MY DREAM TRACK (SS)part 5/page 7[8/12/2014] - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinnithelover

loved it yaar... what pragya is hiding??? do continue soon and do pm me

mangalsutr and sindhoor.
she din't remove them just giving cover that she removed them
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never mind.
It seems no one interested in this ss.😔


no comments
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks!! So Abhi is outsmarting the Professor 😆!!!! Love it!!


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Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

do you have any problem with Hindi.

I mean I know english but writing dialogues in it will loose fun.But I can translate

i dnt understand it much
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Originally posted by: Kesha_H.

i dnt understand it much

what about this part.
no comment?
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Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

never mind.

It seems no one interested in this ss.😔


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dont feel like that it will take time for people to read.& get familiar...😊..new concept.⭐️..difffrent writings skils..👏..but i like this story...😊..continuee soon waiting for next update..😊
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Originally posted by: kkgsrpepo


dont feel like that it will take time for people to read.& get familiar...😊..new concept.⭐️..difffrent writings skils..👏..but i like this story...😊..continuee soon waiting for next update..😊

thanks yaar.

next update tommorow morning
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's a really nice story.

Keep up the good work.
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Awsm update
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon
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part 4

Pragya shocked holds her dupatta strongly.

Pragya "Aapsey mathlab?Mujhey aapko jawaab deney ke jaroori nahen hain."(Whayt do you mean?I don't need to answer you)

Abhi "Oh oh.Chashmish.Tumhey kyaa laga mainey observe nahen kiyaa?"(you thought I din't notice)

Pragya "Aap bahaar jayiyen .yeh meraroom hain aapka nahen."(Go out.It is my room).

Abhi "Kitnee selfish hon tum cheshmish.Mainey tumhaarey saath room share kiyaa.Abh tum mujhey bahaar bejrahen hon?"(How selfish you are.when you are with me we shared a singlr room)

Pragya "Main bahaar soothe thee.Aap bhee bahaar so saktey hain"

Abhi "Main kyun jaun bahaar.Yaha merey patnee ka room sey"

Pragya "Nahen hun main biwi aapkee.Main kall he divorce key liyen apply kardoongi.Mujhey jaldee sey jaldhee apsey chutkara chahiyen"(I will apply for divorce tomorrow .I need to leave you as early as possible).

Abhi "Main honey doonga?" laughing at it(I will let it happen)

Pragya "Kyon padeh hain aap merey peechey.Sab kuch sort huan hain.Abh sab log aagey bhad chukey hain.Main aagey bhadchukee hon.Aaliyha bhee kush hain.Daadi bhee mujhey bhool gayen hain.Aaapa aur Tunu ka shaadi honey waaley hain.Mera pariwar bhee accept kar chukee hain.Abh aap kyon sab kuch bigad rahen hain"(why are you after me .Everything is sorted out .Every one accepted.Daadi forgot me.My family moved forward.You marriage is happening with Tanu.Then why are you disturbing everything now)

Pragya tells this and leaves from there.Pragya went to terrace and was crying while Abhi was thinking over what happened and why he is doing so.

Pragya looks at full moon and remembers her days with Abhi over the drunk night.

Pragya "Please Abhi aap chaley jayiyen.Mainey sheek liyan hain aapsey bina jeeney kaa.Aap fir sey mushily math khada keejiyen."(Just leave me ABhi.dont make it difficult for me.I learnt to live without you)

Pragya falls on her knees and starts crying .Holding her mangalsutr she hid behind her dupatta.

Abhi downside was confused.

Abhi "Kyaa kar rahan thaa main.Jab who merey saath thee mainey kabhee ussey biwi key taraha nahen dekha.Aaj main apney haq maang rahan hun.what happened to me.Main sach mey Pragya ko biwi maantha hun?Main kyaa chaahtha hun."(what do I want.When she was with me I never behaved as husband and now asking rights as husband.Do I believe Pargya is my wife?)

ABhi was thinking over it changing the channels and falls asleep.While Pragya sleeps in terrace crying.

Then it is morning and Abhi wakes up by ring of Pragya's phone.

Abhi "Kahan chalee gayee yeh chashmish.Phone baj rahan hain?"

He takes her mobile and goes outside looking for her.She was looking at the park silently.Then she comes out hearing ring of her mobile and sees Abhi holding it.

Pragya "Mera phone deejiyen?(give me my phone)

Abhi "Ley loo."rising his hand above beyond reach for Pragya.

Pragya tries to take it but her height is too short for it.he comes that close to ABhi giving him an opportunity to hold her tight.

Abhi "Theek hain baath karlo.Ain bhee suntha hun kaun hain jho tumhey itnaa subaha phone kiyaa."(ok speak let mee see who is it who called you this early)

Abhi receives the cal and keeps it in speaker.

Then he is shocked to hear a male voice from other side.

Caller "Pragyaa jee main Madan hun.Sarala jee ney bathaaya hoga" (I am Madan .saralajee would have told you about me )

Pragya remembers that her mother found a groom for her and they had a meeting next day.

Pragya "Han .Bathaaya thaa.Aaap itney subaha phone kiyaa?"(Yes.You called me this early morning?)

Abhi was getting confused on who the person was.But he was silent.

Madan "I know its strange for you also.Aapkey maa ney aapko bathaaye bhina yeh shaadi fix kee hain.But main aapkey past key barey mey jaantha hun.I don't have any problem with it.Main aapko kabhee usskey baarey mey yaad nahen dilaunga."(Your mother fixed or marriage without your wish.I know about your past and am ready to accept it.I will never remind you about it)

Abhi was shocked knowing that Pragya was getting married to that person.

Madan "Actuallu hummara meeting kall hona chahiyen thaa.But mujhye kuch urgent kaam hain.Hum aaj meeting fix kar saktey hain kyaa?"(we have to meet tommorw.But I have urgent meeting so can we meet today.)

Pragya looking at Abhi's changing expression.

Pragya "No problem.Kabh?"

Madan "If you don't mind 11 o'clock coffee day."

Pragya "Main aajaongee..."before she finishes the statement ABhi cuts the call.(I will come)

Abhi angry and holding her mobile tightly and increasing the grip on her waist.

Abhi "Kyaa kar rahen ho tum Pragya?Shaadi kar rahen hon?Mujhey bina bathaaye?"(what are you doing?doing marriage without telling me?)

Pragya "Mujhey aapko bathaaney kee jaroori nahen hain.It is my life.Yeh sirf aapka haq nahen hain kee shaasi karey."(I don't need to tell you.It is not just your right to marry some one)

Abhi "Tumhey mujhey bathaana hain.I am your husband damn it"(you should tell me)

Pragya "Main aaj hee divorce key liyen apply kar rahen hun.Mutual consent mey divoece jaldee ho jaatha hain.Yeh hee hum donon key liyen better hain.App Tanu sey shaadi kar saktey hain aur main Madan sey."(I am going to apply for divorce today.in mutual consent it will finish quickly.It would be better for both.You can marry tanu and I can marry madan)

Abhi then angry and holds her tight and then holding her mangalsutr in his hand

Abhi "So why do you need this?Jab main tumhaara pathee nahen hun?"

Pragya "Chodiyen .Nahen tho ?"

Abhi gets call from Tanu and he takes it angrily and scolds her for calling and removes all his anger on her.

Pragya took the gap and leaves from there.She gets ready and prepares break fast for herself.

Abhi comes there.

Abhi "Mujhye mera jawaab nahen mila?"(I dint get my answer)

Pragya "Main jaroor nikaal doongi.Jab mera shaadi ho rhan hon Madan sey ussey ek din pehley nikaal kar aapko bhejdoongi."

Now leave me I have to go to court.

Abhi "Ho tumhaara honey waala pathe sey meeting jho hain.But main nahen jaaney doonga"

Abhi blocked the gate by his car previous night.So that no one can leave outside.

Pragya "Aap apnaa gaadi nikaliyen?Mujhey time ho rahan hain?Nahen tho main police bulaungi"

Abhi din't react and Pragya calls police but Abhi bribes them .

Abhi "Chashmish kasiey jaaoge abh tum.Police bhee tumhaara madad nahen kar saktey.Main rockstar hun police mujhye arrest karnegey.Na na.who tho mujhe protection dethey hain)

Pragya was thinking something and she gets an idea .

She takes her mobile and dials some one.While Abhi was confused on what pragya is planning

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