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Dear All,
This OS is based on the current track of Raman's jealousy seeing Ishita-Abhimanyu together.
We have been wanting since a long time for a handsome hunk to enter from Ishita's past who can provoke a jealous/possessive Raman kumar Bhalla and I'm glad CVs heard us and are giving this beautiful track.
I Salute Karan Patel for his brilliant performance esp yesterday's dual role👏 of himself. KP to me is a perfectionist and a natural actor!
Okay, I'll stop my Karan jaap and get to the point.😳
My hands were itching to write an OS on Mani-Ishita-Raman but thanks to my busy schedule, I didn't get much time.
Today I had some free time so I penned down this OS.
This will be a single part as I really have no time to write as of now.
PMs will be sent to all in my buddy list.
Hope I haven't let down my loyal readers😳.
Do let me know your honest opinion/criticism/comments in the posts.
Happy Dussehra/ Happy Vijaya Dasimi to all 🤗
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Tell Me You Love Me!
It has been 30 minutes straight since the lights came and he came back to his room waiting for Ishita to follow him, but she was still nowhere seen around.
Kahan marr gayi Jhansi ki Rani, mujhpar toh sirf talwarein chalati rehti hai aur ab dekho...uss mani par kaise phool barsa rahi hai!
He was pacing inside the room holding his stomach when finally Ishita enters and gives him the antacid without speaking a word.
He ignores her medicine and asks "Ab yaad aaya tumhe ki tumhara ek pati bhi hai yahan jo dard me hai!"
She arches her eyebrow saying "Acha? dard dene walon ko bhi dard hota hai kya?"
"Bakwas bandh karo! Meri life ka sabse bada sardard toh tum ho!"
"Huh? Aap se toh baat karna bhi bekaar hai! Dawai lelo aur so jao." saying so she keeps the antacid on the coffee table and walks towards the door when he notices that she's leaving the room and calls her.
"Oh hello! Ab kahaan ja rahi ho?"
"Mani ke paas. Usko bhi dawai deni hai. Bechara kabse seh raha hai"
"Oho! tujhe badi takleef ho rahi hai uske pet dard ko leke. Sahi hai, wo bechara aur main patni ka maara! Jao jao..."
Ishita is annoyed now. "Kuch bhi? Aapko Mani se kya problem hai Raman?"
Raman was visibly disturbed too. He walks back towards his bed and covers himself while muttering "Mujhe kya! Jao apne Mani ke paas. Darwaza bandh karti jaana."
Ishita gives a disgusting look and walks off the room shutting the door cursing Raman in tamil. She goes to Amma's house and gives Mani the antacid.
"Aah!Thank you Ishu! Tum nahi hoti toh kal tak mera pet shayad phat jaata!" Mani says jokingly.
Ishita laughs at that while hitting him playfully in the chest "Tum bhi na! Chalo bahut der hogayi hai tum so jao. Subah breakfast saath me karenge mere ghar pe."
He nods in agreement and they bid goodbye to each other.
Ishita comes back to their bedroom to see Raman sound asleep. She goes near him, kneels down next to him and covers him with the blanket while still staring at him and smiling.
Aap yu sote hue kitne pyaare aur masoon lagte ho Raman! Par pata nahi kabhi kabhi aapko kya ho jata hai. [She Wonders] Pata nahi kyun lekin jabse Mani se Mile hain, faltu me gussa ho rahe hai...chilla rahe...
[Her thoughts come to a halt as realization hits her.]
"Ohh!" She holds her head amusedly "Mani! Tabhi main sochu ki inko kya hogaya hai! Raman ko wakai me jalan ho rahi hai mujhe Mani ke saath dekh ke!" She looks at Raman fondly.
"Kya Raman ko mujhse... Nahi, hosakta hai ye sirf meri galat famy ho! Raman to Shagun se pyaar karte hai to mujhse kaise..."
She gets up and picks up her blanket and pillow, marching towards the couch. As she is preparing to sleep, she turns back to see Raman who stirs in his sleep.
She again wonders if Raman is really over his past and if he loves Ishita or not.
"Par kaise pata karun ki Raman ke dil me kya hai? Pehle bhi do baar 'I Love You' bolke uska mazak bana diya. Aur kitni baar toh bol chuke ki wo kabhi mujhse pyaar nahi kar sakte...fir main kaise umeed kar sakti hu!"
She shakes her head and brushes off the million thoughts running in her mind as she gradually loses herself to sleep.
Next morning, Raman wakes up to the loud laughing voices coming from the living room.
He sits up in his bed, rubbing his eyes wondering "Kya hai yaar! Subah subah kisne Animal planet ka channel laga rakha hai TV pe!"
He opens his eyes to see Ishita nowhere in the room and slowly recognizes her laughter coming from the living room.
Ye to madrasan ki ghisi piti awaaz hai! Subah subah pagal daura padh gaya hai kya isko? Zara dekhleta hu ho kya raha hai!
He walks into the living room to be only shocked at the scene infront of his eyes.
He sees Ishita feeding Dosa to him and he holding her hand as she feeds him.
"Ishu! ab bas yaar kitna dosa khilaogi!"
"Mani! No excuses haan! itne saalon baad to mile ho. Aur how can I forget ki Dosa is your most favourite dish!"
Raman stands at the hall entrance and mutters under his breath 'Acha? Bada yaad hai madrasan ko iski pasand na pasand! Isse Dose ke saath saath neem ki chutney na khila du!'
"Dosa to mera fave hai hi...par tumhare haath ka dosa to lajawab hai! Bahut miss kiya maine!"
Raman is annoyed seeing their closeness. 'Abbe itna Dosa thoosunga na tere muh me ki tu kuch aur miss karne ke layak nahi rahega!'
Mani sees Raman standing near the hall entrance and wishes him "Good morning Raman! Aao tum bhi baito...Ishu ke haath me kuch alag hi jaadoo hai. So yummy!" Mani cheerfully says while Ishita hits him playfully on shoulder.
'Subah subah Nagmani ko dekha hai ab kahan ki good morning!'
Raman mutters in a low voice only audible to him.
He fakes a smile at Mani and says "Tumhari dost ne tumhare liye dosa banaya hai...tum khao. Hum to kuch khaye ya na khaye kya farak padhta hai..." Ishita raises an eyebrow at him when he corrects himself "I mean, main fresh hoke aata hu fir khaa lunga. Tum guest ho toh pehle tum khao."
As Raman leaves, Mani gets slightly doubt that Raman is getting jealous of him.
Ishu gets a call from the clinic for an emergency root canal but realises that Mr.Bhalla has taken her car to drop Ruhi at school.
Mani offers to drop her as he is leaving for office too. She hesitates to take his help but when he insists, she agrees.
She tells Neelu to inform Raman and leaves with Mani.
When Raman comes out of the shower and goes to his room, he sees that Ishita hasn't taken out his clothes like she used to do every morning.
Mani ke aate hi mere kundali ki grah dasha hi badal gayi! Ab to madrasan ko Mani naam ke jap se fursat hi nahi milti! Ye tak nahi sochti hai ki uska ek pati bhi hai!
He angrily picks out his clothes and gets ready. As he goes to have his breakfast, he realises Ishita and Mani are not at home. On asking Neelu, she informs that Ishita went with Mani in his car to the clinic.
Kamal hai! Ek to bina bataye chaligayi...upar se gayi to gayi par uss lambu ke saath kyun gayi!
Raman beta, be alert! Kuch kar isse pehle ki ye mani naam ka shani teri zindagi ka grahan banjaye!
He leaves to his office angrily. In the office, Mihir arranges a meeting with Abhimanyu Raghav aka Mani and convinces Raman for it.
After the meeting ends, Mani is impressed with their presentation and makes deal with Raman's company.
"Congrats Bhai! Finally hume ye contract mil gaya." Mihir hugs Raman happily.
"Thanks Mr.Raghav" Mihir gestures to Mani when he replies "Call me Abhimanyu or Abhi. No formalities please!"
Raman throws a fake smile at Mani and says "Yeah! thank you Abhi!So lucky to have a parternship with you indeed!"
Later in the evening, Raman returns home to find Ruhi and Shravan playing with each other and chasing each other.
She bumps into Raman when he catches hold of her and kneels down infront of her asking "Dhyaan se Ru Beta! Abhi aapko lag jaata to!"
Ruhi cutely smiles when Raman plants a gentle kiss on her both cheeks and asks "Homework kiya aapne? Aur aapki Ishima kahan hai?" as he scans around the room to find Ishita.
Ruhi replies "Haan Papa, maine homework bhi karliya aur padhai bhi karli."
Raman says "Good girl. Ishima kahan hai?"
Ruhi cutely asks "Ishima nahi aayi ab tak papa."She pauses and then pulls Raman's sleeves cutely "Papa mujhe ice cream chahiye! Laake do na please!"
Shravu runs to Raman and says "Mujhe bhi ice cream chahiye...double chocolate waali!"
Raman pulls Shravan's cheeks lovingly "Tingu! itna double kahyega to sach me double hojayega!"
Ruhi orders "Papa, mere liye aur Ishima ke liye Black current wala flavour!"
Raman takes Ruhi in his arms as he stands on his feet asking "Acha? Ishima ke liye Ice cream aur papa ke liye?"
Ruhi hits her forehead and asks "Offo! Aapse to poochna hi bhool gayi! Aapka kaunsa fave flavour hai papa?"
Raman touched his forehead with Ruhi's and said "Mera fave flavour wahi hai jo Ishima aur Ruhi ka fave hai!"
Ruhi giggles and hugs Raman as he happily hugs her back too.
Raman then puts her down and asks them to play together without fighting till he gets the icecream. They agree and leave from there.
Raman goes to a nearby ice cream parlour only to see it closed.
He then walks a few shops down towards another icecream parlor when he suddenly sees Ishita and Mani sitting in a cafe next to the ice cream parlor.
Some dust went into her eyes which made her eyes watery and irritating. Mani offers to help her by holding her face and blowing gently into her eyes when Raman sees it from far behind and mistakens Mani to be trying to kiss Ishita.
He throws the icecream and marches angrily towards them.
Ishita feels better by then and Mani sits back on his chair just when Raman grabs Ishita's arm from behind and drags her forcefully from her seat.
"Raman! Chodo mujhe! Aap yahan kya kar rahe ho!" Ishita asked confused at his violent behaviour.
"Raman! Hua kya hai? Ishu ko kahan le ja rahe ho?" Mani asked wondering what happened.
Raman points finger at Mani and warns him "Ye meri biwi hai. Ise chahe kahin bhi le jaun, tumse matlab? And tum...behtar hoga tum meri biwi se door hi raho!"
He drags Ishita with him leaving behind a amused Mani.
Raman makes Ishita sit in his car at the passanger seat and he takes the driver's seat.
As he starts the car, Ishita looks at Raman angrily and then looks away folding her hands across her chest.
Raman doesn't even look at Ishita once till they reach the Bhalla house.
As the car halts, she gets down and marches straight to their house, to their room. He follows her and shuts the door of their bedroom.
She stands facing towards the window still angry at what Raman did just now.
He walks to her and grabs her elbow turning her around to face him.
She jerks her hand out of his hold and shouts "Problem kya hai aapki? Sabke saamne tamasha karne ki kya zaroorat thi? Mani ke saamne se aap mujhe aise zabardasti kyun leke aaye?"
Raman replies "Oh! to Mani kya sochega ya woh kya feel karta hai isse tumhe bada farak padhta hai...lekin iss baat se tumhe koi farak nahi padhta ki mujhe kaisa lagta hai!"
"Kya? Aapko kuch samajh bhi aa raha hai ki aap kya bol rahe ho Raman? Aur waise aapne hi to kaha tha ki aapko koi farak nahi padhta ki main kya karti hu ya kya sochti hu...to ab ye natak kyun?"
"Natak? wah Ishita wah! Mani jo kahe jo kare woh sahi aur main kuch karu to natak?"
"Ho kya gaya hai aapko? Nashe me ho kya! Kuch bhi anaab shanaab bake jaa rahe ho!"
"Itni bholi mat bano! Ache se jaanta hu ki tumhare uss Mani ke kya iraade hai!. Wo to waise bhi tumpe marta tha pehle se. Aur tum bhi usko pasand karti ho..."
"What Rubbish! Raman don't you dare iske aage ek aur shabd bola toh!"
"Kyun?Sach kadwa hota hai! Ishita...I'm warning you, agar mujhse wo Mani tumhare aas paas bhi nazar aaya toh main use chodunga nahi!"
"Huh? Aap hote kaun ho decide karne ke liye ki main kisse milungi aur kisse nahi?"
He grabs her shoulders and pulls her closer to him "Kya newspaper me chapwaun ki main tumhara pati hu? mujhe haq hai kyunki tum meri biwi ho...aur sirf mera haq hai tumpe...samjhi!"
Ishita looks at him shocked at his words and tries to free herself "Chodo mujhe! Hum pati-patni sirf duniya ke liye. Raman Chodo mujhe..."
He tightens his hold over her and gets dangerously close to her with their bodies almost touching each other and their faces just few inches apart.
"Nahi chodunga tujhe! Zindagi me pehli baar ehsaas hua tumse milne ke baad ki sachcha pyaar kya hota hai. Aur iss baar main mere pyaar ko mujhse kisiko cheenne nahi doonga!"
Ishita stands motionless in front of him as she stares into his eyes without even a blink.
"R-Ram-mann...kya kaha aapne?" she asks him unbelievable at the words she heard from his mouth.
There's a pindrop silence for a few seconds.
Ishita's heart skips a beat 'Tell me that you Love me Raman!'
Raman realises what he told as he frees her from his hold and breaks down infront of her "Yes! I Love You Ishita...I Love you..."
Ishita closes her eyes wondering if it's true or a dream as tears of happiness flow down her cheeks.
She looks at Raman who gathers the courage to pour his heart out. "Pyaar toh shayad main tumse bahut pehle se karta tha Ishita...Par ek baar apna pyaar khone ke baad dusri baar wahi dard se guzarne ki himmat nahi thi mujhme!"
He turns his back to Ishita so that she cannot see the pain in his eyes as he says "Humne ye shaadi sirf Ruhi ke liye kii thi...Par pata hi nahi chala kab tumse ladte ladte pyaar hogaya."
He continues "Neighbors se jaani dushman se Ruhi ke maa-baap se hum dheere dheere ache dost ban gaye. Main apni dil ki baat kehke humari uss dosti ko khona nahi chahta tha... main tumhe khona nahi chahta tha Ishita!"
She puts her hand over his shoulder and gently squeezes it to let him know that she can feel his pain.
He turns around to face her and says "Main janta hu ki tum mujhe kabhi chodke nahi jaogi kyunki tumhari jaan basti hai Ruhi me. Lekin fir bhi, main meri biwi ko kisi gair mard ke saath nahi dekh sakta Ishita! Aaj ehsaas hua mujhe ki tumhe kaisa lagta hoga mujhe shagun ke saath dekhkar!"
He pauses and waits to hear from her but she continues to stare at him with tears in her eyes.
"Ishita...kuch toh bolo... jaanta hu tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti lekin..."
Before he could complete his line, she crashed into him, hugging him tightly and whispers into his ears shyly " I Love you too Raman!".
Raman's happiness knew no bounds. He hugged her back tightly as they both had tears of happiness in their eyes.
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