New Maaneet SS Kashmakash part1-11 & EPILOGUE @ PG84 updated

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

GC_TheKing

@GC_TheKing

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#361

Lovely update . Geet thought Maan can never change but for Maan's sake she gave a chance to him .

Quote

MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#362

Maan is doing everything to set things right between them, and to built her trust.

Nice ...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#363

wonderful part
maan asking geet a chance ...geet knows that maan can't change but wants to keep memories of him after he left...she said yes
maan in geet's apartment ...maan taking care of geet
eagerly waiting for the next part

Quote

Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#364

Part 4

Have already commented till chapter 3 now here chapter 4 comment

I had seen a new maan in this update totally opposite from his usual self of kashmakash Maan
He showed emotions ... he cried ... he pleaded
Somewhere after reading a stubborn maan ... I felt it new n quite refreshing
He just wants to reach his better half desperately.
Once I thought ... he will use his power to get the information about geet
But to my surprise he pleaded
Awesome update... I seriously wanted this scene where Maan shed tears 😆

Quote

Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#365

Part 5

Ok I liked his plight n self consciousness when he was thinking
How will geet react to see him after months
What would be her reaction ? How will he pacify her?
How will he able to win her broken teust back in their relation?
I loved this kashmakash of Maan... I truly want to say muski dii kashmakash is
Geet's kashmakash and your is Maan's 👏
Well this is a blown that they way he got his geet back at the verge of losing her
He claimed her as his lawfully wedded wife
And the worry he showed to doctor had given his plight
I m dieing to know geet reaction

Quote

Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#366

Part 6

Well commendable update
Heavy in emotions
Geet plight made me teary ... poor girl still thinking that she is dreaming
And the realization of Maan is there in real also didn't give her zeal as scares are very deep in her soul
She said right for her it's 5 yr n for him 6 months just 6 months
Did he really deserve her forgivness
Maybe yes beacause nothing was done intentionally
Everything was complicated
She said right ... he have to choose his priorities
Ohh Msk infull mode to pacify his mishty 😳

Quote

Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#367

Part 7

Oyee hoyee sweet sweet Msk 😆
He looked cute whenever he tried to do something which is beyond his reach
So finally geet wify heart overpower her own pain n he had gotten the chance
He took at least one right decision to live with Geet in her apartment only
Oyee so cute msk prepared somethig for geet n didn't let her to do anything
Finally done with all pending comments