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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: teenorchid

its awesomeee

so want an epilogue part 2

hehe

loved the moments nice ff


Thanks dear...
hehhe sorry to say but no more parts on this story...
awww glad to know u love it...
take care :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gaurikajen

yeyyy confession ho gaya

love the part mujhe doubt tha armaan tabhi confess karega jab riddhima ko kuch hoga
aww anna is so sweet


it was such a lovely FS i totally enjoyed reading
do write more
great job girls


hehe yeah wohi toh hoga na :P
glad u enjoy the part my greedy reader hehehe...
thanks for the comment...

We will try to come with other writing soon...
take care :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha

U two were teasing us for epilogue..
So bad..
Kitni intezaar kar rhi thi pata hai ap dono ko..??...[Pout]

Now come to the epilogue..
Itna achi thi na ki kya batau...
The starting way of description of house fabulous..
Then the way armaan taking care ridhima..
gang part..
Confession..
All in all Excelent...

Ab jaldi se kuch naya leke dono phirse chali aao...
Hurry hurry...
We all r waiting...


heheh ab kiya bataun Aishu...
By God bohot maza aa rahi ti hum dono koh...
Waise epilogue toh tab complete ho chuki ti but JJ koh edit karna ta :P

Aur sacchi main use time nehi mil rahi issiliyeh we act as if we haven't write heheeh...
Glad u enjoy and love the part...
Isse zyada humhe kiya chahiyeh right JJ hehehe...

Hayye... Jaldi ka pata nehi...
new ss os fs or ff ka pata nehi lekin hum zarur jo shuru kiya hai already, woh continue karungi...
tab tak ke liyeh inthizaar karti raho ;)
take care muwaahh love u :*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_sri

awesome story..loved it...


thanks dear...
glad u like...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tv05

amazing epilogue...luvd it...thnx fr pm...


Thanks dear for commenting :)
our pleasure it was to PM :P
heehhe...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: soHoo-kajenian


heheh ab kiya bataun Aishu...
By God bohot maza aa rahi ti hum dono koh...
Waise epilogue toh tab complete ho chuki ti but JJ koh edit karna ta :P

Aur sacchi main use time nehi mil rahi issiliyeh we act as if we haven't write heheeh...
Glad u enjoy and love the part...
Isse zyada humhe kiya chahiyeh right JJ hehehe...

Hayye... Jaldi ka pata nehi...
new ss os fs or ff ka pata nehi lekin hum zarur jo shuru kiya hai already, woh continue karungi...
tab tak ke liyeh inthizaar karti raho ;)
take care muwaahh love u :*


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Posted: 11 years ago


A Life Worth To Live
- An AR FS -

Part 1


Sun has rise welcoming to a new day with people slowly waking up to live another day with the bless of god... Each and everyone were getting ready for their daily works as some still were trying to get some more sleep of their beautiful dreams while others hurried to built their dreams so they can lived in it...
Not far away from the seaside, there was a big bungalow, which was built with glasses and high security around it... Beautiful garden with a pool outside shows the richness of the owner who owed with big beautiful and royal bungalow...
As the day start, servants started to run here and there to complete their daily work... Some were cleaning inside the house whole some were cleaning outside... Some working in kitchen to make a nice breakfast...
The bungalow was beautiful and it looks more from inside too... It wasn't a big one but fit for a family of five or six people...
With a minimum hall, expensive furniture nicely arrange with a dust touching it... White comfort couch with coffee glass taken in front of it... Big flat television on the wall hanging, racks on either side with CD's and games filled with it as the PS station was kept under the television on the small table under it with DVD player...
Hall has many lights as well a big chandelier up at the high ceiling... One side it has three step which leads to the dinning table of ten people, right of it has a door which leads to the kitchen which was not too big or two small, decorated with white cupboards and the black counter with stove, a big fridge on the left side...
That was the ground floor and to the right of the hall, there has stairs, which leads to the first floor, no rooms in ground floor... Upstairs they have four rooms with expensive furniture... Two was paint with white color, white curtains with black decoration on it, furniture was of black and the sheet spread of the bed was of mixed white and black... Each have attach washrooms with bath tub and walking wardrobe...
Other room was, study room with a big table in the middle, several shelves with books and files filled in it... Big couch with table in front of it in the side way as the big glass window facing to the door letting the light come through with the white royal curtains hanging down...
Three rooms was well furniture and one more is there... The long hall way has room on one side, side by side each... One wall cover with several pictures of two people, which reveal the people live in this royal bungalow...
Still silent were around the house which the servant didn't know when it would be break with the little one in the house awake who always makes people do whatever he wants but to a limit because he is not too naughty like the other kids at his age...
Like his mother, he is down to earth, respect to elders and know the value of things around him... Everyone in the house love him and prefer him as 'baba' which makes his happiness reach to the high understanding how much respect they give to him in return of his respect to them...
However, today it been silent and servants were wondering what has happen because it not really likes him to sleep till this late... It was going to be 9am soon and time for him to get down to have breakfast with his mother who would be leaving him to the school like usual...
Something was not right happen as the silent were broke with a loud screaming that was coming from the only room that remain without giving the introduction yet... The scream was getting higher and higher also the voice could be feel pain and panic if something bad has happen...
Servant in a cream uniform was standing with her head bow as if she has done something, which is not allowed... Girl in her early 30 was standing farming with anger but also worried as she try to call someone...
'Damn it, how can he be so careless being a doctor... Usse itna nehi pata kiya usko hamesha available hone chahiyeh..' She keeps blabbering as she rubbed in between her eyebrow...
'Ma'am, maine kal raat bhi unko call karne ki koshish ki but tabse phone band aa raha hai...' Servant said...
'Aur tumne yeh ek baar bhi nehi socha mujhe inform kardena chahiyeh right... How can u be so careless...' Girl said...
'Sorry Ma'am but bohot der hogaya ta aur aap der tak kaam kar rahi ti toh...' The girl cut her...
'Toh tumne socha tum handle karlogi right... For god sake how many times I have to tell u all that nothing is more important to me then my own son... Main kitni bhi rich kyun na ho, mere liyeh meri first and last priority mera beta hai... Usko kuch nehi ho na chahiyeh n thats it...
Shayad logo ke liyeh Riddhima Gupta ek badi business woman ho sakti hai lekin is ghar pe, meri life mein, pehle main ek Ma hoon uske baad business woman...' Riddhima shouted to her servant...
'Sorry ma'am...' Servant said...
'U better be aur tum pray karo god se ki mere bete koh kuch na ho, kyunki usse kuch bhi huva na, toh tumhari job toh gayi...' Riddhima said turning to her son, who was lying on the bed with comforter up to his waist, wet cloths on his forehead...
Riddhima look around the room, searching for something as everything was arrange nicely in their places... Blue and white colors were painted on the wall, white curtains hanging on the big glass window... Blue sheet on the bed with white comforter, pillows with mixed color of white and blue...
One corner, it was decorated with toys and other side there was a table with shelves which got books arrange on it... Other two door, which leads to washroom and wardrobe, it was as big as other rooms in the bungalow...
No one will say here, a boy of seven years is living... Everything was in there respective places as he is just like his mother when it comes to keep the room clean and tidy... Riddhima move to the table as there was something hang over the chair near it, taking it she move to her son who was on the bed with his eyes closed due to high fever...
Riddhima was holding his jumper as she knows he would feel cold in the car on the way to hospital, she sit next to her son and make him sit with the help of her as his small head rest on Riddhima chest...
'Baby, tumhe kuch nehi hoga..
Mamma haina aapke paas, dekho mamma aapko jaldi se doctor ke paas lejaigi aur phir dekhna aap bohot jaldi tik hojaenge okey...
Aap mamma ki super boy hona... Mamma ke Ryhan koh kuch nehi ho sakta, mamma koh pata hai Ryhan bohot strong baby hai..' Riddhima said as she make him wear his jumper and carrying her all the way down to the hall and drive way to the car which was ready for them on Riddhima order...
As soon as Riddhima got inside with Ryhan, she order to the driver to take them hospital... Riddhima sit on the back seat with Ryhan on her lap, with his two legs on either side of her as she hugs him with his head resting on Riddhima chest... Ryhan both hands where hanging down too as he has no strength to hold anything due to high fever, he was half unconscious but he can hear everything her mothers was saying to him... He so wanted to tell his Mamma he will fight but the fever wasn't letting him say a word as it was getting to his brain too...


IN THE SAME CITY


Not far away from the seaside, another beautiful bungalow was glowing with the sunrise... It was not a big one but it was very peaceful to look from outside... Greenly grass around the house with walk path to lead to the front door... Bungalow was neither too big nor small for four people to live with four rooms with a gym and study room... Hall wasn't big but it was medium size with Television hanging on the wall with several photos around it of two people showing the journey of a father and daughter from the day she was born...
Gray sofa was kept with black and white cushion on it place neatly... Not much people were around the house at this time of the day as sun has just risen not long before... Noises were coming from the kitchen which was on the left side of the house with dinning table for six in front it which was separate with the counter and one glass window...
A lady of her early 50's came out holding a tray filled with delicious mouth watering breakfast as she move to the dinning table arranging it nicely in order... She looks at the time, which shows 8 30am and wonder where the other two was as by now they always reach and shouts their lungs out asking for their breakfast...
When everything was set, the lady move towards the room which was on the front side the kitchen in a row with one room next to other... As she past the big glass door which leads outside to the back yard where they have a small area with couch place near the pool which was not too big but enough for a couple of people...
Also there was two chairs kept under the sky so anyone can sun bath laying on it with a small shower place not far away from the place so they can change before they go inside... Lady move further crossing the back yard to the rooms crossing the gym and study rooms...
Every room was well furniture with cream color paints in each room leaving on which mixed color of light purple and white with purple curtains hanging over the big glass window... Round queen size bed with white sheet and purple round pillows with purple comforter on it... Dark purple rag around the bed as one corner was decorated with many soft toys; where else in other corner there was a big wardrobe with several dresses hanging on it...
Two other doors was inside the room which leads to washroom and another door leads to the next room...
Another room was as big as the first one but of cream color paints... Big king size bed in the middle of the room with cream color sheet over the bed, with pillows and cushion on the bed with white comforter on it... left there was another door which leads to the washroom, big wardrobe next to the door... Big television hanging in front of the bed on the wall next to the door with rack under it with several CD's and DVD player...
The room was not so lighten because the creamy curtains were closed as two figure were on the bed hugging each other sleeping peacefully as if they don't have anything to care today... Lady came inside knowing where she can find the two people in the house saw how peacefully they were sleeping...
Thinking what has happen to them that they are still on the bed, lady move towards the window open the curtains letting the sun rays come inside giving the light to the silent room... Both hide their face as they pull the comforter over their head hiding themselves fully under it...
Lady move towards them pulling the comforter off from their face as they frown still with their eyes closed... They look so alike while sleeping, as little girl was a copy of her father with dimples adoring on her cheeks like her father...
'Tum dono aaj ghar pe rahoge kiya... Dekho 9bhaj rahe hai aur abhi tak tum dono tayyar bhi nehi huve...' Lady said shaking the guy who was hugging his six years daughter who was hiding on her father chest...
'Bi, mujhe 10bhaje jaana hai... Paanch minute sone dona...' the guy said...
'Ammy, tumhe der se jaana hai toh kiya huva...
Bhul gaye kiya, Arohi koh toh time par school jaana hai... Dekho tum nehi ute toh woh bhi nehi ut rahi...' Bi said...
'Arohi utjaenge tohdi der main, woh kal raat usne ek sapna dekha toh mere paas aagayi...
Aap jao main usko tayyar karke le aata hoon...' Ammy said...
'I know tum dono nehi uthoge aise... Aur accha lagta hai kiya har roz Arohi late se school poache toh... Tum apne kaam main busy rehte ho Ammy, mujhe uski parent banke jaana padta hai teacher ji se milne...
Bas ek hi shikayat hota hai, woh kyun late aate hai, itna shararat kyun karti hai... Aur uske Papa aur Ma kaha hai, kuch sikhate nehi kiya...
Main kuch nehi sunne wali Dr.Armaan Mallik, abhi utho aur apni beti koh tayyar karke 15mins main neeche aao... Breakfast ke bina main tum dono koh jaane nehi dunga toh abhi utjao bas...' Bi said pulling the comforter off from them and dragging Armaan making him sit with Arohi on his lap...
'Okey Bi, hum utgaye aur 15mins main tayyar hokhe aata hoon...' Armaan said moving towards Arohi room with a half sleeping Arohi in his arm...
Bi move behind them checking what they were doing and seeing Armaan entering the washroom, Bi took out the uniform for Arohi and ready her bag which was already packed the previous night by Arohi after she was done with her home work...
Bi take care of Armaan and Arohi after the day Arohi mother left them as she got someone more richer then Armaan, Armaan wasn't as rich as now before as Armaan just started his practise as a Junior Doctor at the time he got married to Arohi's mother...
From last four years, the three of them live in the house with another person who they prefer as Ramu Kaka take care of cleaning of the house... Also he helps Bi with the food shopping for the house, Armaan take care of other shopping with Bi as he loves to get everything and anything for his darling daughter...
Bi move out from the room knowing Armaan would make Arohi ready on time and before they come to have breakfast, Bi went to make milk for Arohi and Coffee for Armaan knowing their breakfast wouldn't start with it...


15 MINS LATER


Armaan and Arohi were having breakfast as fast as they could, Armaan has make Arohi ready with proper uniform and her hair which comes to her shoulder tied in to a high ponytail... Bi got lunch box ready for Arohi and complain to Armaan that Arohi had been not finishing her lunch and from last few days she had been bringing back half of the lunch untouched...
'Yeh kiya sun raha hoon main Angel... Aap apne meals kyun nehi le rahi acche se...' Armaan asked as he feed Arohi the delicious paratta make by Bi...
'Dadda, mujhe bhuk nehi lagte...
Aap mujhe itne acche se breakfast karate ho subah subah, meri yeh choti si tummy bohot full hote hai...
Main zyada nehi kha sakti Dadda, meri tummy dukhti hai...' Arohi said...
'Phir bhi baccha, aapko apne lunch finished karna chahiyeh, itni der tak school pe rehte ho aur uske baad dance classes...' Armaan said...
'I know Dadda, lekin main kiya karti... Mann nehi karte aapke bina kuch bhi khane ki...' Arohi said looking down at her small hands...
'Awww my baby...' Armaan said pulling Arohi on his lap and kissing her forehead...
'Bas, usne bola aur tum maan gaye na Ammy... Baap beti ek jaise ho...
Jab bhi ek dusre se dur ho toh koi tik se na khaatie hai na peete hai... Main kiya karun tum dono ka...' Bi said sitting on the chair on Armaan right...
'Aap kuch mat karo Bi... Jitna aap mere liyeh aur Angel ke liyeh karte ho, woh bohot hai...
Jab mujhe apne ma ke sabse zyada zarurat ta, aap ne mere haat pakda, mera saat diya...' Armaan said...
'Ek ma apne bacche koh akela kaise chod sakte hai Ammy beta...
Tum toh meri dil ki ek tokra ho jo main chaahkar bhi khud se alag nehi kar sakte...' Bi said...
'Aur main Dadda ki dil ka piece hoon, haina Dadda...' Arohi asked...
'Ofcourse my baby... Lekin abhi keh liyeh humhe chalna chahiyeh, nehi toh aaj phirse tumhe late hojaenga...' Armaan said stooping up Arohi in his arm while Bi got Arohi bag before they leave...
On the way to Arohi school, Armaan asked how her studies were going and dance classes which Arohi enjoy the most... Their annual day was getting near and Arohi wants to take part on the dance, which she was practicing with the help of one of the famous dancer...
Armaan would do anything to keep the adorable dimple smile on Arohi face and knowing how much Arohi love dancing and how well she learn so difficult types of dance moves in this young age, Armaan was really proud of his daughter...
Soon Armaan reach to Arohi School and bid by to her kissing her forehead and asking to be safe... Also he said he would try to come to take her home from her dance classes which make Arohi shows her best million dollar smile which is so alike with her father...
When Arohi move towards the gate waving to Armaan, Armaan wave her back giving his best smile to his darling daughter... Armaan keep staring at Arohi who vanished in to the crowd of several students dress in same uniform... Armaan trace were broke when he felt his mobile vibrate on his pocket, making sure Arohi was safely inside the school, Armaan took out his mobile to see it was from hospital...
Wondering what has happen as every case he was handling was under control till last night, Armaan answer the call to hear a worried nurse requesting him to come hospital as soon as possible as no other doctor was available at the moment for a child who had been brought with high fever...
Being a doctor and after his darling daughter if anything it means so much for him is his patients, Armaan tell her to take care of the child till he reach... Cutting the call Armaan drive to the hospital but before that he inform Bi that he was going straight to the hospital as he got an emergency...


IN HOSPITAL


As soon as the car stop in front of the big hospital building, Riddhima didn't wait for the driver to open the door for her as she move out holding Ryhan on her arms... Ryhan was still burning with high fever as the heat was making Riddhima burn with him... Ryhan keep calling his Mamma in between his unconscious states and Riddhima felt someone was stabbing on her heart seeing her darling son condition...
'Bas hum poach gaye baccha... Just hold on, jaldi aapko araam miljaenge...' Riddhima said as she run inside calling trying to make her way towards the nurse station...
Riddhima was very worried as some of the nurse and ward boys stares at her knowing who she was... People knows Riddhima being the famous business woman in the whole country, its very rare to happen that a woman to be in a high post in business...
'Excuse me, can I get the best doctor for my son... Usko bohot high fever hai...' Riddhima said caring Ryhan back...
'Riddhima Gupta right... Aapke baare main bohot suna hai..' Nurse said who was behind the station...
'Yeah, I know bohot log mujhe jaante hai but can u please get a doctor for my son...
Usko kal raat se bohot zyada high fever hai...' Riddhima said...
'Sorry Ma'am, abhi sirf general doctor available hai...' Nurse said...
'Then call to the doctor and request to get here... Jitna pay karna hai main utna pay karne ke liyeh tayyar hoon...
Mujhe bas best doctor chahiyeh apne bete ke liyeh...' Riddhima said...
'Sure Madam... Rakesh, tum madam koh Dr. Mallik ke cabin pe lejao...
Main Dr. Mallik koh inform kar deti hoon...' Nurse said...
'Thank you...' Riddhima said moving with the ward boy who the nurse refer as Rakesh who stop hearing the nurse calling him...
Rakesh show Riddhima DR. Malik cabin where Riddhima wait with Ryhan... Riddhima was sitting in front of DR. Malik table with Ryhan on her lap... She look around the cabin, it was not as big as Riddhima cabin in her office but it was well furnished and enough for a doctor...
Nametag was on the table with written 'DR.ARMAAN MALLIK' Written in golden letters... Riddhima eyes fell on the photo frame, which was kept on the table, which back was facing towards her... Don't know why but Riddhima just wanted to see the photo on it...
Holding Ryhan carefully closed to her chest, Riddhima turn around the photo frame which has a picture of a guy and a little girl same age of Ryhan... Riddhima smile for the first time today seeing how alike the guy and girl look with dimple on their cheeks as they show their white pearl teethes...
'Mamma...' Ryhan call breaking Riddhima trace...
Riddhima move her gaze towards Ryhan who was still lying with his eyes closed due to high fever... Next moment Ryhan started to cough so badly that Riddhima thought he would vomitted in any time... Riddhima rubbed his back and look around out from the close door as if anyone was near around whom she could asked to get some water for Ryhan...
Riddhima was worried not understanding what to do and whom to asked for help... Riddhima stood up to leave and get water on her own but was stop when the door flow open as a figure stood in front of her... Riddhima stare at the person as he wear a blue shirt with first three button open, black jeans and lab court over from his shirt...
As Riddhima has seen the guy already a while ago in the picture which was on the table, Riddhima understood he is the doctor but he look as if he would be just two three years elder then her... Wondering why he don't have a family picuture in the frame with his wife as it got only a girl picture with him...
'Ms. Gupta...' He said looking at Riddhima and then to Ryhan who was unconscious...
'Dr.Mallik right...' Riddhima asked as the guy nodded his head...
'Please call me Armaan... Hope I didn't keep u long...' Armaan said as he moves near his table taking the glass of water, which was kept there...
'Not at all Dr.Armaan... Woh main bas paani lene...' Armaan cut Riddhima...
'Yeh loh Ms. Riddhima... and please don't be so formal...' Armaan said...
Riddhima smile and make Ryhan drink a little water from it... Meanwhile Armaan check Ryhan pulse and fever which was very high... Armaan immediately asked Riddhima to admit Ryhan as he wanted to do some more test of Ryhan to make sure its nothing serious hearing Riddhima saying his fever wasn't reducing from last 10hours..
'Dekho Riddhima, main jaanta hoon aap bohot busy...' Riddhima cut Armaan...
'Doctor, mere liyeh pehle apne bete aate hai baad main apne profession...
Jitni din tak aap Ryhan koh under observation rakhna chaahte hai aap rakh sakte ho...
Please I want best treatment for him... Please meri bacche koh tik kardo...' Riddhima said with little tears sparkling in her eyes...
'Don't worry Riddhima, ab main tumhari bete ka case personally dekhunga...
I promise you jaldi tum apne bete koh ghar waapas le jaaenge...' Armaan said...
Ryhan was soon admitted and Armaan was personally checking everything seeing how worried Riddhima was for her son... Knowing how she must be feeling, Armaan can understand what she must be going through being a single mother as he is a single father of the same age kid...
While Armaan check Ryhan as he was admitted in the ICU, Riddhima was standing outside looking inside from the window glass... Tears were already falling from her eyes which she has been controlling from last few minutes seeing those wires attach to her little bundle of happiness in her life...
When Armaan attach the needle to his small hand to send the gulcoze to his body to give him strength, Riddhima felt the pain he must be having the moment the needles go inside her spine which makes Riddhima heart ache... Riddhima trace were broken when she felt her mobile vibrate inside her purse, wipping her tears Riddhima took out the mobile checking the caller ID... It was from her best friend who had supported in her worst time and takes her as her own sister...
'Kaho Niks...' Riddhima asked still her eyes fixed on Ryhan...
'Kaha ho tum Ridzy... Bhul gaye kiya aaj humhe bohot important meeting attend karna hai...' Nikkita Modi, Riddhima partner said from the other side...
Riddhima and Nikki was friends from the collage time, Nikki always wanted to joins her father business and soon her dream came true as she took the responsible on her hand as she took the business to new levels... When Riddhima was in need of a friend and job, Nikki offer her to work in her company, Riddhima was very good in her work and slowly her post was getting higher in the company and Nikki wants to make Riddhima as her partner knowing she would be the best Nikki could get in business...
'Niks, I m sorry main aaj nehi aapaungi...
Mujhe kuch din chutti chahiyeh...' Riddhima said...
'Ridzy, are you crying... Suddenly tum chutti ki baat kyun kar rahe ho...' Nikki asked worried hearing Riddhima break voice...
'Niks, Ryhan...' Riddhima voice got blocked as fresh tears fall from her eyes...
'Ryhan.. Kiya huva meri champ koh...' Nikki asked, as she loves Ryhan like her own son...
'Ryhan koh kal raat se bohot high fever hai... Abhi main usko hospital lekhe aayi hoon...
Please tum aaj ke meeting akele handle kar sakte ho...' Riddhima asked...
'Of course Ridzy... I know tum suddenly chutti ki baat aise nehi karenge...
U can be with him all the time u need, main yaha sab kuch sambhalungi, u don't worry about work okey...
Bas meri Champ ka khayal rakhna aur khud ka bhi... Aur haan, kuch bhi chahiyeh toh mujhe inform karna and mujhe Champ ke baare main har ek gante main inform karti rehna...' Nikki said...
'Thank you Niks, pata nehi tum nehi hote toh meri aur Ryhan ka kiya hoga...' Riddhima said wiping her tears again...
'Kuch nehi hota Ridzy... Tum meri behen ke tarah ho aur Ryhan meri champ hai... Woh bohot jaldi tik hojaenge, tum dekhna Ridzy... Bas tumhe jitna time use saat rehna hai, raho... Main baaki sab kuch sambhalungi...' Nikki said...
By the time Nikki cut the call, Armaan came outside as the nurse left collecting Ryhan blood to do some test... Armaan move towards Riddhima who was standing near the glass window looking towards her darling son...
'Riddhima...' Armaan call her name softly...
'Ryhan kaisa hai Doctor...' Riddhima asked...
'Maine injection de diya hai... Aur blood sample le liya hai kuch test ke liyeh...
Tum chinta mat karo, woh bohot jaldi tik hojaenga...' Armaan said...
'Kitni din use yaha rakhna hoga...' Riddhima asked...
'Kal tak uski report miljaengi, serious problem nehi hai toh main kal usko discharge de dunga...' Armaan said...
'Kiya tum Ryhan koh ghar pe treat kar sakte ho...' Riddhima asked...
'Waise toh main personally kissi ke ghar jaante nehi ho lekin sure I will visit whenever u want...' Armaan said...
'Thank you Doctor...' Riddhima said trying to smile a little...
'Its our job Riddhima... Aur rahi baat Ryhan ki, main samajh sakti hoon tum kitna pareshan hoon uske liyeh...
Jab apne bacche koh takleef main dekhte hai, ma baap koh usse zyada takleef hoti hai...' Armaan said as he looks towards Ryhan who was sleeping...
'Har Baap koh takleef nehi hoti Doctor... Ryhan itna lucky nehi hai usko apne Papa ke pyar mil sake lekin main poori koshish karti hoon usko apne papa ke kami mehsoos na ho...' Riddhima said...
'Aur har Ma tumhari jaise bhi nehi hote, itna high position pe hone ke baad bhi tumhare liyeh apna beta sabse pehle aata hai... Lekin kuch logon ke liyeh paisa and reputation unke first priority hoti hai, family ya bacche nehi...' Armaan said...
'Yeh tumse sahi kaha Doctor... Har kissi ke liyeh paison se zyada family important nehi hote...' Riddhima said...
'Haan, aur main tumhari pareshani issiliyeh samajh sakhti hoon kyunki main bhi ek beti ki responsibility bina uske ma ki utha ta hoon...' Armaan said...
Riddhima look towards Armaan when Armaan said the last sentence... She didn't believe her ears hearing Armaan words but from his low and painful voice, Riddhima understood how much it must be hurting Armaan to take a responsibility for a daughter without a mother...
Armaan had to leave as he got a pager, telling Riddhima she can wait in the ICU with Ryhan and he would be coming to check on him after an hour Armaan left to check his other patient whom needs treatment... Riddhima kept looking at Armaan back as he turn to the corner vanishing in front of her eyes letting Riddhima stood there alone thinking its not her who was going through so much in life...


NEXT DAY


Armaan had been in hospital late night, when he return Arohi was already on bed sleeping with a pout expression... From Bi, Armaan came to know that Arohi was very angry on Armaan for not going to get her from dance class as Armaan inform Bi to get Arohi from her dance class due to the emergency... Armaan thought to talk Arohi at the morning but early morning he got a call from hospital telling Ryhan was coughing and vomiting from an hour, which make him more weak...
So Armaan had to leave before Arohi wake and was busy whole day checking Ryhan reports and giving him the best treatment he could... All this time, Riddhima had been on Ryhan side not leaving him for a second... Nikki has got cloths for Riddhima which she change there it self not wanting to leave Ryhan for a second... Armaan make sure Riddhima have food because he knows Ryhan would need his mother by his side all the time... Armaan was surprise that he was making sure Riddhima eat or not in time because he had met several mothers in his profession but never cared this much towards anyone before...


DINNER TIME


Arohi was sitting in the hall sofa, crossing her small legs, she was hugging her favorite bunny which was of white color... Bi was sitting next to her, trying to feed her as she haven't had food properly from previous night... Arohi was upset and angry on Armaan, which was making her not to have anything unless she sees Armaan...
'Arohi, baccha plz kuch khalo...
Dekho tumne kal raat se tik se nehi khaya... Na subah breakfast ki tik se, lunch bhi half left chod diya tumne...
Aise toh meri pyari si choti si nanhni si pari bimar padjaengi na... Phir apni Dadda koh bohot bura lagega baccha...
Tohda khalo plz, ya main tumhare liyeh tumhari favorite milkshake banaun???' Bi asked caring Arohi head...
'Bunny, tum Bi se kaho mujhe kuch nehi khana Dadda ke bina... Mujhe sirf Dadda chahiyeh... Ek din hogaye maine ek baar bhi Dadda koh nehi dekha...
Mujhe laga aaj Dadda mujhe mana ne aayenge lekin subah subah woh chala gaya.. Kal raat bhi der se aaya jab main sogaye, aur aaj bhi abhi tak nehi aaya...' Arohi said looking at her bunny...
It was the moment Armaan enter the house and hear Arohi words... Armaan smile seeing how upset and sad Arohi was not seeing him whole day... Even Armaan miss his little Angel through whole day but couldn't come earlier as he was busy with his patients...
'Arohi, aapki Dadda toh hospital pe logo koh treat karne gaye haina... Woh jaldi apne Angel ke paas aayenge dekhna...' Bi said...
'Jaanti hoon Bi, lekin jabse mamma gayi tab se main Dadda se zyada waqt dur nehi rahi... Main nehi chaahte Dadda bhi mujhe chodke jaae...' Arohi said as small tears fall from her blue orbs...
'Arohi ki Dadda kabhi apne Arohi koh chodke nehi jaenge...' Armaan said moving towards them...
Bi and Arohi look towards Armaan, pains were visible in Armaan eyes hearing those words from Arohi... She has never Armaan knows about her fear of losing her father to anyone before...
Arohi wipes her tears standing and before Armaan could reach her, she run away from there as more fresh tears leave from her eyes... Armaan face fell seeing Arohi run away from him, not like others day she welcome him with a bright smile and a comfort hug...
'Arohi kabse tumhara wait kar rahi ti Ammy..' Bi said...
'I know Bi, lekin mujhe yeh nehi pata ta us choti si jaan ke dil main itna dar hai ki woh apni Dadda koh bhi kho denge ek din...' Armaan said...
'Mujhe bhi nehi pata ta Ammy, lekin ab samajh main aagaye usko bad dreams issi baat koh lekar aata hoga jiski wajahse woh tumhari paas jaakhe sote hai...' Bi said...
'Bi, aap dinner garam kardo... Main Angel koh lekhe aata hoon...' Armaan said moving towards Arohi room...


IN AROHI ROOM


Arohi was sitting near the big glass window on her knee looking out to the sky as the moon and stars shine high above... Tears were falling from her eyes without stopping as she hugs tight her bunny...
Armaan came and sit next to her on his knee as he also face to the window looking outside... Neither of them says anything for minutes as Arohi sobbed softly...
'Angel...' Armaan call her which make Arohi cry harder, hugging her father crying on Armaan chest...
Armaan pull Arohi on his lap as he hide his little Angel in his arms... Rubbing her back, Armaan try to control his tears not letting it fall in front of his angel...
'Angel, tum bilkul aisa mat sochna aapke Dadda kabhi aapko chodke jaenge...
Aapki Dadda aapke bina ek pal bhi nehi reh sakte...' Armaan said...
'Toh aap ek din mujhse milne bina kaise raha Dadda...' Arohi asked innocently...
'Dekho Angel (making Arohi look towards him cupping her small cheeks...) Dadda ka kaam aisa hai ki kabhi kabhi Dadda koh apne Angel se milne ki time nehi milte... Lekin iska yeh matlab nehi na aapki Dadda aapko hamesha ke liyeh chodke chala jaenge...
Dadda ka kaam logo koh bachana hota hai, logo koh zindagi dena hota hai... Kyunki woh log bhi kabhi kissi ki Dadda ya bacche hota hai jo uske apne usko bohot pyar karte hai...
Aap samajh rahi hona apne Dadda ke baat...' Armaan said...
'Lekin Angel koh bhi apne Dadda ke paas rehna hai...' Arohi said resting her head on Armaan chest...
'Dadda koh bhi... Dadda is very sorry Angel, kal main aapko promise karke nehi niba paya... Lekin Dadda koh aapki age ki ek boy koh treat karna ta...
Pata hai Angel, uske paas sirf uske Mamma hai... Jaise aapke Dadda ke paas sirf apne Angel hai, us Mamma ke saat sirf uski Champ hai... Jaise Dadda apne Angel ke liyeh jeete hai, us tarah woh Mamma uske Champ ke liyeh jeeti hai...
Aapko pata haina jab aap bimar hote toh Dadda kitna sad hota hoon, takleef hota hai Dadda koh apne Angel koh takleef main dekh ke, usi tarah us Mamma koh bhi dukh aur takleef hoti hai...
Ab aap batao, Aapke Dadda doctor hai lekin Champ ke Mamma doctor nehi hai... Toh aapke Dadda koh us Champ koh treat karna chahiyeh na taaki uske Mamma koh dukh na ho hmm...' Armaan said caring Arohi hair...
'Sorry Dadda, aap bilkul sahi keh rahi ho...
Ab Champ kaisi hai...' Arohi asked...
'Fever abhi bhi hai, lekin kal se zyada behtar hai aaj issiliyeh maine usko ghar jaane ki permission de diya, hum Sunday koh usse milne chalenge okey...' Armaan said kissing Arohi forehead...
'Dadda, woh aapka patient hai... Main kaise use mil sakti hoon...' Arohi asked...
'Kyun, tum kyun nehi... Tum toh mere saat hospital bhi jaate hona, toh mere saat uske ghar kyun nehi...' Armaan asked...
'Usko accha na laga toh...' Arohi asked...
'Kissi koh aaj tak mere Angel accha nehi laga kiya jo aaj accha nhi lagega...
Tumhe apne Dadda pe trust haina Angel, yeh aapki Dadda bol raha hai aur dekhna, un dono koh aap bohot accha lagega...
Ab yeh sab chodo, chalo dinner karte hai... Dadda ke stomach main rats running running kar raha hai...' Armaan said making Arohi laugh...
'Toh rats koh bhaga te hai Dadda, jaldi chalooo...' Arohi said as she stood up pulling Armaan out of the room towards the dinning table where Bi was waiting for them...


SUNDAY


Riddhima was feeding Ryhan sandwich, as he needs to have something light... Also she got orange juice for him whom Ryhan was making faces... Ryhan had his sandwich as Riddhima feed him with all the love but when its time to have juice and medicine, Ryhan tantrums started...
'Mamma, mujhe nehi peena yeh juice...' Ryhan said hiding his face in his palm...
'Baccha, aise aap tik kaise hoga... Aapko juice ke saat medicine bhi leni hai...
Dekho aapne kal raat acchi bacchi banke medicine liya toh fever gayab hogaya... Abhi kuch din aur aapko medicine lena hoga, phir meri champ pehle jaise strong hojaenge right...' Riddhima said trying to pull out Ryhan hand...
'Lekin Mamma, yeh medicine bohot gande hai... Saara taste kharab kardenge...' Ryhan said...
'Aisa nehi hoti na pehle aap mujhe batate aapko fever ta... Lekin nehi, Champ ne sabko mana kiya apne mamma koh batane ki... Ab toh Mamma ka value nehi hai Champ ke life main...' Riddhima said making a sad face and looking down at her hand to the juice glass and medicine...
Riddhima knows her emotional blackmails always would work on Ryhan and it in need work... Ryhan move his palm away from his face looking at Riddhima, seeing her mother sad Ryhan feel sad too...
'Mamma, aisa mat bolo... Aap mera sab kuch ho... Aap nehi toh yeh Champ kaise rahega...
Papa toh hai hi nehi mere saat, sirf aap hai jo mera fikar hai aur kissi koh nehi... Maine issiliyeh aapko nehi bataya kyunki main jaanta hoon aap bohot busy ti aur aap sab kaam chod ke mere paas aayenge, mere wajahse pareshan hogi...
Aur Champ apne Mamma ki pareshani aur badana nehi chaahte Mamma, aap aur ready bohot busy ti ek project ki wajahse... Phir main kaise aapko pareshan kar sakta hoon... Aur nehi karunga, acche boy banke medicine bhi lunga aur juice bhi...' Ryhan said taking medicine from Riddhima and eat it with the juice...
Riddhima smile seeing how much her only Son think about her, being a five year old still he understand and think what Riddhima must be going through taking all the responsible of work and Ryhan's... Riddhima care Ryhan care as Ryhan empty the glass in one go...
Ryhan hugs Riddhima keeping the glass on side table as they sit on Ryhan bed...
'Mamma, aap plz mere wajahse sad mat hona... Aur Champ koh kabhi bhi galati huva toh maaf kardena, chod ke mat jaana papa ke tarah...' Ryhan said hiding his face on Riddhima chest...
Hearing Ryhan last words, Riddhima felt someone snapped her heart... Those words were really painful to hear from his mouth and Riddhima understand how he must be feeling... Riddhima move away from him, cupping his face on her palm...
'Champ, aap toh Mamma ki strong boy hona... Aap yeh kabhi mat sochna papa aapse issiliyeh dur gaye kyunki woh aapse pyar nehi karte, kyunki papa aapse bohot pyar karte hai... Lekin papa koh bohot bada aatmi banna ta, papa koh ek sapna pura karna ta uske liyeh Papa ne hum dono se dur gaye...
Papa nehi toh kiya huva, Champ ke mamma aur Nikki massi haina hamesha Champ ke paas... Champ se itna pyar karne ke liyeh, toh kissi aur koh kyun chahiyeh hum right...' Riddhima said caring his face with her hand and kissing his forehead lingering her lips on his skin...
'Mamma, kiya papa kabhi waapas nehi aayenge...' Ryhan ask looking at Riddhima innocently...
Riddhima didn't know what to say to Ryhan innocent question which has a very deep meaning and a hope that he wish the answer would be positive... Riddhima hugs Ryhan hiding the little one on her arms, she felt tears form in her eyes but didn't let it fall knowing it was no need to a person who don't care about her n her baby...
'Mamma haina Champ... Mamma aapko kabhi chod ke nehi jaungi...' Riddhima said hugging and kissing Ryhan head resting her head over his...
Ryhan also hugs his mother with his small hand around Riddhima body knowing his mother don't have an answer for his question but also Ryhan decide that one day, he would get the answer...


ARMAAN BUNGALOW


Armaan and Arohi were ready to leave, Armaan tell Bi not to make lunch for them as they have plan to go out for lunch after visiting Armaan patient... Armaan invite Bi who just turn them down saying she has another plan of meeting with a friend... Armaan knows she just want him to spend times with Arohi as she had been very low and upset in the past week... Also the nightmare had been waking her middle of the night and Arohi end up sleeping next to her Dadda, hugging him in his protective arms...
Morning Bi had to call them, as Armaan has to go by 10 to visit his patient... Armaan and Arohi got ready and today they had light breakfast as they always have heavy breakfast in weekdays...
Bi also didn't say anything because she knows it was no used of telling them and she knows they would have anything she make in weekdays...
So after breakfast, Armaan and Arohi left to Riddhima Bungalow as they sing in the car all the way to the place... Arohi was left with shocked expression seeing the beautiful Bungalow...
'Wow Dadda, yeh toh humhari ghar se bhi bada hai...' Arohi said making Armaan smile...
'Haan Angel, kyunki jiska yeh ghar hai, woh bohot bade hai... Business main bohot famous hai...' Armaan said...
'Lekin humhare ghar se zyada nehi...' Arohi said...
'I know Angel, kyunki ab hum us ghar pe rehte rehte aadat hogaye hai jiski wajahse humhe sirf woh wala ghar pasand hai...' Armaan said as they came out from the car making their way towards the entrance...
Armaan and Arohi were welcome by a servant who asked them to seat while she inform Riddhima of their arrival... Arohi keep looking around while Armaan focus on the file he was holding as he got some result of Ryhan blood test previous night so he take it with him...
Armaan smile knowing Arohi was admiring the beautiful Bungalow as she keeps making comments in between asking Armaan look here and there... Armaan tell her to keep quiet which make Arohi expression change to a pout but soon she forget and gets excited seeing beautiful things around the hall...
'Sir, Ma'am ne aapko upar Baba ke room main bhulaya hai...' Servant came asking to follow her...
Armaan and Arohi move with the servant soon they were at the first floor, crossing the rooms, as they were lead to Ryhan's room... Servant stop near the door, asking Armaan and Arohi to move inside as Riddhima and Ryhan was waiting for them...
Armaan gave a smile to the servant as he move inside holding Arohi hand, Arohi stood behind him hiding herself as if she was not comfortable to meet new people...
As Armaan and Arohi enter, Riddhima look towards them standing as she was sitting next to Ryhan... Knowing Armaan will need to check him, Riddhima give space to him...
'Thank you so much for coming Doctor...' Riddhima said...
'Its okey Riddhima, plz call me Armaan...
I hope u wouldn't mind I bring my daughter with me...' Armaan said...
'Not at all Armaan, it would be my pleasure to meet the little angel... Waise hai kaha aapka beti...' Riddhima ask bending her head a little to get a glim of Arohi...
Armaan look behind him as Arohi look towards Armaan giving a nervous smile, Armaan blink his eyes saying everything is fine and no one would harm or separate her from him...
'Yeh hai Arohi, mera beti...
Angel yeh Riddhima Aunty hai, Ryhan ke Mom...' Armaan said pulling Arohi in front of Riddhima who just stare at the little Angel...
Arohi look towards Riddhima with a nervous expression where else Riddhima just stood admiring how beautiful she was looking in real, Riddhima don't know why she felt a connection towards her... Then remembering Armaan words a night before, she was lost thinking how can a mother leave this gorgeous daughter who looks like a real Angel...
Riddhima sit on her knee, eye level to Arohi and open her arms welcoming the little Angel to a motherly hug... Arohi look at Armaan who nodded his head asking to move ahead... Riddhima wait as Arohi look towards her father as if she was asking for proceed, Ryhan sit not understanding what happen to her mother as she was welcoming to this girl who is unknown to them, just a girl whose father was treating him...
Armaan blink his eyes which make Arohi look towards Riddhima, Ryhan and Armaan keep staring at Riddhima and Arohi who stared at each other...



Hellooo Friendsss and Readersss...
Shocked to see another FS by SoHoo (Sohah&Rihoohaws)...
Hope u all would be liking this new team work of us...
Do give feed backs and press Like...
Take care...
Love u all...


With Love,
Rihoohaws & Sohah (SoHoo)...

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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm just too much shocked to say something to u tell me should i comment or not...😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
Edited by Ruppkotha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
New FS
Yeayyy
Boht maza ayegi...

Apki khubsurat subah aur nayi kahani ki starting se yaad ayi...

Chanda mama so gaye sooraj chachu jage
Dekho pakdo yaaron, ghadi ke kaante bhage
Ek kahani khatam to dooji shuru ho gayi mamu
Subah ho gayi mamu, mamu, mamu
Subah ho gayi mamu, mamu, re mamu


Then the description was awesome...
Just speachless...
Wow play station then to paakka its armaan's house...
Opps galat detection
Mother bhi single
Father bhi single
Let's see when they gets mingle...
Arohi and ryhan...
Waise u know wht i hv a frnd his name also ryhan
well bck to comment
I love the bond between Ryhan-Ridhima & Arohi-Armaan
Oh that poor girl how much she fear...
Then Ryhaan scene kitna bada bada bate kar raha tha wo...
Then arohi's expression of being sui-mui infront all remind me of my reaction..
Main to abhi bhi kahi function attend karne jati hu toh mumma se chipak k beithe rehti hu...
Meri bas chale to mumma k anchal pakad k beith jau
Aur kisi se bhi na milu...
Arohi k bare me kya bolu...
I so love her
The way she waited for armaan for dinner i also used to do the same for my abbu

Ap dono ne milke phirse bchpan me bhej di yaar...
Dekho waise achanak yeh new fs dekhke waise hi blank ho gayi hu...
Samajh nhi a rhi hai kya bat karu...
Gana to dur ki baat hai mujhe to thik se word bhi organize karni nhi a rhi hai...
Pata nhi kya se kya bool rhi hu...
My haal is like

Kya Soch Ke Aaye The
Kuch Yaad Nahi, Yaad Nahi
Kya Bol Sajaaye The
Kuch Yaad Nahi, Yaad Nahi
Hosh Gum Ho Gaye
Yaaro Hum Kho Gaye
Abhi Abhi Yahin Kahin
Kya Soch Ke Aaye The Yaad Nahi
Kya Bol Sajaaye The
Kuch Yaad Nahi

Did u two just said it was a surprise?????????
It's understatement
It's beyond of it...
Plz apu requesting aise surprise dene se pehle bol diya karo taki prepare reh saku😉😛
Coz ek to i hate surprizes 😉
& 2nd mujhe surprise me react karna nhi ati hai..
I just go all blank
And meri dimag k hearddisk hang ho jati hai...
Chalo kaisa bhi ho bilkul achi nhi thi...
Kyun ki yeh boht achi thi...
Love u both...
Tc
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb and really interesting
love the bonding ar share with their children
excited for upcoming parts
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

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