi (vrinda wanted to go towards amar seeing him hurt .. as she could feel his pain .. bt was controlling herself ) Vrinda- (went ther) haa charlie is rgt amar jao tum charlie k sath jao bht khoon beh rha h.. Palki- bt ye lagi tuje kaise.. ullu dhyaan kha tha tera (as if palki dnt knws ) aur gar jaane ki jaroorat nhi h as ye launch party vrinda & amar dono k shw ki h... 1 kaam karo is hotel me mere naam se 1 room book h amar tu vha jaa nd me waitor ko kehti hu room me fsrt aid kit le ayega... ok vaise b chota sa scretch h nd Kunwar to mard ki aulaad h hainaa ! till that time bhavin's cell ring a call frm office he need to leave immediately... Vrinda- kya hua kiska call tha? B- are office se tha.. muje abi jaana padega nhi to prblm ho jaegi.. V-bt party .. cahlo koi ni tum jao ? B- bt tum kaise gar jaogi hum to sath aye the to? V- chail baba ill call vicky vo muje pick karne aa jayega ... tum jao PALKI- abey tum log chill maaro yaar.. vrinda ko mera driver chod dega u dnt wory bhavin.. (bhavin left) and amar tu jaa bhai khoon beh rha h.. C- haa amar 1 kaam karo tum mere sath chalo me tumhari dressing kar deti hu... Palki- (smart she is ) arey charlie tu mat jaa abi MR. RAJAN SHAHI aa rhe h.. vo 1 naya shw bana rhe h .. me tuje recomend karne vali hu.. tu yahi ruk... VRINDA tu jaa amar ko leja uski dressing kar lena... Charlie- (ab charlie itni aasani se amar ka peecha to chodne se rhi ) are mam 5 min lagenge faltu vrinda kyu pareshan hoye me jaldi amar ki dressing kar dungi.. Amar- ITS OK yaar me khud chala jaata hu . i m nt a kid mam is doing so much nd ho sakta h ye oppotunity tumhare career k liye achi ho.. to charlie u stay... and mam is rgt VRINDA mere hath p dressing kar degi (in his mind- jisne chot di h agar vai marham {medicine} lagaye to sai h )(& morovr he wanted sum time off vid vd to talk ) Vrinda was confused, shocked as well as nervous... Palki - (grabs the opportunity ) correct.. jao jao tum dono .. vrimar left... (waitor directed thm the room nd bought the frst aid kit ) VRIMAR IN ROOM V- baitho... (she takes the kit and spred the antiseptic ovr the cotton).. she takes amar's hand and was applying the medicine ovr his hand in the mean time our hero was adoring her beauty A- oouuccchhh ... V- sory sory jyada dard ho rha h A- haa bht jyada... btw tum kyu pooch rhi h aftr all dard dene waali b to tum hi ho...(sarcastically) this was end fr vrinda she was bearing his taunts fr last 2 days vidout knowing the reason V- ENOUGH ( she stood up nd shouted) bht ho gya me kabse aap ke taunts nd anger bear kar rhi hu iska matlab ye ni ki aap apni limits cross karenge MR KUNWAR AMARJEET SINGH A- oh realy ... SO MISS INNOCENT KO KUCH NHI PTA.. RGT? OH PLZZ VRINDA ( holds he tightly fr hr shoulders) tum bachi nhi ho jo mere behaviour ka matlab nhi samaj paa rhi (LLHH) V- (tries to free herself frm the grip) KYA SAMJU ME HAA KYAA (shouts).. PURI DUNIYA APKI MARZI SE NI CHALTI ... MERI MARZI B MAINE RAKHTI H AUR ME BHAVIN K SATH APNI MARZI SE HU... U KNW VAT ..! ATLEAST VO APSE ACHA H... KAM SE KAM APNE DIL KI BAAT TO MUJSE SHARE KARTA H UNLIKE U.. ME KAS JISKE DIL ME KYA H KISI KO SAMAJ NHI AATA,... A- (pulls hr closer) tum sachme jaan na chahti ho mere dil me kya h? (intensely LLHH) V- 2 saal tak aap nhi keh paaye ab kya kahenge aap ( vid teary eyes) aur vaise b ab in sab baato ka koi matlab nhi h... mera rishta paka ho chuka h ... (she was abt to leave frm the room bt amar holds her hands and pinned her to the wall) he crushed his rough lips on her soft ones.. vrinda was shocked by this action she tried to free herself frm the kiss bt his grip was too strong he was sucking hr, tasting her sweetness as if no tomorrow... he pulled her more closer & deepend the kiss nw she was also responding to the kiss .. both were kissing each other wildly.. amar startd nibbling her lower lip thn her upper lip she was enjoying.. in the mean time his hands were exploring the curves of her body pulling her more closer... nw vrinda was out of breath she cluchtd his hairs... vch gave a signal to amar .. he parted his lips... both were unable to understand as to vat hapnd a fraction of seconds ago.. vrinda vidout saying anything ran out of the room.. PRECAP- VRIMAR DANCE AT PARTY (galliyan frm ek villan)

  • 6/14, 11:34pm
    Dimple Jaswani

    FRST OF ALL KAAN PAKAD K SOLLYY BHT LATE HO GYI ME UPDATE KARNE ME... MAAF KARDO IS NAACHIS KO... PART-6 KITANI MOHOBBAT HAI vrinda rushed towards the washroom ... she washed her face.. by srinkling water ovr her beautiful face trying to figure out as to vat happened between her nd amar... DID THE KISS CONVEY ANY EMOTION? OR IT JST HAPPENED IN THE HEAT OF THE MOMENT? these questions were encircling her mind... amar on the other hand was looking fr vrinda ... he reached in the party... Palki- are tu akele ...vrinda kha h... sath me the na tum dono (amar's face was emotionless ... he was jst lost in his own world ) palki noticed this and she understood that sumthing is wrong? in the mean time vrinda also comes back to the party her face was dull nd pale as if her emotions are dead ... amar was looking fr vrinda.. nd yes he saw her cuming in the party he rushed towards her... Amar- vrinda i need to talk to u Vrinda- (arrogantly) bt i dnt want Amar- luk i knw jo hua... (was abt to complete bt was cutted by vrinda) Vrinda- GALAT HUA ... (by hearing this amar's heart broke into pieces ) Amar- (stammers) G ... GA .. GALAT... Vrinda- haa galat... it happened in the heat of the moment... amar jst left the party he was completely broken sumwhere he knw that that kiss was the ''KISS OF LOVE '' bt vrinda's words stabbed his heart... he was nt able to handle the pain the PAIN he was going through bt this scene was noticed by sum1 .. yess .. Palki mam noticed this and she went outside in the parking where amar was fighting vid his emotions.. she kept her hand on his shoulders... before amar could speak up anything palki said '' tuje pta h amar... mere bnaye hue couples itte famous kyu hote h (touchwood) bcz by god's grace i have power of vision.. i cn feel, my sixth sense commands me that YES they r perfect couple jst like made fr each other... jab mene karan aur jenny ko DMG k liye rope kia tha i told Danish that dekhna kuch b ho jaaye karan chahe kitni b ladkiyo ko date karle shaadi aur pyaar vo jenny se hi karega... same was vid shaan nd vrushi .. ladte h paaglo ki trah dono bt r inseperable jst LIKE TOM & JERRY... aur jab pehli baar mene tera aur vd ka workshop lia tha na sath me.. tabi b mene yai kha tha danish ko ki muje 1 aur real life karan aur jenny nazsar aa rhe h .. amar was shocked as well as surprised .. at palki's words.. Palki- tuje kya lagta h muje kuch ni pta... ... beta 10 years diye h mene iss indusrty ko ... sab pta h muje ... reel luv stories bnate bnate luv ki feeling ko feel karne waali power h mere andar... aur teri feelings ko lekar me day 1 se hi sure thi.. bas tu gadha jisne ab tak realise nai kia... Amar- mam shayad ab bhool rhi h .. i m commited .. i m in a relationship.. Palki- jis commitment me pyaar na ho vo commitment ni DEAL kehlaayi jaati h... jitna muje kehna tha me keh chuki hu baaki tu samaj... aur haa apni shakal theek kar aur party me aaja.. its nt finished yet... Amar went in the party... vrinda too was there amar was standing vid charlie... suddenly lights turned off... palki mam announced that i want my lead couple to have a dance together so cn i invite AMAR ND VRINDA ON THE STAGE PLSS ... FLASH LIGHT FOLLOWED THM ND THEY CAME UP ON THE STAGE PALKI MAM WINKS DANISH SONG STARTED (Jab tak hum kisi ke humdard nahi bante na ) ( Tab tak hum dard se aur dard hum se juda nahi hota ) O.. Yahin doobe din mere Yahin hote hain savere Yahin marna aur jeena Yahin Mandir aur Madeena... x2 Teri galiyan... galliyan teri, galliyan.. Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galliyan Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri, galliyan.. Yuhin tadpavein, galliyan teri, Galliyan... Tu meri neendo me sota hai Tu mere ashqo mein rota hai Sargoshi si hai khayalon mein Tu na ho, phir bhi tu hota hai Hai sila.. tu mere dard ka Mere dil ki duaayein hain.. Teri galiyan... galliyan teri, galliyan.. Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galiyan Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri, galliyan.. Yuhin tadpaavein, galliyan teri, galliyan.. Kaisa hai rishta tera-mera Be-chehra phir bhi kitna gehra Ye lamhe, lamhe ye resham se Kho jaayein.. kho na jaayein humse Kaafila.. waqt ka.. rok le.. Abr se juda na ho Teri galliyan... galliyan teri galliyan.. Mujhko bhaave galiyan teri galiyan Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri galliyan.. Yuhin tadpaave galliyan teri galliyan.. Galliyan... Teri galliyan.. Tadpaavein... (their dance was full of passion and eye lockes beautiful lifts nd intensity as the song ended all gave a round of applause fr VRIMAR bt sum 1 was burning seeing their closeness... yes none other than charlie Palki- (in her mind ) ISS SHOW KE START HONE SE PEHLE IN DONO KO COUPLE BANA KAR HI RAHUNGI ... I SWEAR Danish- bt kaise Palki - are beta abi to workshops nd show ka promotion baaki h.. show start hone me 1 month baaki h.. MERE LIYE BHT H.. PRECAP- vrimar at banglore fr show's promotion..

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just read all the parts in 1 go...
awsome concept...
love taarey's fight...
taarey kiss...hmm interesting...
love u palki mam...u r awsome...
plzzz updt soon and do pm me...
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wow awesome
loved it
Tr kiss
hope palki get success in her plan
update soon
pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesum story...really loved it!
VriMar sceens n chemistry was perfectly shown.
Love Palki Maa for making Amar realize the truth!
N I hope Amar sorts the problems soon before its too late...
Exited for the next update :)
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plzzz plzzz plzzz updt it,plzzz
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plzzz yaar updt it at least now...

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