The Prologue was well written! I mean even though it's only a few words but there has been a lot said in them. They bring a sense of mystery and suspense with them to be honest. I wonder why Sakshi is in the state she is...? Something must have happened na.
And of course Arjun's observing skills never leave him even in the most dire situations. Actually on second thoughts I am kinda of like him. I talk less and observe more. 😆 And I mean like complex observing with every single detail that's why my Mum gets annoyed with it! 😛
Anyway I like how he noticed everything about her. It's adorable. Plus the way he was waiting for her to make a move or just say something, anything; that definitely added more curiosity to the fact that something had happened.
It was a mysterious prologue but in a good way of course!
Do continue soon and pm me! 😃 I read a few updates of the previous version and It was definitely what true writing skills look like. 😳 Love it!
Continue soon!
Love, Nabi...
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