Originally posted by: MaybeSomeday...
OH MY GOD!
Like I've so many feels, I can't even began to start, so I'm just going to be very undisciplined about it, and babble incoherent shit.
First of all, I've already mentioned how much I love your writing. I think, too much, by now, and the fact that yours are the only works i'm stalking and have just started reading for now because, i'm totally off fanfictions, like no time, and second, kash fanfictions have become less :( or I may've become very less observant, but I'd totally stopped reading ffs for the lack of interest.
BUT YOU HAPPENED.
and I used to have all these ff feels and they made me so excited and everything, omg, your work totally does that! haven't felt that giddy reading an ff in that long <3 you're a truly, great writer.
SO, pushing the limelight off my self indulgent ass ^ let's get to Brutal Hearts. Beautiful name.
I totally am a huge huge digger for arsh concepts that follow the line of DMG! Idk why? i think it's because Armaan & Shilpa didn't end up together? i go crazy reading the alternatives! I recently vmed an alternative too, actually, i've made hell lots on the alternatives, cos I TOTALLY DIG THIS THEME! Arsh ending up together where Shilpa has a backbone and she actually words go to hell to Armaan who totally deserved it in DMG! WOW WOW WOW!
And then of course it also has to do with how you pen down words and emotions and characters! Your Shilpa had such a great vibe about her! I'm strong, I'm it! I'm made of concrete. Way to go girl! And Armaan's confusion was so real. I mean when he answers Shilpa I'm bowled and I'm like WOWW! Why does he have to answer to any question of Riddhima? He doesn't owe her shit, so why should he? She'd no business knowing his feelings for Shilpa because Shilpa deserved to know them before anyone and I think that was somehow, even though unsaid, was somewhere in his subconscious, but it totally bowled me over! LIKE WOW! I was wondering he'd be sorry that he didn't reply to Riddhima or guilty or some other reason butt he validity and the absoluteness of your thoughts and Armaan's thoughts just made me go WOW, I DIG THIS GUY! It made him that much real, and hats off to you for writing such a brilliant brilliant story!
Also, his pain when he goes calling her madly and she aint picking up, and when he goes to her house and their confession <3 IT'S BEAAUTY! The way he doesn't start begging and apologizing but blaming her too, which again, was so so real! Because come to think of it, why would be apologize if he's not feeling guilty and responsible? because he definitely hadn't been guilty of hurting Shilpa the way she thought. He was guilty of starting it as an act but at that point it wasn't and his anger was so so understandable and real! YOU REALLY KNOW HOW TO WEAVE A STORY WITH SUCH BELIEVABLE CHARACTERS MAN! I thought Armaan was as real as I am, because none of go being the sacrificing and begging pimps, we all have our reasons and our versions! So that was bang on!
And then Shilpa's confession and her anger and her confusion. She really was a marshmallow <33 so soft and so in love, and like! and live. she lived him <33 and AWWW THE MOMENTS WHEN HE CONFESSED AND SHE WAS BLUSHING <3 THOSE WERE OMG :| :| :| :| ANGDFKLBJMDGKLG THEY LOOK SO SO SO CUTEEE IN MY HEAD! LIKE AWWW Kisi ki nazar na lagey types <33 Two strong headed people, two passionate people, what beautiful characters and that soft kiss in the end and the way you wrote it, it was so so beautiful like i can't even tell you <3wow!
this was so serene and magical and palpable. Your power of weaving words and emotions is so beautiful, and the way you write a story, brilliant! IM HUNGRY FOR YOUR WORK <33333 WOW.
LOVE,
RIDA.
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