New Maaneet SS Kashmakash part1-11 & EPILOGUE @ PG84 updated - Page 38

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Posted: 10 years ago
suprb update dear...
maan asking one chance from geet n geet ne maan ko ek chance de diya...
maan ne decide kiya k jb tk geet usse poore dil se nai maaf krti wo Bangalore me rhega geet k saath...
maan taking care of geet...dekhte h maan kaise geet ka trust won krta h
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just started reading this story. I have read muskan's story. This is like another view point of the story. You are doing good. Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART-8

After 2 days

Geet was absolutely fine now thanx to maan's love n care

Geet was sitting in there room while maan went out for sum work,when he came back he told geet

Geet now u r feeling fine so why don't u join ur office from tommorw

But maan ap yahan akele kya karoge when ill b at office

No geet i don't want u to ignore ur responsibilities because of me,so u r joining ur office tomorrow n complete that project soon that u r given by ur boss

Aap ye sab kaise jante ho??

Wo i got to know it from my BG

Ohh,but phir aap kya karoge sara dina kaele yahan

Don't worry about me geet ill find sumthing to keep me busy u just concentrate on ur work,

Geet was happy that maan thought about her n her responsibilities,she felt nice seeing maan thinking soo much about her

One week passed n maaneet were living together again,maan has tried to change himself alott for geet n today he was in the kitchen trying to make sumthing,he has asked geet not to enter kitchen,as he wanted to make sumthing special for her

Well the special that maan singh khurana tried was a simple dal n sabji,coz cooking that only was a big deal for him

Geet sat there feeling hungry,it has been aprox 2 hours n don't know what maan was cooking that it was yet not ready,finally loosing her patience she decided to go n check her eslf,geet went to kitchen only to see maan standing there making Maggie

Geet was beyond shocked seeing that it took maaan 2 hours to make a simple Maggie,she was about to say sumthing when she saw towards the sink n realised what it was

Maan called geet

N maan turned oh m sorry geet u must b hungry right m sorry to keep u waiting,just wait for 2 mins n ill bring our dinner

Thanku maan

Thanku but kyun geet,iss maggie k liye?? Asked maan confused

No not for the Maggie but for ur efforts,maan apko sach me ye sab karne ki jarurat nai h,i saw how u tried to cook today n all ur hardwork went down to drain,maan m fine u don't have to do all this to get me back home,m happy maan getting u, ur time is enough for me i don't need anything else

No geet no,my mistakes r no soo small to be forgiven soo easily,i know u have no hard feelings for me but i need to regret my wrong doings n m not doing all this to get u back home but coz i truly wanna do this plsss i have to try geet,coz mai dubara tume nai khona chahta

U won't maan trust me u won't loose me

Nai geet let me try,i need to change geet,coz its the rule of nature,after our marriage i always expected u to adjust n change urself according to me n u did it at every step,so why can't i do it now,let me try geet plss

Geet hugged maam feeling soo special seeing him try to change for her

They had there lovely dinner geet had maan's made Maggie with soo much love appreciating his cooking skills,wile maan smilled at her sweetness

Another week passed n today was Saturday geet was at office n it was an half day today,

Here at home maan stood infront of mirror trying to talk,geet see i bought this for u..

Naah geet here this is for u

Nooo geet ye gift tumhare liye

It had been an hour now n maan still didn't knew what to say n how to say,maan never did this for anyone before,he never bought any gift or anything for anyone,he was feeling shy n consious,just thinking about it that how he ll gift this sari to geet,he was still trying to formulate thecorrect words n that's how geet found him in there room infront of mirror

Maan called geet n maan suddenly felt soo conscious not knowing what to say

Haan woh geet great u came,woh woh

Maan ap kya kar rae the mirror k samne

Haan nai kuch bhi toh nai

Nai maan u were

Kuch nai geet u go n get changed then we ll go sumwhere

But aapgeet tried to say sumthing but maan again told her to go

Geet go fast said maan left the room feeling embarresed to b caught like this by his wife

Geet wondered what happend to maan why was he acting all so wierd,she went to take herchange of clothes,n when she was about to enter the washroom she saw a packet kept on the side table

Geet came back n looked at the beautifully wrapped gift

It had a note written fpor my wife

Geet kept looking at it realising what was all that drama few min before,she shook her head n took the packet with her

When geet came out from the room getting dreassed,shocked was a small word for maan,he kept looking at her not realising that geet was truly wearing the sari that he bought for her,geet looked towards maan n seeing him not saying anything decided to have sum fun ith him,maan see this sari is soo beautiful na,pata naikise rakhi thi wahan room mai

Woh ye geet

Haan maan achi h na,muje b bht achi lagi patanai kisne rakhi hogi,but jo b ho its really beautiful

Geet ye woh ye mai

Maan aaj ho kya gay h aapko aap ye ye wo mai kya bol rae ho,aapko bolne mai kabse problem hone lagi

Maan looked here n there wondering what to say,he was feeling so concious just thinking about the fact that he actually gifted sumone sumthing,to b more precise for the first time gifted geet sumthing he was lost in his thoughts when geet suddenly hugged him n said thanku maan thaku for this saari,muje pata h u bought it for me,but kehhi nai par

Nai wo mai

No maan i loved it really its beautiful thanku

Maan felt a strange sense of peace njoy in his heart seeing geet smile n liking his saari for the first time he realised,that how these small small things can give u happiness,how these small small moments brings happiness in ur heart ,fill ur heart with joy,happiness he smilled n took geet for outing

Geet was happy the way maan was being soo caring towards her,it wasn't the fact that he was cooking or getting gift for her that made her happy but his efforts his care that he showed through his gestures,n the biggest thing was his efforts that he was putting to improve there realtion even after she told him that all this wasn't required,all geet ever desied in her life was a loving,caring partnes,a person with whom she can share her feelings,who would care for her,who would make her smile,be her campanion n that was all that she was getting inmaan's small small gestures,she felt soo happy having her maan back,even though she didn't wanted maan to change himself for her but seeing his efforts to make thee realtion gud,gave her happiness


Okh guys that's it for now

ll b waiting for ur response

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Posted: 10 years ago
maan care touching geet heart so first gift
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dear, maan is start caring for geet, wondering, when they go back to KM, how will pammi is reaction😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Wat to say im smiling with tears in my eyes..wow lovely emotional touchy update...te way my maan trying to do some thing for his geet , not top impress her but to win her heart which he broked..wow te way he cooking and practicing to give gifts , it can be silly but in tat i feel my love ki love for his geet..yes my maan is man of action but he trying to change for his geet was lovely emotional touchy..wen geet said he dont need to do all tis but my maan ki words he is not for her but he want to change for his geet who accept him wat he is was lovely emotional touching..wen my maan practising and get caught his face i want to pull his cheeks, cutie..naught geet started to tease my maan, tis wat she yearn for not money or gifts.. i love te update so much dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice😊
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesme part
maan brought sari for her😳
i love dis caring maan!!!
Loved it alot
update nxt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
maan making dinner😆
n also gifted sari 😃

finally he realised these small small things are only needed for making the relation work😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
i was laughing when he was talking to himself in the mirror and when geet came out wearing tat saree.. MSK was speechless and did not know wat to say but geet was happy.. right she does not want anything else but just his love and care was enough for her to prove tat he was trying hard for their relation

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