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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Please update this fab story soon, have been waitin for an update from a real long time please atlases close the loose ends of the story of abandoning it

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

are u planning to continue this storyy??
i know u r veryyy lazyy.. but u have disappeared...
is everything ok..?

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Jimson

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Aahaaa! Jerry! Look who's back!

It's me and you gotta be terrified at this point in time. You better be, so I am officially starting to spam now. So maybe you'll have to write your next chapter in another thread.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

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PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😡😊😭

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NEETANAME

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

what happened to your update???? :(

still waiting, please update soon!!!!

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Jimson

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Jerry! Jerry! Jerry! Jerry! Jerry!

Doesn't it sound like 'Penny?' 'Penny?'. 😛

Like I am literally knocking on your door now. You cannot ignore my pleas any longer.

Hellooo!

Are you even reading this thing?

Jerry!!!

Earth to Jerry!

UPDATE!

Edited by Jimson - 11 years ago

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Jimson

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Edited by Jimson - 10 years ago

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Jimson

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Edited by Jimson - 10 years ago

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Jimson

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

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Edited by Jimson - 10 years ago

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JarenM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

I want lots of feedback to get me going. 😳

Part 24a

Precap

Asad, Zoya, Najma and Hammad have gone to a picnic which is a part of Hammad and Najma's plan to make them confess their love for each other.

The car jerked once more and came to a halt.

A: "What's wrong?"

H: "The petrol's almost over and she's getting too hot. I think we need a mechanic."

A: "Is there any filling station nearby?"

H: "Not on the route we were going to take. Now we'll have to go to the alternative route."

N: "What about the old lady's medicines?"

Z: "Her house is not very far away from here. We can walk."

A: "It's too dark now. One of us needs to be with you. Hammad you call the mechanic and then take the car to the filling station and I'll go with them."

H: "I am not going alone."

N: "I am staying in the car because I can't walk."

Z: "Why?"

N: "I...I twisted my foot."

Z: "When?"

N: "Go already! Why are you so bent on taking me along?"

Z: "Stay you lazy ass. Who wants you anyway?"

H: "When you are done, walk downhill from the first bend. Once you reach the road at the bottom, walk down the slope. There is a big board there "Shimla point" We'll meet you there."

As Hammad saw them disappearing into the darkness, he switched the ignition and the car purred to a perfect start.

N: "You think they bought that?"

H: "Absolutely."

N: "You can lie quite well."

H: "All of it wasn't a complete lie. We do need to get to the filling station. This is all we can do to get the duffers together. He didn't even say anything to her during the dive. I could have taken her for the dive myself. I made him do it so that he could say the three words to her but Asad is Asad."

Part 24 B

The sun had set and it was getting darker and colder. Zoya shivered as she walked ahead of Asad. After some time she stopped to let him catch up with her.

A: "How long will it take us to reach the old lady's place?"

Z: " I guess about ten minutes more. Hey look at that hut, it looks so amazing."

A: "It looks like a haunted house to me. Spooky!"

Z: "Oh come on! I wish I could have one like that too."

A: "Well you can, only if you plan to visit it sometimes."

Z: "Who would let me! With Haseena Aunty breathing down my neck, I don't know what to expect."

Asad clenched his jaw trying to suppress his anger but didn't say anything. Zoya turned towards him and asked.

Z: "What happened?"

A: "Nothing, so this Akram thing is still on?"

Z: "Like I have a choice!"

A: "You do."

Z: "I don't know. Look we are almost there."

The old lady welcomed them into her small cosy house and thanked them profusely for helping her. Asad got up to leave as they were getting late but the lady insisted upon staying at least for tea.

Zoya laughed at something the old lady had said then asked her

"So how did you meet uncle?"

She smiled and replied

"Oh we met at a book fair. Such bookworms we were. Then I met him again at the city library. Soon it was more for him than the books that I went to the library regularly for. We fell in love."

Z: "And then you got married and built this awesome house together."

The old lady's eyes brimmed a little as she said,

"It wasn't that easy my dear. My father wanted me to marry his friend's son. They'd made this agreement when I was only a small child. He wouldn't agree and I wasn't ready to leave Raj so we ran away."

Z: "Ran away? That means you never met your family again."

She smiled sadly before replying.

"There is some price you have to pay for love but my dear in case of true love, it is worth it. I have no regrets. My father eventually came around after five years."

Z: "Five years! I wouldn't be able to survive that long without my family. Even if I did fell in love with someone I would let it go if I had to make a choice against my family."

Asad's face fell at her reply. The old lady placed her hand on Zoya's and said.

"Then you child, haven't yet realized the power of true love. It makes you do a lot of things you think you would never do. You know what you should let go of your inhibitions and give the guy you are in love with a chance."

Seeing Zoya's shocked expressions, she continued.

"I can see it in your eyes. Give it a chance or only regrets will plaque your life."

Z: "I think we should leave now. It's getting really late and we have to get back."

"God bless you beta! Its very cold outside, here take this shawl. Take it as my blessing for you. Its dark too, take this latern along"

A: "Thank you Aunty. May God bless you too."

They were walking quietly towards their destination when the wind started picking up pace.

Z: "It's getting freezing cold."

A: "I guess its about to rain too. We should probably look for shelter somewhere."

Right then the clouds above thundered and a few raindrops started to fall.

Z: "There's that hut we passed on our way to the old lady's house."

A: "Let go. Hurry up!"

Z: "So now it's not spooky?"

Asad shook his head, took her hand and started to run before the downpour became heavier. As they reached, the veranda of the old hut they realized, there was a lock on the front door.

Z: "Allah Miyan! This place is deserted."

A: "At least we have a roof over our heads. Let light up a fire, there is some wood in that corner."

Z: "And how will we light up the fire?"

Asad smiled as he lifted the latern for her to see.

They lit up a fire and sat close to it to keep themselves warm. Asad checked his cell. As its battery was low he asked her to call Hammed and tell him about their location. Zoya checked her pocket and exclaimed.

"Oh no! I forgot it in the car."

A: "Well then I'll have to try with mine."

He called Hammad who picked up at the second ring.

A: "Man it's raining so heavily. We can't reach where you told us to. You'll have to.."

H: "It's no use! Even we can't reach there. There was a landslide and now the road is blocked. We may be able to reach by morning when this mess gets cleared up but first this rain needs to stop. You people okay?"

A: "Yah but my phone's battery is low and Zoya forgot hers in the car so we won't..."

Just then the call got disconnected as his cell switched off. He told Zoya what Hammad had said

Asad sat down opposite her and rubbed his hands together to warm them as he said.

"This trip couldn't get more adventurous."

Z: "Adventurous! Do you remember the med camp? Our walk through the jungle, crazy times!"

Asad smiled as he thought of that week.

A: "Do you remember that Chaudary and his nosy wife? We had to spend the night in the same room due to her."

Z: "It was due to you! You were the genius who declared us man and wife. I had to listen to such embarrassing tips from her just because of you."

A: "This is interesting. You never told me about that. What did she say?"

Z: "She was giving me tips on how to keep you, I mean how to keep my husband happy."

A: "Well you don't need any tips. You just make me happy being you."

Zoya got conscious under his gaze so she pretended to yawn and said.

"I am so tired. I think I should sleep for some time."

Hammad looked at his cell as the call dropped and cursed in anger. He was tense at the turn of events.

"What the hell! This idea of yours is so stupid. She gets scared in situations like this and there she is alone. I have no idea what she must be doing right now. Look at the weather."

An irritated Najma replied

"Stop telling me it was my idea. Leaving them there was yours."

H: "Coming here was basically your idea."

N: "Whatever! And she is not alone. Bhai is there with her."

H: "Which is making me even more worried."

N: "Why?"

H: "Which brother would want his sister to be all alone with a guy under such circumstances."

N: "Oh please! You are alone with his sister too."

With a mischievous smile on his face, he turned towards her and said

H: "Now that you have pointed it out I was thinking..."

N: "Bhai is the one who should be worried."

H: "We don't even have any way to contact them."

N: "Stop whining and think of something to get out of here or are we going to spend the night here in this rush. At this rate we can't reach them even by morning."

Asad bent down beside Zoya against her sleeping form. He smiled as he saw her mumbling something in her sleep. She turned and her hand came to rest on his as a result. He straightened the shawl on her with his free hand, lifted her hand and placed a rolled corner of her shawl under it and got up. He couldn't stay there with her alone as he couldn't trust himself around her. He got up and went out into the rain. As soon as the cold water drenched him again, feeling like a hundred needles piercing into his body, he rushed back into the sanctuary of the veranda. He was sitting on the steps in front of the veranda when he felt her stirring behind him. Then he heard her mumble in a sleepy voice.

"Why don't you go to sleep now? I know you are tired. It's been a long night."

A: "Well technically it's day now, as the sun is rising and yes it's been a long difficult night."

Zoya fully awake now sat up and looked at him.

"What do you mean by difficult?"

Asad looked ahead and thought to himself.

"Having the love of your life with you alone and staying away from her is difficult my dear."

To her he said

"Nothing."

Z: "Hey Asad, look." She exclaimed looking at the horizon pointing towards the rising sun. "So beautiful!"

Asad stared at her face against the rising sun and repeated. "Indeed, so beautiful!"

Something in his tone caught her off guard. She walked towards him and sat down by his side.

"What is wrong with you? I am telling you na, go to sleep. Then you'll be fine."

A: "I am fine."

Z: "But something is definitely off. You don't seem like yourself."

A: "Something is not off but on since a long time."

Z: "What do you mean?"

A: "Don't you see it? There is something between us."

Z: "What?" She moved away looking at the distance between them to find whatever he was talking about. "I don't see anything. There is nothing here."

A: "Let it be. You won't get it."

Z: "What?"

A: "Nothing."

Z: "Tell me na."

A: "I love you."

She kept staring at him for what felt like eternity. Then she got up and started walking away.

Asad got up and hurried after her.

Zoya wanted to be away from him right now. Overwhelmed, angry, afraid she didn't know what she felt at the moment. She just didn't know how to react. She needed to be alone for some time to sort out her thoughts. She saw a car approaching and heaved a sigh of relief when she realized that it was Hammad's. She didn't have to answer him now and at the moment it was all she wanted.

On their way back, Asad stole a few glances at her. They stopped at a filling station on their way back. Zoya went to the washroom and Asad got out of the car to straighten his legs. Hammad turned to Najma and said

"I guess our plan was successful. There has been some progression at least. Its evident from their attitude plus the blabbermouth is not spoken a word at all today. Coming form Zoya that is something."

"I don't know. Maybe it just backfired. They are not talking to each other at all."

Najma replied.

H: "Nah! I am sure Asad told her about his feelings and Zoya is reacting the way I thought she would. Trust me all is well. She'll come around."

N: "I hope so."

"Zoya"

Asad called her but she avoided him and went out of the room when he came. She had been avoiding him completely for the last two days after they had returned from the trip.

Asad sighed at her response rather lack of it.

He heard Najma talking to someone in the lounge and made his way towards her. Before entering the lounge he heard her.

N: "I told you not to come here while he is here. He won't like it. Let me talk to him first."

He heard a man reply.

"I just want to see him once. I know he will not like it but I won't stop trying."

"Tamater who are you talki..."

Asad started to speak as he entered the lounge but stopped short, shocked and angry at seeing the man he detested the most standing in front of him.

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?"

He bellowed seething in anger.

Rashid looked dejectedly at his grown up son.

"Listen to me."

A: "There is nothing to listen. How did you get in touch with her?"

Hearing the noise everybody gathered in the lounge.

"Asad beta, lets sit down and talk. I will tell you."

Zubair tried to intervene.

"Why the hell should I sit and talk? What is this man doing here with her?"

"Bhai I wanted to talk to you about this. He came three months ago and I..."

Najma started to speak when Asad clenched his jaw and lambasted her.

"Really? None of you even bothered to at least let me know about all this? There was hell lot of trust I put in you people and left her here with you. And you Najma, how could you? Have you forgotten this man here is the reason we don't have our mother with us today. He is the reason she suffered so much. How can you forget all that, leaving aside what we had to go through, and even think of starting afresh with this sorry excuse of a man?"

Asad bellowed while Najma shrunk back scared. She had never seen him so angry. Making an effort to placate him Rashid spoke.

"Asad son, just listen to me once please, I..."

"DON'T YOU DARE CALL ME SON. YOU DON'T HAVE THAT RIGHT SO PLEASE... If you still have an ounce of self-respect which I highly doubt you do, please leave."

R: "Asad."

A: "Leave I said."

R: "Beta just once..."

A: "LEAVE! Before I say something you don't want to hear." He spoke clenching his fists, clearly making use of every bit of restraint he could exercise.

After Rashid left, Zubair tried to talk to him but Asad stopped him.

"Please I don't want to talk about this."

He picked up his car keys and walked out. As he started the car, he was shocked to see Zoya sitting in the passenger seat of his car. Before he could say anything she spoke as if it was the most normal thing in the world.

"After the fiasco inside, I knew you would run away to the beach. I would have followed you there which means double the fuel would have been wasted so I came to sit here."

Asad replied without looking at her.

"Zoya please, just leave me alone.I don't want you here. What the hell was I thinking leaving her here alone. I don't know who to trust anymore."

Z: "Asad please calm down. You need to talk to her about this."

A: "I don't bloody want to talk to anyone at all. Why don't you get it? She knows what that man did to our mother, to us and she let him waltz into her life like nothing happened."

Z: "Asad think about it from her point of view. You hate your father and you have your reasons for it but you can't force her to feel the same way."

A: "Thank you very much. That cleared lots of misconceptions. I certainly can't force anyone to feel the way I do."

With that he got out of the car and went back to the house.

"Asad that is not what I meant."

Zoya replied exasperated getting out of the car after him. She knew Asad had taken her words the wrong way. She had spent the last two days thinking about Asad's confession. Those three words had changed the dynamics of their relationship completely. In her heart, she had realized she loved him too, long before he had said those three words to her but she couldn't bring herself to confess this even to herself. She couldn't hurt Baba ever but she knew she couldn't ever be happy without him. She wanted to cry her heart out at her situation but right now she needed to tackle the issue at hand. Najma needed her so she made her way towards her room.

She stopped outside her room when she heard Asad talking to Najma.

N: "Bhai I am so sorry. I tried to tell you."

A: "But you didn't. I won't force any of my decisions on you. I am sorry if I did so unintentionally. I thought you felt the same way about him. You can meet him all you want. I won't stop you."

N: "I did! I felt the same way you do about him but Bhai, you yourself have told me a number of times, Ammi used to say when somebody genuinely apologizes we should forgive them. That's what Allah does to us too. However big mistakes we make, he forgives us when we ask for his forgiveness. Besides Ammi forgave him too."

A: "What? How do you know?"

In response she got up and brought her mother's letter that Rashid had given her. After reading it Asad placed it on the bed and started to walk out of the room with an expressionless face.

"Bhai please don't be angry with me."

Najma pleaded behind him.

He turned towards her and replied.

"I am not angry with you Najma. Why would I be?"

With that he left the room to go to the one Hammad and he shared. He took out his bag and started packing as he had to leave that night.

Zoya was sitting on her bed, weeping silently when Hammad entered her room.

"Zoe, he is leaving."

Z: "So? What should I do?"

Hammad shrugged his shoulders at her cold reply and went out. After a few moments, she started to feel all panicky. He was going thousands of miles away from her. She won't be able to see him only God knows how long. This realization made her heart sink. He was dejected and alone and she was letting him go that way. She felt like hitting herself with something hard. Right at that moment she decided she couldn't let him go away from her. She couldn't imagine her life without him. Nothing else mattered to her at that moment. She got up and sprinted out of her room to stop him before he left. She saw Sarah sitting in the lounge when she came downstairs. When Sarah saw her she spoke before Zoya could ask her anything.

"He left ten minutes ago. You need to hurry now that you have finally woken up."

Zoya ran and hugged Sarah.

"Ammi but Baba..."

Sarah made a face and replied.

"What Baba? He loves you honey, he'll understand but if you waste any more time here you'll miss him."

Zoya rushed out grabbing her keys. She kept praying to Allah to help her. She hurried into the airport and ran past the guards who tried to stop her, causing one of them to run after her. She frantically searched for Asad and prayed that he wouldn't leave like last time. She had rushed to the airport just like this the last time too but then she didn't know what had made her so restless. Now she knew, it had been the same back then too. Only then, she just wanted to say Goodbye and now she wanted to say everything else other than Goodbye. She stopped by the escalators to look around for him when the guard caught up with her.

He spoke in a very angry tone.

"What is your problem Madam?"

An equally agitated Zoya replied.

"What the hell is your problem? I need to find someone and that too fast."

G: "I don't know about any of that but you have to come with me to the Security In-charge's office."

Z: "Of course! Allah Miyan what's wrong with me! Why didn't I think of it before? Let's go."

The guard looked at her as if she was mad and started walking with Zoya close behind.

As soon as she entered the office the lady who was sitting there exclaimed.

"Can we know the reason behind the trouble you created back there Zoya?"

Z: "Asad."

The lady looked confused. "What?"

Z: "Oh Sabeen Aunty actually Asad is leaving today for London and I can't let him go before telling him that I love him and probably by now he would have cleared the security too."

The lady smiled and said.

"My my our little Zoya has grown up. You don't need to worry when you have your Khala here."

Sabeen Aunty was her mother's friend. They had studied together at college.

Z: "Thank you so much Sabeen Aunty. I knew you would help me."

S: "Tell me his full name and which flight is he on and mind it I need the full story afterwards as the payment."

"Sir you need to come with us."

Asad looked up at the uniformed man confused.

A: "Why?"

The man replied with an expresionless face.

"You are being detained."

A: "What but why? Look I can't miss this flight. I am sure there is some misunderstanding."

"Trust me Sir. There is no misunderstanding. You are Asad Ahmed Khan right?"

A: "I am but..."

"Go sit there. This is the interrogation room. Madam will be here shortly."

A formidable middle aged lady dressed in a suit entered after a minute. She looked at him with an expressionless face for some time and then said.

"Do you know what you have been detained for?"

A: "No."

"You have stolen something precious young man."

A: "I have never stolen anything ever."

"Think about it. Nothing is more precious than a young lady's heart and you are guilty of stealing it. That is your first offence. Your second offence is running away instead of being a man and standing your ground." Then she muttered to herself excitedly "I have always wanted to do something like this."

A: "Excuse me? Are you for real? What right do you have to detain me like this?"

"I don't but the lady whose heart you have stolen has every right to."

Asad was looking at her confused when he heard the door open and saw Zoya enter. She smiled at him nervously.

The officer spoke "I guess I am done here."

A: "What is this?"

Z: "I realized I can't let you go."

A: "So you thought you should get me arrested."

Z: "Shsh! I need to tell you something."

A: "Look Zoya, seriously now is not the time."

Z: "It is. It certainly is. You know this habit of yours. Running away without even saying goodbye to me, I don't like it one bit. So I came to tell you this. Asad Ahmed Khan, I Zoya Faruqi love you with all my heart."

Surprised he kept looking at her for some time and then spoke in a resigned tone.

A: "Why now?"

Z: "God it takes some time to frame such filmy lines you know." Seeing his serious expressions she became serious too. "I don't know. I am stupid and your confession was so sudden that I didn't know what to say and Baba you know and then when you left I realized that I have known this all along and I can't let you leave like this, I love you too and then I couldn't find you anywhere so I had to get to you in some way so I asked Sabeen Aunty for help and she said this was the only way so did I have a choice?"

Asad smiled as he made his way towards her.

"For an offence like this my lady, your punishment is imprisonment for life in my heart."

Z: "I guess I kind of like the punishment."

Sabeen knocked on the door and entered.

"If you go on like this you will miss your flight Asad. Get going. Zoya your father wants to have a word with you."

Z: "What? How does he know I am here?"

S: "Well I told him. I knew you didn't tell anyone before coming here and I thought of letting him know before he got worried."

Z: "I can't even say anything bad to you for this because you helped me with something so important for me but Ammi knew I am here." Then she turned towards Asad and said

"Take care and don't be angry with Najma. Remember, her life her decisions. I love you."

S: "Zoya he is waiting."

Z: "Coming."

She turned to leave, stopped, turned gave him a quick peck on his cheek and ran out leaving him smiling. She was actually one of her kind.

Edited by Jaren93. - 10 years ago