MY DREAM TRACK (SS)part 5/page 7[8/12/2014]

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry to bother you I know none of you know me here.I am a silent reader in this forum and have been regular reader but never commented on any topic.

My name is Vikas.I am here just to share a OS which I got after the promo of separation.I hope you like it.

The assumptions of this particular dream track is as follows.

Pragya leaves Mehra mansion and her mother will try to set things right from her side and decided to give fresh start for Pragya from that contract marriage.So on her mothers advice Pragya goes away from town and stays in Bhopal working as a lecture in her regional college.Bulbul and Purab are married and taking care of Sarala.Then Abhi on other side still be in his ego and behaves as if everything is perfect now.His relation with Tanu is still continued.No one know about where abouts of Pragya except Arora family.

Then our present scene starts in Bhopal in a park which is just opposite Pragya's house.The park is filled with kids and people doing their exercises.Pragya watches them from her window thinking over something.

She then remembers the time in Mehra mansion and Abhi's morning workouts.She has ears in her eyes and which she herself din't notice.

Pragya "Abh main uss insaan key baarey mey kyon sooch rahen hun?Jissney mujhey jeejejee kabhee insaan key tarahan naheee dekha ."(why am i thinking about that man ?Who never considered me as a living being)

Pragya "Jissney mujhye uss galathee ka sajaa dee jho mainey kiyaa he nahe."(who gave me punishment for the mistake I haven't commited)

She tries to stop thinking about Abhoi but she could'nt control it and she breaks down there crying.

Then she comes back to world with a call to her mobile.

It is from Sarala.Sarala called Pragya to inform her about a match she had seen for pragya who is also a lecturer and would be coming to see her in few days.

Pragya even though lost hope in institute of marriage agrees unable to speak against her mother.

Then Pragya goes to her college and gets busy till afternoon with continuous schedule .

Then around after noon she catches few students who were sneaking away from class.

Pragya "Class key beech mey kaha jaarahen hon tum log.Jaana hee naiun tho aayen kyon."

Students apologize her and she wonders what could be the reason.

After the class she gets hold of her fav student.

Pragya "Kyaa ho gaya aaj class ko koi sunee nahen rahen hain.Koi problem hain kyaa?"(what happened to class today why o one is interested in class.Is there any problem?)

Sandy "Nahen madem kuch nahen hain.Rockstar Abhi ka concert hain Bhopal mey issliyen sab arrangement kar rahen hain."(Their is no problem mam.Their is concert of Rockstar Abhi so every one making arrangements to see him)

Pragya gets shocked knowing Abhi is in Bhopal.

Pragya "Kabh hain yeh concert?"(when is concert)

Sandy "Mam kall hain.Aap bhee aayengey kyaa."(tommorow.Are you also comming)

Pragya "Mujhyey concerts pasand nahen hain sorry."(I dont like concerts)

Sandy "Mam mujhey abhee jaana hain.Suna hain aaj promotion key liyen aarahen hain hummarey college hee.I have to see him."(I have to go mam.Abhi is comming here for promotion I will get a chance to see him close)

Pragya mind is filled with mixed thoughts by the thought of Abhi coming to her college .

Pragya "Main abh ghar chal jathee hun mujhey usskey shakal bhee nahen dekhnee hain."(I will leave home now.I dont want to see his face anyway)

Pragya then takes leave and starts to go to her house.

Pragya comes out in her car but it was too late as there was already a huge crowd near gate with arrival of Abhi.

Pragya don't want to see him but could'nt control the urge and looks at him in his white t-shirt and his fav jacket over it and in shinning jeans calling it new trend.



part 2

PART 3

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part 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you! Enjoyed it!!!


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Very nice. Enjoyed it. Plz continue.
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Interesting. Nice concept. Please update soon!
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plz continue don't like tht pragya is still crying over him tho plz put eng translations it'll be appreciated
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start :))
pls continue soon :))
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hai re where is the rest! fantastic start, really want to know what happens next. please continue this track, and soon!
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Loved it very much.
Please do update soon.
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Thank you!!! Read again for english version 😃!!! Loved it! Please continue soon!!!


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good start continue it soon

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