New FF: The million dollar deal

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys,

I'm back with a new FF! 😃😃 This one is specially dedicated to Sumana & DC!!!

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Small Promo

"OMG LOOK AT THAT CUTE GUY"

"I'm not interested"

Shaking his shoulders roughly, "ISN'T HE JUST CUTE?" (still looking at the guy)

"hmmm"

"What? Why are you giving me that look?"

"Honey, I'm not gay"

"Gay?"

"Yes. I thought I'd clarify, since you clearly have the intention of hooking me up with him"

She giggled endlessly "But, you're my husband, so I can tell all these things to you right?"

"Do you mean your latest crushes?"

"Yes, latest crushes"

"No" he stated firmly, "I do not wish to hear about them"

"BUT, WHY?" she whined

"Don't expect me to tolerate that, Gauri"

"Why can't you? Husband is nothing but a friend, and you tell your friend everything"

"Well, honey, do I look like your friend?"

"But, you're my pati, parameshwar, mere dEvTA, mere SWAMIII"

"Shut up and get in the car!! You're way too dramatic!"

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Okay, so how was it? Liked it or disliked it? If you liked it, please do mention your reasons, so that I can ensure that you like every part in the future! 😳😳

Sonali

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Posted: 18 years ago
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LOVED IT!! an du better finish it!!

lmao.. she tells her husband about her crushes.. awesome.. i wanna c where this is headed.. 😆


luv ya mansi
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Posted: 18 years ago
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haila.. what a promo..

she tells her husband her crushes.. and she is soo dramatic..

looking forward to the story!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh god gauri telling shiv about her crushes 😆 😆 😆
can't wait to read it...continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds interesting
can,t wait to read first part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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can't wait for the first part
i thought the intro was really cute
and i found it very funny
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Loved the Intro!!! Talk abt Crushes!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#8
nice ff can't wait for part 1 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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the promo was so hillarious, can't wait to read the updates.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds really good
wonder who the husband is
hope its shiv
pls cont soon

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