Memories || A Kriyaansh One Shot.

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Wow its simply awesome
Mahi Lovey writen
so adorable so cute
The name was so perfect
memories love it well done

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

dude am telling you...you are one of the best writters I've came across

this os is so so so beautiful

fabulously written amzing concept

and I loved the way you stop kriya's dialogue mid way and continue with the present

that was beautiful

thanx for writing it😳😃

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RIA

@PAB-230

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

cute os was way tooo adorable
i really liked de sharon pic wala scene
bt as i read this "Kriya! Kriya!" She heard the voice of her husband. She immediately stood up and walked out of their bedroom. As she saw him, he gave her a goofy grin.

He sprinted towards her and hugged her, tight. "I missed you so much." He whispered in her ear and kissed her earlobe. She placed her arms on his back, hugging back even tighter and whispered back.

"I missed you too, Rey."
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i was like shit man abhi aanta kya ?????😡😡😡 thoda aur padneko milta yaar😆
bt phir bhi jitna mila main usse kaam chalaungi😆😊

love,
Ria

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Annwesha

@sakura20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

awesom...
supercute OS !!!!!!!!
LUVD d FLASHBACK... 😛

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nature-beauty

@nature-beauty

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

manny so beautifully written

tera OS honestly was very very beautiful

yes we always recall and cherish our memories and that the best concept of ur OS

i really loved the scene where sharon took a snapshot of them when they were in the classroom

and every scene was so so beautifully written

the best scene in ur writing was

this para

"After good ten seconds, she felt somebody behind her, she was about turn around when the guy whispered, "It's me". Her teenage heart fluttered at the proximity she shared right now with her crush. She did not turn around, just stood there and smiled at her classmate who was giving a speech of their journey in the school. Rey stood next to her and kept looking at her.

Her cheeks flared as she realised that he didn't seem to move his gaze from her and she looked down as her hair cascaded over her face, blocking his view. "

all in all a very beautiful OS manny

so so loved it👏

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Ausome Mahnaz...

I loved the OS...

The memories the perfectly described...

The Water fight...

The Farewell dance...

N Then the Dropping home scene...

Par woh scene complete nai hua...

Ausome memories...

Beautiful OS...

Do write more...

Love Aditi...

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Tisha

@Jiana.ArSHa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

it was brilliant...

beautiful concept...

very well written...

this was so good to read!!!

Amazing...

loved it damm much..

keep writing like this!!!

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Beautifully written!!!
Water fyt!!! Hahaha!! Nyc idea!! Thnx by d way! 😉 😆
N den the farewell party!!!
Rey's confession!!! So cute n sweet n short n nervous 😆
N these were the memories!!! Their memories!!!
Awesome!!! 👏

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

this was gr88!!!!! the memories are always speciall,it gives bakc those times which we cant get back but these memories are always ther in our heart!!!!! loved it to the core!!!!😊😊