**RaBir FF**:I love you!!Chapter 9 Updated - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: parmarA

@cutie,beautiful update.

Jo baat kahene me zizak rahe the Rachana ke ek action ne kar dikhaya.

Kabir was about to tell her about his feelings but Rachana ke nashe ne sab golmaal kar diya.

I just loved that part where Rachana was telling not leave me.Poor girl.how much she love Kabir na?

I enjoyed each and every update but couldn't comment.But will try to give review soon.

Thank you dear for your awsome ff

Thank u so much alka..😳
Am so happy u liked it n thank u 4 liking small small things😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

WWow cutie what an update and a lovely story😳First of all raj doing so much he is a true friend 😉 Then they made all drunk omg and even now rachana is drunk thats was funny loved to the core and a big sorry for late reading but got time now only But is damn gud 👏

Thank u mehek
So happy u all liking raj's character😃
N thank u 4 enjoying the drunk part😆
No prob, its ok 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Hey my awesome friends...
I told u all tht I'll post ASAP...bt
So so sorry...bt won't take much of your tym now...so here u go!


**********CHAPTER 9*********

Kabir goes inside 2 get lemonade for rachna.
Rachna is there waiting for kabir.Kabir comes back to where he
left rachna but doesn't find her there.Rachna comes from behind to
scare kabir but it all goes in vain.
Kabir:Here u go rachna.Take this n drink.
Kabir is holding the glass.Rachna peers through the glass n refuses to drink.
Rachna: I don't wanna drink...take it back
Kabir:hun...U have 2 drink this..otherwise all my plan(n stops)
Rachna:wht! wht did u say?
Kabir: no nothing..take n drink..n wht in your hand why are you hiding it?
Rachna:uhmm..wo..ok I'll drink this bt
Kabir:But wht?
Rachna: on one condition
Kabir:ok whts the condition?
Rachna:You need to make me drink it.
Kabir:Ok...
Kabir is making Rachna drink the lemonade.BG-banjaarey ko ghar(piano tune is played)

Rachna finishes drinking.Kabir asks her about what has she got in her hands.Before he could go check it Rachna forwards with her hands which is full of color on Kabir's face n clothes.
She laughes n runs from there.Kabir runs behind her.
After all tht rachna could run, she stops by a wall which is little bit away from the crowd that is enjoying in holi.
She leans on the wall n closes her eyes to get a deep beath.
As she open her beautiful eyes she finds Kabir infront of her.
At first she gets serious seeing him but then burst out laughing.

Kabir:You are laughing now as I've caught u hunn
Rachna:You've caught me thts right, but you ran all this way bt u don't have color wth so hw wll u apply?hun(Starts laughing again)
Kabir gives a naughty smile n proceedes near Rachna.He gets close to rachna.

Kabir:I won't even use my hands to apply color to u
Rachna:hunn(luks confused)
But after she sees kabir getting close to her, she gets nervous.
***BG-Banjaarey ko ghar starts***
Kabir goes very near to her.He takes his face close to rachna's n rubbs his left cheeks to rachna's left cheeks which leaves color on her face as kabir had the color on his.Rachna blushes.
Kabir again rubs his right to rachna's right cheeks.After this kabir is moving his face his eyes meet rachna's eyes n they share a beautiful n cute eyelock.

Meanwhile..as this closeness of rabir was occuring, a boy gets pics of rachna n kabir close, not unveiling his face.

******BACK TO RABIR*******
They both come out of the eyelock.Kabir takes Rachna with him.
She asks to wher is he taking her bt he doesn't say anything.
Kabir takes rachna in the house in her room n goes in the bathroom.
He turns in the shower n makes Rachna stand under it.
Rachna:aahh!kabir what r u doing?
Water is cold..I wanna go...
Kabir is holding her hand n makes her stand under it.
Kabir:shhh! You need to stand under cold water so tht you cum to your sense.
Rachna:aahh kabir this is so cold...
Adjusting herself here n there.
Kabir:Stand here until u don't cum back to your sense...n don't cum out untill all your intoxication is there..ok
Rachna:ok
Kabir leaves from there n goes out.
Rachna is still on the shower n recalls the color applying part.
She cums out of the bathroom n finds a beautiful dress on her bed.
With the dress she notices a piece of paper on where its written:
"This is for you Rachna,
Plz wear this n come down am waiting
Kabir,"
She gets an innocence smile on her face
Which enlighten her.
She gets ready.
Kabir is standing by the car n is reapedly looking at his watch.
Suddenly, his eyes fall on the beautiful angel coming by her.(Rachna)
Kabir is just speechless seeing her.
Rachna:Why did u call me here? N this dress?
Kabir:Come let's go.
Rachna:"let's go"..where?
Kabir: you ask too many questions..now be quiet n sit in the car.
Rachna:but
Kabir:no if n but...shhh let's go
He makes her sit in the car n he drives off.
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Precap:Kabir:U felt jealous whn I was talking about her...right rachna?
Rachna:no I ws not
Kabir:yes u were jealous
Rachna:no I ws not n why should I be jealous.
Kabir:you weren't jealous hun thn why did u got irked whn I told u about her...why were u not happy hun say
Rachna:yes yes I was n am jealous because I LOVE YOU!!
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I knw this was a small update...but am so sorry friends...but hoping u liked it.

. . . . . . . . . . . . LIKES,DISLIKES,COMMENTS N CRITISM is all welcomed!!!. . . . . . . . . . . .

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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Great update cutie
Can't wait till next chapter
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Wow you even add Precap haha...
Nice I really like at. I like the way Kabeer color Rachna face.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
owww
great written holi part😊

it will be now interesting after this precap...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Cutie beautiful update but precap amazed me lot.

I am waiting for that.

Kabir gifted dress for Rachana and he wanted to see her in that dress so cute.And Rachana is an angelic beauty.

In precap too i think he will notice rachana jealousy right?

Now please give update soon dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
@cutie please see my creations in creation gallery and comments for that if you like it or not
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Beautiful update
Kabir applying colors,loved that part
precap more interesting
kind request pls continue this ASAP

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