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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

Shukr hai shaadi hogayi...
n u r ryt i was doubting ua intentions... but now i kno u r a G for Good Girl... 😛
i also dont want zoya to go to that house again..
ab to dadi ko patana hai shaadi k baad...
n also AsYa still hv a lot of baatein to do...
abt their insecurities...
plz continue soon




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Wowww

Just so wow
Tooo good
U really write so amazing
I feel like I m watching a serial...
So lovely.
God
U r one one of the best writers here
Where were you
Why so late??
Amazing
Coming to anlyzation ...
Magical...
Starting to the end
Magical
I really love the bonding BTW humi n zoya
N u r write it like out of the world..
This razia...the words she us...horrible..disgusting...
Poor gaffur.
Eager to know the most awaited mystery...
Loved zoyA's answer to razia..
Poor humi..
Hehe asad's family..
Hmm dilsu is certainly the best mommy..here..
Oh my god.
Asad Ahmed Khan spoke so well infront of his dadi
Marvellous...
The lines
Incredible
Thank god dadi allowed..
Poor zoya
Bechari ka dil dhadak raha hoga dadi ko dekh kar ...zor Zor she. ...
Finally nikah happened..
Woah.
Lovely update
U knw wat ur dialogues r so well...that its the best part...
Tooo good
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Loved it
Update soon



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Yay the Inkatha happened

I was so scared it wouldn't with razia poisoning dadi mind
Oh gaffur watching his daugther and hoping she gets all she deserves
Razia is such a witch glad zoya said she would never return to thr house
So Asad nervousness was nice his mom asking hint o close his eyes and see
And he saw zoya
Dadi asking him if he is sure y this girl she sent so many proposal
He said she is different and what more was so nice
Oh she was worried why was he mad yesterday
And then they remind her of the suhagraat oh boy was she blushing
Hope it is not delayed
Can't believe dadi came to pay her off zoya is shocked does he think so too she is after money
Is tht y he was angry she looked to dadi to see if she should go downstairs
So finally they said qubool hai he was mesmerized by her
Aww they fed each other he wiped her kajal so cute
Oh humi and haider nice friendship start
Continue soon lets see how this marriage progress



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Cinderella3

Yayyy!!! Asya are married now! I really hope everything goes well for them.




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: keyahira

YAAAS
And now for the suhaagraat 😉




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mvinfff

Very nice story! Please update soon.




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Chapter 18

The car pulled into the khan mansion and Asad got out first. He then came to her side and offered her his hand. She placed her hand in his and he helped her walk to the door. The family members waited at the door to welcome the new couple. Zoya smiled at their happy faces, a little nervous. Dilshad was holding a small bowl of kheer. "Humare ghar mein nayi dulhan ka moo meeta karke hi andar bhulaya jaata hai," Dilshad said as she lovingly fed Zoya a spoon of dessert. "Asad, tume humari dusri rasam toh yaad haina," Farhan asked. Asad nodded as he looked at Zoya. The next moment, his hands wrapped around her waist as he picked her up in her arms. "Mr. Khan!" Zoya shouted out of surprise as her hands wrapped around his neck for support. "Bhabhi humare ghar mein dulha dulhan koh apne room tak aise hi lekar jaata hai," Najma informed Zoya. She felt her body shiver under his touch and her cheeks turned cherry red. He looked at the way ahead as she was lost in his sensation. "Ya Allah Mr. Khan toh mujhe apne room mein lekar jarahe hai," Zoya thought as her heart raced at the assumption. He carried her through the living room and up the stairs but was stopped at the beginning of the hallway. "Yaha utaar dijiye Bhaijaan...iss keh aage toll tax lagega," Haider said. Asad stopped and placed Zoya on her feet. Zoya placed her hand on her heart to calm it down. "Bhaijaan...chaliye humare gifts nikhaliye," Najma said with Nikhat by her side. "Kitne gifts logi tamatar, meri shaadi huwi hai aur tum mera bank account loot rahi ho," Asad told his sister as everyone chuckled. "Bahane mat banayiye Bhaijaan, chaliye gifts dijiye," Haider joined in. "Tum kabh se inn logo keh team mein hogaye?" Asad questioned. "Come on Bhai...aakir main bhi toh chota ho. Agar Bhabhi koh aur iss tamatar koh gift mil saktha hai toh mujhe kyun nahi?" Haider said getting a slap on his head from Najma. Asad just shook his head and pulled out his purse, fulfilling their demands. Zoya just smiled at the cute scene in front of her.

Asad gave them the gifts and was about to go when he was stopped again. "Aabh kya hai?" he asked pinching the bridge of his nose. "Hum phele Bhabhi koh lekar jaate hai, aap thodi dher mein aajayiye," Najma said as her, Nikhat, and Dilshad took Zoya away. "Chalo Zoya, hum tume tumare room lekar chalte hai," Nikhat said. Zoya looked around trying to familiarize herself with the new surroundings. They walked down the hall and took her to a room. It was a huge room with the bed in the middle which was decorated with white lilies and roses. The room was lit with small scented candles all around. "Aao beta," Dilshad said and the ladies took Zoya in. As she walked inside, she could sense his scent in the air. This was his room, well now hers, she guessed. Life was going to be different. Things were going to be different, she thought as she looked around the room. But, it was hard to make out things since it was fully decorated. "Tume agar kuch bhi chahiye toh bas bol dehna beta," Dilshad said and Zoya smiled in response. "Oh come on Ammi, aaj raat toh Bhabhi Bhai keh aankho mein khoyi huwi rahengi, unne aur kya chahiye," Najma teased with wink as Zoya felt her cheeks blush furiously. "Chup...bahut badmaash hogayi ho tum!" Dilshad said as she patted Najma on the shoulder. Nikhat took Zoya to the bed and made her take a sit in the middle. "All the best!" Nikhat said excitedly as she gave Zoya a hug. Though, she tried her best to smile, her inner self was in turmoil. Today was supposed to be their first night but she knew she wasn't ready. It wasn't like she didn't trust Asad but she had only known him for the past 3 weeks. Wasn't a marriage more than just physical relationship? Didn't love mean anything? She asked herself. A caress at the cheek broke her thoughts and she looked up to see Dilshad smiling at her. "Allah tume hamesha khush rake," she blessed as she placed a kiss on her new daughter's cheek. Then, Dilshad fixed her dupatta and told everyone it was time to leave. As the ladies left, Zoya looked around and she could see how even in the midst of the adornments, everything seemed so right in its place. She turned to see two other doors to the left which she wondered where they led to. Her thoughts were interrupted when she heard laughter outside and the room door open. Seeing Asad, she felt her heart race again. She knew that she wasn't ready but what if Asad expected something from her. How was she going to tell him? Will he understand? She looked at the door to meet his chocolate brown eyes.

He turned to close the door and lock it. The closer he walked towards her, the faster her emotions took over. "Allah miyan, main kya karoon? Kaise bolo? Kuch toh bol na padega. Main apne aapse jhoot kaisi bol sakthi," she mumbed. Asad watched her talking to herself. "Ajeeb ladki," he mumbed to himself as he walked towards her. He was about to sit on the bed when she quickly got off the bed and Asad looked at her with questioning eyes. "Woh woh main main sofa pe sojao?" Zoya blurted out. Asad looked at her and he could see that she nervous. She fidgeted with her dupatta and her eyes were glued to the floor. He stepped closer as she stepped back. Each step he took forward, she stepped back. Finally, she hit the wall and he smirked. On one side was the bed and the other was Asad's arm preventing an escape. "Zoya," he called. "Jee," she said as her eyes were still glued to the floor. He had to admit she looked so innocent and adorable when she was nervous. The way she played with her dupatta and bit her lower lip seemed to melt his heart. "Zoya, look at me," he said as he inclined her face to look at her. "Kya hua hai?" he said. Zoya looked at him thinking how to say it. Asad read the wave of emotions that passed through her face. "Mr. Khan woh main aaj raat I mean humari suhaagraat hai lekin main...," Zoya said looking at him, not sure how to complete her thoughts. "Zoya, its ok! Tume aise kuch nahi karna hoga joh tum nahi chathi," he told her. She looked at him surprised. He understood her even before she said anything to him. Zoya threw herself in his arms, "thank you thank you thank you!" she said in excitement. Asad smiled at her. "It's ok...relax," he said. At that moment, she realized the position she was in. She broke apart and moved back. "Tum bed pe sojao, main sofa pe sojaunga," Asad said. "Nahi nahi Mr. Khan, main sofa pe sojaungi waise bhi maine phele kaha tha so me first!" Zoya said as she giggled. "Theek hai, aap phele change kar lijiye," Asad told her. Zoya told him that he should change first as she had to go through her suitcases to find a set of clothes to change. Zoya went to her suitcases to find a night dress to change into. Asad too went into his changing room to freshen up.

Minutes later, Asad returned to see his whole room in a mess as if a tornado has just passed through it. He saw her going through her clothes and throwing them out of the suitcase and on the floor. "Yeh kya hai?" he asked shocked. Zoya realized that Asad had returned. She stood up and turned to face him. "Woh main apna night dress doond rahi hoon," she replied. "Lekin tumne yeh room ki kya halat kardi hai?" Asad questioned. She looked around and she cursed herself. "I am sorry Mr. Khan! Woh actually phele ek top mila phir uska panta nahi mila. Phir dusra pant mila aur uska top nahi mila. Aur kholte kholte, maine saare suitcases khol diye," she said, biting her lower lip. Asad chuckled at her ramble. "Tumne nights suits saath nahi rake?" he asked and she nodded negatively with a pout. "Main help kardo?" he asked. "nahi nahi Mr. Khan, main doond lungi, I am sure," Zoya said thankfully. She returned to her belongings and few minutes later, "found it" she yelled happily. Asad smiled at her joyful face. "Main change karke aati hoon," she said and he nodded. She walked past him but stopped, tangled at which door to take. Asad realized and turned to see stopped in her tracks. "The left door leads to the closet and changing room, the right to the bathroom," she heard him say. She turned, smiled at him, and left to change. Minutes later, Zoya returned to the room changed in a light green two piece night suit. Her hair which was in a bun now lay in loose curls on her shoulders. She walked in to see him working on the laptop. He looked up at her from his laptop and was mesmerized. She looked more beautiful in the simple night dress and in her natural glow, he thought. His eyes moved with her as Zoya walked to her stuff. She grabbed the clothes that were thrown on the floor and made a pile in the corner of the room. She then kept the bridal dress on top of the pile and walked to the dressing table, and placed the jewelry on top of it. She then got the pillow and blanket from the bed and made herself comfortable on the sofa. "Good night, Mr. Khan," she said. Asad broke out of his trance and noticed the mess his new wife has made on the floor and on the table. Her clothes were thrown on the suitcase and the jewelry on the dressing table. Asad pinched the bridge of his nose, his OCD disturbing the mess that was in his room. He wanted to say something but turned to see that she was already asleep. "Good night," he said to himself with a slight smile. From the tired day, he too hit the bed. Watching her peacefully sleeping, he dozed off with a smile on his face.

The sun rays from his bedroom window fell on his face. He opened his eyes and turned to see her sleeping. He got up and went to take a shower and change. Minutes later, he walked out dressed in black pants and a navy blue shirt. Zoya was in deep sleep and was tossing around in the couch. She was about to fall when he placed his hand on the edge as the way to protect her. The wind from the window blew on her face making her loose strands disrupt his view. He slowly moved her hair and behind her ears. He grinned a little thinking about her two face personality. Sometimes, she was so mature and adult like and the others, she was such a kid. At that moment, someone knocked on the door disturbing his thoughts. "Zoya...utho, Zoya," he said trying to wake her up. Zoya quickly sat up and looked at him confused. "Darwaze pe kohi hai," he informed. She quickly got off and took the pillow and blanket and placed it on the bed. Asad walked to the bed and quickly messed it up to make it seem that last night was normal. Zoya looked at him confused, "Kal raat joh bhi hua woh humare beech hi rahe toh accha hai," he whispered and walked to the door. "Par raat koh toh kuch hua hi nahi," Zoya said to herself innocently. Asad opened the door to find Nikhat. "Aree Asad, aaj darwaza kholne mein itni dher," she teased looking at Zoya. Zoya grabbed her towel and clothes and excused herself to the bathroom to escape any embarrassment. "Kya chahiye Bhabhi," Asad asked. "Ammi ne tume aur Zoya koh neeche bhulaya hai nashte kehliye," Nikhat told him. "Bhabhi, Zoya aajayegi, main yehi nashta karlonga," Asad stated. "lekin Asad, Ammi ne...," Nikhat said when he interrupted her, "Ammi se main baad mein baat karlonga," he told her. Nikhat nodded and left.

Sometime later, Zoya walked out in a red anarkali suit, wiping her wet hair. She placed the wet towel on the bed and went to add her jewelry. Asad took the towel, "yeh aap waha rakh dijiye, bed par nahi," he said her as he took the towel to dry. Zoya looked at him and nodded. She quickly added some simple earrings, the pendant he had gifted her, and some bangles. She was about to leave when she remembered that Dilshad had told her about Asad and how he liked his room clean. Zoya quickly took the pile of clothes and stuffed it into the suitcases. She took her wedding dress and folded it nicely and kept it inside her suitcase so that they didn't ruin the embroidery. She was keeping her jewelry in its box when Asad walked back from the closet, "Ammi ne tume neeche bhulaya hai," he said. "Mujhe? Aap saath nahi chalenge?" Zoya asked. Asad pinched the bridge of his nose, "Aap jayiye, main mera nashta yehi karta hoon," he said. Zoya looked at him with questioning eyes. "Lekin Mr. Khan aap kyun mere saath nahi aayenge?" she asked. "Zoya, tum jao Ammi intezaar karahi hongi. Hum baad mein baat karenge," he firmly stated. She just glared at him, grabbed her dupatta and stomped off the room. She walked downstairs to see the family along with some relatives. Zoya saw dadi and quickly covered her head. She met the family and greeted everyone. "aree Zoya, Asad kaha hai?" one of Asad's aunt asked. "woh upar hai. nashta wahi karenge," Zoya said. "Ya Allah...aisa kyun? Kahi tumne toh kuch nahi kardiya?" a lady asked. "haseena, tum yeh kaise baatein karahi ho? Asad toh apne kamre mein har din hi nashta karta hai," Dilshad said coming to Zoya's rescue. "Zoya, yeh lo Asad koh deh aao," she said handing Zoya a tray of food for breakfast. Walking up the stairs, Zoya was thinking about what Dilshad had said. "Mr. Khan apne family keh saath nashta nahi karte? Aisa kyun?" she thought.

She reached upstairs and knocked the room door before entering the room. Asad was now dressed in his suit and was on the couch, talking on the phone. Zoya walked in and placed the breakfast on the table in front of him. She waited tapping her foot on the floor for him to finish with his phone call. He saw her waiting so he finished his conversation and looked at her. "Aap kuch kehna chathi hai?" he asked. "Mujhe aap se kuch poochna hai Mr. Khan? Aap sabh keh saath nashta kyun nahi karte?" she blatantly asked. Asad contemplated for a minute before replying, "Woh mujhe shor nahi pasand Zoya, issliye main yehi khana khata hoon," he said. Zoya looked at him shocked. "Mr. Khan main aap ki family keh saath nashta karne kehliye kehrahi hoon, kohi rock concert mein jaane kehliye nahi," Zoya said sarcastically. "Maine kaha na mujhe shor accha nahi lagtha," he stated. "yeh sahi nahi Mr. Khan. Soochiye aap keh family koh kitna accha lagega," Zoya reasoned. "Zoya please mujhe iss baare mein mujhe baat nahi karni hai," Asad said. "Lekin kyun Mr. Khan? Baat toh kijiye," Zoya said. "Maine kaha na mujhe baat nahi karni," Asad said raising his voice. Zoya stepped back surprised at his new behavior. Seeing her reaction, he pinched the bridge of his nose. "Mujhe ek meeting kehliye late horaha hai, main chalta hoon," Asad said as he got up to leave. "Agar aap koh baat nahi karna toh theek hai lekin please nashta kar lijiye phir jayiye," Zoya said. He stopped and turned around to face her. "Breakfast skip karna acchi baat nahi hoti hai mr.khan, please khalijiye," she said with a pleading face. Seeing her, he calmed down a bit. He remembered similar words from his mother. Asad took a seat and ate his breakfast quietly as Zoya sat on the bed watching him. As he got up to leave, "Allah hafiz Mr. Khan," she said. "Allah hafiz," he said and left for work. Downstairs, Dilshad stopped Asad and asked him where he was going. Asad told her that he had to attend an important meeting and left.

After Asad had left, Zoya went downstairs to join the relatives as she was bored in her room. Everyone started asking her questions and some even taunted her that she was lucky to marry into such a big family and a guy like Asad. Zoya just smiled and ignored their comments. She excused herself saying she had to arrange her things in the room and Najma offered to help. Zoya gladly accepted and both the ladies headed upstairs. Walking up the stairs, "ek baat poocho yeh sabh tume tamatar kyun bhulate hai?" Zoya asked with a giggle. "yeh naam toh mujhe Asad Bhaijaan ne diya. Woh kya haina mere gaal jab bhi main khush ya naraaz hoti hoon toh bahut laal hojate hai bilkul waise jaise aap keh hojata hai Asad Bhaijaan koh dekhar," Najma teased. "Aisa kuch nahi, stop it!" Zoya said as both the girls chuckled. Soon, Zoya had her clothes piled on the bed trying to arrange them in the walk in closet. "I must say Bhabhi, aap ki choice bahut acchi hai," Najma said looking at Zoya's clothes. "Thanks tamatar. Tume kuch bhi pasand ho toh tum le sakthi ho," Zoya offered and Najma smiled. "Main tumse kuch pooch sakthi hoon?" Zoya asked as she was arranging her earrings in a box. "Ha Bhabhi...boliye na?" Najma said. "Woh tumare Bhaijaan sabh keh saath khana kyun nahi khate hain? Kya woh hamesha se aise hi karte the?" Zoya asked curiously. Najma's smile disappeared and Zoya didn't miss that. "Dekho Najma, mujhe sirf Mr. Khan ki fikar hai issliye pooch rahi hoon," Zoya said placing her hand on Najma's shoulder. Najma nodded understandingly. "Bhaijaan aise nahi the Bhabhi...phele toh Bhaijaan bahut haste the, Mazak karte the, logo koh tease karte the lekin teen saal phele joh bhi hua uss keh baad," Najma said as tears filled her eyes. Suddenly, Najma realized what she had said. Seeing the tension on her face, "Main sabh jaanti hoon Najma," Zoya said. Zoya hugged Najma, "Main kosish karongi Najma keh tumare Bhaijaan tume lauta doon. Aur main jaanti hoon keh mujhe phela step kya lena hai," she said as Najma grinned hearing her words. "Thanks Bhabhi...aapko jab bhi help chahiye, you can count me in!" Najma said. "Thanks! Par ha yeh baat hum dono ke beech hi rehno doh. Abhi toh main tumare Bhaijaan koh theek se jaanti bhi nahi, mujhe thoda waqt chahiye," Zoya told her. "Jee Bhabhi, main kisiko nahi bataungi," Najma agreed. Both the ladies smiled at each other but they missed the pair of eyes watching them from the door. Dilshad had come up to ask Zoya if she needed any help or anything that wasn't in the room. She heard Zoya and Najma conversing about Asad and curiosity took the better of her. She smiled hearing Zoya's words. Now, she was even more confident that she had made the right decision of getting Zoya and Asad married.

What will Zoya's first step be? Will she be able to pull Asad out of his sorrow? What's going to happen? Keep reading to find out!



Thanks for the amazing comments everyone! It is great to see silent readers commenting and new readers giving feedback, makes me want to write more 😊🤗
Edited by asyasahil928 - 10 years ago
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wow updt Afreen⭐️⭐️⭐️
Asya ki ghar entry was MA😃
Teasing by siblings bang on😛
Zoe was nervous cuz she wanted time
happy 2 see Asad's understanding & maturity
But i wish hume Asad ka POV bhi milta about that thing
Zoe was so cute when he said its ok he won't do anything😆
OMG kya mess creat kiya usne 4 finding matching night dress😲
I m surprised Asad ne gussa kaise nahi kiya😕😲
Zoe was curious 2 know why Asad doesn't eat wid family & she got 2 know
she decided 2 do something 2 bring old Asad back i m in her team😉
Her & Naj's scene was beautiful😛
I want 2 see 1 fight scene of Asya Akdu angry man at its peak😉😆
awesome job dear👏👏

Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago

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