New FF: The million dollar deal - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11

the promo was hilarious gauri telling her husband about her latest crush was so cute 😳 and the last part where she was calling shiv pati, parmeshwar etc etc was really funny 😆 and at the beggining of the promo i actually thought that shiv was gay 😆

the ff sounds really interesting please do continue soon i really like the way you write all your ff
😊

Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
i really enjoyed the promo sounds great 😛 plz continue 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
hey Sonali!!! how r u??? i saw the titly nd then the author nd i was like, i
HAVE to check this out!!! lol, it will be darn gud & awesum!!! nd i was rite,
this is AWESUM & HILARIOUS!!! i LOVED the promo... ok, so the chick is
Gauri, nd the guy is... Shiv??? idk, lol... CANNOT wait to find out more...
ohhh, nd i also loved how she has to tell him abt her latest crushes, lmao
u have to continue soon!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
nice promo waiting for the update,when will u update tell me please please please
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Andekhi

Hey guys,

I'm back with a new FF! 😃😃 This one is specially dedicated to Sumana & DC!!!

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Small Promo

"OMG LOOK AT THAT CUTE GUY"

"I'm not interested"

Shaking his shoulders roughly, "ISN'T HE JUST CUTE?" (still looking at the guy)

"hmmm"

"What? Why are you giving me that look?"

"Honey, I'm not gay"

"Gay?"

"Yes. I thought I'd clarify, since you clearly have the intention of hooking me up with him"

She giggled endlessly "But, you're my husband, so I can tell all these things to you right?"

"Do you mean your latest crushes?"

"Yes, latest crushes"

"No" he stated firmly, "I do not wish to hear about them"

"BUT, WHY?" she whined

"Don't expect me to tolerate that, Gauri"

"Why can't you? Husband is nothing but a friend, and you tell your friend everything"

"Well, honey, do I look like your friend?"

"But, you're my pati, parameshwar, mere dEvTA, mere SWAMIII"

"Shut up and get in the car!! You're way too dramatic!"

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Okay, so how was it? Liked it or disliked it? If you liked it, please do mention your reasons, so that I can ensure that you like every part in the future! 😳😳

Sonali

Sonali,

OMG!... Somebody seriously do pinch me, two surprises in a day... RDi updated, and Sonali ne kii humaari dil ki kwaaish poori!! Sweetie, *blow kisses* for ya! I'm honoured for the dedication, thank you so very very much. You are a brilliant writer, with a beautiful and creative imagination which I hope only blooms... The promo was so exciting!! Gauri is so dramatic😆 I'm not going to say much right now though as that was not even a "promo" it was like not even a sentence! Ok, exaggeration, but u know what I mean... not fair. Plus, I'm not sure who you've tied her up with... You've always got these twists so its hard to say anything... But you've got me going, so you better hurry it up girl... No excuses!

*mwuaaah*

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
Btw, the title... very catchy... and rounded... You've started another ff, that's a million dollar profit... Very intriuging...

Cheers,
dc
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
🤣

omg.. this is going to b fun
😆
plz do continue the rest soooooon
nt only u restarted your FF... u r writing another 1
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
yay a new fanfic!!!
the intro sounds hilarious!!!!
continue soon plzzz!!!!
😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
Nice FF! 👏 Cant wait till ur next update. Please update soon!! 😳
take care,

with regards,
|[>Deena|
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
haha how cute was that! Silly Gauri, describing his crushes to him! and Yes, he is def. not gay 😳
Give us the new part soonnnn 😃

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