New Maaneet SS Kashmakash part1-11 & EPILOGUE @ PG84 updated - Page 48

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Posted: 10 years ago
Really emotional part
Maan did rt telling them their mistakes
Glad daadi stood by geet


Lovely ss
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago


wow lovely emotional heart winching update..te way geet was heart broken wen her mom called and asking her to behave properly and pain was lovely emotional..te way geet crying to my maan making him to realize how his geet living in his ignorance was lovely heart winching..te way geet ki family came to meet her and they words and my maan bursting on them and making to know wat they did, no no wat they didt do to they daughter as a parents was lovely emotional..i love te update so much..tis is last part..pls naa give some more my maaneet scenes, to keep them memorable..
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Posted: 10 years ago

SEE THE NOTE BELOW


Part-11

It has been a month now n life was moving smooth for maaneet,geet got all the love n care from maan n daddima,maan was always there for her,while maan was the happiest person seeing geet smile n happy.but still sumthing that lacked in there relation was that they couldnot move forward with there relation,or we can say maan couldnot take there relation ahead

At night they use to sleep together with geet hugging maan but still maan couldnot move forward in there relation,he was also a bit conscious n hesitant to ask geet abt it due to his guilt n his past deeds

Geet sat thinking thee about maan n there relation she was happy the way things have progressed n she was happy having her maan but still there was sumthing missing

She remembered that how whenever she tried to go closer to maan he was a bit hesitant n would make silly excuses to go away

She remembered how last night when geet wore a small nighty n banged in maan when he came from washroom after having a shower,how shocked n lost he was

Maan held her from waist n was lost in her eyes geet moved closer to maan hugging him n tracing the shoulder blades with her soft fingers,maan was getting lost in her touches when suddenly he parted n said sorry n left the room leaving a dejected geet

Geet was noticing his this behavious from last few days n finally decided to take matters in her own hand n talk to maan

Geet got a card n wrote at it

Dinner with HubbyBee at 9 pm will b waiting for u

When maan came back from office he was shocked to see the room empty n only a card there on there bed

Maan opened n smiled reading it he got fresh n got ready when he came out he saw geet standing there waiting for him dressed in a black seethrough saree looking extremely sexy

Maan gulped his saliva seeing his wife looking soo hot in that saree he don't know how he was gonna control tonight

Aap ready ho gae

Hmm haan said maan still lost

Toh chale dinner k liye

Haan haan chalo said maan joining geet when geet entangled her arms with his n said chaliye

Maan looked at geet n there entangled hands

Kya hua

Nai kuch nai chalo

Geet ek baat puchu

Jee

Ye achanak dinner plan kyun

Kyun kya mai hum logon k liye dinner nai plan kar sakti thi said geet making a puppy face n looking towards maan

Nai mera matlab woh nai tha said maan woh toh maine aise hi pooch liya

Maaneet sat there in restrauant having there dinner looking at eachother wondering what to say when the music started n manager asked couples to join floor

Geet looked at maan expecting him to ask for dance but seeing no reaction from him

Geet said maan

Haan

Hum bhi karien

Kya asked maan confused

Dance

Maan was about to say no but refrain himself seeing geet's baby face,he nodded n both got up to dance

Maan held geet's waist n swaed to the tunes of song,the song changed to a soft romantic no. N maan's hands on there own accord started caressing geet's bare back

Geet looked in maan's eyes seeing them lost she came forward n kept her head near his heart n said maan do u know

How happy i m,i hav got all that i ever needed all that i ever desired,ur support,love companionship

Maan smilled looking down a t her he was glad that finally he was able to give her the well deserved happiness

But there is still one thing that m craving for till today

Maan looked at geet with frown thinking did he again failed to realise sumthing in there relation,

Maan said geet cupping his face i have everything today but m still waiting for my husbands love in my life

Maan looked shocked n said geet he didn't knew what to say

Do u know geet what u r saying that to after whatever i did to u,after how i took away all ur happiness

Maan that's past n i hav forgotten that all plss aap bhi woh sab bhul jaiye n try to come out of it

Maan reamember u promised to me that u ll give me all the happiness in world so what is stoping u now

Geet my past deeds don't let me come near u i was never a good husband to u

May b u were not a good husband in past but now u r the best husband that any wife would desire,u have given me all the happiness of world in these few days

N maan u remember before coming back to delhi u promised me to return me my babies,aap apna vada bhul rae ho maan said geet looking down

Maan held her chin n made her look towards him

No geet i dodn't forget it,i promised u n ill fullfill my every promise n saying this he hugged her

N that was the start of there new relation once again they started there married life that night forgetting all the painfull past

EPILOGUE

1 YEAR LATER

Geet sat in the room thinking about there life,her life how it changed a year back when maan came to banglore,she was soo glad that she took that decision,had she not given that chance to maan n thee relation that day she wouldn't have sat here today caressing her 9 months tummy.she looked down n said m soo happy baby,i have got all that i needed in life,after maan bought geet back home after 3 months they got the good news of geet being pregnant,geet was soo happy knowing baout it,even though she was happy with her life with maan but the fear of loosing her baby was still there but maan with his love n care earased all that,she remembered how happy maan was when she told him about the baby,he has actually knelt down in front of her tummy holding his ears as if baby would see him from inside n cried that day saying sorry to baby for hurting hhim n his mom,n after that there was no turning back..maan took such a good care of geet taking all her moodswings bearing ll her tantrums,though sometimes he syill felt a lil shy to express himself n also conscious but still to make her happy,for her happiness he did try to do things going out of way,she remembered one such incident where geet was really sad n feeling down coz of moodswings n maan on her insistence decided to take her shopping n on reaching mall

*FLASHBACK*

Chalo we have reached now tell me what u wanna buy for urself n baby

Nothing

What asked maan wondering if she didn't wanna buy anything thing then what where they doing here

Yes we have everything but i wanna buy something for u

Geet i also have everything,i need nothing,if u want we can go somewhere else

No said geet making a baby face i wanna shop for u today won't u let ur wife do that much for u said geet making all innocent puppy face

N poor maan not wanting to make her sad said yes,even though he was not very comfortable with the idea of geet shopping for him,he was independent n did his works on his own since he was ten n he wasn't habitual of taking ayone's help for all these thing but seeing geet's baby face he couldnot say no to her

That day geet shopped for maan making maan run to changing room for several times n taking hours to decide on one shirt..n poor maan stood there agreeing to whatever she said not wanting to upset his pregnant wife,as he knew that one no from him will make her cry buckets

N geet took full advantage of his situation

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

Geet smilled thinking about how she has made maan run on his toes n how maan has obliged to all her demands,but suddenly she realised something n tear dropped her eyes,whoiole maan who wasstanding on the door got alert seeing his smilling wife cry now

Geet what happened why r u crying,is it hurting u?? Asked maan caressing her bump

While geet looked down shaking her head for no

Kya hua geet

Nai kuch nai

Won't u tell me pls

Woh maa

That's when maan realised that though everything was back to normal but one thing that neverchanged was geet's relation with her MIL,even though she never said anything to geet after that day but still geet knew that she still didn't liked her

After hearing the baby's news her MIL tried to act all sweet n gave her instructions n geet did all but still she couldnot trust her or forgive her neither she was able to get close to her knowing very well that all this change was momentry just for the sake of baby once the baby is here she would again hate geet,n geet didn't wanted to hurt herself naymore knowing that all this care was not for her but for the coming hier of khuranna's

Geet pls u don't have to think about her

N toh kya hua agar wo tume pyaar nai karti toh

U have me,daddima,annie we all care for u love u geet,plss don't get sad u know na if mumma is sad then baby will also becum sad

N geet smilled hearing maan

So now tell me what where u thinking n smilling sitting here

N thinking about that once again geet smilled

Woh kuch nai bas wo yaad h jab maine apke liye first time shopping ki thi bas wo yaad aa gaya

Haan i remember how u made me run in changing room trying soo many shirts,gosh seriously geet i never spend that much time ever in my life shopping for a shirt

Geet laughed hearing him while maan felt happy seeing her laughing .this was the happiness n smile that was his life now,he lived to see this happiness in geet's eyes n smile on her lips

He felt soo fortunate n thanked god daily to return his geet back to him even after his soo many sins

Maaneet were lost in there world when suddenly geet felt the pain n maan called daddima

He took geet to hospital

Whole 2 hours when geet was in the labour maan kept pacing outside,he was soo tensed hearing geet's scream that once he thought that he would collapse there only with fear

After the hardwork of two hours doctor came out n said congratulations MR.Khurana u have become a proud parent of a cute lil boy

Hows geet doctor??

Ur wife is fine u can see her once we shift her n ur baby to ICU

Thanku soo much doctor

When maan entered he saw geet with there cute lil baby who looked like a small pink bud

He was soo cutely snuggled inb his mumma's arms

Maan sat near geet n kissed geet's n baby's forhead geet helped him hold there baby

Thanku geet thanx alott to return me this happiness even after i snatched this happiness from u two times,but still u gave me this special gift

Maan kissed the baby again saying thanku for coming in there life n sorry for his past mistakes

He hugged geet n baby close to his heart when dadima came along with pammi n blessed the baby

Dadi held the baby close to her heart n asked soo bte kya socha h aapne baby ka naam

Before geet could say pammi said

Maa hum soch rahe the k baby ka naam..

.but before she could complete her sentence dadima said maan n geet decide karenge babyka naam ye unka baby h n ispe pehla haq unhika h

Geet looked towards daddima with gratitude she felt soo thankfull to daddima for alwys being there for her

Pammi stood there angry though she didn't said anything knowing maan's temper

Geet tum btao kya socha h tumne said maan

We ll name him armaan maan sigh khurana,kaisa h ye naam daddima maan

Maan smilled hearing the beautiful name n also realised why she kept that name,he thanked her with eyes while geet softly looked down smilling n daddima blessed duo with there lil baby


Okh guys that's it now

here this small SS comes to an end n as this is the last part i request all the silent reader to pls share ur views about this SS n press like

i would like to thank all my regular readers who read,commented n liked the updates thanx for all ur precious comments


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Posted: 10 years ago

hi thanks da pm n fab story! beautifully written! LP was amazing! Geet happy bt still missing something. Maan has not taken their relationship ahead n Geet wants that! she makes him understand! He promises to give her babies! epilogue was terrific. Geet has a baby boy! Lovely name! Maan took good care of her and her mood swings! Maan gave her all the happiness! Pammi will never change! Dadi will always der 4 her! wonderfully written. Hope u continue 2 write! looking 4wrard 2 something new frm u! u r a superb writer! won

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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally everything is fine and good

Maan and geet all the happiness tat they lost especially geet who lost everything in tat relation tat meant nothing to him but now everything to them..

but pammi she will never change nor her family who were just there for society and not for them... and lastly geet got her baby back
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsemmm maan caring for geet and geet pregnant pammi not saying anything maneet baby boy
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovelly happy ending thanks 4 a lovelly ss
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update and ending
too good
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice ending. Finally the baby came back to them. Dadimaa is there otherwise don't know what Pammi will do.
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Posted: 10 years ago
that was a perfect ending!!!!!
loved it allot!!!!!

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