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Awww...updating soon and this chapter is pretty long 😉😊
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Originally posted by: soumya.g

Sorry for the late comment
I was busy with my exams.
both chapters were really amazing
asad finally shared his past with zoya and as expected she supported him
asad bought chocolates for zoya they both slept in the car that was cute.
nikaah functions are going on I liked zoya's gift
I so wanted something like this happen in the show.what is the next plan of raziya? Hope het plan fails and they get married.
you are amazing writer.please continue soon
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Hey!!

Just came across this story n on d way fallen in love wid it
Its so beautiful..
Promising too..
I m so hooked...
Loved it
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N totally full of fun story...
I so so love it
Amazing
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Chapter 16

That night, Zoya finished packing all her belongings as she only had 2 more days before the nikaah. Tears filled her eyes as she looked at her room. She had spent 22 years in this room and now she had to leave everything and go away. Times changes but this room was the place where she had been through it all! Why do girls have to leave their home? Couldn't the guy leave his home instead? But wait, wouldn't it be better if both families lived together, she wished. Humaira was passing by when she saw Zoya. She walked up and hugged her from behind, "Kya hua Bhaji...aap roh kyun rahi hai?" she asked worried. "Kuch nahi bas aise hi," Zoya said wiping her cheeks. "Main jaanti hoon keh aap hume miss karenge lekin Bhaji Asad Bhaijaan aur unki family bahut acchi hai. I am sure you will be very happy!" Humaira told her. "Jaanti hoon Humi lekin iska matlab yeh thodi na keh main tume miss nahi karongi," Zoya said sadly. "Main bhi aapko miss karongi Bhaji but hum roz touch mein rahenge na. Phone peh main aapko roz thang karongi, I promise!" Humaira said as Zoya smiled a little. "Aabh has bhi doh Bhaji...come on...haso!" Humaira said as she started tickling her. Zoya too started to tickle Humaira and they fell on the bed laughing.

The next morning, everyone was hustling and bustling in both houses. Today was the mehendi and tomorrow was the nikaah. It was supposed to be a grand affair and the khan family had booked two different wedding venues for the mehendi and nikaah. Both the families reached the venue and Dilshad had told Zoya that she could go inside and get ready. Zoya greeted the family but her eyes searched for Asad. "Bhabhi-jaan jisse aapki nigaye doond rahi hai, woh yaha nahi hai. Bhaijaan...late hojayenge. Woh office se kuch dher pehleyi aaye the iss liye ready hoke aate honge," Haider teased her. Zoya felt self-conscious on getting caught, "Main ready hoke aati hoon," Zoya said as she ran inside and everyone chuckled. Nikhat, Najma, and Humaira helped Zoya get ready. She was dressed in an orange and green anarkali. She pulled her hair in a bun and added some matching earrings. She pinned the dupatta to one shoulder, wrapped it across her chest and placed it over her head. "Wow Bhabhi, yeh color aap peh bahut jach raha hai," Najma said. "Meri Bhaji par har rang jach tha hai Najma," Humaira said. "Bilkul sahi kaha tumne, Meri pyaari devarani toh har rang mein khoobsurat lagthi hai. I can't wait for tomorrow, Ammi ne joh dress choose kiya hai uss mein toh tum bahut hi pyaari lagogi," Nikhat said. "Aur Asad Bhaijaan ka katal hojayega," Humaira said as the ladies laughed. "Aabh aap sabh bas bhi kijiye. Agar meri tareef hogayi ho toh neeche chale," Zoya said as they all chuckled and proceeded to go downstairs.

Zoya's dress: http://gorky1.wpengine.netdna-cdn.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/07/DSC_4146.jpg

Zoya walked into through the double doors that lead to the huge hall which was decorated in orange and green satin cloths and gold lights matching her dress. In addition, there were orange and white flowers that adorned in each corner of the hall. The ladies escorted her to the center and made her have a seat on the cushions that were laid out on the floor. Dilshad walked upto her and placed a kiss on her forehead. Zoya felt blessed at that moment. In the small amount of time she had known Dilshad, she felt like she had found a mother that she had always yearned for. As she took a seat, she saw Asad walk in dressed in a white kurta pajama. She smiled at him and he too smiled back. Suddenly, she felt her heart beat faster against her chest and a blush crept up her cheeks, turning tomato red. "Bhabhi...aap itni laal kyun horahi hai?" Najma asked looking at Zoya. "Nahi, kuch nahi," Zoya replied as she covered both her cheeks with her hands. "Waha hai iss ki waja," Humaira teased as she saw Asad at the door. Everyone chuckled at the couple while Asad kept enjoying Zoya's facial expressions. "Aree ladkiyo, aaj mehendi hai kohi naach ghana hoga ya nahi," someone said. "Of course hoga na aunty," Humaira exclaimed as her and Najma went to the center of the hall.

Asad's dress: http://origin-images.kaneesha.com/Sherwani-Kurtas-Images/Catonic-Dupion-Stripe-Mens-Sherwani-SL-RC-256_display_large.jpg

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, [Humaira started]

haathon mein gehri laali [Najma joined in]

Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan

Haathon mein khilnewaali hain

Tere mann ko, jeevan ko

Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai [Humaira and Najma sang as Zoya and Asad looked at each other]

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali

Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan

Haathon mein khilnewaali hain

Tere mann ko, jeevan ko

Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

O hariyali banno

Le jaana tujhko guiyyaan aane waale hai saiyyaan

Thaamenge aake baiyyaan, goonjegi shehnaayi

Angnaayi, angnaayi [Humaira sang as she hugged Zoya and both the sisters had tears in their eyes]

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali

Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan

Haathon mein khilnewaali hain

Tere mann ko, jeevan ko

Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

Najma and Humaira pulled all the family members to dance on the floor. Humaira went and got Asad and made him stand next to Zoya

Mehndi roop sanwaare, o mehndi rang nikhaare, ho

Hariyaali banni ke aanchal mein utrenge taarein [Dilshad said as she caressed Zoya's cheek and placed a kiss on her forehead]

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali

Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan

Haathon mein khilnewaali hain

Tere mann ko, jeevan ko

Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

Gaaje, baaje, baraati, ghoda, gaadi aur haathi ko

Laayenge saajan tere aangan, hariyaali banni [Humaira sang as she took and placed Zoya's hand in Asad's hand happily. Their hands seemed to fit together perfectly. They both were lost in their own world as others danced around them]

Teri mehndi woh dekhenge

To apna dil rakhdenge woh

Pairon mein tere chupke se, hariyaali banni

Mehndi roop sanwaare, o mehndi rang nikhaare, ho

Hariyaali banni ke aanchal mein utrenge taarein

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali

Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan

Haathon mein khilnewaali hain

Tere mann ko, jeevan ko

Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai



As the song ended, Asad and Zoya broke out of their trance and Zoya went back to her seat. "Aayiye Dilshad bi, phela haq toh saas ka hota hai mehendi lagane ka," one of the ladies said. Dilshad smiled as she came forward and sat next to Zoya. She took the mehendi cone and started the design. Soon, Zoya hands and feet were adorned with exquisite henna. "Didi, Bhaijaan ka naam acche se chupana, main chathi hoon ke Bhabhi jeete," Najma told one of the mehendi ladies. Soon, all the other ladies joined in to get their hands done. Zoya was sitting to let her mehendi dry when she got thirsty. She looked around but everyone was busy with having mehendi done in their hands. She excused herself and went to the other hall where food was being served. She was trying to pick up the glass of juice with her arms rather than her hands. At that moment, someone lifted the glass for her and she turned around to see Asad. "Yeh lo," he said offering her the glass. She sipped the juice, "thank you!" she said with a smile. "Tume bhook lagi hogi na? kuch kahogi?" he said. "Nahi main theek ho," Zoya told him. Just then, Zoya's stomach grumbled. Zoya turned away embarrassed and Asad smirked at her. "Chalo!" he said as he took her and made her sit on a table nearby. He went and filled a plate with food and returned to her. He offered her food and she took a bite. Zoya could see that he really cared for her. He didn't say much but his actions spoke a lot, she thought.

Dilshad and Rashid were standing afar watching the scene in front of them. Dilshad had tears in her eyes. "Dilshad...aabh toh sabh theek hogaya haina phir bhi tum?" Rashid asked worried. "Yeh toh khushi keh aansoo hai Rashid, Mujhe toh aabh bhi yakeen nahi horaha hai keh kal mere Asad ka nikaah hai," Dilshad told him. "Main jaanta hoon Dilshad lekin aabh hume woh sabh baatein bhul jaana chahiye. Asad ne nikaah kehliye manzoori toh dehdi lekin hume Zoya keh khatir yeh ensure karna chahiye keh woh usse ek biwi ka haq bhi deh," Rashid said. "Dehga Rashid, zaroor dehga. Maine Asad ki aankho mein Zoya kehliye izzat aur parwa dekhiye," Dilshad said. "Lekin pyaar? Zoya koh pyaar ki bhi toh zaroorat hai," Rashid said. "Thoda waqt toh lagega na Rashid, Zoya mein woh baat hai joh mere beta koh phir se jeena aur logo par baroosa karna seekayegi, aur wohi ehsaas ek din pyaar banjayega," Dilshad said hopefully. "Allah kare aisa hi ho, ameen," Rashid prayed as they both smiled at each other.

Inside, Dadi was speaking with one of the relatives when Razia interrupted her and asked if they could speak in private. Dadi agreed and they moved out of the venue to one of the secular hallways. "Kya baat hai Razia bi?" Suraiya enquired. "Badi bi, main toh bas maafi maanga chathi thi. uss din joh bhi hua uss kehliye. Aap ka dil bahut baada hai keh aapne Zoya aur hume maaf kardiya," Razia said. "Dekho Razia bi, joh hona tha ho chukka hai. Humne iss nikhe kehliye sirf Asad ki wajase ha bola hai. Main sirf yeh chathi hoon keh woh khush rahe," Suraiya said. "Ha ha aap fikar na kare Badi bi. Zoya ne pichle beez saal se mere shohar par paata nahi kya jadu karke raka hai, woh uski har baat maante hai. Aur mujhe pura yakeen hai keh Zoya Asad koh apni har baat samjadegi," Razia said proudly. Suraiya glared at Razia unsure of what she was trying to tell her. "Mera matlab hai, aapne toh dekha keh bas kuch dino mein kaise Zoya ne sabh keh dil mein jaaga bana liya hai. Mujhe pura yakeen hai keh bas kuch din aur, Zoya sabh samalengi. Aur waise bhi Asad aur aapke ghar walon keh paas itna paise hai toh choti moti takleefe toh aise hi hal hojayengi," Razia said and she eyed Suraiya to see her reaction. Suraiya was trying to accept what Razia had just told her. Was Razia saying that Zoya is just a cunning girl that was after Asad and her family for money? Is that why she had said yes to this rishta? She was worried and angry. Angry that Zoya was putting on a faade and deceiving everyone in her family. And she was worried, that if Zoya turns out to be like Tanveer, then they might lose their Asad once again. And this time it might be forever. She had to do something! She couldn't let her family suffer again. "Hum abhi aaye," Suraiya said as she excused herself. Razia smiled evily. "Aabh dekhte hai Zoya keh yeh nikaah kaise hota hai! Tum jitna bhi chaho Zoya, tum tumare ateet se khabhi peecha nahi chuda paogi aur tumne aisa karbi liya toh main nahi chodongi. Tumne meri zindagi ki khushiya cheeni thi, main tume khabhi apne zindagi mein khush nahi rehne dungi," she thought angrily as she too went inside.

Later, Zoya's mehendi had dried and it was time to wash it up. "Chaliye Bhabhi, dekh the hai keh Ammi aapse kitna pyaar karti hai," Najma teased as the saying was the darker the color of mehendi, the more affection the saas and bahu had. Najma and Humaira helped Zoya wash off her hands. As she returned back to the hall, "Apne haath dekhao beta, hum bhi toh dekhe keh tumari saas tumse kitna pyaar karti hai," one of the relatives said. Zoya was hesitant to show her hands. "Zoya, kya hua? Dikhao na apne haath," Dilshad said as she held Zoya's hand from under the dupatta and moved them forward. Everyone was surprised. Her hands were so dark that they looked black. "Aree humne toh aisa mehendi ka rang khabhi nahi dekha hai," one of the ladies said. "Woh kya haina aunty yeh rang mere Ammi ka pyaar aur unki khushi ka hai," Haider commented as Dilshad lovingly hugged Zoya and everyone smiled. "Chaliye Bhaijaan, aabh aapki baari. Mere Bhaji ke haath mein apna naam doond dijiye," Humaira said as she took and made Asad stand in front of Zoya. Zoya felt nervous again. He took her hands in his and started searching for his name in her palm. Zoya felt his touch make her heart skip a beat. Asad was still looking for his name when he saw that she was looking at the floor. Her cheeks were red in color and he could hear her heart beat. He smiled again caressing her hand. Zoya instantly looked up and their eyes interlocked with each other. "Bhaijaan bahut time hogaya. Aabh count down shuru...tik tik 1 tik tik 2," the ladies counted and Zoya took her hand back as instructed by Nikhat. "Kya Bhaijaan...aap ne toh naak khat wadi, haar gaye hum!" Haider mocked as Asad glared at him. "Bhabhi, accha mauka hai, mangiye kya maang na hai," Najma said. Zoya didn't know what to ask. "Mujhe kuch nahi chahiye," she said. "Aree aise kaise Zoya, kuch toh maang lo," Nikhat told her. "Par main kya maango? Mujhe nahi paata," Zoya spoke honestly. Everyone laughed at her innocence and Zoya felt embarrassed. Suraiya was now confused. If this girl was after money, why wouldn't she ask something big and fancy? Why wouldn't she grab at the chance she got? Was this really who she was or was this some kind an act too, she thought. "Rehne dijiye Bhabhi, khabhi aur maang leygi," Asad said. As everyone moved away, "thanks Mr. Khan! Mujhe saach mein nahi paata keh kya maang na chahiye," Zoya whispered. "It's ok Zoya, khabhi aur maang lena, aabh toh zindagi bar saath hi toh rehna hai," Asad told her as Zoya blushed. Asad liked the way Zoya didn't have a disguise on her. Her innocence bought out her bravery and honesty. Willingly or not, he has started to care or her. But was it too soon to trust her? He had only known her for about 3 weeks? There was still so much he didn't know about her. If he couldn't trust someone even after knowing them after his life then how could he trust her who he had met just now? But his heart told him that he could trust her but his mind played tricks on him. He kept remembering the past. Zoya, on the other hand, felt a lot of respect for Asad. The way he always saved her when she was in trouble, meant a lot to her. She had always seen the world as a brutal place where people were selfish. Humaira always teased her as she was one of the few who actually cared about others but she had met him. She remembered how he had stood up for her in front of Dadi. That meant a lot to her. The fact that he had accepted her even after knowing her past, made her feel like she will have a blessed future. Asad felt anger surge through him remembering the past and he got up and left. Zoya looked at him confused. "Yeh Mr. Khan koh kya hogaya?" Zoya thought as she saw him walk away suddenly.

That night, Asad couldn't sleep as he marched from one end of the room to the other. He knew that Zoya had nothing to do with what happened in his life but it was hard for him to trust anyone anymore. He respected and cared for Zoya but trust? He thought. His mother's and Nikhat's words about moving on in life kept running through his mind. To clear his head, he grabbed his towel and headed in for a hot shower. Dadi on the other hand was upset that she couldn't talk to Asad. He had vanished from the Mehendi ceremony and later too; he had been surrounded by relatives and friends as he is the groom preventing her from meeting him. She only had one night to figure everything out. She had to do something to save Asad and her family. In the Siddiqui house, Zoya kept thinking about how Asad had left. She hasn't even seen him when everyone was leaving. Was he mad about something? Did I do something wrong? She thought. Tomorrow at this time, she would be in Asad's house. Thinking about it made her shiver. "Aap se yehi dua hai Allah miyan keh meri madad kijiye keh main Mr. Khan aur unke family koh khush rak sako. Mujhe kuch theek se aata toh nahi lekin main puri kosish karongi. Mera hamesha se khwaab tha keh main mere Ammi Abu koh doond ne keh baad nikaah karo lekin woh toh pura hua nahi. Par main aap ka shukriya aada karna chathi hoon keh aap ne meri zindagi mein itne acche log diye. Aabh bas yehi dua hai keh sabh khush rahe aur kohi bhi buri nazar mere apno koh na lage," she prayed looking outside at the nightly sky, with a nervous smile on her face.

Will Asad ever be able to move on from his past? Will Zoya bring a new light in his darkness? What is Razia trying to do with Dadi? What will happen after the nikaah? But wait...Will the nikaah happen? Keep reading to find out!

Thanks to all of you for reading and the comments 😃 Looking forward to your comments on this chapter! I have updated the PM list on page 1, please let me know if you would be added to the list 😊

Edited by asyasahil928 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful part
Asya mehndi ceremony is wow
Just hope dadi and razia dont creates any problem and nikaah happen
Excited for next part
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
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Hiii...well you know one thing about your updates i liked that they are very detailed but with minimum words...iamm not saying they are short but they are perfect...which is a good thing...it is not like i don't like long updates but with this story...its like you are covering everything yet it is limited to what and till where you want to write...well keeping that aside...this update started with Zoya's monologue ...like any other bride...she is also getting nervous...haha...can't boys leave their house...very funny...but it is a emotional time for girls and we should respect that...I don't know how and when Asad will keep aside all his insecurities...and accept his beautiful future with open arms...and this situation is making Daadi...to think something else...Raziya...she should be inprisoned for life...can't take that woman's appearance also...but all and all a wonderful update...continue soon...and thanx for the P.M.

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