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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lasyap3

Well he is realising that ----


"Mujhe to teri lat lag gayi"

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tanyahyd

Nice update. Plz PM me when u next update

Thanks


Thank you! 😊

Will do...👍🏼
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Thank you!😊
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Thank you!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: smala

Loved it very much Diahh.
For heaven sake Mr Abhishek Prem Mehra why don't you just admit that you are in love with your Chasmish.
Pragya to missing Abhi.
Please do update soon can't wait to read how will they meet.


Lol! True Smala...😆

Abhi being Abhi won't admit just yet...😉

Will see how it goes...

And thank you for the wonderful comment! means a lot!
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Originally posted by: samig

superb chapter. waiting for next and please post me for the next update. Waiting for abhigya meeting


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Hello friends! Thank you for all the wonderful comments and likes!🤗 Means a lot!

So chapter 05 is here! Enjoy and let me know what you think!😃

Happy reading!

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The Turning Point

Chapter 05


"Daadi! Daadi! Please open your eyes Daadi... Please..."

Abhi's frantic cries, coupled with the sensation of droplets of water being sprayed on her face made Daadi slowly open her eyes. As soon as her eyes adjusted to the light, she saw Abhi standing over her holding a glass of water.

He looked so worried and frightened... But it's not me who he should be worried and frightened for! It is he, himself! Does he even have any idea as to the gravity of what he has done? What he has done is not rectifiable... And not redeemable and there is no forgiveness!

"Daadi are you okay? God! I should not have told you anything! I am sorry Daadi... But it is all because of that Chashmish..."

"Abhi! Bus!" Something in Daadi's low flat tone made Abhi stop his sentence mid way. Her tone lacked its usual warmth and was coldly laced with disappointment.

"If Purab ran away from his wedding... It is Pragya's fault! If I fainted... It is Pragya's fault! It does not happen like that Abhi! If Purab ran away it is HIS fault! There could be things which have influenced him but at the end it was HIS decision... HIS actions! He is not a child and nor is he a fool! He did what he wanted... He wanted his love and he chose his love... Timing was wrong but he chose his happiness!"

"Daadi I don't want to discuss all this Daadi! I really don't! At the moment what concerns me is that you fainted right after you got to know about Chashmish's true face! And now your condition is not good at all! You need rest now... So that's what you are going to do now! We will talk about this tomorrow!"

"No Abhi! I listened to all you said. Now it is your turn! I will talk and you will listen! I know what you did to Pragya! And what you did to Pragya is wrong... It is bad... Really bad! So bad, that today I feel ashamed to call you my Abhi! You were not like this Abhi! You were not! You were naughty from childhood but I always had the belief that you would never do anything wrong! But now you have failed me Abhi... You have failed me..." sobbed Daadi as she tried to stand up.

"Daadi... Please calm down... Let's not discuss all this... Please!"

"Abhi I told you! I asked you everyday to take care of her, to love her and you always assured me all is well... You lied to me Abhi! You lied to me!"

"Daadi she deserved all that! You have no idea but she is nothing but a gold digger!"

Slap!

"Daadi?" Abhi asked in disbelief as he touched his aching cheek for the second time in the week.

How could Daadi... His Daadi slap him? That is also for that Chashmish who is the only reason for his sister's sufferings! Until today Daadi has never even raised her voice to me... But today she slapped me! And she said... She said I have failed her! I! Me! How is that even possible? Abhi felt his vision blurring as tears filled his eyes...

"Daadi you slapped me! For her?"

"Haan I slapped you! I should have done this long while ago! What did you say? She deserved all that? You are telling me she deserved all that? All the insults, taunts... Torture... She deserved all that? Who are you? Are you god? Haan tell me who are you to decide what she deserves? I will tell you one thing Abhishek Mehra I sure know that she does not deserve you!"

"Oh don't look so shocked! I, your own Daadi is telling you... YOU do not deserve a girl like Pragya! What did you call her? A gold digger? And you said you have seen it for yourself? Well, I tell you she was far from a gold digger and I have seen it for myself!"

"Abhi... How can you be so dumb! The girl who rejected your marriage proposal after getting to know that you are a Rockstar who has a daily income unimaginable for their family... The girl who sold all her jewellery to save you from going to prison... You are calling her a gold digger? Abhi use your brain! If she was ever a gold digger... She would have just jump at the chance of getting married to you! She would have let you go to prison so that she could have all these luxuries without anyone troubling her!" Daadi sat down and began to cry again.

Haan Abhi... Abhi thought to himself. Whatever Daadi is saying its all true! Chashmish has always gone out of her way to help me. And I have asked her about this as well and she said it's all for Daadi and her ma... So does that mean she was telling the truth all this while? But what she did to Aaliyah... I just cannot think like this! She wronged my sister! But then what Daadi said... it is also correct na... Whatever the decision Purab took, it was his decision! Pragya could have influenced him but he should have thought! He should have thought about me and Aaliyah! We were best friends! We knew each other from our childhood! I trusted him so much... He was my brother!

I didn't know Pragya for so long but still I was quick to punish her but I just let Purab get away? And whatever I did with Pragya its wrong I know! But I didn't have a choice! Abhi... Really? You had a choice! You could have just find out more... At least you would have got to know about Bulbul being the girl Purab loved... Not Pragya... Oh god Abhi... That means... That means all this while till Aaliyah's wedding she was just suffering for nothing? What did I do! But if she is not a gold digger as Daadi says then why did she stay in this marriage anyway! Of course for her Ma! Only for her Ma? Maybe for Daadi too... for my Daadi? God! What have I done! Abhi slowly sat beside his Daadi.

"Daadi! I am sorry! I really am Daadi... But Daadi I didn't know! She should have told me... You should have told me!"

"Abhi... You know what? This is your problem! First you form your own assumptions and then when all go wrong you blame others for that! Learn to take responsibility for your actions! Don't let others cloud your instincts! You are a grown man now..."

"Daadi I know! I am so sorry... Tell me what should I do? You want me to bring her back? You want me to tell sorry to her? Okay I will do that! First thing tomorrow morning...I promise you!"

"No! You will not meet her again!"

Abhi felt a pang in his heart hearing the words coming from Daadi's mouth.

"But Daadi you wanted me to stop her in the first place and now I know I am at fault for treating her badly... I mean Daadi I still think she was wrong in hiding the truth from us but I should not have been so harsh to her..."

"Abhi! I told you already you won't meet her! So you won't meet her! I don't want you to trouble her again in any way! I won't let that happen... I am also at fault here... But not anymore! I should have known her sufferings... I should have protected her... But I failed to do even that... You know why I let her go with Sarala? Because Sarala begged me to let her go... She told me not to stop Pragya and she is taking her home for her own good... And she is right! Which mother would want such a life to her child? You tell me... If Aaliyah would have been in Pragya's place what would you do? Haan? What would you do? See, even imagining something like that makes you angry! But you did all this! YOU!"

How could Daadi even ask me something like this! Abhi thought as fury made him tighten his hands into fists... If Aaliyah was treated like that by any man in the world he would personally make sure he would never breathe again! Pragya falling onto the floor numerous times, Pragya flinching as he pinched her with a clip, Pragya hiding her pain every time he taunted her, Pragya taking a step away from him as he advanced on her in her anger, Pragya hiding her tears every time he flaunted Tannu in front of her...memories flashed before his eyes... Oh god no! NO! What have I done! What have I done! When did I stoop so low?

And Pragya... She didn't say a word... She just lived through it all just for the sake of their families' happiness! Daadi is right! I don't deserve her! All the pain... Hurt... Taunts... Insults... Torture... It can be never erased! God! Now what should I do?

"Abhi don't bother her ever again! She is trying to start her life afresh... And please I beg you... Just let her be! You had your chance Abhi... But you lost it! And you never got to know her value! And you never will! And god forbids if one day you realize her value and know that you are too late... You will never be able to breathe then Abhi... You will never be happy!"

Abhi saw Daadi leaving his room but it didn't register in his mind as it was filled with Chashmish's face...

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"Well... I can send her a message or give a call! Nahi Abhi!"

Abhi muttered to himself as he continued to pace around his room. He has not been able to sleep a wink last night after Daadi left his room. He has sat for hours and finally with the dawn an idea dawned upon him! Haan, the least he can do is to apologize to Chashmish. He had no idea as to how to rectify his mistakes... Damn he was not even sure how to ask forgiveness after all what he put her through... But he knew he was wrong and he could not carry on with this burden anymore!

He has to do something... Anything! He could send her a message or give a call... Nahi Abhi! Abhi thought to himself...

"It won't do! That is just not done... What shall I do! What shall I do? Haan... I will google it and see... Hmmm... How to say sorry... YES!"

For the next 10 minutes Abhi fully engrossed himself in reading... Then...

"God! This is not going to be easy... Write a poem... Hug and say sorry... Tell them how important they are to you... Haan... I know what to do... Why didn't I think of this earlier! I will meet Chashmish and say sorry then if she didn't accept it then I will do all these... Okay Abhi then let's get ready to go see Chashmish! It's been 8 days since I have last seen her..."

Abhi thought back to the day she left him... She looked so listless... Don't know how she is now... You will find out soon Abhi! Very soon... Abhi found a strange happiness in that thought...

"But Daadi! Auntyji!"

No Abhi... They won't let me meet her! But how can they stop me from meeting my Chashmish like this! I am DEFINITELY going to meet her today... But how... Can't let Daadi know at all! And can't go to her house otherwise Auntyji will slap me again! Then how... Shall I call Chashmish and tell her to come to see me? No Abhi! No... She will not come! She will just argue with me! Then what!

Abhi again started to pace around the room! I will need someone's help! But whose help? Rockstar Daadi? Arrey nahi... Dunno how she is feeling about this whole thing... Then who... Bulbul? Abhi are you out of your mind! You are going to take Bulbul's help? No way... You are sorry for what you have done to Chashmish... But Bulbul? She is going to take your sister's place in Purab's life! My Aaliyah's! No... No help from her! Then who? Haan Purvi!

Purvi has always been so nice to me! And top of that she is my fan... I am sure I will be able to talk to her... But how? Not at home of course! Then... Somewhere outside... Where? Haan maybe her college... Okay then I will meet her today and I will take her help to arrange a meeting with Chashmish! Oh Chashmish... See the things I am doing for your one forgiveness!

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"Where is this girl? I have waited here for hours now! Purvi come fast! Oh thank god there she is!"

Abhi muttered to himself as he waited for Purvi to appear. As soon as she saw her coming out with her friends he went to her and called to her.

"Jiju! Aap yahaan? In my college?"A bewildered Purvi asked from him.

"Shh... Please don't shout! I have tried my best to disguise myself... I don't want to draw any attention! I just want to talk to you for a second. Can you come with me...? Please" Abhi saw her uncertainty and quickly tried to stop the protest that was about to come. He don't have time! He just has to see his Chashmish! Soon!

Purvi nodded slowly and led him to a nearby bench.

"Jiju... No Abhi... No I mean Jiju..." Abhi saw her struggling to figure out the relationship she shared with him now... Has everything changed with in this one week?

"You can call me whatever you are comfortable with... I don't mind..."

"Woh... Sorry Jiju..."

Liar! You do mind! Otherwise why are you feeling so relieved when she chose to call you Jiju... Abhi mused to himself.

"Jiju? But you here? Why are you here? And Pragya Di..."

"Yes Purvi... I came here to talk to you about your Di... And you have got to promise me you will hear me out first!"

"But how did you find me? How did you know where I study?"

"Err... Well I made my driver follow you... And sorry... Sorry! I didn't have a choice... But now all that is not important! Listen... I have got to meet your Di... And you got to help me... So will you help me? Please?"

"But Jiju... I don't know... After everything that happened... And Badi Ma... She has strictly told us to not to even mention your name in front of Di... We are not even allowed to listen to your songs... So if she gets to know..."

Abhi felt a sadness he has never felt before... Auntyji hates me so much so that she doesn't even like hearing my name... She has always loved me like a son... And now...

"Jiju... And Di... I don't know whether I should help you... I mean Di... She is not our old Pragya Di anymore! I feel so sad seeing her... It's like she is just there with us but her mind is somewhere else... You know her right? She was never talkative but she used to smile a lot! But now she doesn't talk at all and she just sits there like a statue... And she just started working again... She is trying to start afresh... So if you meet her again, then she will be upset again..."

Abhi heard her words but he was too numb to react... A listless Chashmish being dragged away by her Ma filled his mind... And Purvi said Chashmish used to smile a lot... But I have never seen her smiling... Apart from the fake ones she flashed at me for the benefit of our families... It's like I never knew Chashmish... It's like my Chashmish and Purvi's Pragya Di are two different people... When it is actually the same person...

"Jiju... Jiju... I think you should leave now... You know before someone sees you... Especially if Di sees you here... It won't be good... So Jiju please..."

If Di sees me? But how can Chashmish find me here? I am at Purvi's college... So Chashmish here... What is she talking about?

"What do you mean Purvi? If Di sees me? How is she going to find me here?"

"Abhishek?" Abhi heard his name being called by a familiar yet uncertain voice... He did not need to turn around or see the widening of Purvi's eyes to know the owner of that voice. He already knew it! Oh and how much he has missed hearing that angelic voice calling out his full name.

With all these thoughts running in his head, Abhi slowly got up and turned around to finally find himself face to face with his Chashmish.

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Note- Sorry guys for stopping at this point. But I had to... promise will update soon!👍🏼
And I sent PMs for all the people who requested and if you want to be informed as well just let me know!😊

Edited by Diahh - 10 years ago
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DIAHH!!!

OMG I am feeling like I want to chase you around with pinching clips!! 😡

How could you leave me hanging there! I must know what happens next I must I must!!! ahhh!!!

I was going to say, great chapter, loved the progress, thank you for posting. But how can I thank you when you're leaving me in suspense!! omg!

Ahem, ok. But yeah, great chapter!! Such an emotional confrontation with Daadi. That paragraph where Abhi realizes what he did and how he would've felt if someone did that to Aaliya! OMG amazing! So many feels! And finally something got through to him on this subject!

Abhi racking his brains about who could be an ally was so funny. Bechara Rockstar and all that. So cool that you included Purvi! She doesn't have much place in fanfics so far, though she does have a lot of scenes on the show so the way you wrote it felt very realistic.

Oh and I liked how you included Abhi turning to Google for help! It's been a while since we've seen that on the show but it's very Abhi. And omg just imagining him trying to do some of those apologizing tactics...writing a poem...could be hilarious! But here he is trying to take a shortcut first, naughty Abhi 😛

And so Pragya found him! This is very interesting. Oh I really wanna know what they will talk about.

Thanks for the update!! Looking forward to more 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing. You have written it beautifully. Dadi making him realize how he misunderstood her n him realizing is written so amazingly. Secondly him trusting on Purvi to help him is superb.excited for his face off with chasmis. Continue soon
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Nice update, can't believe you stopped there please post the next part soon, lol he got is driver to follow Purvi, it was funny how Purvi didn't know what to call him, now can't wait to read how their conversation goes

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