IMAGINARY FF: Hum Sath Sath Hai...!!! new update @page 3

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Hey guys I am new to mahabharat forum. But I am a great fan of mahabharat. I want to start a FF some what different like others. It would be a family story of pandavs and kauravs living together happily. It vl focus the modern values and family tradition.. Plz tell me to continue or not.. Waiting for reply. With love...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys you don't want me to continue or not. Plz tell before writing first update...
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Hum Sath Sath Hai...!!!
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A huge villa in mumbai, decorated with flowers, lighting, colourful curtains, etc. A woman wearing a cream colour saree looking very rich was standing in hall giving instructions to the servants...
KUNTI - bhaiyya, ye ful us divar k pas lagenge. Aur ye parde ko thoda upar khichiye...
The servants work as instructed by her
KUNTI - sari tayyariya sahi se hojani chahiye
GANDHARI - chinta bilkul mat karo kunti
Kunti turn around to see gandhari dress in royal blue colour saree with heavy jewellery just looking as malkin of this haveli and yes she was, kunti jhethani, malkin of kapoor mansion...
KUNTI - chinta to hogi hi jiji, is parivar k nayi pidhi ki peheli shadi he
GANDHARI - ha ha.. Janti hu, is parivar k sabse bade bete ki ya yu kahe tumhare bete karna ki shadi he
Yes, it was wedding of karna and vrushali. Karna is eldest son of this house but he was not kapoor. He was kunti son only not her dead husband pandu. But everyone treated him as the member of this house and as the eldest of this haveli... After karna, yudhishtir is the eldest then bheem, then arjun and duryodhan of same age and atlast the baccha company that is nakul sahadev dushyasan and dushala. Dhritarashtra and gandhari were elder but still their three kids were younger than kunti and pandu kids. There was only happiness and love in kapoor mansion...
GANDHARI - Waise ghar me itni shanti q he.. Bacche kaha he
KUNTI - sab apne kam me busy he jiji. Shuruat karna se karti hu. Karna aur vrushali upar Vale kamre me tailor ko last trail de rahe he apne shadi k kapdo ka
Scene shift upstairs...
VRUSHALI - uffo bhaiyya.. Ye kitna tight hogaya he
TAILOR - mam Pichle mahine me hi measurements lekar gaya tha. Tight kaise hogaya
VRUSHALI - apke kehne ka matlab he me moti hogayi
KARNA - kisne kaha meri hone wali wife ko moti
Vrushali turn to see karna smiling and smirking...
KARNA - sirf me hi apni wife ko moti bol sakta hu
VRUSHALI - xcuse me
Vrushali look at him in anger for which he cutely asked sorry to her
KARNA - Koi bat nahi vrush.. Badi ma ne itne pyar se tumhare liye ye choose kiya he. You should except it
VRUSHALI - I know karna. Aur believe me mjhe Koi problem nahi he is lehenge se. I loved it
KARNA - mjhe tumse ye hi umid thi
VRUSHALI - bht pyar karte ho na in sab se
KARNA - Jan basi he in sab me meri vrush. In sab ne mere liye bht kuch kiya he. Mjhe apna surname b diya he. Aur isliye aaj me karna kapoor hu, kapoor industry ka MD...
Karna become emotional and vrushali hugs him...
Scene shift downstairs...
GANDHARI - sach me kunti, karna jaisa beta nasib walo ko hi milta he
KUNTI - vrushali jaisi bahu b
GANDHARI - Akhir choice kiski he
They both laugh
GANDHARI - bheem kaha he.. Ek min let me guess, kitchen me Ryt
KUNTI - ha jiji, bheem kitchen me he, sari dishes taste karwa raha he, hidimba ko
GANDHARI - bechari hidimba
Scene shift in kitchen...
Hidimba was sitting on chair and bheem was feeding her one by one dishes
HIDIMBA - stop bheem.. Me thak gayi hu taste kar kar ke
BHEEM - what yar hidimba.. Meri hone wali wife ho tum... Tumhe adat dalni chahiye khane ki
HIDIMBA - bheem, I am a human.. Mjhse Itna nahi khaya jata
BHEEM - Koi bat nahi Dhire Dhire khao
Bheem smiled and hidimba just nodded her head
HIDIMBA - you are impossible
BHEEM - thank you
He came forward and was about to kiss her when she stopped him
HIDIMBA - no bheem.. Abhi nahi.. Shadi k bad
BHEEM - come on yar.. Hamari adhi shadi hogayi he. V are angeged...
Saying he lean more on her...
Scene shift in hall...
GANDHARI - mjhe lagta he hidimba shadi tak to kafi healthy ho jayegi
KUNTI - jiji...
GANDHARI - Waise mere shaitan kaha he. Dury aur dushy
KUNTI - dono apne bade bhai ki help kar rahe he, mehmano ki list finalise karne k liye
GANDHARI - yudi ki.. Kaha...
KUNTI - study room me
Scene shift to study room...
DURY - Mr Patel
DUSHY - check
DURY - Mr and Mrs verma
DUSHY - check
DURY - shergil with family
DUSHY - not check
DURY - matlab
DUSHY - matlab Koi zarurat nahi he unhe bulane ki. Unke bete ne Pichli bar mjhe bike race me haraya tha
DURY - dushy tu pagal he. Ye guest dad k special client he. V should invite them
DUSHY - bilkul nahi
They were arguing
YUDI - Dury dushy stop
They became silent
YUDI - baccho ki tarah lad rahe ho
DURY - dekho na bhai kaise behave kar raha he ye
YUDI - Aur tum kya kar rahe ho. Wo tumhara chota bhai he na
Dushy teases Dury and he said sorry to yudi
YUDI - chalo ab continue your work
DURY - tjhe to me dekh Lunga dushy k bache
DUSHY - bhai agar apne mjhe kuch kiya na to me dad ko apki girl friend bhanu k bare me bata dunga
DURY - teri to
Scene shift in hall again
GANDHARI - he bhagwan pata nahi ye dono yudi ko kitna pareshan kar rahe honge
KUNTI - it's k jiji
GANDHARI - are sabse bade tufan to baki he... Nakul sahadev aur dushala kaha he
KUNTI - Wo teeno dance practice kar rahe he. Garden me
Scene shift to garden...
MEHENDI HE RACHNE WALI
HATHO ME GEHRI LALI
Dushala was doing practice when suddenly music system went off
DUSHALA - who dare that
NAKUL - me
DUSHALA - nakul on karo use.. I was practicing na
SAHADEV - ae barbie doll, bht hogayi teri practice ab hum practice karenge
DUSHALA - it's not fair saha.. Ladies first
NAKUL - par yaha ladies kon he
Dushala mouth open wide while nakul and sahadev high fie
DUSHALA - shut up
SAHADEV - pehele bhaiyya bol, fir remote dunga
DUSHALA - hahaha bhaiyya.. My foot
NAKUL - k then bye
DUSHALA - nah nah... K fine.. Nakul bhaiyya sahadev bhaiyya, plz give the remote
They gave remote and teases her while running from there while dushala throw towel on them...
Scene shift to hall...
KUNTI - bechari meri dushala, nakul sahadev jina mushkil kar rahe honge Uska
GANDHARI - ek hi umar k he fir b jhagadte rehte he. Nakul sahadev dushala se teen mahine bade he, fir b use bhaiyya bolne ko bolte he
KUNTI - bachpana he unme. Itne samajhdar kaha
GANDHARI - Waise mera samajhdar bacha kaha he
KUNTI - Mene use bazar bheja tha. Ata hi hoga
GANDHARI - arjun mere samne se Kahi chala jaye to mera man hi nahi lagta
KUNTI - ha ladla jo he apka
ARJUN - me agaya badi ma
They both turn to see arjun standing on door with a cute smile..
Handsome and intelligent, arjun is favourite of all... Let's see what is going to happen next... Stay tuned
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Guys it's just a imaginary story. Plz forgive me if anything bad or wrong I have written. And plz reply me as I am waiting for your lovely reply...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it please continue :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its a cute update😛...i wanna see arjun with draupadi 😳...and some cute romantic scenes between them😉...bring it on waiting for ur next update😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanjana_JA

Its a cute update😛...i wanna see arjun with draupadi 😳...and some cute romantic scenes between them😉...bring it on waiting for ur next update😃

Thank you dear. Well, I am a arjun subhadra fan and love their pair. But don't worry something good is going to happen. Plz don't get angry on me. Keep reading
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sirani07

Loved it please continue :)

Thank you dear. Atleast someone is reading my story. I think no one likes it that's why so much less reply I m getting. Feeling sad "
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dont worry to much about it...I think its because the forum is not so active anymore and most of the ffs are moved to fanfictions forums so this is not getting as much attention. Pm people u know itll get more people to read it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sirani07

Dont worry to much about it...I think its because the forum is not so active anymore and most of the ffs are moved to fanfictions forums so this is not getting as much attention. Pm people u know itll get more people to read it.

Thank you dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome, dear!!! Very lovely and jovial!!! Loved this idea of yours!!! Ek Aur Kalyug FF!!!! Hamare Kalyug FFs ka silsila chal raha hai!!! Read my FF too: Shubh Punah Milan!!

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